Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ953B33X14PW3RYEKD6J01B

Run Details

Duration:
26.3s
Cost:
$0.002236
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew heavy with the smell of old rain and forgotten things. Detective Harlow Quinn descended the concrete steps, her service boots crunching on grit and loose ballast. Her flashlight beam sliced through the cavernous dark, illuminating damp walls slick with condensation and the skeletal remains of faded advertisements. Each distant drip of water echoed, amplified in the oppressive silence that had swallowed this place long ago. Uniformed officers milled about the platform end, their movements stark against the grime, blue lights strobing an unsteady pulse into the gloom. Inspector Davies, his sharp suit an incongruous splash of colour against the decay, waved her over with a flourish that spoke of his usual self-importance. "Harlow. Glad you could make it," Davies’ voice boomed, a little too loud for the confined space. "Subject's over here. Name's Arthur Finch. Mid-thirties. Found slumped against the tracks." He gestured with a gloved hand towards a figure draped in shadow. "Looks like a robbery gone sour. No ID, no wallet, no valuables. Left him empty." Harlow nodded, her gaze sweeping past the chalk outline already being meticulously drawn around the body. Her eyes traced the edges of the platform, the thick, undisturbed dust layering the seldom-trodden concrete. No scuff marks marred the fine powder near the walls, no sign of a desperate struggle where one would expect it. The debris – a few discarded wrappers, a crushed cigarette pack – lay undisturbed, as if frozen in time. This wasn't a brawl. "Bleeding out, you said?" Harlow’s voice was a low ripple, cutting through the ambient quiet. Davies gestured to a dark, viscous stain spreading on the cracked flagstones beneath and around Finch. "See that? Looks like it. Grim business." Harlow approached the body, not getting too close, her senses immediately attuned to the small details that screamed wrongness. Finch lay on his side, his expensive dark suit crumpled, but curiously free of the kind of torn fabric or deep gashes one would associate with a violent death and significant blood loss. His face, slack and pale, held an expression that was less pain and more vacant surprise. She knelt, a meter away from the corpse, her flashlight beam trained on the ground. The stain was odd. It didn't spread outwards with the ragged edges of spilled blood. Instead, it seemed to cling to the concrete, almost absorbed into its porous surface, holding a faint, unnatural sheen. The scent that rose from it wasn't the coppery tang of iron or the cloying sweetness of decay. It was sharper, a strange mélange of ozone and exotic spices that prickled the back of her throat. Her beam caught a glint under the cuff of Finch’s tailored trousers, a muted gleam against the dark fabric and the grimy stone. It wasn't a coin, nor a shard of broken glass. She nudged the fabric gently aside with the toe of her boot. Lying half-obscured was a small object, palm-sized, crafted from brass. It was tarnished, a dark green patina of verdigris clinging to its casing. A compass. But it was no ordinary nautical instrument. The face was etched with intricate, twisting sigils that seemed to writhe under the flashlight’s beam. The needle, instead of pointing north, twitched erratically for a moment before settling, with unnerving steadiness, towards a gaping, lightless tunnel mouth at the far end of the platform. She recognized the distinctive craftsmanship, the faint hum of contained, otherworldly power. A Veil Compass. A tool fashioned by a Shade artisan, designed not for terrestrial navigation, but for charting currents of a far stranger nature. "This isn't street trash, Davies," she said, her voice hardening, the words sharp enough to chip away at his smug certainty. Harlow rose, the compass held carefully in her gloved palm. The object felt cool, humming faintly against her skin. "Finch wasn’t robbed. He didn't bleed out. Not in any way I understand." Davies scoffed, the sound sharp and dismissive in the confined space. "And what evidence convinces the great Detective Quinn that this wasn't just another poor sod meeting a bad end?" He gestured around the scene, a sweep of his arm encompassing the body, the stain, the entire desolate platform. "Deal gone wrong. Classic territorial dispute. Happens every day." Harlow ignored his barb. She pointed the compass towards the black maw of the tunnel. The needle quivered, unwavering. Her gaze followed its direction, scanning the dark opening. The air near the tunnel’s entrance seemed to shimmer, subtly, like heat haze rising from asphalt on a sweltering day, yet the chill in the station was profound. The concrete wall beside the tunnel wasn’t merely grimy. It appeared to actively absorb the light, and etched into its surface, barely discernible beneath layers of London grime, was a faint, spiraling symbol. It looked ancient, worn, like the city’s forgotten bones. "Seen anything like this before?" she asked, her voice low, intense, her eyes fixed on the symbol. Davies squinted, leaning forward slightly, then waved a dismissive hand. "Graffiti. Kids spray-painting their tags. Hardly worth mentioning as evidence of anything beyond teenage boredom." "Graffiti that sucks the light and buzzes when you look at it?" Harlow’s lips thinned into a hard line. A cold dread, unrelated to the subterranean dampness, snaked down her spine. The memory of DS Morris, her partner, and the inexplicable circumstances of his disappearance, the case that had fractured her world and defied every rational explanation, flickered at the edges of her perception. The Veil Market. It was known to frequent this area, a phantom marketplace that materialized and vanished with the cycles of the moon, accessing the city through forgotten conduits. This abandoned station, a notorious nexus point. Finch wasn't killed here; the evidence was too clean, too wrong. He was extracted. Or, more likely, desperately trying to leave a message, a final trace, before whatever took him could fully claim him. The Veil Compass pulsed faintly in her hand, a tiny beacon in the oppressive dark. The shimmer by the tunnel entrance seemed to coalesce, drawing the scant available light into its depths. "He wasn't killed here," Harlow stated, her voice gaining a new, hard edge, a certain flinty resolve that Davies recognized with a sigh. "He was *taken*. Or he was trying to escape whatever it was that took him."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
85.70% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"carefully"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1049
totalAiIsms26
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"glint"
count1
8
word"etched"
count2
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"otherworldly"
count1
11
word"maw"
count1
12
word"quivered"
count1
13
word"unwavering"
count1
14
word"scanning"
count1
15
word"chill"
count1
16
word"profound"
count1
17
word"down her spine"
count1
18
word"fractured"
count1
19
word"flickered"
count1
20
word"pulsed"
count1
21
word"beacon"
count1
22
word"depths"
count1
23
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"oppressive"
2"silence"
3"stark"
4"pulse"
5"gloom"
6"traced"
7"glint"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"otherworldly"
11"maw"
12"quivered"
13"unwavering"
14"scanning"
15"chill"
16"profound"
17"down her spine"
18"fractured"
19"flickered"
20"pulsed"
21"beacon"
22"depths"
23"resolve"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
27.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences62
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences69
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1051
ratio0.001
matches
0"taken"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount899
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow8
Quinn1
Davies5
Finch4
Veil3
Compass2
Shade1
London1
Morris1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Davies"
3"Finch"
4"Compass"
5"Morris"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sigils that seemed to writhe under the flashlight’s beam"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.951
wordCount1051
matches
0"not for terrestrial navigation, but for charting currents of a far stranger nature"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences69
matches(empty)
87.67% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs9
mean116.78
std53.35
cv0.457
sampleLengths
0115
156
276
338
4153
5179
690
7140
8204
82.63% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences62
matches
0"was tarnished"
1"was etched"
2"was known"
3"was extracted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs137
matches(empty)
60.04% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences69
ratio0.029
matches
0"The debris – a few discarded wrappers, a crushed cigarette pack – lay undisturbed, as if frozen in time."
1"Finch wasn't killed here; the evidence was too clean, too wrong."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount227
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.013215859030837005
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.004405286343612335
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences69
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences69
mean15.23
std7.65
cv0.502
sampleLengths
013
116
221
318
422
525
617
724
815
916
1016
1121
1219
134
1415
1516
167
1719
1833
1916
2015
214
2211
2319
2418
2518
2623
2710
2812
2910
3013
312
327
3316
3429
3512
363
3721
3821
3910
409
4113
4211
4338
449
454
4611
474
489
4928
56.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4057971014492754
totalSentences69
uniqueOpeners28
54.64% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Instead, it seemed to cling"
ratio0.016
82.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences61
matches
0"Her flashlight beam sliced through"
1"He gestured with a gloved"
2"Her eyes traced the edges"
3"His face, slack and pale,"
4"She knelt, a meter away"
5"It didn't spread outwards with"
6"It was sharper, a strange"
7"Her beam caught a glint"
8"It wasn't a coin, nor"
9"She nudged the fabric gently"
10"It was tarnished, a dark"
11"She recognized the distinctive craftsmanship,"
12"she said, her voice hardening,"
13"He gestured around the scene,"
14"She pointed the compass towards"
15"Her gaze followed its direction,"
16"It appeared to actively absorb"
17"It looked ancient, worn, like"
18"she asked, her voice low,"
19"It was known to frequent"
ratio0.344
9.18% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences61
matches
0"The air grew heavy with"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn descended the"
2"Her flashlight beam sliced through"
3"Each distant drip of water"
4"Inspector Davies, his sharp suit"
5"He gestured with a gloved"
6"Harlow nodded, her gaze sweeping"
7"Her eyes traced the edges"
8"The debris – a few"
9"This wasn't a brawl."
10"Harlow’s voice was a low"
11"Davies gestured to a dark,"
12"Harlow approached the body, not"
13"Finch lay on his side,"
14"His face, slack and pale,"
15"She knelt, a meter away"
16"The stain was odd."
17"It didn't spread outwards with"
18"The scent that rose from"
19"It was sharper, a strange"
ratio0.902
81.97% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences61
matches
0"Or, more likely, desperately trying"
ratio0.016
3.48% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Each distant drip of water echoed, amplified in the oppressive silence that had swallowed this place long ago."
1"Inspector Davies, his sharp suit an incongruous splash of colour against the decay, waved her over with a flourish that spoke of his usual self-importance."
2"The debris – a few discarded wrappers, a crushed cigarette pack – lay undisturbed, as if frozen in time."
3"Harlow approached the body, not getting too close, her senses immediately attuned to the small details that screamed wrongness."
4"His face, slack and pale, held an expression that was less pain and more vacant surprise."
5"The face was etched with intricate, twisting sigils that seemed to writhe under the flashlight’s beam."
6"The memory of DS Morris, her partner, and the inexplicable circumstances of his disappearance, the case that had fractured her world and defied every rational e…"
7"It was known to frequent this area, a phantom marketplace that materialized and vanished with the cycles of the moon, accessing the city through forgotten condu…"
53.57% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she asked, her voice low, intense, her eyes fixed on the symbol"
78.57% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Harlow stated (state)"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.214
leniency0.429
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.143
77.3526%