Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94XYMDEAGEX7WYJT6KMEVH

Run Details

Duration:
12.0s
Cost:
$0.006280
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The streetlights bled sickly yellow into the sheeting rain. Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped against puddled pavement, the rhythmic impact vibrating through her calves. Water streamed from the brim of her coat, plastering strands of her salt-and-pepper hair to her temples. Ahead, a shadowy form weaved through the sparse late-night crowd, dodging lampposts and overflowing bins with an almost unnerving fluidity. Tomás Herrera. He moved with the desperate grace of a cornered animal, his dark, curly hair a slick cap against the downpour. Quinn’s lungs burned, a raw ache in her chest. Eighteen years on the force had honed her into a relentless pursuit machine, but Herrera held a runner’s lean strength. He glanced over his shoulder, the momentary turn of his head catching Quinn’s eye before he vanished around a corner, swallowed by the narrow maw of a Soho alleyway. She picked up her pace, her legs churning, the worn leather watch on her left wrist catching glints from the wet street. A military precision guided her stride, each footfall purposeful despite the slick terrain. The alley reeked of stale beer and refuse. Quinn pulled her hand from her pocket, wrapping her fingers around the cool grip of her service weapon. Not yet. She wouldn’t draw unless absolutely necessary. The alley opened onto a wider thoroughfare, a main artery throbbing with the distant buzz of traffic. Herrera was a blot against the neon glow of a closed shop, disappearing between two parked delivery vans. She burst onto the street, her gaze sweeping left, then right. No Herrera. Dread coiled in her gut. He couldn’t have just evaporated. Her eyes snagged on a flicker of movement, a dark shape darting into the yawning maw of an ancient, brick archway tucked between a greasy kebab shop and a boarded-up theatre. An abandoned service entrance, perhaps, or an old side street. Nothing registered on her police maps. Quinn ran towards the archway, her jaw tight. The rain seemed to intensify under its shelter, dripping from crumbling stone. Water gushed from a broken drainpipe, hammering the pavement like a snare drum. Steam rose from her wet clothes. She peered into the gloom. A rusted metal gate, half-off its hinges, hung askew, groaning in the wind. Beyond it, a sloping, uneven path disappeared into absolute blackness. She could hear the faint echo of boots on stone, hurried and light. Herrera. She pushed through the gate, its shriek grating on her ears. The path narrowed, slick with moss and ancient grime. The stench of damp earth and something else, something metallic and faintly cloying, replaced the city smells. Above, the city’s roar faded, replaced by the persistent drip of water and the shallow echoes of her own breathing. Her hand gripped her weapon tighter, the safety still on. She didn't like unknown territory. Her partner, Morris, had walked into one too many of those unknowns. The path twisted, a tunnel carved into solid rock, darker now than pitch. Quinn pulled out her tactical torch, its beam cutting a stark white path through the oppressive black. She swept the light ahead. Stone walls slick with condensation, strange symbols half-eroded into the rock face. They looked like nothing she had ever seen, patterns that made her teeth ache. The air grew colder, holding a stagnant dampness. Then, a faint glow appeared in the distance, a pulsing, unnatural light, accompanied by a low hum. The tunnel opened into a vast, cavernous space. Quinn paused at the threshold, keeping to the shadows, her breath catching in her throat. Before her stretched a scene plucked from a distorted dream. An abandoned Tube station, its disused platforms now a chaotic bazaar. The Veil Market. Hundreds of figures moved through the haze, their faces obscured by hoods, masks, or simply the shifting light. Booths cobbled from scavenged materials lined the tracks, illuminated by flickering gas lamps, luminescent fungi, and strange, pulsating orbs. They displayed goods Quinn couldn't name: jars of shimmering dust, coiled serpents in glass, blades that seemed to drink the light, trinkets that pulsed with an inner fire. The air vibrated with a cacophony of hushed whispers, guttural murmurs, and the occasional sharp crackle of something electrical or arcane. A sweet, smoky incense mingled with the metallic tang she'd noticed in the tunnel, and something else, something musky and primal. Tomás Herrera stood at a makeshift stall, his back to her, a small, gnarled bone clutched in his hand. He pressed it against a crude scanner mounted on a decaying ticketing machine. A soft *click* echoed. He moved past it, disappearing into the swirling density of the crowd. He wore the Saint Christopher medallion around his neck, catching a glint of light from the strange market. The bone token. Quinn remembered a briefing, years ago, on an unconfirmed tip about an underground market that moved locations, required a specific entry. Morris had laughed it off. Not so funny now. She watched a tall, cloaked figure approach, holding a similar bone. They presented it to the gate, and the small, bone-shaped hollow in the scanner pulsed with a faint violet light before clicking open. The figure stepped through. Quinn stood at the precipice of a world she knew nothing about, a world that held the answers to a case that chafed at her, tied to the unexplained circumstances of Morris’s death. Every instinct screamed caution, patrol procedure, backup. But patrol procedures meant nothing down here. Backup wouldn't understand. She saw Tomás's curly dark brown hair, his olive skin, as he slipped between two figures dressed in patchwork furs. He was a familiar anchor in an alien sea. To lose him now meant losing everything. The chase could end here, right at this strange, bone-gated entrance. Her grip tightened on her weapon.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount960
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount960
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"maw"
count2
2
word"churning"
count1
3
word"footfall"
count1
4
word"absolutely"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"echoes"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"chaotic"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count2
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"cacophony"
count1
15
word"echoed"
count1
16
word"glint"
count1
17
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"maw"
2"churning"
3"footfall"
4"absolutely"
5"flicker"
6"gloom"
7"echo"
8"echoes"
9"stark"
10"oppressive"
11"chaotic"
12"pulsed"
13"vibrated"
14"cacophony"
15"echoed"
16"glint"
17"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences78
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords960
ratio0.001
matches
0"click"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.92% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount960
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.04
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn10
Herrera6
Soho1
Morris3
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Saint1
Christopher1
Tomás3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Tomás"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.979
windowScore1
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like nothing she had ever seen, pa"
1"blades that seemed to drink the light, trinkets that pulsed with an inner fire"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount960
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
58.63% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs13
mean73.85
std26.23
cv0.355
sampleLengths
083
193
269
370
481
584
669
740
8131
966
1033
1138
12103
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences78
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount968
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"strange, bone-gated entrance."
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.015495867768595042
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.006198347107438017
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences78
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences78
mean12.31
std7.17
cv0.582
sampleLengths
09
115
217
320
42
520
69
720
829
922
1013
118
1218
132
146
1517
1618
1711
182
195
205
2131
2210
236
248
2512
2613
276
285
2913
3010
3113
321
3311
349
3517
3620
3710
385
3912
4013
4117
425
4312
4414
458
4617
478
4815
4910
63.68% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.3974358974358974
totalSentences78
uniqueOpeners31
45.05% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences74
matches
0"Then, a faint glow appeared"
ratio0.014
90.27% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences74
matches
0"He moved with the desperate"
1"He glanced over his shoulder,"
2"She picked up her pace,"
3"She wouldn’t draw unless absolutely"
4"She burst onto the street,"
5"He couldn’t have just evaporated."
6"Her eyes snagged on a"
7"She peered into the gloom."
8"She could hear the faint"
9"She pushed through the gate,"
10"Her hand gripped her weapon"
11"She didn't like unknown territory."
12"Her partner, Morris, had walked"
13"She swept the light ahead."
14"They looked like nothing she"
15"They displayed goods Quinn couldn't"
16"He pressed it against a"
17"He moved past it, disappearing"
18"He wore the Saint Christopher"
19"She watched a tall, cloaked"
ratio0.324
20.81% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences74
matches
0"The streetlights bled sickly yellow"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots slapped"
2"Water streamed from the brim"
3"He moved with the desperate"
4"Quinn’s lungs burned, a raw"
5"He glanced over his shoulder,"
6"She picked up her pace,"
7"A military precision guided her"
8"The alley reeked of stale"
9"Quinn pulled her hand from"
10"She wouldn’t draw unless absolutely"
11"The alley opened onto a"
12"Herrera was a blot against"
13"She burst onto the street,"
14"Dread coiled in her gut."
15"He couldn’t have just evaporated."
16"Her eyes snagged on a"
17"An abandoned service entrance, perhaps,"
18"Nothing registered on her police"
19"Quinn ran towards the archway,"
ratio0.878
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences74
matches
0"Before her stretched a scene"
1"To lose him now meant"
ratio0.027
51.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She picked up her pace, her legs churning, the worn leather watch on her left wrist catching glints from the wet street."
1"The rain seemed to intensify under its shelter, dripping from crumbling stone."
2"They looked like nothing she had ever seen, patterns that made her teeth ache."
3"They displayed goods Quinn couldn't name: jars of shimmering dust, coiled serpents in glass, blades that seemed to drink the light, trinkets that pulsed with an…"
4"Quinn remembered a briefing, years ago, on an unconfirmed tip about an underground market that moved locations, required a specific entry."
5"Quinn stood at the precipice of a world she knew nothing about, a world that held the answers to a case that chafed at her, tied to the unexplained circumstance…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
85.9761%