| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 96.91% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1617 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 38.16% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1617 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "throbbed" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "familiar" | | 4 | "loomed" | | 5 | "perfect" | | 6 | "chaotic" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "silence" | | 9 | "weight" | | 10 | "echoed" | | 11 | "silk" | | 12 | "throb" | | 13 | "searing" | | 14 | "shattered" | | 15 | "echoing" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 82.83% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 119 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "started to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 130 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 35 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1617 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 13 | | wordCount | 1472 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 0.34 | | worstName | "Heartstone" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Heartstone" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 5 | | Golden | 2 | | Empress | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Wales | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Wales" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 101 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like stone but retained the twiste" | | 1 | "felt like a physical weight pressing ag" | | 2 | "seemed taller than they had from outside the boundary" | | 3 | "appeared narrower the trees behind it blurred as if viewed through a sheet of hammered glass" | | 4 | "looked like serrated bone" | | 5 | "sounded like someone dragging a heavy soak" | | 6 | "silk that seemed to shift and ripple even though there was no breeze" | | 7 | "appeared in front of me, her hand reaching out for the Heartstone" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.618 | | wordCount | 1617 | | matches | | 0 | "Not just cold, but freezing, the ice-like temperature searing into my chest" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 31.71 | | std | 19.17 | | cv | 0.605 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 82 | | 1 | 58 | | 2 | 39 | | 3 | 75 | | 4 | 1 | | 5 | 48 | | 6 | 22 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 52 | | 9 | 37 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 39 | | 13 | 35 | | 14 | 44 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 25 | | 17 | 3 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 60 | | 20 | 20 | | 21 | 43 | | 22 | 31 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 46 | | 25 | 55 | | 26 | 45 | | 27 | 33 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 3 | | 31 | 23 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 53 | | 34 | 31 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 41 | | 37 | 17 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 40 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 17 | | 42 | 27 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 45 | | 45 | 27 | | 46 | 46 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 45 | | 49 | 18 |
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| 84.62% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 119 | | matches | | 0 | "been suspended" | | 1 | "was followed" | | 2 | "were sewn" | | 3 | "was gone" | | 4 | "was shattered" | | 5 | "were tipped" | | 6 | "was yanked" |
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| 36.73% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 245 | | matches | | 0 | "was vibrating" | | 1 | "wasn't standing" | | 2 | "were moving" | | 3 | "wasn't swarming" | | 4 | "was beginning" | | 5 | "was coming" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 130 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1485 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "blinding white-hot explosion" |
| | adverbCount | 42 | | adverbRatio | 0.028282828282828285 | | lyAdverbCount | 16 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010774410774410775 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 130 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 130 | | mean | 12.44 | | std | 6.59 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 12 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 17 | | 3 | 28 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 21 | | 7 | 3 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 5 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 12 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 9 | | 21 | 22 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 18 | | 24 | 17 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 5 | | 27 | 5 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 4 | | 38 | 7 | | 39 | 16 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 7 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 19 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 9 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 12 | | 49 | 7 |
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| 33.85% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 21 | | diversityRatio | 0.2230769230769231 | | totalSentences | 130 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 65 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "I hissed, fumbling with the" | | 1 | "It throbbed against my breastbone," | | 2 | "I pushed through a cluster" | | 3 | "My black hair caught on" | | 4 | "I cursed under my breath," | | 5 | "It was thick enough to" | | 6 | "I stepped over a fallen" | | 7 | "They weren't granite or sarsen" | | 8 | "They formed a perfect circle," | | 9 | "My voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 10 | "I checked the delivery app" | | 11 | "I shoved the useless glass" | | 12 | "I stepped into the circle," | | 13 | "It didn't sound like grass." | | 14 | "It sounded like dried parchment." | | 15 | "I walked toward the centre" | | 16 | "They seemed taller than they" | | 17 | "I looked back, and the" | | 18 | "It wasn't a warning anymore," | | 19 | "I spun around, nearly dropping" |
| | ratio | 0.56 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 107 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain scorched the" | | 1 | "I hissed, fumbling with the" | | 2 | "It throbbed against my breastbone," | | 3 | "The Golden Empress's signature aromatic" | | 4 | "I pushed through a cluster" | | 5 | "My black hair caught on" | | 6 | "I cursed under my breath," | | 7 | "The air changed." | | 8 | "The familiar scent of damp" | | 9 | "It was thick enough to" | | 10 | "I stepped over a fallen" | | 11 | "The standing stones loomed ahead." | | 12 | "They weren't granite or sarsen" | | 13 | "These were ancient massive oak" | | 14 | "They formed a perfect circle," | | 15 | "My voice sounded small, swallowed" | | 16 | "I checked the delivery app" | | 17 | "The screen flickered, the GPS" | | 18 | "I shoved the useless glass" | | 19 | "The silence here wasn't the" |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 116 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 39.34% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "It throbbed against my breastbone, a rhythmic hot pulse that matched the frantic beat of my heart." | | 1 | "I cursed under my breath, disentangling myself while my trainers sank into soil that felt far too spongy, far too wet." | | 2 | "These were ancient massive oak pillars, petrified into something that looked like stone but retained the twisted orign of grain and bark." | | 3 | "They were unnaturally green, the fronds tipped with sharp jagged edges that looked like serrated bone." | | 4 | "It was vibrating, humming a low dissonant note that made my teeth ache." | | 5 | "It had the face of a beautiful young boy, but his eyes were sewn shut with thick black thread, and his torso elongated into a segmented chitinous body that trai…" | | 6 | "The trees were moving, their branches lashing together to knit a cage of impenetrable wood." | | 7 | "I scrambled toward the central stone, the only place that wasn't swarming with pale skittering shapes." | | 8 | "The pendant flared one last time, a blinding white-hot explosion of light that threw the woman back." | | 9 | "Her jaw unhinged, stretching down to her chest, revealing a gullet lined with spinning rows of teeth." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "I said, my voice rising an octave" | | 1 | "the woman breathed, her voice right above my ear" | | 2 | "the woman laughed, her voice echoing from every stone at once" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 10 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "I whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "the woman hissed (hiss)" | | 2 | "the woman breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "the woman laughed (laugh)" | | 4 | "I screamed (scream)" | | 5 | "she hissed (hiss)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 22 | | tagDensity | 0.455 | | leniency | 0.909 | | rawRatio | 0.6 | | effectiveRatio | 0.545 | |