Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ951NCSETWTG365H06FJS7T

Run Details

Duration:
30.6s
Cost:
$0.003004
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park had grown unnaturally still. Even the distant drone of London traffic had been swallowed by the dense, ancient trees that ringed the clearing. Isolde Varga had led them here, deeper than Aurora had ever ventured, to a place where the world felt fragile, worn thin. A shimmering tear, no wider than Rory’s outstretched arm, had bloomed into existence with a silent exhalation of impossible colours. Aurora Carter’s Heartstone Pendant, normally cool against her skin, pulsed a frantic, warm thrum, a beacon against the nascent dread. Isolde, her silver hair a cascade that seemed to absorb the very light around it, stepped forward. Her pale lavender eyes, ancient and unfathomable, fixed on the anomaly. "The thread frays," she murmured, her voice a delicate chime. "A door cracks open where none should be." Nyx, a humanoid silhouette of living shadow, remained poised beside Rory. Their form, usually a fluid ripple, seemed to solidify, a dark contrast to the ethereal tear. Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned the distortion. "The air tastes like old secrets," they whispered, their voice like wind rustling through dry leaves. "And hunger." A shiver traced Rory’s spine, unrelated to the crisp autumn air. This was far beyond the hurried deliveries and cramped London flat she called life. Aurora instinctively touched her left wrist, tracing the faint, crescent-shaped scar, a tangible anchor in the face of the intangible. Her pendant throbbed against her sternum, a frantic heartbeat accelerating with each passing moment. She felt its faint inner glow intensify, a tiny warmth pushing back against the unsettling chill that seemed to seep from the portal. "We go through," Isolde declared, not as a question, but a statement of inevitability. With a grace that defied gravity, she stepped into the shimmering vortex. She left no footprints on the damp earth, not even a displaced leaf. Rory exchanged a glance with Nyx. The Shade simply inclined their head, a silent acknowledgement. Taking a deep breath, Rory followed, her hand instinctively going to the pommel of the Fae-Forged Blade sheathed at her hip. The moonsilver was always cold, a constant reminder of its otherworldly origin, a power that could cut through more than just flesh. The transition was not violent, but a disorienting dissolve. One moment, the familiar scent of damp earth and decaying leaves; the next, an overwhelming wave of richness that hit Rory like a physical blow. The ground beneath her feet yielded with a soft crunch, like walking on a carpet of crushed amber. It wasn't earth, nor stone, but something that glittered faintly. She blinked, her bright blue eyes wide, trying to process the impossible landscape. Colossal trees, impossibly tall, clawed at a sky painted in hues of warm amber. Their leaves were not green, but intricate filigree of what looked like beaten gold and silver, tinkling with a soft, melodious chime in a breeze that carried no discernible scent of life, only overwhelming perfume and ripeness. The light here emanated not from a sun, but from the very air, a perpetual, soft sunset that illuminated vast, alien orchards where fruits pulsed with inner luminescence, swollen to the size of boulders. "Where are we?" Rory whispered, the sound swallowed by the ambient hum of the realm. "A place where satiety is the only sermon," Isolde replied, her silver hair drifting as if tethered to an unseen underwater current. "Where dreams are harvested, and feasts are eternal." Rory’s pendant pulsed harder, a sharp, warm note against her ribs. Hel. The codex had described Dymas, the realm of Gluttony, ruled by Prince Belphegor, as a place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, gardens, exotic ingredients, master chefs… It was all here, amplified to an incomprehensible degree. "Dymas?" she ventured, the name feeling heavy on her tongue. Her pendant gave a definitive, resonant pulse, a confirmation that settled cold dread in her stomach. They moved deeper into the domain. The crystal-ground gave way to broad flagstones inlaid with veins of what appeared to be solidified wine, swirling with deep ruby and liquid gold. The air grew thicker still, a heady perfume of overripe nectar, exotic spices that clawed at the throat, and underlying it all, a faint, metallic coppery tang that made Rory’s senses prickle. From beyond a grove of trees whose fruits glowed like captured stars, the sound of distant revelry drifted – a cacophony of laughter that held an edge of desperation, music played with impossible, intoxicating rhythms, and the clatter of unseen dishes. Nyx phased slightly, their shadowy form momentarily rippling. "The shadows here are different," they murmured, appearing beside Rory, their violet eyes aglow. "They cling, like silk. And they listen." They pointed a shadowy digit towards a massive, curving structure that seemed carved from dark, polished wood, studded with gem-like fruits. "The architecture… it breathes. The stone, the amber light… it's a collective exhale. And the desires it feeds… they echo." Rory felt a strange inertia creeping into her limbs, a pleasant lethargy that begged her to simply stop, to bask in the overwhelming sensory richness. Her focus, usually sharp, felt dulled by the sheer opulence, by the pervasive atmosphere of decadent indulgence. She consciously gripped the Fae-Forged Blade’s hilt again, its eternal cold a welcome counterpoint, a sharp reminder of consequence in a place that seemed to have forgotten it. The crescent scar on her wrist felt warm, as if remembering a deep ache that this place sought to soothe, and in doing so, to exploit. As they approached the wooden structure, a colossal archway that smelled strongly of dark chocolate, they saw the denizens of Dymas. Shapes of unimaginable variety moved with languid grace or frenzied joy. Some were vaguely humanoid, draped in silks that shifted hue with every movement, gorging themselves on food presented by a procession of small, pallid figures. Others were monstrous, scaled or feathered, their eyes burning with fervent delight. A spindly creature with skin like dried parchment and eyes like black currants glided past. It offered them a floating silver tray bearing impossibly delicate spun-sugar sculptures that seemed to writhe slightly when observed too closely. Rory recoiled, a knot forming in her stomach. Nyx, however, extended a shadowy tendril. As it touched one of the sculptures, the spun sugar dissolved into swirling mist. "Ephemeral," Nyx stated, their voice a soft exhalation. "A fleeting joy. Fitting for this place." "All pleasures here are designed to consume," Isolde said, her gaze distant, fixed on a structure that glittered like a thousand diamonds. "And to be consumed. They believe they are masters of all that is delectable," she mused, her fathomless eyes tracing the opulent displays. "But they are but servants to their own appetites. A gilded cage, where the bars are made of sugar and regret." Rory’s gaze fell upon the pallid figures serving the ecstatic crowds. They wore drab, grey tunics and moved with almost robotic efficiency, bearing platters, refilling goblets, their eyes vacant. They passed through the revelers like ghosts, unnoticed or deliberately ignored. The contrast between their somber presence and the rampant joy was stark. The codex mentioned helbound souls contracted from Earth. These had to be them. "The chefs," Rory said, nodding towards a group of figures in exaggerated, impossibly tall chefs’ hats, directing the servers with sharp gesticulations. "Are they… are they the helbound?" Isolde nodded, a shadow of a smile touching her lips. "Some are. Others are ambitious mortals, drawn by the promise of immortal recipes, unwilling to see the price demanded for such forbidden knowledge." She turned her clear, pale lavender gaze to Rory. "A lesson in all realms, perhaps. The hunger for power, or for pleasure, always has a cost." The Heartstone Pendant pulsed again, a warm vibration that felt like a warning bell against the sweet seduction of Dymas. It was a piece of her past, given by an unknown benefactor, meant to guide her towards Hel – or perhaps, away from its darkest corners. She touched it, its faint inner glow a small, steady light against the overwhelming amber. The crescent scar on her wrist ached with a phantom cold, a strange counterpoint to the pervasive warmth. "We're not here to eat," Rory said, her voice firm, cutting through the ambient revelry. She looked from Isolde to Nyx, her bright blue eyes finding focus in the chaos. "What do we need to find?" Isolde turned fully towards Rory, her ancient eyes reflecting the alien amber light. "You must look past the sweetness, Aurora Carter," she advised, her compunction to speak truth compelling her words, though their meaning remained elusive. "For in Dymas, the most delicious fruits often hide the bitterest seeds. And the greatest hunger is not for food. It is for the soul."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.64
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1456
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"pulsed"
count4
1
word"beacon"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count2
5
word"tangible"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count2
8
word"chill"
count1
9
word"reminder"
count2
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"familiar"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"pulse"
count1
14
word"stomach"
count2
15
word"crystal"
count1
16
word"cacophony"
count1
17
word"silk"
count1
18
word"structure"
count3
19
word"echo"
count1
20
word"ephemeral"
count1
21
word"fleeting"
count1
22
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"beacon"
2"scanned"
3"traced"
4"tracing"
5"tangible"
6"throbbed"
7"warmth"
8"chill"
9"reminder"
10"otherworldly"
11"familiar"
12"intricate"
13"pulse"
14"stomach"
15"crystal"
16"cacophony"
17"silk"
18"structure"
19"echo"
20"ephemeral"
21"fleeting"
22"stark"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
37.04% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1458
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.12% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions58
wordCount1234
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.38
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Varga1
Aurora3
Rory17
Carter1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Nyx6
Shade1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Isolde8
Dymas3
Gluttony1
Prince1
Belphegor1
Earth1
Hel2
persons
0"Varga"
1"Aurora"
2"Rory"
3"Carter"
4"Pendant"
5"Nyx"
6"Shade"
7"Blade"
8"Isolde"
9"Gluttony"
10"Prince"
11"Belphegor"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Earth"
4"Hel"
globalScore0.811
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"cascade that seemed to absorb the very light around it, stepped forward"
1"chill that seemed to seep from the portal"
2"looked like beaten gold and silver, tinkl"
3"seemed carved from dark, polished wood, studded with gem-like fruits"
4"place that seemed to have forgotten it"
5"as if remembering a deep ache that this place sought to soothe, and in doing so, to exploit"
6"sculptures that seemed to writhe slightly when observed too closely"
7"felt like a warning bell against the sw"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords2.743
wordCount1458
matches
0"not as a question, but a statement of inevitability"
1"not violent, but a disorienting dissolve"
2"not green, but intricate filigree of what looked like beaten gold"
3"not from a sun, but from the very air, a perpetual, soft sunset"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
79.01% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs25
mean58.32
std24.88
cv0.427
sampleLengths
090
146
277
357
439
558
662
798
815
930
1059
1116
12103
1370
1496
1569
1664
1715
1866
1965
2028
2159
2279
2336
2461
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"been swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs183
matches(empty)
47.62% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences90
ratio0.033
matches
0"One moment, the familiar scent of damp earth and decaying leaves; the next, an overwhelming wave of richness that hit Rory like a physical blow."
1"From beyond a grove of trees whose fruits glowed like captured stars, the sound of distant revelry drifted – a cacophony of laughter that held an edge of desperation, music played with impossible, intoxicating rhythms, and the clatter of unseen dishes."
2"It was a piece of her past, given by an unknown benefactor, meant to guide her towards Hel – or perhaps, away from its darkest corners."
90.89% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1163
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.04213241616509028
lyAdverbCount25
lyAdverbRatio0.021496130696474634
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean16.2
std7.73
cv0.477
sampleLengths
09
119
222
320
420
517
611
710
88
911
1016
117
1216
1313
1414
1520
1614
1723
1814
1912
2013
216
229
2321
2422
259
2625
2718
2810
2913
3014
3137
3234
3315
3422
358
3611
371
3820
398
409
4110
4216
436
4424
4532
4641
478
4814
4928
64.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4111111111111111
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners37
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Even the distant drone of"
1"Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned"
ratio0.025
85.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount27
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her pale lavender eyes, ancient"
1"she murmured, her voice a"
2"Their form, usually a fluid"
3"they whispered, their voice like"
4"Her pendant throbbed against her"
5"She felt its faint inner"
6"She left no footprints on"
7"It wasn't earth, nor stone,"
8"She blinked, her bright blue"
9"Their leaves were not green,"
10"It was all here, amplified"
11"she ventured, the name feeling"
12"Her pendant gave a definitive,"
13"They moved deeper into the"
14"they murmured, appearing beside Rory,"
15"They pointed a shadowy digit"
16"Her focus, usually sharp, felt"
17"She consciously gripped the Fae-Forged"
18"It offered them a floating"
19"she mused, her fathomless eyes"
ratio0.338
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences80
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Isolde Varga had led them"
2"A shimmering tear, no wider"
3"Aurora Carter’s Heartstone Pendant, normally"
4"Isolde, her silver hair a"
5"Her pale lavender eyes, ancient"
6"she murmured, her voice a"
7"Nyx, a humanoid silhouette of"
8"Their form, usually a fluid"
9"they whispered, their voice like"
10"A shiver traced Rory’s spine,"
11"This was far beyond the"
12"Aurora instinctively touched her left"
13"Her pendant throbbed against her"
14"She felt its faint inner"
15"Isolde declared, not as a"
16"She left no footprints on"
17"Rory exchanged a glance with"
18"The Shade simply inclined their"
19"The moonsilver was always cold,"
ratio0.875
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"Even the distant drone of London traffic had been swallowed by the dense, ancient trees that ringed the clearing."
1"She felt its faint inner glow intensify, a tiny warmth pushing back against the unsettling chill that seemed to seep from the portal."
2"The moonsilver was always cold, a constant reminder of its otherworldly origin, a power that could cut through more than just flesh."
3"Their leaves were not green, but intricate filigree of what looked like beaten gold and silver, tinkling with a soft, melodious chime in a breeze that carried n…"
4"The air grew thicker still, a heady perfume of overripe nectar, exotic spices that clawed at the throat, and underlying it all, a faint, metallic coppery tang t…"
5"From beyond a grove of trees whose fruits glowed like captured stars, the sound of distant revelry drifted – a cacophony of laughter that held an edge of desper…"
6"She consciously gripped the Fae-Forged Blade’s hilt again, its eternal cold a welcome counterpoint, a sharp reminder of consequence in a place that seemed to ha…"
7"The crescent scar on her wrist felt warm, as if remembering a deep ache that this place sought to soothe, and in doing so, to exploit."
8"As they approached the wooden structure, a colossal archway that smelled strongly of dark chocolate, they saw the denizens of Dymas."
9"Some were vaguely humanoid, draped in silks that shifted hue with every movement, gorging themselves on food presented by a procession of small, pallid figures."
10"It offered them a floating silver tray bearing impossibly delicate spun-sugar sculptures that seemed to writhe slightly when observed too closely."
11"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed again, a warm vibration that felt like a warning bell against the sweet seduction of Dymas."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"she murmured, her voice a delicate chime"
1"she ventured, the name feeling heavy on her tongue"
2"Nyx stated, their voice a soft exhalation"
3"she mused, her fathomless eyes tracing the opulent displays"
4"Rory said, her voice firm, cutting through the ambient revelry"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde declared (declare)"
3"Rory whispered (whisper)"
4"they murmured (murmur)"
5"Nyx stated (state)"
6"she advised (advise)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.44
leniency0.88
rawRatio0.636
effectiveRatio0.56
65.7802%