Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ951PK6WNM2ZXN36BAA82VE

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Duration:
26.9s
Cost:
$0.011063
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The silver chain scorched the skin on the back of my neck. I hissed, fumbling with the brown paper bag in one hand while the other clawed at the deep crimson Heartstone pendant tucked beneath my shirt. It throbbed against my breastbone, a rhythmic hot pulse that matched the frantic beat of my heart. The Golden Empress's signature aromatic duck rice remained upright by some miracle, though the grease had already begun to turn the bottom of the bag translucent and soft. I pushed through a cluster of skeletal hawthorn branches that had no business being this thick in the middle of Richmond Park. My black hair caught on a thorn, yanking my head back with a sharp sting. I cursed under my breath, disentangling myself while my trainers sank into soil that felt far too spongy, far too wet. The air changed. The familiar scent of damp earth and city smog vanished, replaced by a cloying heavy aroma of jasmine and honeysuckle. It was thick enough to coat the tongue. I stepped over a fallen log and stopped. The standing stones loomed ahead. They weren't granite or sarsen like the ones back home in Wales. These were ancient massive oak pillars, petrified into something that looked like stone but retained the twisted orign of grain and bark. They formed a perfect circle, cordoning off a clearing where the rules of the London winter seemed to have been suspended indefinitely. Inside the ring, wildflowers bloomed in a chaotic riot of violet, gold, and blood-red. "Isolde?" My voice sounded small, swallowed by the unnatural stillness of the grove. I checked the delivery app on my phone. The screen flickered, the GPS blue dot spinning aimlessly before the display dissolved into a jagged mess of static. I shoved the useless glass slab into my pocket. "Isolde, I have your order. Yu-Fei says you've already paid, so I'm just going to leave it by the centre stone, alright?" No one answered. The silence here wasn't the absence of sound, it felt like a physical weight pressing against my eardrums. There were no crickets, no rustle of wind through the leaves, no distant hum of the A3. I stepped into the circle, the grass crunching strangely under my feet. It didn't sound like grass. It sounded like dried parchment. I walked toward the centre of the grove, my eyes darting between the towering oak pillars. They seemed taller than they had from outside the boundary. I looked back, and the gap I had entered through appeared narrower, the trees behind it blurred as if viewed through a sheet of hammered glass. The pendant on my chest surged with heat. It wasn't a warning anymore, it was a demand. The stone glowed with a faint inner light, casting a sickly red hue over the white wildflowers at my feet. A soft pitter-patter echoed from the edge of the clearing. I spun around, nearly dropping the duck rice. "Who’s there?" The sound stopped instantly. I stared at a thicket of ferns. They were unnaturally green, the fronds tipped with sharp jagged edges that looked like serrated bone. Something had moved behind them. Something low to the ground and heavy. "I'm leaving the food now," I said, my voice rising an octave. I knelt down, placing the Golden Empress bag on a flat stone at the base of the central oak. "I'm leaving. Right now." I backed away, keeping my eyes on the ferns. As I retreated, a low rhythmic clicking sound started to my left. It was followed by a wet sloshing noise to my right. It sounded like someone dragging a heavy soaked carpet through the mud. "Not a fan of the service, Rory?" The voice didn't come from the trees. It came from the shadows directly beneath my feet. I jumped back, my heart hammering against my ribs. "Who said that?" "You're late. The time out there... it slips away, doesn't it?" A woman stepped from behind the largest standing stone. She was tall, her skin the colour of moonlight on a stagnant pond. She wore a dress made of interwoven willow bark and silk that seemed to shift and ripple even though there was no breeze. Her eyes were wide, lidless, and entirely black, like two holes bored into a skull. "Isolde?" I asked, my hand dropping to the crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist, a nervous habit I couldn't break. "Isolde is a name for a different season," the woman said. She tilted her head at an impossible angle, her neck lengthening with a sickening series of pops. "You smell of copper and old law, Aurora Carter. And your little trinket... it's screaming." I looked down. The Heartstone was no longer pulsing. It was vibrating, humming a low dissonant note that made my teeth ache. The crimson gem had turned a dark bruised purple. "I just deliver the food," I whispered, taking another step back toward the entrance. "The Empress sends her finest morsels to the Grove," the woman said, her mouth widening into a smile that revealed too many teeth. They were small, needle-sharp, and stained a faint yellow. "But the duck is for the birds. I prefer something with a faster pulse." The clicking noise returned, louder now. From the shadows of the standing stones, things began to emerge. They weren't animals. They were pale spindly shapes with too many joints, their skin translucent enough to show the dark pulsing veins beneath. They moved with a jerky zig-zag motion, their many-fingered hands scratching at the petrified oak. One of them skittered into the light of the clearing. It had the face of a beautiful young boy, but his eyes were sewn shut with thick black thread, and his torso elongated into a segmented chitinous body that trailed behind him like a centipede. "The border is closed, Rory," the woman hissed. She wasn't standing ten feet away anymore. She was five feet away. Then four. She didn't walk, she simply skipped through the space between us. I turned and bolted for the gap between the stones. The wildflowers tripped me, the vines coiling around my ankles like wet snakes. I went down hard, the palm of my hand catching on a sharp rock. I felt the hot slice of skin, the heavy metallic scent of blood filling the air instantly. The clicking stopped. Every one of the pale things froze. The boy-centipede turned its sightless head toward me, its nostrils flaring as it tasted the air. "Oh," the woman breathed, her voice right above my ear. "You've brought a gift after all." I scrambled to my feet, ignoring the throb in my hand. The entrance to the grove was gone. Where the gap had been, there was now only a solid wall of twisting grey thorns and ancient black oak. The trees were moving, their branches lashing together to knit a cage of impenetrable wood. The Heartstone pendant suddenly went cold. Not just cold, but freezing, the ice-like temperature searing into my chest. The black silence of the grove was shattered by a high-pitched hunting whistle. The things in the shadows lunged. I dove to the side as the boy-centipede slammed into the spot where I’d been standing, its many legs tearing deep furrows into the earth. I scrambled toward the central stone, the only place that wasn't swarming with pale skittering shapes. "There's no point in running, Malphora," the woman laughed, her voice echoing from every stone at once. "Stop calling me that!" I screamed, grabbing an old heavy fallen branch from the ground. I swung it at the nearest creature, a thing with a bloated head and weeping sores for eyes. The wood shattered against its ribcage, but it didn't even flinch. It caught my arm, its skin feeling like cold wet leather. The woman appeared in front of me, her hand reaching out for the Heartstone. Her fingers were tipped with long obsidian nails. "Give it to me," she commanded. "It doesn't belong to you. It belongs to the deep places." The pendant flared one last time, a blinding white-hot explosion of light that threw the woman back. She shrieked, her skin bubbling where the light touched it. I didn't wait. I ran toward the section of the thorn wall that looked the thinnest. Behind me, the clicking became a frenzied roar. The centipede-thing was right on my heels, its many feet drumming a terrifying rhythm against the hollow ground. I reached the thorns and thrust my bleeding hand into the mass of briars, desperate to find a way through. The thorns drank the blood, drawing it in, and for a second, the barrier groaned and parted just enough for a person to squeeze through. I shoved my shoulder into the gap, the thorns shredding my jacket and skin. I was halfway through when a cold powerful hand clamped onto my ankle. I was yanked backward, my face hitting the dirt. The woman stood over me, her face a mask of charred skin and black rage. She didn't look human anymore. Her jaw unhinged, stretching down to her chest, revealing a gullet lined with spinning rows of teeth. "Mine," she hissed. She dragged me toward the centre of the circle, where the ground was beginning to open up, revealing a swirling abyss of crimson mist and the sound of a thousand screaming voices. The Heartstone began to glow again, but this time, it wasn't the pendant. The light was coming from inside my own chest, beneath the skin, following the lines of my veins. The centipede-boy reared up, his needle-teeth inches from my throat, just as the ground beneath the central oak gave way entirely.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:01:38.289Z" 2/25/2026, 1:01:38 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.91% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.16% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1617
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"perfect"
count1
6
word"chaotic"
count1
7
word"flickered"
count1
8
word"silence"
count2
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"silk"
count1
12
word"throb"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"shattered"
count2
15
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"rhythmic"
2"pulse"
3"familiar"
4"loomed"
5"perfect"
6"chaotic"
7"flickered"
8"silence"
9"weight"
10"echoed"
11"silk"
12"throb"
13"searing"
14"shattered"
15"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
82.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"started to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences130
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1617
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions13
wordCount1472
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity0.34
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Heartstone5
Golden2
Empress2
Richmond1
Park1
Wales1
London1
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Empress"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Wales"
3"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount8
matches
0"looked like stone but retained the twiste"
1"felt like a physical weight pressing ag"
2"seemed taller than they had from outside the boundary"
3"appeared narrower the trees behind it blurred as if viewed through a sheet of hammered glass"
4"looked like serrated bone"
5"sounded like someone dragging a heavy soak"
6"silk that seemed to shift and ripple even though there was no breeze"
7"appeared in front of me, her hand reaching out for the Heartstone"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.618
wordCount1617
matches
0"Not just cold, but freezing, the ice-like temperature searing into my chest"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences130
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean31.71
std19.17
cv0.605
sampleLengths
082
158
239
375
41
548
622
760
852
937
1010
1110
1239
1335
1444
157
1625
173
1811
1960
2020
2143
2231
2314
2446
2555
2645
2733
2810
2944
303
3123
3216
3353
3431
356
3641
3717
3815
3940
4022
4117
4227
4342
4445
4527
4646
473
4845
4918
84.62% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount7
totalSentences119
matches
0"been suspended"
1"was followed"
2"were sewn"
3"was gone"
4"was shattered"
5"were tipped"
6"was yanked"
36.73% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount6
totalVerbs245
matches
0"was vibrating"
1"wasn't standing"
2"were moving"
3"wasn't swarming"
4"was beginning"
5"was coming"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences130
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1485
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"blinding white-hot explosion"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.028282828282828285
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.010774410774410775
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences130
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences130
mean12.44
std6.59
cv0.53
sampleLengths
012
125
217
328
422
515
621
73
820
98
108
115
1212
1322
1422
1514
161
1712
188
1919
209
2122
223
2318
2417
2512
265
275
2816
2910
3026
318
329
3320
3410
358
362
374
387
3916
405
417
4212
4319
444
459
4612
4711
4812
497
33.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats21
diversityRatio0.2230769230769231
totalSentences130
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount65
totalSentences116
matches
0"I hissed, fumbling with the"
1"It throbbed against my breastbone,"
2"I pushed through a cluster"
3"My black hair caught on"
4"I cursed under my breath,"
5"It was thick enough to"
6"I stepped over a fallen"
7"They weren't granite or sarsen"
8"They formed a perfect circle,"
9"My voice sounded small, swallowed"
10"I checked the delivery app"
11"I shoved the useless glass"
12"I stepped into the circle,"
13"It didn't sound like grass."
14"It sounded like dried parchment."
15"I walked toward the centre"
16"They seemed taller than they"
17"I looked back, and the"
18"It wasn't a warning anymore,"
19"I spun around, nearly dropping"
ratio0.56
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount107
totalSentences116
matches
0"The silver chain scorched the"
1"I hissed, fumbling with the"
2"It throbbed against my breastbone,"
3"The Golden Empress's signature aromatic"
4"I pushed through a cluster"
5"My black hair caught on"
6"I cursed under my breath,"
7"The air changed."
8"The familiar scent of damp"
9"It was thick enough to"
10"I stepped over a fallen"
11"The standing stones loomed ahead."
12"They weren't granite or sarsen"
13"These were ancient massive oak"
14"They formed a perfect circle,"
15"My voice sounded small, swallowed"
16"I checked the delivery app"
17"The screen flickered, the GPS"
18"I shoved the useless glass"
19"The silence here wasn't the"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
ratio0
39.34% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"It throbbed against my breastbone, a rhythmic hot pulse that matched the frantic beat of my heart."
1"I cursed under my breath, disentangling myself while my trainers sank into soil that felt far too spongy, far too wet."
2"These were ancient massive oak pillars, petrified into something that looked like stone but retained the twisted orign of grain and bark."
3"They were unnaturally green, the fronds tipped with sharp jagged edges that looked like serrated bone."
4"It was vibrating, humming a low dissonant note that made my teeth ache."
5"It had the face of a beautiful young boy, but his eyes were sewn shut with thick black thread, and his torso elongated into a segmented chitinous body that trai…"
6"The trees were moving, their branches lashing together to knit a cage of impenetrable wood."
7"I scrambled toward the central stone, the only place that wasn't swarming with pale skittering shapes."
8"The pendant flared one last time, a blinding white-hot explosion of light that threw the woman back."
9"Her jaw unhinged, stretching down to her chest, revealing a gullet lined with spinning rows of teeth."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"I said, my voice rising an octave"
1"the woman breathed, her voice right above my ear"
2"the woman laughed, her voice echoing from every stone at once"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"I whispered (whisper)"
1"the woman hissed (hiss)"
2"the woman breathed (breathe)"
3"the woman laughed (laugh)"
4"I screamed (scream)"
5"she hissed (hiss)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.6
effectiveRatio0.545
66.8813%