Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ950X4Z380GA2M8GHSDKTT3

Run Details

Duration:
30.9s
Cost:
$0.003448
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air thinned, losing its London grit, its exhaust fumes and damp concrete tang. Aurora pulled her thin jacket tighter, not from cold, but from a sudden, prickling awareness. Beside her, Nyx flowed, a silhouette against the muted afternoon light filtering through the dense Richmond Park canopy. Their violet eyes, faint as dying embers, scanned the trees. Isolde walked ahead, her silver hair a waterfall against the deep green, her bare feet making no sound on the leaf litter, leaving no impression. She paused where a colossal oak, ancient even by the park’s standards, seemed to lean into another, forming a natural archway. Two more, equally immense, stood sentinel on either side, their bark gnarled like the faces of old gods. ‘This is it?’ Aurora whispered. Her voice sounded too loud, too rough. Nyx offered no audible reply, only a subtle shift in their dense shadow, a tilt of their indistinct head. Isolde turned, her pale lavender eyes holding a depth that always made Aurora feel like a child. ‘The boundary is thin here,’ Isolde said, her voice like chimes stirred by a breeze. ‘The Veil thins. This place… it remembers before.’ Before what? Aurora didn’t ask. She felt it in her bones, a resonance that vibrated beneath her skin. Her crescent scar, usually just a faint white line on her left wrist, felt warm, a faint pulse beneath the skin. She glanced down, but saw nothing obvious. The Heartstone Pendant, hidden beneath her shirt, gave a gentle thrum against her sternum, the Fae Grove’s ancient magic a quiet echo against the artifact’s latent power. Isolde stepped through the archway of leaning oaks. She simply… dissolved into the space beyond, like smoke drawn into a waiting lung. Aurora took a breath, the normal scent of damp earth and autumn leaves already fading. No, not fading. Changing. A sweetness bloomed, impossible to place, like honey mixed with rain and something metallic. She followed, Nyx a silent shadow at her heels. The world snapped into focus, drastically altered. The light was no longer filtered sunlight. It was diffuse, pearlescent, emanating not from any discernible source, but from the very air itself. The trees remained, vast and ancient, but their leaves were not merely green or gold. Hues of sapphire, emerald, and amethyst swirled in their foliage, shimmering as if dusted with crushed jewels. Flowers, impossessibly vibrant and alien in shape, carpeted the ground – blossoms like unfurled silks, others like tiny, crystalline bells, all blooming with a fierce, year-round tenacity. The air hummed, not with insects, but with a low, resonant frequency that vibrated in Aurora’s teeth. ‘By… what is this place?’ Aurora breathed, her practical mind struggling to categorize, to classify, to make sense of the impossible beauty. It was overwhelming, a sensory deluge. She reached out, her fingers brushing against a petal that felt like cool, smooth glass, yet was undeniably alive. It retracted slightly, a shy blush of colour deepening across its surface. Nyx moved. Not walking, but *unfolding*. Their shadow form detached from the ground, flowing around a cluster of glowing fungi that pulsed with a soft, azure light. They seemed to absorb the light, their own darkness deepening, shifting. When they spoke, their voice was a whisper that seemed to originate from everywhere and nowhere at once. ‘The hum… an overture. The Grove listens.’ Listens? To what? To them? Aurora felt a shiver trace a path down her spine. It wasn't fear, not exactly. It was the profound unease of standing on the threshold of something ancient, something profoundly *other*. The codex had described this place as a ‘pocket between Earth and the Fae realm,’ a place where ‘time moves differently.’ She felt that difference now, a subtly stretched elasticity in the moments. Each breath felt longer, each observation sharper, as if her mind had been granted a preternatural clarity. ‘Isolde?’ Aurora called, her voice softer this time, trying to match the Grove's hushed grandeur. The Half-Fae stood near a pool of water that mirrored the jewel-toned canopy above, but the reflection showed stars, not leaves. ‘Seek what you must,’ Isolde replied, her voice a melody without discernible notes. ‘The threads are many, the knots complex. But the pattern… the pattern is woven here.’ She gestured vaguely with a hand that seemed almost translucent. ‘The ancient oaks guard the ways. They remember the songs before words.’ Aurora walked around the pool, her boots sinking slightly into moss that felt like velvet. The standing stones were not just on the boundary; they were scattered throughout the Grove, massive monoliths etched with symbols she couldn’t decipher, symbols that seemed to shift and writhe just at the edge of her vision. They pulsed with a faint, internal light, a deep violet that mirrored Nyx’s eyes. She felt a faint tug, a disorientation like a tugboat’s sudden lurch as she neared one. Time, Isolde had said. The air warped around the stone, shimmering like heat haze, but cold. Aurora pulled back quickly, a sudden wave of nausea washing over her. ‘Careful where you tread,’ Nyx’s whisper seemed to sigh beside her. ‘The currents here are strong. They carry the echoes of centuries. A moment could last an age, or an age could be a blink.’ Aurora nodded, pressing a hand to her stomach. She understood now. It wasn’t just a saying. The Grove itself was a temporal eddy, a place where linearity broke down. She looked at her watch, a practical, digital display on her wrist. It was still ticking, but the numbers felt… arbitrary, like specks of unrelated data in a universe of organic flow. They moved along a path that was more suggestion than trail, winding between trees that twisted into impossible shapes, their branches laden with fruit that glowed with luminescence. Aurora reached out instinctively, drawn by the alien beauty, but Isolde’s voice, soft but firm, stopped her. ‘Not all that shines is sustenance, child of Earth. Some allurements are traps.’ ‘What kind of traps?’ Aurora asked, already pulling her hand back. Every instinct screamed caution, but the sheer, intoxicating wonder of the place made her want to understand, to *know*. ‘Mirrors,’ Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes catching the ambient light, ‘that show what you thirst for, but offer nothing to quench it. Illusions woven from desire.’ Aurora nodded slowly. She’d lived with illusions enough in her life. The memory of Evan, sharp and unwelcome, flickered. Her old life in Cardiff, the suffocating weight of her father’s expectations, the cramped London flat above Silas’s bar… all of it seemed impossibly distant, as if it belonged to another Aurora, in another time. Here, there was only the present, impossibly deep and vibrant. She noticed Nyx was examining one of the standing stones more closely. They extended a shadowy appendage, not touching, but hovering mere inches from the rough surface. The stone’s faint violet luminescence seemed to brighten, pulsing in rhythm. ‘Ancient script,’ Nyx murmured. ‘Not of mortals. Not of Fae as you know them. A language older than the pacts, older than worlds.’ ‘Can you read it?’ Aurora asked, stepping closer, drawn by Nyx’s fascination. ‘Components,’ Nyx replied. ‘Glimpses. It speaks of roots, of anchors, of what holds the fabric tethered. It speaks of watchers.’ Watchers? The unease prickled again. This place felt alive, but alive in a way that suggested intelligence, not just natural processes. The air, the light, the very *ground* seemed to possess an awareness. ‘This Grove,’ Isolde said, as if picking threads from Aurora’s thoughts, ‘is a knot. A place where worlds brush close. The Veil here is thin as a spider’s silk. What exists on the other side… sometimes it finds purchase.’ ‘What exists on the other side?’ Aurora repeated, her mind immediately jumping to Hel, to the demons and princes she’d heard whispers of, the realm where her Heartstone Pendant pulsed with latent warmth when near a portal. Isolde smiled, a slow, knowing curve of her lips. ‘That, Aurora Carter, is a question the Grove prefers to answer itself. Listen to its whispers. Feel its beat. It will tell you.’ Aurora closed her eyes, trying to filter out the dazzling visual input, to focus on sound and sensation. She could hear the hum, deeper now, resonating within her chest. She felt the cool, strange air on her skin, the soft moss beneath her feet. She felt the pulsing warmth in her wrist, the thrum of the pendant against her chest. And then, beneath it all, like the slow, inexorable beat of a colossal heart, she felt the Grove breathing. It was ancient. It was wondrous. And it was vast beyond mortal comprehension. She knew, with a certainty that settled deep in her gut, that she had stepped into a story far larger than she could possibly imagine. She opened her eyes again, taking in the alien landscape. The sky above was not blue, nor grey, nor amber like Dymas’s imagined skies. It was a swirling canvas of opalescent mist, shot through with veins of pure, liquid twilight. Stars, or things that mimicked stars, winked into existence and winked out again, unhurried and indifferent. The trees, some impossibly tall like spires of living gemstone, others low and gnarled like ancient roots clawing at the earth, bore fruits that pulsed with internal light – deep blues like captured starlight, radiant golds that smelled faintly of cinnamon and ozone, and crimson gems that seemed to hold the warmth of a dying sun. The ground shifted underfoot. It wasn't just moss. Here, small, crystalline structures grew like luminous moss, crunching faintly under Aurora’s weight, releasing tiny puffs of iridescent dust that shimmered for a moment before vanishing. There, fleshy, bioluminescent fungi clung to rocks, casting pools of eerie light that shifted through cycles of violet, cyan, and emerald. The air itself seemed thick with unseen particles, with motes of pure magic; it clung to her skin, prickled her senses, and tasted faintly sweet on her tongue. Nyx remained beside a particularly large standing stone, their form a stark contrast to the vibrant, shifting colours of the Grove. They seemed to absorb the light, a void in the midst of brilliance. Aurora felt a growing sense of being watched, not by specific eyes, but by the Grove itself. The ancient oaks, the luminous flora, the very mist that served as a sky – they all seemed to possess a latent sentience, an awareness of her presence. It was not malevolent, not yet, but it was undeniably alien. She felt like an ant crawling across a vast, living tapestry, her every movement catalogued by forces beyond her comprehension. ‘The whispers,’ Nyx’s voice, a faint sigh in Aurora’s ear, broke through her mounting unease. ‘They grow louder. They speak of… ingress.’ ‘Ingress?’ Aurora frowned, her mind trying to grasp the concept. ‘Of passage. Of invitation. Or perhaps… of intrusion.’ Nyx turned their indistinct head, their violet glow fixing on Aurora. ‘You carry more than just the mortal coil, Rory. The Fae blade, the stone. They resonate. This place… it calls to the echoes within you.’ Aurora’s hand subconsciously went to her wrist, tracing the faint crescent scar. It pulsed again, a little stronger this time, a faint warmth blooming. The Heartstone Pendant gave a more distinct thrum against her chest, a tiny vibration that seemed to echo the deep hum of the Grove. Isolde, who had drifted away to examine a flower that unfurled petals like iridescent butterfly wings, turned back. ‘The Grove recognizes its own,’ Isolde said, her voice clear, cutting through the ambient whispers. ‘It recognizes the ties that bind. But it also tests.’ She stepped closer, meeting Aurora’s gaze. ‘You are not merely lost, Elena. You are found by this place. Whether that is a blessing or a curse… that is for you to discover.’ Elena? Aurora blinked. Isolde had never used that name before. It was not one of her aliases from the codex. It was something else entirely. A flicker of unease, cold and sharp, pierced through the wonder. The Fae compulsion, Isolde could mislead. Was this a test? Was this a trap the Seer had warned her about? ‘Who is Elena?’ Aurora asked, her voice tight. Isolde’s lips curved into that enigmatic smile again. ‘A question for another whisper,’ she said. Her pale lavender eyes held Aurora’s, a silent challenge and a veiled promise. ‘For now, feel only this. Feel the age. Feel the wildness. Feel the magic singing in your blood, and the world outside… the world of concrete and worry… simply melts away.’ Aurora forced herself to breathe, to let go of the sharp edge of suspicion. Isolde’s words, cryptic as they were, held a kernel of truth. The weight of her ordinary life, the delivery routes, the cramped flat, the constant low-level anxiety of survival in London – it all seemed to recede, dwarfed by the sheer, breathtaking, terrifying reality of the Fae Grove. She was here. In a place that shimmered with impossible colours, hummed with alien energy, and whispered secrets older than time. Part of her yearned to flee, to scramble back through the archway of ancient oaks and rejoin the mundane world. But a larger, more insistent part, the part that had always felt a little out of step, a little too curious, a little too observant, felt a profound, exhilarating sense of belonging. This was where the stories began. This was where the true adventure lay. The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, cool and heavy against her thigh, felt like a promise, a shield, a key. She gripped the hilt, its moonsilver cold against her fingers. The Grove waited. And Aurora Carter, for the first time, felt truly ready to explore.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:01:12.23Z" 2/25/2026, 1:01:12 AM
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native_tokens_reasoning5183
native_tokens_cached0
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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provider_responses
0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.46% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2281
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"very"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
4
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"quickly"
3"slowly"
4"truly"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found
0"Elena"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2281
totalAiIsms50
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"sentinel"
count1
2
word"resonance"
count1
3
word"vibrated"
count2
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"echo"
count2
6
word"crystalline"
count2
7
word"sense of"
count3
8
word"pulsed"
count5
9
word"whisper"
count3
10
word"down her spine"
count1
11
word"profound"
count2
12
word"complex"
count1
13
word"velvet"
count1
14
word"etched"
count1
15
word"lurch"
count1
16
word"echoes"
count2
17
word"stomach"
count1
18
word"desire"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
20
word"weight"
count3
21
word"silk"
count1
22
word"warmth"
count4
23
word"input"
count1
24
word"radiant"
count1
25
word"shimmered"
count2
26
word"stark"
count1
27
word"tapestry"
count1
28
word"tracing"
count1
29
word"flicker"
count1
30
word"enigmatic"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"sentinel"
2"resonance"
3"vibrated"
4"pulse"
5"echo"
6"crystalline"
7"sense of"
8"pulsed"
9"whisper"
10"down her spine"
11"profound"
12"complex"
13"velvet"
14"etched"
15"lurch"
16"echoes"
17"stomach"
18"desire"
19"flickered"
20"weight"
21"silk"
22"warmth"
23"input"
24"radiant"
25"shimmered"
26"stark"
27"tapestry"
28"tracing"
29"flicker"
30"enigmatic"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences172
matches
0"felt a shiver"
1"A flicker of unease"
26.58% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount11
narrationSentences172
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
2"know"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences206
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen55
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords2285
ratio0.002
matches
0"unfolding"
1"other"
2"know"
3"ground"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions82
wordCount1900
uniqueNames25
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
London3
Nyx7
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora20
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Fae7
Grove10
Listens1
Half-Fae1
Isolde11
Evan1
Cardiff1
Silas1
Watchers1
Veil1
Dymas1
You1
Elena1
Seer1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Carter1
Feel4
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Pendant"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Isolde"
5"Evan"
6"Silas"
7"Dymas"
8"You"
9"Elena"
10"Seer"
11"Carter"
12"Feel"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Listens"
6"Cardiff"
globalScore0.974
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences118
glossingSentenceCount10
matches
0"felt like cool, smooth glass, yet was u"
1"whisper that seemed to originate from everywhere and nowhere at once"
2"felt like velvet"
3"symbols that seemed to shift and writhe just at the edge of her vision"
4"seemed impossibly distant as if it belonged to another Aurora, in another time"
5"gems that seemed to hold the warmth of a dying sun"
6"seemed thick with unseen particles, with motes of pure magic; it clung to her skin, prickled her senses, and tasted faintly sweet on her tongue"
7"felt like an ant crawling across a vast"
8"vibration that seemed to echo the deep hum of the Grove"
9"felt like a promise, a shield, a key"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches8
per1kWords3.501
wordCount2285
matches
0"not from cold, but from a sudden, prickling awareness"
1"not from any discernible source, but from the very air itself"
2"not with insects, but with a low, resonant frequency"
3"Not walking, but *unfolding*"
4"not touching, but hovering mere inches from the rough surface"
5"not by specific eyes, but by the Grove itself"
6"not malevolent, not yet, but it was undeniably alien"
7"not yet, but it was undeniably alien"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences206
matches
0"used that name"
74.94% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean78.79
std32.49
cv0.412
sampleLengths
0121
171
273
364
4106
559
663
786
815
971
10110
1196
1258
1357
1464
1561
1632
1772
1869
19117
20112
2183
22110
2376
2466
2557
2656
2767
28193
99.14% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences172
matches
0"been granted"
1"are found"
2"were, held"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs290
matches
0"was overwhelming"
1"was still ticking"
2"was examining"
59.64% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences206
ratio0.029
matches
0"Flowers, impossessibly vibrant and alien in shape, carpeted the ground – blossoms like unfurled silks, others like tiny, crystalline bells, all blooming with a fierce, year-round tenacity."
1"The standing stones were not just on the boundary; they were scattered throughout the Grove, massive monoliths etched with symbols she couldn’t decipher, symbols that seemed to shift and writhe just at the edge of her vision."
2"The trees, some impossibly tall like spires of living gemstone, others low and gnarled like ancient roots clawing at the earth, bore fruits that pulsed with internal light – deep blues like captured starlight, radiant golds that smelled faintly of cinnamon and ozone, and crimson gems that seemed to hold the warmth of a dying sun."
3"The air itself seemed thick with unseen particles, with motes of pure magic; it clung to her skin, prickled her senses, and tasted faintly sweet on her tongue."
4"The ancient oaks, the luminous flora, the very mist that served as a sky – they all seemed to possess a latent sentience, an awareness of her presence."
5"The weight of her ordinary life, the delivery routes, the cramped flat, the constant low-level anxiety of survival in London – it all seemed to recede, dwarfed by the sheer, breathtaking, terrifying reality of the Fae Grove."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount121
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.024793388429752067
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.008264462809917356
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences206
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences206
mean11.09
std8.28
cv0.747
sampleLengths
014
115
218
310
425
521
618
75
87
919
1017
1115
123
132
143
152
163
1713
1821
197
2027
218
222
2312
2415
253
261
2714
289
297
307
3116
3215
3317
3427
3517
361
3721
386
3919
4012
412
424
4321
4411
4518
462
472
483
491
39.97% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.30097087378640774
totalSentences206
uniqueOpeners62
21.93% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences152
matches
0"sometimes it finds"
ratio0.007
83.16% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences152
matches
0"Their violet eyes, faint as"
1"She paused where a colossal"
2"Her voice sounded too loud,"
3"She felt it in her"
4"Her crescent scar, usually just"
5"She glanced down, but saw"
6"She followed, Nyx a silent"
7"It was diffuse, pearlescent, emanating"
8"It was overwhelming, a sensory"
9"She reached out, her fingers"
10"It retracted slightly, a shy"
11"Their shadow form detached from"
12"They seemed to absorb the"
13"It wasn't fear, not exactly."
14"It was the profound unease"
15"They remember the songs before"
16"They pulsed with a faint,"
17"She felt a faint tug,"
18"They carry the echoes of"
19"She understood now."
ratio0.342
58.68% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount122
totalSentences152
matches
0"The air thinned, losing its"
1"Aurora pulled her thin jacket"
2"Their violet eyes, faint as"
3"Isolde walked ahead, her silver"
4"She paused where a colossal"
5"Her voice sounded too loud,"
6"Nyx offered no audible reply,"
7"Isolde turned, her pale lavender"
8"Aurora didn’t ask."
9"She felt it in her"
10"Her crescent scar, usually just"
11"She glanced down, but saw"
12"The Heartstone Pendant, hidden beneath"
13"Isolde stepped through the archway"
14"Aurora took a breath, the"
15"A sweetness bloomed, impossible to"
16"She followed, Nyx a silent"
17"The world snapped into focus,"
18"The light was no longer"
19"It was diffuse, pearlescent, emanating"
ratio0.803
32.89% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences152
matches
0"Whether that is a blessing"
ratio0.007
37.34% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences88
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"She felt it in her bones, a resonance that vibrated beneath her skin."
1"She reached out, her fingers brushing against a petal that felt like cool, smooth glass, yet was undeniably alive."
2"Each breath felt longer, each observation sharper, as if her mind had been granted a preternatural clarity."
3"The Half-Fae stood near a pool of water that mirrored the jewel-toned canopy above, but the reflection showed stars, not leaves."
4"The standing stones were not just on the boundary; they were scattered throughout the Grove, massive monoliths etched with symbols she couldn’t decipher, symbol…"
5"They moved along a path that was more suggestion than trail, winding between trees that twisted into impossible shapes, their branches laden with fruit that glo…"
6"Stars, or things that mimicked stars, winked into existence and winked out again, unhurried and indifferent."
7"The trees, some impossibly tall like spires of living gemstone, others low and gnarled like ancient roots clawing at the earth, bore fruits that pulsed with int…"
8"Here, small, crystalline structures grew like luminous moss, crunching faintly under Aurora’s weight, releasing tiny puffs of iridescent dust that shimmered for…"
9"There, fleshy, bioluminescent fungi clung to rocks, casting pools of eerie light that shifted through cycles of violet, cyan, and emerald."
10"The Heartstone Pendant gave a more distinct thrum against her chest, a tiny vibration that seemed to echo the deep hum of the Grove."
11"In a place that shimmered with impossible colours, hummed with alien energy, and whispered secrets older than time."
12"But a larger, more insistent part, the part that had always felt a little out of step, a little too curious, a little too observant, felt a profound, exhilarati…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"It speaks (speak)"
dialogueSentences0
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
69.3357%