| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 1 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 88.22% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 849 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | 0 | | adverb | "deliberately" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "deliberately" | | 1 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 849 | | totalAiIsms | 28 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "oppressive" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "pulse" | | 4 | "familiar" | | 5 | "weight" | | 6 | "reminder" | | 7 | "pounding" | | 8 | "loomed" | | 9 | "fleeting" | | 10 | "flicker" | | 11 | "pulsed" | | 12 | "beacon" | | 13 | "navigating" | | 14 | "cacophony" | | 15 | "echoed" | | 16 | "sentinels" | | 17 | "profound" | | 18 | "tracing" | | 19 | "palpable" | | 20 | "whisper" | | 21 | "chilling" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 8.93% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 64 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "tried to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 65 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 3 | | markdownWords | 3 | | totalWords | 851 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 12 | | wordCount | 845 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 0.36 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Earth | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 3 |
| | persons | | | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" | | 5 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 46 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a map marker, a reminder of a" | | 1 | "felt like a distant, sane planet" |
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| 82.49% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 1.175 | | wordCount | 851 | | matches | | 0 | "not merely observed, but *claimed*" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 65 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.61% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 10 | | mean | 85.1 | | std | 37.67 | | cv | 0.443 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 61 | | 1 | 138 | | 2 | 107 | | 3 | 69 | | 4 | 70 | | 5 | 98 | | 6 | 88 | | 7 | 83 | | 8 | 136 | | 9 | 1 |
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| 99.78% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | | |
| 88.89% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 2 | | totalVerbs | 120 | | matches | | 0 | "was vibrating" | | 1 | "wasn't approaching" |
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| 10.99% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 65 | | ratio | 0.046 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual nocturnal chorus of the park – the persistent, low thrum of insects, the distant sigh of traffic – had merely…" | | 1 | "It wasn't just near a Hel portal; it was vibrating in response to it." | | 2 | "It wasn't approaching her; it was simply *there*, its presence a palpable weight." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 86 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 2 | | adverbRatio | 0.023255813953488372 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.011627906976744186 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 65 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 65 | | mean | 13.09 | | std | 9.26 | | cv | 0.708 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 5 | | 1 | 12 | | 2 | 22 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 29 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 19 | | 8 | 23 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 1 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 1 | | 13 | 19 | | 14 | 22 | | 15 | 18 | | 16 | 23 | | 17 | 2 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 4 | | 20 | 10 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 25 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 12 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 16 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 2 | | 31 | 21 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 10 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 16 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 16 | | 43 | 3 | | 44 | 20 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 14 | | 47 | 24 | | 48 | 16 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 48.72% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 10 | | diversityRatio | 0.38461538461538464 | | totalSentences | 65 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 59.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "Then, from the heart of" |
| | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 77.14% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 20 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a sudden hush," | | 1 | "She’d followed the thrumming warmth" | | 2 | "Its quiet glow, usually just" | | 3 | "She tilted her head, straining" | | 4 | "It was a beacon, alright," | | 5 | "Her delivery route through London's" | | 6 | "She took a step, then" | | 7 | "She braced herself, expecting any" | | 8 | "Their sweet, cloying perfume, thick" | | 9 | "It was the smell of" | | 10 | "They were massive, silent witnesses," | | 11 | "Her breath hitched." | | 12 | "It pulsed with a quick," | | 13 | "It wasn't just near a" | | 14 | "It wasn't human." | | 15 | "It wasn't animal." | | 16 | "It wasn't a solid shape," | | 17 | "It flowed, rather than moved," | | 18 | "Her intelligent mind, so cool" | | 19 | "It wasn't approaching her; it" |
| | ratio | 0.357 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 52 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | 0 | "The rustle wasn't the wind." | | 1 | "Aurora Carter stopped, one boot" | | 2 | "The usual nocturnal chorus of" | | 3 | "It wasn't a sudden hush," | | 4 | "She’d followed the thrumming warmth" | | 5 | "The pendant, roughly the size" | | 6 | "Its quiet glow, usually just" | | 7 | "Rory's fingers, seeking contact with" | | 8 | "A childhood folly, a forgotten" | | 9 | "She tilted her head, straining" | | 10 | "The air itself felt thick," | | 11 | "The dense, black shapes of" | | 12 | "This part of Richmond Park," | | 13 | "Every shadow seemed to coalesce," | | 14 | "The suggestion of form." | | 15 | "The pendant pulsed again, a" | | 16 | "It was a beacon, alright," | | 17 | "The instructions, sparse and cryptic," | | 18 | "Her delivery route through London's" | | 19 | "This was different." |
| | ratio | 0.929 | |
| 89.29% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 56 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.018 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "It wasn't a sudden hush, more like a slow fade, leaving an oppressive, unnatural silence that pressed in on her ears." | | 1 | "She tilted her head, straining to hear anything beyond the blood pounding in her own ears." | | 2 | "The air itself felt thick, stagnant, as if something large had just exhaled and was now holding its breath." | | 3 | "The dense, black shapes of ancient oaks loomed around her, their branches skeletal fingers reaching towards a sky that offered no stars." | | 4 | "Every shadow seemed to coalesce, to gather substance, and her peripheral vision snagged on fleeting movements that dissolved when she tried to focus." | | 5 | "She braced herself, expecting any second a snapped twig, a guttural growl, the unmistakable presence of something that shouldn't be here." | | 6 | "From it emanated a stillness that was more active, more predatory, than any sound could be." | | 7 | "The pendant flared, its crimson heart glowing fiercely, casting a brief, infernal light on the shifting shadow that was now only a few yards away." | | 8 | "Then, from the heart of the impossible darkness between the stones, a single, guttural whisper slithered out, a sound that promised a gnawing, eternal hunger an…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 1 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |