Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95033SJ44YK4FA4B91S2TX

Run Details

Duration:
22.7s
Cost:
$0.011155
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bell above the varnished door chimed a late night welcome for Rory. Rain slicked the pavement outside, reflecting the green neon glow of ‘The Raven’s Nest’ sign back at the street. She peeled off her soaked delivery jacket, shaking it once before hanging it on a peg near the entrance. The chilled air from outside clung to her, a sharp contrast to the bar’s dense warmth. Old maps covered the walls, their faded colours bleeding into the dim light. Black-and-white photographs of forgotten faces stared from ornate frames. The scent of spilled beer and polished wood hung heavy, a familiar comfort. Silas stood behind the bar, a rag in hand, wiping down the polished mahogany. His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly trimmed along with his beard, caught the amber light from a low-hanging lamp. He looked up, his hazel eyes meeting hers. A small, almost imperceptible shift crossed his face, a flicker of something Rory could not name, then it vanished. He usually offered a nod, a quiet acknowledgement. Tonight, he paused. Rory walked to her usual stool, perching herself there. Her shoulder-length black hair dripped small beads of water onto the stool’s leather seat. She pushed a stray strand behind her ear, revealing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a pale mark against her skin. “Rough shift,” Rory said, her voice a little raw from the cold. Silas reached for a clean glass, his movements practiced and slow. He set it down, the clink a sharp sound in the quiet bar. He did not immediately reach for the bottle. Instead, his gaze lingered on her, his head tilted. “Cardiff treating you well these days?” he asked, his voice a low rumble. Rory’s hand, resting on the bar, froze. Her bright blue eyes widened, a sudden, fierce flicker in their depths. The casual question struck her with the force of a physical blow. She swallowed, her throat suddenly dry. The familiar space around her twisted, warbled at the edges. Not a single person in London, not a single soul here knew that part of her. She fled Cardiff, left it behind with every painful memory, every shattered piece of herself. “What a question,” she replied, her voice a flat, dead thing. She turned away, staring at a cluster of faded photographs on the wall, images of sepia-toned strangers. “You know I’m not in Cardiff.” “No,” Silas agreed, the word drawn out. “But I remember you were, once. A long time ago.” He leaned forward slightly, his silver signet ring flashing on his right hand. “You have your mother’s eyes. And your father’s stubbornness. It’s hard to miss, even at a distance.” Rory’s chest hitched. Her breath caught somewhere deep in her lungs. She spun back around, her gaze locking onto his. Recognition, cold and disbelieving, bled into her features. His height, the grey-streaked auburn hair, the quiet authority in his stance – all these elements, once just the defining characteristics of her landlord, of ‘Silas’, now coalesced into a ghost from her past. A connection she had never consciously made, never dared to make. “Silas?” she breathed, the name a question, a plea for him to deny it. Not him. Not here. He gave a small, almost sorrowful nod. “It’s been a long time, Aurora. Or do you still prefer Rory?” Her given name, so rarely used, hung heavy in the air between them. Her shoulders slumped, the tension draining out of her, leaving her suddenly exhausted. The energy she spent every single day maintaining her new identity, her new life, crumbled. The chill from outside seemed to seep deeper, settling in her bones. “Aurora,” she repeated, the word tasting foreign on her tongue. “Just Aurora, now.” Silas uncorked a bottle of Irish whiskey he kept specifically for her, the smooth clink of the glass against the counter loud in the sudden quiet. He poured a measure. The amber liquid shimmered. He pushed the glass across to her. “Last I saw you, you were barely sixteen,” Silas said, his voice softer now, edged with something that sounded like regret. “Little Laila, running around your father’s study, trying to read his law books upside down.” Laila. Her childhood nickname, utterly discarded, long forgotten. Hearing it now, in this dim bar, from this man, tore a jagged line through her carefully constructed present. She picked up the glass, her fingers trembling slightly. The whiskey burned a path down her throat, warming the sudden cold inside her. “Funny,” Rory managed, her voice emerging as a brittle laugh. “I never thought I’d run into anyone from… from that life. Especially not you, Silas.” “Life has a way of twisting back on itself,” he replied, his gaze distant, as if looking through the smoky past. “Your father… he spoke of you often. Always so proud, so certain you’d follow in his footsteps.” A bitter laugh escaped her lips. “He was. Until I didn’t. Things… changed.” She stared into the dark liquid, watching the reflections of the bar lights dance. “A lot of things changed.” “I see that,” Silas said quietly, his eyes sketching the sharp lines of her face, the way her shoulders held a perpetual tension. “The spark’s still there, Aurora. But it’s banked. Guarded.” He tapped the bar softly, his limp leg a steady weight against the floor. “The world can do that to a person. Life hardens us, or it breaks us.” “Or both,” she countered, her voice tight. “I didn’t break. I just… snapped. Left a lot of things behind.” Silence stretched, thick and uncomfortable, between them. The clatter of an ice bucket from the other end of the bar, where another bartender was cleaning up, was the only sound. “You left Cardiff,” Silas observed, a statement, not a question. “And your father. Your mother.” “They had their lives,” Rory said, her fingers tightening around the glass. “I had to find mine.” “Or escape it?” Silas asked, his voice gentle. “I heard… whispers. A young man. Problems.” Her head snapped up. Her eyes, usually so cool and composed, flashed with a raw vulnerability, a sudden defensive fire. “Whispers travel, even across a country,” she said, her tone sharp. “Some whispers are best left unrepeated.” “Some whispers, if ignored, can become screams,” Silas replied, his gaze steady. “I lost touch with your father after I retired. But I kept an ear to the ground. Heard enough to know you weren’t the same girl. Heard enough to know you needed a fresh start.” He gestured around the bar. “And then one day, there you were. Asking about a flat above a bar in Soho. It was… quite the coincidence, Aurora.” Rory stared at him, the pieces clicking into place. The way Silas had taken her on, so quickly, so easily. The inexplicable sense of safety she felt in his presence, a lingering echo she never understood. He knew. He had known all along. “You… you knew,” she breathed, the accusation heavy in her voice. “You let me rent the flat. You offered me a job. You pretended not to know.” “I recognized the flicker,” Silas explained, his voice even, devoid of defensiveness. “The way you moved. The intelligence in your eyes, trying to hide behind a veil of exhaustion. But you were changed. Harder. Warier. So I waited. Offered what I could. A quiet place. A fresh start. A mentor, if you needed one.” He paused. “I didn’t want to push. Some wounds don’t heal well when exposed too soon.” “My wounds are fine,” Rory snapped, though the tremor in her hand betrayed the lie. She took another long swallow of whiskey. “I healed. Or I learned to live with the scars. Like this one.” She lightly touched the crescent mark on her wrist. “The ones you can’t see are deeper.” Silas’s hazel eyes softened slightly. “You were a bright child, Aurora. Full of fire and endless questions. Always challenging, even then.” He ran a hand over his trimmed beard. “I remember your father telling me you once argued a point with a visiting judge, when you were nine, about the merits of fictional characters facing due process.” A faint smile touched his lips, then faded. “He thought you’d be the pride of the Welsh bar.” “The Welsh bar and I had a falling out,” Rory said, a bitter note in her voice. “Turns out law wasn’t my calling. Running away from things has gotten me further.” She put the glass down with a slight thud. “You said Laila. What did you call me when I was little?” “Laila,” Silas repeated. “From a book your mother read you. A strong queen, fierce and just. It suited you.” He looked at her, truly looked at her. “And it still does. Even if you don’t see it.” Rory scoffed, a dry, humorless sound. “Fierce and just? I’m a delivery girl. Delivering curry. That’s my grand destiny.” “You survive,” Silas countered, his voice firm. “You adapt. You keep moving. That takes its own kind of strength. Your mother always said you had grit. More than anyone she knew.” “My mother,” Rory repeated, the name a painful echo. “We don’t talk much anymore. Not since I left.” “Families fracture,” Silas said, his gaze settling on his silver signet ring, rotating it slowly around his finger. There was a quiet weight to his words, a hidden story in his own past. “Sometimes, it’s for the best. Sometimes, it’s the only way to find your own peace.” “So you’re saying leaving everything behind, everyone, was peace?” Rory challenged, her voice rising slightly. “Because it doesn’t feel like peace. It feels like… like I’m always looking over my shoulder. Always waiting for something to catch up.” “The past always catches up,” Silas said, his gaze meeting hers, clear and unwavering. “But perhaps not in the way you expect. Sometimes, it’s a quiet hand on your shoulder, reminding you of who you were, before you became who you needed to be.” Rory looked down at her hands, turning them over, inspecting the calluses, the small nicks from her work. They were not the soft hands of a Pre-Law student, of the girl who once dreamed of justice. They were the hands of someone who worked, who fought, who survived. “I don’t know who that girl was anymore,” she admitted, her voice barely a whisper. “She feels like a stranger. Someone I barely remember.” “She’s still in there,” Silas assured her. “Maybe buried under layers of… experience. But she’s there. And she’s part of who you are now. The two Auroras. The one you were, and the one you’ve become.” He sighed, a soft, weary sound. “Time has a way of leaving its mark on us all. We carry it. We carry the silence, the choices we made, the ones we didn’t.”
created_at"2026-02-25T01:00:45.567Z" 2/25/2026, 1:00:45 AM
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags39
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Silas said quietly [quietly]"
1"He gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.574
leniency1
rawRatio0.051
effectiveRatio0.051
63.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsmAdverbs13
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count4
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"carefully"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
6
adverb"lightly"
count1
7
adverb"truly"
count1
8
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"utterly"
3"carefully"
4"softly"
5"quickly"
6"lightly"
7"truly"
8"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1801
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"chilled"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"flicker"
count3
4
word"depths"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count1
6
word"tension"
count2
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"constructed"
count1
10
word"footsteps"
count1
11
word"dance"
count1
12
word"weight"
count2
13
word"silence"
count2
14
word"sense of"
count1
15
word"echo"
count2
16
word"unwavering"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"chilled"
1"warmth"
2"familiar"
3"flicker"
4"depths"
5"shattered"
6"tension"
7"chill"
8"shimmered"
9"constructed"
10"footsteps"
11"dance"
12"weight"
13"silence"
14"sense of"
15"echo"
16"unwavering"
17"whisper"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences106
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences135
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1802
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1073
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.58
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Rory15
Silas17
London1
Cardiff1
Irish1
Laila1
Silence1
Pre-Law1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Silas"
2"Laila"
3"Silence"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.708
windowScore0.333
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences86
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like regret"
1"as if looking through the smoky past"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1802
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences135
matches
0"knew that part"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean40.95
std21.21
cv0.518
sampleLengths
0102
170
246
312
441
513
678
734
847
973
1018
1119
1253
1313
1441
1536
1650
1725
1838
1932
2061
2119
2230
2315
2417
2515
2637
2774
2843
2927
3070
3151
3275
3352
3437
3519
3631
3718
3848
3938
4044
4148
4224
4368
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences106
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs162
matches
0"was cleaning"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences135
ratio0.007
matches
0"His height, the grey-streaked auburn hair, the quiet authority in his stance – all these elements, once just the defining characteristics of her landlord, of ‘Silas’, now coalesced into a ghost from her past."
83.02% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount606
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount36
adverbRatio0.0594059405940594
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006600660066006601
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences135
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences135
mean13.35
std7.75
cv0.58
sampleLengths
013
119
219
316
413
59
613
714
818
98
1019
118
123
139
1414
1523
1612
1711
1813
198
209
2113
227
2312
2412
256
2610
2716
2815
2911
3017
316
327
3323
3417
353
368
379
388
3934
4011
4114
422
432
447
4512
4613
4713
4815
4912
52.10% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.37037037037037035
totalSentences135
uniqueOpeners50
33.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"Instead, his gaze lingered on"
ratio0.01
36.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences100
matches
0"She peeled off her soaked"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly"
2"He looked up, his hazel"
3"He usually offered a nod,"
4"Her shoulder-length black hair dripped"
5"She pushed a stray strand"
6"He set it down, the"
7"He did not immediately reach"
8"he asked, his voice a"
9"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
10"She swallowed, her throat suddenly"
11"She fled Cardiff, left it"
12"she replied, her voice a"
13"She turned away, staring at"
14"He leaned forward slightly, his"
15"Her breath caught somewhere deep"
16"She spun back around, her"
17"His height, the grey-streaked auburn"
18"she breathed, the name a"
19"He gave a small, almost"
ratio0.46
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount94
totalSentences100
matches
0"The bell above the varnished"
1"Rain slicked the pavement outside,"
2"She peeled off her soaked"
3"The chilled air from outside"
4"The scent of spilled beer"
5"Silas stood behind the bar,"
6"His grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly"
7"He looked up, his hazel"
8"A small, almost imperceptible shift"
9"He usually offered a nod,"
10"Tonight, he paused."
11"Rory walked to her usual"
12"Her shoulder-length black hair dripped"
13"She pushed a stray strand"
14"Rory said, her voice a"
15"Silas reached for a clean"
16"He set it down, the"
17"He did not immediately reach"
18"he asked, his voice a"
19"Rory’s hand, resting on the"
ratio0.94
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags39
uselessAdditionCount15
matches
0"Rory said, her voice a little raw from the cold"
1"he asked, his voice a low rumble"
2"she replied, her voice a flat, dead thing"
3"Silas agreed, the word drawn out"
4"she repeated, the word tasting foreign on her tongue"
5"Rory managed, her voice emerging as a brittle laugh"
6"he replied, his gaze distant, as if looking through the smoky past"
7"she countered, her voice tight"
8"Rory said, her fingers tightening around the glass"
9"Silas asked, his voice gentle"
10"she said, her tone sharp"
11"Silas replied, his gaze steady"
12"Silas countered, his voice firm"
13"Rory challenged, her voice rising slightly"
14"she admitted, her voice barely a whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags26
fancyCount13
fancyTags
0"Silas agreed (agree)"
1"she breathed (breathe)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"Silas observed (observe)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"Silas explained (explain)"
6"Rory snapped (snap)"
7"Silas repeated (repeat)"
8"Rory repeated (repeat)"
9"Rory challenged (challenge)"
10"she admitted (admit)"
11"Silas assured (assure)"
12"He sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences68
tagDensity0.382
leniency0.765
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.382
73.0272%