Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ952N0TPQ987ADEZWCYRVZV

Run Details

Duration:
41.3s
Cost:
$0.003633
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The knock wasn't Silas's usual heavy, impatient rap. It was softer, more deliberate, carrying an unfamiliar cadence that prickled the back of Rory’s neck. She paused, a damp dishcloth clutched in her hand, the smell of lemon and something vaguely of old grease clinging to the air in her small kitchen. Who could possibly be at her door this late? Not a neighbour—they usually just borrowed milk or shouted over the din from the pub downstairs. Not a delivery. Not a friend dropping by unannounced. Not this late. Hesitantly, she padded down the short hallway, her bare feet silent on the worn floorboards. She peered through the peephole, her breath catching as shards of familiar, unsettling detail swam into focus. Platinum blond hair, perfectly slicked back from a forehead that seemed carved from marble. The sharp, tailored line of a charcoal suit. And then his eyes. Her hand trembled as she reached for the deadbolts, their familiar metallic clicks echoing in the sudden stillness. Three of them. A clumsy, reassuring barrier. She turned the final lock, pulled the chain, and opened the door just enough to see. Lucien. He stood there on her landing, bathed in the dim, yellowish light of the hallway bulb, a stark, impossibly elegant silhouette against the peeling paint and indifferent wallpaper. It wasn’t just the expensive suit or the ivory-handled cane he held with practiced ease; it was the sheer, audacious presence of him, shattering the quiet routine of her life. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a sudden, frantic rhythm that drowned out the distant thrum of music from Silas’s bar. “Lucien?” The name was a breath, barely audible, lost in the sudden ache in her throat. A slow, almost imperceptible smile touched his lips, but his gaze, arresting and intense, was serious. One eye blazed with a fierce, intelligent amber, the other was a deep, unnerving pool of black. “Aurora,” he acknowledged, his voice a low, resonant murmur that vibrated in the confined space. She pulled the chain, the door swinging inwards a fraction more. “What are you doing here?” Her voice, though still shaky, managed to recapture a sliver of its usual cool edge. The question hung in the air, heavy with the weight of months, perhaps years, of silence and unanswered calls. “After… everything?” A vague sweep of her hand encompassed the chasm between them, the abrupt departure, the unanswered questions that had festered like old wounds. “The space between us has only amplified necessity, not diminished it,” he replied, his words measured, deliberate. He took a small step forward, crossing the threshold without waiting for a formal invitation. His highly polished shoes made a soft, incongruous sound on the scuffed floorboards. Rory retreated, pulling the door shut behind her. The triple thud of the deadbolts locking felt less like security and more like sealing herself in with a contained storm. His presence was an intrusion, his immaculate tailoring and the faint, sophisticated scent of his cologne cutting through the familiar, comforting aromas of stale beer and frying spices that inevitably wafted up from below. He surveyed her cramped living space – stacks of books migrating from shelves onto the floor, a vibrant half-finished embroidery project spilling from a basket, her worn delivery jacket slung carelessly over a chair. His gaze swept over it all, missing nothing. “Necessity?” she echoed, turning to face him fully, her arms crossing defensively over her chest. The crescent scar on her left wrist, a faint white line hidden beneath her sleeve, felt suddenly prominent. “You just disappear for months, maybe years, then show up on my doorstep like some phantom from a past I’ve worked hard to outrun. What could possibly be so urgent?” “This matter,” he began, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers, the amber flame seeming to deepen, “touches on the very roots of what you left behind in Cardiff. It touches upon the world I inhabit, and the promises I broke.” “Promises you never bothered to explain,” she retorted, the old sting returning. She turned away, needing a distraction, heading towards the tiny kitchenette counter. “Can I get you something? Water, I think. I don’t exactly keep brandy for unexpected intruders anymore.” The barb hung in the air, sharp and intended. He stepped closer, his movement surprisingly quiet, and reached out, his fingers brushing hers as she grasped a glass. A jolt, electric and immediate, shot up her arm. Rory’s breath hitched, her gaze snapping back to his. The amber pupil in his eye narrowed, sharp with recognition and something akin to regret. The black one seemed to widen, a dizzying vortex of hidden emotion, and she felt an involuntary tremor run through her. Her scar pulsed. He always saw too much. “This entity,” Lucien said, his voice lowering, a rough rumble that seemed to vibrate through the floor, “is ancient. It predates cities, laws, even most of the pacts that hold the supernatural world in check. It hungers for power, and it sees London, with its layers of history and its… vulnerabilities, as a ripe harvest. It knew my father, and through him, it knows weaknesses in me, in the veil between our worlds.” “And it knows me because it knows you,” Rory finished, the pieces clicking into place with chilling clarity, like lock tumblers falling into place. Lucien gave a curt nod. “Precisely. And because I made the mistake, the profound error, of leaving you unprepared for the edges of this world. You are a loose end, Aurora. Not because you did anything wrong, but because you have the intelligence and insight to see the truth, which makes you a danger to its plans. And because you are connected to me.” Rory paced the small length of her living room, her bare feet padding on the worn rug. The bass from the pub downstairs pulsed a low, steady beat, a familiar soundtrack to her life. “Connected to you,” she repeated, the words tasting like ash. “You severed that connection with a clean cut, Lucien.” “A cut I deeply regret,” he said, his voice quiet but firm, cutting through the music. “I see the pain it caused you, and for that, I am truly sorry. I let my own fear and a misguided sense of protection override my better judgment. It was a failure of courage, on my part. And that is why I am here. Not to command, not to manipulate, but to offer you a choice. A chance to be safe. A chance to understand. And if you are willing, a chance to help me face this before it consumes everything.” Her mind, always her sharpest tool, raced. The pre-law instincts, honed by a lifetime of circumstance. The out-of-the-box thinking she was known for. This was a threat, real and substantial, woven into the very fabric of London, the city that had become her refuge. And Lucien, the complicated, infuriating man who had both shattered and ignited her, was asking for her help. He was offering protection, true, but also a terrifying glimpse into a world she had tried so hard to forget, and a reconnection she desperately told herself she didn't want. But his gaze, steady and earnest, chipped away at her carefully constructed defenses. He was offering a truth, a purpose, and perhaps, a reckoning for them both. “You expect me to just… jump back in?” she asked, the question sharp, laced with scepticism and a tremor of something that might have been fear, or maybe, a dangerous flicker of anticipation. “I expect you to consider it,” he said. “To know that I *am* here. And that whatever comes, I will not abandon you again. That much is a promise this time.” She stopped pacing, turning back to him. The intelligence in her bright blue eyes was sharp, analytical, assessing the man before her, the words he spoke, the implications for her future. But beneath the surface, something else flickered – a spark rekindled, a familiar, irresistible pull. The hurt was still there, a dull ache in her chest, but the raw attraction, the magnetic force he had always exerted, was undeniable. He was offering danger, yes, but also a connection, a depth, a terrifying partnership she hadn’t found anywhere else. A dangerous, profoundly complicated connection. “I… need time to think, Lucien,” she managed, her voice barely a whisper. “Of course,” he conceded, his gaze unwavering. “But I will not be far.” He reached inside his impeccably tailored jacket, his movements fluid, and produced a small, sleek silver card. “My secure line. It reaches me instantly.” She took the card. Her fingers brushed his as she accepted it. The cool metal felt solid, a tangible link to the unseen world he inhabited. Her scar tingled again. “You always did know how to make an entrance, didn’t you?” He offered a ghost of a smile, a hint of the charm that had once disarmed her so completely. “And you, Aurora, always knew how to keep me guessing.” He turned then, the ivory of his cane tapping lightly on the floorboards as he walked towards the door. He paused, one hand on the knob, looking back at her. “The pieces of the past have a way of resurfacing, Rory. It’s best to face them when they do.” He opened the door, stepping out into the cool London night. Rory stood in the sudden quiet of her flat, the silver card cool against her palm. The air still hummed with his spectral presence, the echo of his voice. The thrum of the bar downstairs seemed to recede, its familiar rhythm momentarily lost as the door clicked shut. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a chaotic tempest of fear, anger, and a dangerous, undeniable hope. He was back. And the past, indeed, had come knocking.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:02:09.445Z" 2/25/2026, 1:02:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags16
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.593
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
69.38% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1633
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"hesitantly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count2
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"truly"
count1
6
adverb"carefully"
count1
7
adverb"completely"
count1
8
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"hesitantly"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
3"very"
4"precisely"
5"truly"
6"carefully"
7"completely"
8"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1633
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"familiar"
count6
1
word"marble"
count1
2
word"trembled"
count1
3
word"echoing"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"practiced ease"
count1
6
word"vibrated"
count1
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"measured"
count1
10
word"comforting"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count2
14
word"chilling"
count1
15
word"profound"
count1
16
word"sense of"
count1
17
word"raced"
count1
18
word"shattered"
count1
19
word"constructed"
count1
20
word"flicker"
count1
21
word"anticipation"
count1
22
word"flickered"
count1
23
word"magnetic"
count1
24
word"whisper"
count1
25
word"unwavering"
count1
26
word"tangible"
count1
27
word"charm"
count1
28
word"spectral"
count1
29
word"echo"
count1
30
word"chaotic"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"marble"
2"trembled"
3"echoing"
4"stark"
5"practiced ease"
6"vibrated"
7"weight"
8"silence"
9"measured"
10"comforting"
11"echoed"
12"electric"
13"pulsed"
14"chilling"
15"profound"
16"sense of"
17"raced"
18"shattered"
19"constructed"
20"flicker"
21"anticipation"
22"flickered"
23"magnetic"
24"whisper"
25"unwavering"
26"tangible"
27"charm"
28"spectral"
29"echo"
30"chaotic"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences90
matches(empty)
79.37% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences90
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen82
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1634
ratio0.001
matches
0"am"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions14
wordCount1212
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.5
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Silas2
Rory6
Lucien4
London2
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Lucien"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed carved from marble"
1"something akin to regret"
2"rumble that seemed to vibrate through the floor"
77.60% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.224
wordCount1634
matches
0"Not to command, not to manipulate, but to offer you a choice"
1"not to manipulate, but to offer you a choice"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean56.34
std28.86
cv0.512
sampleLengths
088
158
241
31
479
516
648
775
845
9105
1063
1140
1250
1381
1473
1524
1664
1753
1898
19119
2033
2131
2294
2313
2437
2541
2629
2749
2886
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"was known"
56.63% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs186
matches
0"was asking"
1"was offering"
2"was offering"
3"was offering"
27.42% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences99
ratio0.04
matches
0"Not a neighbour—they usually just borrowed milk or shouted over the din from the pub downstairs."
1"It wasn’t just the expensive suit or the ivory-handled cane he held with practiced ease; it was the sheer, audacious presence of him, shattering the quiet routine of her life."
2"He surveyed her cramped living space – stacks of books migrating from shelves onto the floor, a vibrant half-finished embroidery project spilling from a basket, her worn delivery jacket slung carelessly over a chair."
3"But beneath the surface, something else flickered – a spark rekindled, a familiar, irresistible pull."
73.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1213
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"usual heavy, impatient rap."
1"vibrant half-finished embroidery"
2"small, sleek silver card."
adverbCount61
adverbRatio0.05028854080791426
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.018136850783182192
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean16.51
std12.69
cv0.769
sampleLengths
08
116
227
39
416
53
66
73
815
917
1014
118
124
1318
143
154
1616
171
1828
1930
2021
2116
2216
2317
2415
2511
2620
2719
2825
2917
3015
3113
328
3321
3434
3534
368
3715
3818
3930
4040
4112
4212
4326
4419
459
469
4715
4821
493
45.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.31313131313131315
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners31
37.88% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Hesitantly, she padded down the"
ratio0.011
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences88
matches
0"It was softer, more deliberate,"
1"She paused, a damp dishcloth"
2"She peered through the peephole,"
3"Her hand trembled as she"
4"She turned the final lock,"
5"He stood there on her"
6"It wasn’t just the expensive"
7"Her heart hammered against her"
8"he acknowledged, his voice a"
9"She pulled the chain, the"
10"Her voice, though still shaky,"
11"he replied, his words measured,"
12"He took a small step"
13"His highly polished shoes made"
14"His presence was an intrusion,"
15"He surveyed her cramped living"
16"His gaze swept over it"
17"she echoed, turning to face"
18"he began, his heterochromatic eyes"
19"she retorted, the old sting"
ratio0.5
33.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences88
matches
0"The knock wasn't Silas's usual"
1"It was softer, more deliberate,"
2"She paused, a damp dishcloth"
3"She peered through the peephole,"
4"Platinum blond hair, perfectly slicked"
5"The sharp, tailored line of"
6"Her hand trembled as she"
7"A clumsy, reassuring barrier."
8"She turned the final lock,"
9"He stood there on her"
10"It wasn’t just the expensive"
11"Her heart hammered against her"
12"The name was a breath,"
13"A slow, almost imperceptible smile"
14"he acknowledged, his voice a"
15"She pulled the chain, the"
16"Her voice, though still shaky,"
17"The question hung in the"
18"A vague sweep of her"
19"he replied, his words measured,"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"It was softer, more deliberate, carrying an unfamiliar cadence that prickled the back of Rory’s neck."
1"Her heart hammered against her ribs, a sudden, frantic rhythm that drowned out the distant thrum of music from Silas’s bar."
2"His presence was an intrusion, his immaculate tailoring and the faint, sophisticated scent of his cologne cutting through the familiar, comforting aromas of sta…"
3"And Lucien, the complicated, infuriating man who had both shattered and ignited her, was asking for her help."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags16
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she retorted, the old sting returning"
1"he said, his voice quiet but firm, cutting through the music"
2"she managed, her voice barely a whisper"
3"he conceded, his gaze unwavering"
1.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he acknowledged (acknowledge)"
1"she retorted (retort)"
2"she repeated (repeat)"
3"he conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.333
leniency0.667
rawRatio0.444
effectiveRatio0.296
67.2712%