Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ953W6A4YQQCKSNREG8H461

Run Details

Duration:
45.9s
Cost:
$0.002470
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed aside the low-hanging branch, its damp leaves brushing a cold kiss against her cheek. The air here held a peculiar stillness, a vacuum that swallowed the distant drone of London traffic. Even the usual nocturnal chirps and rustles of a park were absent, replaced by a silence so profound it hummed in her ears. She checked the reading on her phone again, though the display seemed muddied in the gloom. The GPS confirmed she was within the perimeter of Richmond Park, but the path – if one could call this faint indentation through overgrown bracken a path – had long since vanished. She’d followed the satnav’s last instruction, a nebulous command to proceed towards a specific cluster of coordinates, then trust her instincts. Her instincts, usually sharp as a honed blade, felt blunted, sluggish. The pendant, nestled beneath her shirt, offered a faint, steady warmth against her sternum. It had warmed like this before, a subtle hum when she’d strayed too close to a derelict area near the docks last month, a place the locals whispered about, a place that felt… wrong. This felt different, a deep, ancient wrongness that settled in her gut like cold lead. Her flashlight beam, a thin spear in the oppressive darkness, danced over gnarled roots that coiled like petrified serpents. She was looking for the standing stones, the gateway. Isolde's grove. The name itself sounded like an echo from a forgotten dream. Her benefactor, a ghost in a crisp suit who’d paid her an absurd sum for a single, cryptic delivery months ago, had mentioned it as a place to “find clarity.” Clarity. Right now, clarity seemed as distant as the stars, hidden behind a thick, black canopy. The trees pressed in, their lower branches skeletal fingers reaching. She reached up, steadying herself against a rough bark surface. Oak. Old. Extremely old. The air grew colder, a sharp bite despite the mild autumn evening she'd left behind. A scent, cloying and sweet like overripe magnolias mixed with damp earth, tickled her nostrils. It wasn’t unpleasant, not exactly, but it felt wrong, out of place, a perfume worn by something that didn’t belong in the natural order of things. She stopped, listening. Nothing. Just the blood pounding in her own head. She took a step forward, and the faintest crunch sounded beneath her boots. Not a twig, not leaves. Something brittle, like dried petals. She swept her light down. The ground here was carpeted not with fallen foliage, but with a riot of wildflowers. Crimson poppies, vibrant bluebells, and a species she couldn’t identify, a luminescence to their petals that suggested they belonged under moonlight, not in the deep dark of a closing park. They bloomed in impossible abundance, jostling for space, their colours vivid even in the faint spill from her torch. They should be dead, wilted, faded. Yet here they were, impossibly alive. A prickle crawled up the back of her neck. She’d dismissed the legends of this place as local folklore, charming stories for tourists. A pocket between worlds. Time dancing. But standing here, the silence pressing down, the bizarre flora underfoot, a different truth began to assert itself. Her breath hitched. The pendant pulsed again, stronger this time, a distinct throb against her flesh, like a tiny, frantic heart awakening. She pushed onward, drawn by a force not entirely her own. The trees thinned, and the ground sloped gently upwards. She recognised the transition then, the subtle atmospheric shift from deep woods to something more… exposed. The air itself seemed to shimmer, though her flashlight revealed nothing. Her heart hammered against her ribs. She broke into a clearing, her boot catching on a root and sending her stumbling forward. Her hands shot out, bracing against something monumental. Stone. Cold, solid, ancient stone. She found herself face-to-face with a standing stone, thick as a tree trunk and twice as tall, its surface rough-hewn yet worn smooth as river rock by millennia of wind and rain. It pulsed with a faint, inherent chill. She straightened, brushing dirt from her trousers. This was it. Three more stones stood nearby, forming a rough circle, their dark silhouettes stark against the bruised twilight sky. The Fae Grove. This was Isolde’s grove. The wildflowers pushed right up to the base of the stones, their unnatural bloom an insistent, silent scream against the encroaching night. The air here felt different still, thinner, charged. She shone her light around the circle. The inner space of the clearing was unnaturally barren, dirt and a sparse scattering of grey moss, as if the vibrant life of the surrounding grove actively shunned this central point. She walked slowly around the perimeter, her flashlight beam tracing the contours of the ancient stones. Each one seemed to lean slightly inward, as if in hushed conspiracy. What was she even looking for? Clarity? Her benefactor had provided no details, only a location and a promise of answers. Answers to what? To why a man she’d never met felt she was the one to solve a problem he wouldn’t explain? A sound. Faint, like a distant sigh. She froze, her hand instinctively going to the pendant beneath her shirt. She tried to attribute it to the wind, but there was no breeze. The leaves on the nearby trees hung limp and still. It came again, a drawn-out whisper that seemed to slither from the shadows beyond the stones. Not words, not human. Something like breath, ragged and impossibly old. Her eyes darted to the edge of the clearing. Nothing. Just the oppressive, unmoving darkness of the woods pressing in. She took a deep breath, trying to quell the rising tide of unease. She was alone. Miles from anywhere, in a place famous for being… odd. Her imagination was running wild. She turned back towards the centre of the stones. The pendant was warm now, almost hot, a persistent thrumming against her skin that made her fingers twitch. It felt like it was trying to communicate, to warn her, or perhaps to guide her towards whatever it was reacting to. Hel portal. The codex entry had mentioned Hel portals. Was this grove a gateway? Or was something else stirring within its otherworldly embrace? She took a step towards the centre of the bare patch. A sound, sharper this time, cracked through the silence. A twig snapping. Close. Too close. She spun around, her flashlight beam sweeping the treeline. Her breath misted in the suddenly frigid air. The light caught something – a blur of grey, a shape that dissolved as soon as her beam hit it. A deer? A fox? No. It moved wrong. Too low, too fast, with a disjointed elegance that human or animal couldn’t replicate. It was just at the edge of her vision, a flicker, a disruption in the fabric of the night. She held her breath, straining her ears. The woods were silent again, deeper than before, as if holding their breath along with her. Her gaze swept the circle of stones. One of them, the one directly opposite where she stood, seemed different. The light from her torch didn’t reflect off it uniformly. Shadows clung to parts of its surface where light should have fallen, pooling and shifting as if the stone itself breathed. The wildflowers at its base seemed to retract slightly, their vibrant colours dimming, the way a startled insect might furl its wings. A cold shock traced its way down her spine. She wasn't alone. It wasn't just the feeling of being watched; it was the palpable certainty of *presence*. A presence that was ancient, alien, and utterly unwelcoming. The silence deepened, not a natural quiet, but a forced, terrible stillness that felt like a predator holding its breath before the strike. The pendant burned against her skin now, an insistent, urgent beat that was no longer faint warmth but a desperate drumming. She felt a sudden, overwhelming urge to leave, to scramble back through the bracken, to run until her lungs burst and she collapsed on the familiar tarmac of London’s streets. But her feet felt rooted. The air grew heavy, smelling of ozone and something like decay. She could feel the tiny hairs on her arms stand erect, not from cold, but from sheer, primal dread. Another whisper, this one closer, seemed to coil around her, a dry rustle of leaves just behind her ear, though she hadn’t heard any foliage disturbance. She spun again, her flashlight beam cutting violent arcs through the oppressive dark. The fleeting shape flickered again, not at the edge of her vision this time, but a little further in, a suggestion of impossibly long limbs unfolding from the gloom between the trees. It wasn't glimpsed; it was *felt*, a pressure in the air, a displacement of reality. The standing stones seemed to lean closer, their shadowed faces inscrutable. The year-round wildflowers at their feet pulsed with a faint, phosphorescent light, their unnatural bloom now seeming less vibrant and more like a phosphorescent decay. The ground beneath her felt soft, yielding, as if she stood not on solid earth but on the membrane of something vast and buried. The pendant pulsed with a frantic rhythm, a staccato *thump-thump-thump* against her ribs, and for the first time, Rory understood that the warmth wasn't welcoming her; it was a warning bell, shrill and piercing in the profound, terrifying silence of the grove. She took an involuntary step back, her heel sinking into the soft earth. The air crackled, the scents intensified, floral rot and ozone filling her lungs. The darkness between the trees resolved itself into something more substantial, shapes detaching themselves from the deeper shadows, elongating, unfolding, coalescing. They were not moving towards her, not yet. They were simply *there*, observing, waiting. The grove, a pocket between worlds, had opened its mouth, and Rory realized with a sickening lurch that she had walked right in.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:02:49.553Z" 2/25/2026, 1:02:49 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
81.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1651
totalAiIsms41
found
0
word"silence"
count5
1
word"profound"
count2
2
word"gloom"
count2
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"oppressive"
count3
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"pounding"
count1
7
word"dancing"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count4
9
word"throb"
count1
10
word"chill"
count1
11
word"stark"
count1
12
word"charged"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count2
15
word"otherworldly"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"traced"
count1
18
word"down her spine"
count1
19
word"palpable"
count1
20
word"predator"
count1
21
word"familiar"
count1
22
word"could feel"
count1
23
word"fleeting"
count1
24
word"flickered"
count1
25
word"resolved"
count1
26
word"lurch"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"profound"
2"gloom"
3"warmth"
4"oppressive"
5"echo"
6"pounding"
7"dancing"
8"pulsed"
9"throb"
10"chill"
11"stark"
12"charged"
13"tracing"
14"whisper"
15"otherworldly"
16"flicker"
17"traced"
18"down her spine"
19"palpable"
20"predator"
21"familiar"
22"could feel"
23"fleeting"
24"flickered"
25"resolved"
26"lurch"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences140
matches(empty)
61.22% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount8
narrationSentences140
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences140
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords4
totalWords1654
ratio0.002
matches
0"presence"
1"felt"
2"thump-thump-thump"
3"there"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions15
wordCount1652
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.18
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Hel"
discoveredNames
London2
Richmond1
Park1
Clarity2
Fae1
Grove1
Isolde2
Hel2
Rory3
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount9
matches
0"seemed muddied in the gloom"
1"sounded like an echo from a forgotten drea"
2"whisper that seemed to slither from the shadows beyond the stones"
3"Something like breath, ragged and impossibly"
4"felt like it was trying to communicate"
5"as if holding their breath along with her"
6"seemed different"
7"felt like a predator holding its breath"
8"something like decay"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords4.232
wordCount1654
matches
0"not exactly, but it felt wrong, out of place, a perfume worn by something"
1"not with fallen foliage, but with a riot of wildflowers"
2"not a natural quiet, but a forced, terrible stillness"
3"no longer faint warmth but"
4"not from cold, but from sheer, primal dread"
5"not at the edge of her vision this time, but a little further in, a suggestion of impossibly long limbs u"
6"not on solid earth but on the membrane of something vast"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences140
matches
0"understood that the"
77.18% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean82.7
std34.74
cv0.42
sampleLengths
0104
195
287
380
4116
569
682
774
868
971
1069
1151
1272
1367
141
1559
1672
17110
18121
19186
97.74% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences140
matches
0"was carpeted"
1"being watched"
2"was *felt"
58.76% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs236
matches
0"was looking"
1"was running"
2"was trying"
3"was reacting"
4"wasn't welcoming"
40.82% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences140
ratio0.036
matches
0"The GPS confirmed she was within the perimeter of Richmond Park, but the path – if one could call this faint indentation through overgrown bracken a path – had long since vanished."
1"The light caught something – a blur of grey, a shape that dissolved as soon as her beam hit it."
2"It wasn't just the feeling of being watched; it was the palpable certainty of *presence*."
3"It wasn't glimpsed; it was *felt*, a pressure in the air, a displacement of reality."
4"The pendant pulsed with a frantic rhythm, a staccato *thump-thump-thump* against her ribs, and for the first time, Rory understood that the warmth wasn't welcoming her; it was a warning bell, shrill and piercing in the profound, terrifying silence of the grove."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1655
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"Cold, solid, ancient stone."
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.03987915407854985
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.012688821752265862
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences140
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences140
mean11.81
std8.58
cv0.726
sampleLengths
016
117
223
316
432
521
611
714
833
91
1015
1119
129
132
1411
1531
1615
1710
1810
191
201
212
2215
2315
2426
253
261
278
2813
295
305
315
3215
3330
3419
356
366
379
3814
394
402
4118
423
4319
4411
459
4615
471
4811
496
43.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.3142857142857143
totalSentences140
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences121
matches
0"Even the usual nocturnal chirps"
1"Just the blood pounding in"
2"Just the oppressive, unmoving darkness"
3"Too low, too fast, with"
ratio0.033
48.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences121
matches
0"She checked the reading on"
1"She’d followed the satnav’s last"
2"Her instincts, usually sharp as"
3"It had warmed like this"
4"Her flashlight beam, a thin"
5"She was looking for the"
6"Her benefactor, a ghost in"
7"She reached up, steadying herself"
8"It wasn’t unpleasant, not exactly,"
9"She stopped, listening."
10"She took a step forward,"
11"She swept her light down."
12"They bloomed in impossible abundance,"
13"They should be dead, wilted,"
14"She’d dismissed the legends of"
15"Her breath hitched."
16"She pushed onward, drawn by"
17"She recognised the transition then,"
18"Her heart hammered against her"
19"She broke into a clearing,"
ratio0.43
34.38% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount103
totalSentences121
matches
0"Rory pushed aside the low-hanging"
1"The air here held a"
2"She checked the reading on"
3"The GPS confirmed she was"
4"She’d followed the satnav’s last"
5"Her instincts, usually sharp as"
6"The pendant, nestled beneath her"
7"It had warmed like this"
8"This felt different, a deep,"
9"Her flashlight beam, a thin"
10"She was looking for the"
11"The name itself sounded like"
12"Her benefactor, a ghost in"
13"The trees pressed in, their"
14"She reached up, steadying herself"
15"The air grew colder, a"
16"A scent, cloying and sweet"
17"It wasn’t unpleasant, not exactly,"
18"She stopped, listening."
19"She took a step forward,"
ratio0.851
41.32% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences121
matches
0"To why a man she’d"
ratio0.008
43.65% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences72
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The air here held a peculiar stillness, a vacuum that swallowed the distant drone of London traffic."
1"It had warmed like this before, a subtle hum when she’d strayed too close to a derelict area near the docks last month, a place the locals whispered about, a pl…"
2"Her flashlight beam, a thin spear in the oppressive darkness, danced over gnarled roots that coiled like petrified serpents."
3"It wasn’t unpleasant, not exactly, but it felt wrong, out of place, a perfume worn by something that didn’t belong in the natural order of things."
4"She broke into a clearing, her boot catching on a root and sending her stumbling forward."
5"The inner space of the clearing was unnaturally barren, dirt and a sparse scattering of grey moss, as if the vibrant life of the surrounding grove actively shun…"
6"The pendant was warm now, almost hot, a persistent thrumming against her skin that made her fingers twitch."
7"The silence deepened, not a natural quiet, but a forced, terrible stillness that felt like a predator holding its breath before the strike."
8"The pendant burned against her skin now, an insistent, urgent beat that was no longer faint warmth but a desperate drumming."
9"The ground beneath her felt soft, yielding, as if she stood not on solid earth but on the membrane of something vast and buried."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.0938%