Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ94YTTMVQJCRVKNAKNG909S

Run Details

Duration:
21.9s
Cost:
$0.002104
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air grew heavy and cold as Detective Harlow Quinn descended the rusted, skeletal stairs. Each clang of her boots on the metal reverberated through the cramped shaft, swallowed by the larger silence of the earth beneath. The scent of mildew and stagnant water, mixed with something metallic and sharp like old blood, clung to her like a shroud. Above, uniformed officers maintained their sterile cordon at the grimy, graffiti-scarred entrance to the disused Tube tunnel; below, the real work began. She emerged onto a platform slick with condensation, lit by the harsh, sterile glare of temporary floodlights. The Northern Line spur, abandoned for decades, was a tomb of peeling paint and skeletal track. Yellow tape stretched taut, a gaudy scar against the decay. In the center of the platform lay the body. Detective Sergeant Davies stood vigil nearby, hands clasped behind his back, his expression one of professional, unremarkable grimness. He’d arrived ten minutes before her. Eighteen years on the Metropolitan Police, and Harlow had learned to trust the knot tightening in her gut more than the smooth assurances of men like Davies. "Evening, Quinn," Davies said, his voice too casual for the setting. "Nasty business. Looks like a robbery gone sideways. Found him an hour ago. Silas Croft. Known fence for… unusual items." Harlow approached the body. Croft was sprawled awkwardly, his face a mask of surprised agony, eyes wide and vacant. The forensics team, their white Tyvek suits stark against the grime, worked with quiet efficiency. Lividity confirmed the time frame. The preliminary report lay open on a portable table, detailing blunt force trauma to the head. "Blunt force, you say?" Harlow crouched, her worn leather watch catching the light. Her eyes scanned the scene, taking in details that Davies, in his haste for a simple narrative, might overlook. There were signs of a brief struggle – a scuff mark on the platform, a knocked-over bin. But the trauma on Croft’s head… it was considerable, yet the surrounding flesh showed an odd, almost burnished quality, not the ragged tear of a typical blow from a heavy object. "Aye," Davies confirmed, stepping closer. "Heavy something. Club, pipe, maybe. No weapon found, which is standard for these jobs. Whoever did it wanted it clean." He gestured vaguely. "Wallet's gone, watch is missing. Classic MO." Harlow traced the edge of the wound with a gloved finger, stopping just short of touching it. The skin felt strangely taut, almost brittle beneath the subtle warmth emanating from it. Wrong. All of it felt wrong. The air here wasn't just damp; it was laden, thick with an invisible presence. Her trained senses, sharpened by years of crime scenes and honed by experiences she still struggled to articulate, screamed that this was no mere mugging. She looked at Croft's eyes again. They weren't just wide with fear; they seemed to stare *through* something, a frozen terror that spoke of seeing the impossible. Her own eyes, brown and keen, swept the periphery. The graffiti on the tunnel walls was typical urban decay, but the symbols etched into the concrete near Croft’s outstretched hand were different. Not spray-painted taggings, but intricate, geometric lines, almost burned into the surface, cold to the touch despite the ambient damp. They looked deliberate, ancient. Davies remained oblivious, already dictating notes into his recorder. "Victim likely surprised. Assailant uses force. Takes valuables. Minimal struggle, victim incapacitated quickly. Standard procedure." Harlow stood, her stance betraying none of her mounting unease. She walked away from the body, her gaze sweeping the tunnel. Most officers saw grime; Harlow saw story. She noted a faint, unnatural shimmer near a corroded junction box housing. It was like heat haze, but it radiated cold. She pulled the small brass compass from her jacket pocket, its casing dulled with a patina of verdigris. The face was etched with protective sigils, the needle usually steady, pointing north. This was a Veil Compass, crafted by a Shade artisan, attuned to the currents of the supernatural. She rarely used visible, but when standard procedure felt like a lie, she trusted what lay beneath. As she held it, the needle spun wildly, a frantic dance of metal. Then, it stilled, quivering not towards north, but towards the wall beside the junction box, towards the strange, etched symbols. It pulsed, a faint vibration against her palm. "Something wrong, Quinn?" Davies asked, noticing her preoccupation. "Just… checking the perimeter, Davies," she replied, her voice low. She closed the compass, tucking it away. The residual energy, the peculiar wound, the compass's reaction – it all pointed to something far removed from a street-level thief. This was no robbery. This was something else. Something that left marks of impossibility. Her mind immediately flashed back three years, to the unexplained incident that claimed DS Morris, her partner. The shadows had moved that night, coalescing into forms no human eye was meant to see. The official report had been a fiction, a neat burial of the truth. She suspected the 'clique' the higher-ups dismissed as conspiracy theorists were involved, dabbling in things that warped reality. Croft, a dealer in the occult refuse, was precisely the sort of figure to attract their attention. "These symbols," Harlow said, pointing. "Forensics logged them as graffiti?" Davies squinted. "Just some kids messing about, probably. Hard to tell in this light. They'll clean it up later." Harlow walked over, kneeling near the symbols. They weren't lines; they were glyphs, ancient and unnerving. They radiated a faint, unearthly chill, far beyond the general dampness. She ran a gloved finger over them. The concrete felt dry, almost brittle, as if it had been superheated and then rapidly frozen. Like Croft’s wound. "No, Davies," she said, straightening up. "This isn't kids. This is a marker. Or a seal. And the trauma… it wasn't from a pipe." She looked back at Croft, then at the compass’s silent twitch towards the symbols. "It was a discharge. Energy. Like a focused blast, contained and directed." Her mind reeled, piecing together fragments of forgotten lore whispered by informants, fragments of what Morris had tried to explain before the end. "Energy?" Davies scoffed lightly. "What are you, seeing ghosts, Quinn?" Harlow met his gaze, her jaw set. Her sharp jawline was a testament to years of holding firm against pressure – from criminals, from superiors, from the supernatural itself. "I'm seeing evidence that doesn't fit your tidy narrative, Davies. Croft wasn't robbed. He was processed. And whatever did it, it’s still in the vicinity. Or its residue is." She pulled out her secure phone. "I need expertise. Someone who understands ancient symbols and… unusual energy signatures." She keyed in a number. "Eva Kowalski. She works at the British Museum. Restricted archives." Davies raised an eyebrow. "You're calling an academic? What, is she going to tell us it was a demon?" Harlow ignored him, the urgency in her voice growing. "Eva, it's Harlow. I'm at the abandoned spur beneath Camden Town. I need you here, now. Bring your notes on Eldritch wards and residual thaumic energies. And… be discreet." She ended the call and turned back to Davies, whose face was now a mask of perplexed annoyance. "She'll be here in twenty. You can brief her on your robbery theory, Davies. I'll be looking into another possibility." Harlow walked further down the platform, away from the immediate crime scene, her senses on high alert. The air grew colder still, the silence deeper, broken only by the distant hum of the city above and the drip, drip, drip of water somewhere unseen. This place, usually a forgotten artery of the city, felt like it was breathing, a subtle pulse underlying the decay. The Veil Market's influence, even when the market itself had moved on, left scars. And Silas Croft had clearly stepped on one too many. She could feel it now, a low thrum of power resonating from the tunnel’s depths, a resonance that echoed the very reason she kept the compass and the reason she’d never truly closed DS Morris’s case. The evidence didn't add up for Davies. For Harlow, it was just the beginning of a very old, very dangerous mystery. Minutes later, a figure emerged from the stairwell, her curly red hair a bright splash against the gloom. Eva Kowalski, clutching her worn leather satchel, her round glasses perched on her nose, scanned the scene with academic curiosity mixed with trepidation. She spotted Harlow and made her way over, her expression shifting from observational to concerned as she took in the official presence and the body. "Harlow," Eva said softly, her voice barely disturbing the heavy air. "This is... more than a simple B&E, isn't it?" "Silas Croft," Harlow stated, gesturing towards the victim. "Found dead on the platform. Davies thinks it's a robbery. I think he’s wrong." Eva approached the body cautiously, her green eyes widening slightly behind her glasses. She looked not at the wounds primarily, but at the strange sheen on Croft's skin, the unnatural stillness. Then her gaze drifted to the symbols Harlow had pointed out earlier. "Oh," she breathed, reverence and dread mingling in her tone. "Oh, my." "Recognize them?" Harlow prompted. Eva nodded, pulling a thick, leather-bound notebook from her satchel. She flipped through pages filled with intricate sketches and dense script. "Yes. These are not 'kids messing about.' They are archaic warding glyphs. Specifically, variations tied to binding or channeling energy. They’re meant to contain, or perhaps direct, a powerful force." She looked up, her freckled complexion pale. "And the sheen on his skin, the localized cold… it suggests an uncontrolled energy discharge. Like a magical feedback loop, or something being violently expelled." "So, the blunt force trauma was a secondary effect?" Harlow mused, a grim satisfaction blooming in her chest as Eva's words confirmed her intuition. "The primary cause was this energy blast?" "Potentially," Eva confirmed, her brow furrowed in concentration. "The force required to manifest such a discharge, even unintentionally, would be immense. Enough to cause extreme kinetic trauma upon expulsion. What was he dealing with?" "He was a dealer," Harlow replied, her gaze drifting back to the compass's resting place in her pocket. "In the shadows. Places like the Veil Market. He was part of the ecosystem. Someone or something he offended, or was trying to exploit." She looked towards the tunnel mouth, towards the city teeming with oblivious life. "It wasn't a robbery, Eva. It was a ritual of termination. And the energy signature the compass picked up… it’s still here. Faint, but present. Like the lingering scent of an unholy perfume." The case was opening up, stretching out before her, a familiar and terrifying path. A path that led her, once again, into the heart of what she had always tried to outrun.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
63.64% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"Davies scoffed lightly [lightly]"
2"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.564
leniency1
rawRatio0.136
effectiveRatio0.136
72.10% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count3
4
adverb"truly"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"cautiously"
count1
7
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"precisely"
2"lightly"
3"very"
4"truly"
5"softly"
6"cautiously"
7"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"reverberated"
count1
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count2
4
word"standard"
count3
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"etched"
count3
8
word"intricate"
count2
9
word"dance"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count1
11
word"chill"
count1
12
word"testament"
count1
13
word"processed"
count1
14
word"eyebrow"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"could feel"
count1
17
word"depths"
count1
18
word"resonance"
count1
19
word"echoed"
count1
20
word"gloom"
count1
21
word"trepidation"
count1
22
word"furrowed"
count1
23
word"familiar"
count1
highlights
0"reverberated"
1"silence"
2"stark"
3"scanned"
4"standard"
5"traced"
6"warmth"
7"etched"
8"intricate"
9"dance"
10"pulsed"
11"chill"
12"testament"
13"processed"
14"eyebrow"
15"pulse"
16"could feel"
17"depths"
18"resonance"
19"echoed"
20"gloom"
21"trepidation"
22"furrowed"
23"familiar"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences107
matches
0"e with fear"
1"d with trepidation"
89.45% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences107
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
97.89% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences124
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount1
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0.008
matches
0"\"Victim likely surprised. Assailant uses force. Takes valuables. Minimal struggle, victim incapacitated quickly. Standard procedure.\""
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1795
ratio0.001
matches
0"through"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1335
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.42
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Detective2
Harlow19
Quinn1
Tube1
Northern1
Line1
Sergeant1
Davies12
Metropolitan1
Police1
Tyvek1
Croft9
Veil2
Compass1
Shade1
Morris3
Market1
Silas1
Kowalski1
Eva6
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Sergeant"
3"Davies"
4"Tyvek"
5"Croft"
6"Morris"
7"Market"
8"Silas"
9"Kowalski"
10"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.788
windowScore0.5
92.53% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like a lie, she trusted what lay b"
1"felt like it was breathing, a subtle pu"
32.87% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.671
wordCount1795
matches
0"Not spray-painted taggings, but intricate, geometric lines, almost burned into the surface"
1"not towards north, but towards the wall beside the junction box, towards the strang"
2"not at the wounds primarily, but at the strange sheen on Croft's skin, the unnatural stillnes"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences124
matches
0"screamed that this"
1"moved that night"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean51.29
std32.85
cv0.641
sampleLengths
081
152
251
331
455
580
635
776
883
924
10114
1141
128
1352
1481
1510
1619
1753
1873
1910
2058
2133
2219
2338
2438
25145
2666
2720
2822
2955
304
3183
3231
3334
34120
92.15% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences107
matches
0"was sprawled"
1"was etched"
2"was meant"
3"been superheated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs217
matches
0"was breathing"
1"was opening"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences124
ratio0.065
matches
0"Above, uniformed officers maintained their sterile cordon at the grimy, graffiti-scarred entrance to the disused Tube tunnel; below, the real work began."
1"There were signs of a brief struggle – a scuff mark on the platform, a knocked-over bin."
2"The air here wasn't just damp; it was laden, thick with an invisible presence."
3"They weren't just wide with fear; they seemed to stare *through* something, a frozen terror that spoke of seeing the impossible."
4"Most officers saw grime; Harlow saw story."
5"The residual energy, the peculiar wound, the compass's reaction – it all pointed to something far removed from a street-level thief."
6"They weren't lines; they were glyphs, ancient and unnerving."
7"Her sharp jawline was a testament to years of holding firm against pressure – from criminals, from superiors, from the supernatural itself."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1018
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"grimy, graffiti-scarred entrance"
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.030451866404715127
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007858546168958742
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences124
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences124
mean14.48
std8.49
cv0.586
sampleLengths
015
122
222
322
417
516
610
79
818
96
1027
1111
1220
134
1415
1515
165
1716
1813
1919
2017
216
2225
235
2423
257
2617
2714
281
295
3014
3125
326
3321
349
3523
3620
374
389
3915
4010
4111
427
4312
449
4518
4613
4717
4817
4913
68.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.43548387096774194
totalSentences124
uniqueOpeners54
64.10% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences104
matches
0"Then, it stilled, quivering not"
1"Then her gaze drifted to"
ratio0.019
77.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount37
totalSentences104
matches
0"She emerged onto a platform"
1"He’d arrived ten minutes before"
2"Her eyes scanned the scene,"
3"it was considerable, yet the"
4"He gestured vaguely"
5"Her trained senses, sharpened by"
6"She looked at Croft's eyes"
7"They weren't just wide with"
8"Her own eyes, brown and"
9"They looked deliberate, ancient."
10"She walked away from the"
11"She noted a faint, unnatural"
12"It was like heat haze,"
13"She pulled the small brass"
14"She rarely used visible, but"
15"It pulsed, a faint vibration"
16"she replied, her voice low"
17"She closed the compass, tucking"
18"Her mind immediately flashed back"
19"She suspected the"
ratio0.356
32.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount89
totalSentences104
matches
0"The air grew heavy and"
1"Each clang of her boots"
2"The scent of mildew and"
3"She emerged onto a platform"
4"The Northern Line spur, abandoned"
5"Detective Sergeant Davies stood vigil"
6"He’d arrived ten minutes before"
7"Davies said, his voice too"
8"Harlow approached the body."
9"Croft was sprawled awkwardly, his"
10"The forensics team, their white"
11"Lividity confirmed the time frame."
12"The preliminary report lay open"
13"Harlow crouched, her worn leather"
14"Her eyes scanned the scene,"
15"it was considerable, yet the"
16"Davies confirmed, stepping closer"
17"He gestured vaguely"
18"Harlow traced the edge of"
19"The skin felt strangely taut,"
ratio0.856
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences104
matches(empty)
ratio0
91.84% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences56
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"They weren't just wide with fear; they seemed to stare *through* something, a frozen terror that spoke of seeing the impossible."
1"Harlow stood, her stance betraying none of her mounting unease."
2"Her mind immediately flashed back three years, to the unexplained incident that claimed DS Morris, her partner."
3"She could feel it now, a low thrum of power resonating from the tunnel’s depths, a resonance that echoed the very reason she kept the compass and the reason she…"
34.09% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Davies said, his voice too casual for the setting"
1"she replied, her voice low"
2"Eva said softly, her voice barely disturbing the heavy air"
3"She looked up, her freckled complexion pale"
47.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Davies confirmed (confirm)"
1"Harlow stated (state)"
2"she breathed (breathe)"
3"Eva confirmed (confirm)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.282
leniency0.564
rawRatio0.364
effectiveRatio0.205
73.7981%