Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ9550DA98P54XBC8E8D563W

Run Details

Duration:
18.5s
Cost:
$0.009080
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air, impossibly, became thicker, as if wading through warm honey. Not heavy, not suffocating, but dense with a thousand competing scents that flooded Aurora’s senses the moment the Veil rippled open. One step slid her from the cool, damp London night into something else entirely. She stumbled, catching herself mid-air before her feet found purchase on a surface unlike any she’d ever known. It felt less like solid earth and more like compressed velvet, dark and yielding beneath her boots. Above, the sky was a vast, unbroken sheet of warm amber, a perpetual twilight that cast everything in a burnished glow. There was no sun, no moon, just this immense, overarching color that vibrated with suppressed sound. Nyx, a shadow made manifest, seemed to flow rather than step through the shimmering portal beside her. Their faintly glowing violet eyes surveyed the new landscape, unblinking, unreadable. Isolde, a wisp of silver hair and pale lavender eyes, followed, her form so light she left no disturbance on the strange, spongy ground. Her long silver hair, reaching her waist, seemed to catch the amber light as if spun from it. “Welcome, Rory,” Isolde’s voice, a soft chime, floated on the suddenly alive air, “to where desire finds no end.” Aurora said nothing, her throat tight with awe and a sudden, sharp jolt of unease. Her bright blue eyes widened, trying to take it all in. Dymas. Gluttony. The names whispered through her mind, but they did little to prepare her for the reality. Giant, fleshy blossoms, impossibly vibrant in hues of magenta and gold, unfurled from thick, muscular vines that snaked across the landscape. The vines themselves seemed to pulse with a slow, organic rhythm, fat as a man's thigh and covered in a fine, almost imperceptible fuzz. Fruits dangled from them – some the size of gourds, others smaller than Aurora’s fist, but all radiating an intoxicating sheen. They were a riot of colors: obsidian black, iridescent emerald, deep amethyst, all ripening, splitting, oozing fragrant juices that dripped onto the velvet-like soil, which seemed to drink it in, swelling slightly as it absorbed the sustenance. The overall impression was one of obscene fertility, a world perpetually pregnant with abundance. The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against Aurora’s sternum, throbbed with a steady, insistent warmth. Not searing, but a deep, resonant pulse that mirrored her own racing heart. Its crimson glow, usually faint, was now a definite inner fire, echoing the amber sky. She instinctively clutched it, her fingers brushing the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous habit from childhood. A scent, rich and complex, permeated everything. It was a dizzying blend of overripe fruit, sweet resin, something cloyingly floral, and a distant, almost imperceptible tang of fermentation. It wasn't unpleasant, not exactly, but it was *too much*. Like standing in a colossal, enchanted bakery where every oven baked simultaneously. “The air,” Aurora managed, her voice a little breathy. “It’s…sweet.” "Sweet until it cloys," Nyx's voice whispered, a current of wind stirred into sound, barely audible above the low thrum of the realm. "This soil is not naturally kind. It is fed." Aurora looked down at the dark, springy ground. It wasn't moss, not exactly. More like a carpet of crushed jewel-toned leaves and velvety fungi, all intertwined, absorbing everything that fell. She knelt, digging a finger into the strange loam. It felt warm, surprisingly moist, and left a shimmering dust on her skin, like pollen mixed with fine glitter. She rubbed it off, suddenly feeling alien and fragile in this place of rampant, aggressive life. They began to move deeper, following a path that wasn't really a path, but merely a slightly less dense area of the colossal flora. Every step felt like an indulgence, the soft ground cushioning their movement, the air thick with promises. Towering trees, their trunks spiraling upwards like gargantuan corkscrews, bore leaves of burnished gold and rust-red, casting no true shade but simply filtering the constant amber light into warmer, deeper hues. From their branches hung lanterns of woven bioluminescent reeds, casting pools of softer, pulsing light that seemed to breathe with the realm. Aurora reached out, drawn by the allure of a trailing vine laden with berries. They were the color of twilight, shifting from deep indigo to violet, each pearl-sized globe glowing faintly from within. They looked utterly delicious. Her fingers grazed them, the skin surprisingly rough, like ancient parchment. "Tempting, aren't they?" Isolde observed, her voice as smooth as polished river stones. "But the bounty here is not always what it seems. A flavor for a secret truth, a sweetness for a slow decay." Aurora pulled her hand back, a prickle of caution overriding her initial fascination. She glanced at Isolde, the Half-Fae’s pale lavender eyes, ancient and knowing, holding no judgment, only observation. Isolde’s words were always riddles, but they tasted of truth. Nyx, meanwhile, had paused near a cluster of what looked like enormous, exotic mushrooms, their caps broader than dinner tables, painted with intricate swirls of crimson and cream. They didn't grow from the ground but rather seemed to sprout from the side of a massive, upturned root, as if the entire landscape was one living, intertwined organism. Nyx’s shadow form rippled slightly, their gaze fixed on the fungi. "These are not inert," Nyx spoke, their voice barely a rustle. "They consume." Aurora watched, and as she did, one of the larger mushrooms seemed to swell imperceptibly, its rich, earthy scent intensifying. A faint, almost gurgling sound emanated from its base, like a satisfied digestive system. The wonder of the place began to curdle into something a little grotesque. Every beautiful, abundant thing here seemed to have a hidden hunger, a purpose beyond simply existing. They continued, the landscape shifting almost imperceptibly with each turn. The giant vines gave way to sprawling orchards, where trees bore fruits of unimaginable shapes. One looked like a cluster of polished jade eggs, another like iridescent pearls strung along a branch. The ground grew stickier here, slick with fallen, fermenting fruit, adding a sharp, alcoholic tang to the air. Butterflies, their wings the size of a human hand and patterned like stained glass, fluttered drunkenly through the air, drawn by the intoxicating sweetness. Aurora found herself clutching the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, its cold, moonsilver hilt a stark contrast to the oppressive warmth of Dymas. It was a tangible anchor to another world, a reminder that not everything here was edible or inviting. She felt a profound sense of overwhelm, a visceral understanding of 'Gluttony' not just as a sin, but as a physical force, a relentless drive to consume and produce, endlessly. Ahead, the flora thinned, revealing what looked like a clearing. But even the clearing was not clear. Instead, it was dominated by a colossal, tiered structure, half-hidden by vines and ancient, gnarled trees. It seemed to be carved from the very fabric of Dymas, dark purple stone streaked with gold, glowing faintly from within. Columns, thick and ornate, supported overhanging balconies where more bioluminescent lanterns swayed. From this grand structure, a rich, savory scent wafted towards them, hinting at roasted meats and exotic spices, cutting through the prevailing sweetness. "A feast," Nyx noted, their form momentarily solidifying into sharper angles, their violet eyes narrowed slightly. Isolde smiled, a small, knowing upturn of her lips. "The Prince of Gluttony keeps a lavish house. They say his kitchens never sleep, nor do his guests." Her footpads left no impression on the rich, dark soil, as if she merely grazed the surface of the world. Aurora felt a shiver, despite the warmth. The thought of endless feasting, here in this place of eternal excess, was suddenly deeply unsettling. It wasn't just physical hunger this place indulged, but something far deeper, far more insidious. She imagined countless hands reaching, grasping, devouring. A sense of a profound, unquenchable emptiness disguised by overflowing abundance settled heavy in her gut. She glanced at the Heartstone, its crimson glow unwavering, pulsing in rhythm with the unnatural heart of Dymas. This was Hel. And she was standing on its banquet table.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
63.02% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count3
1
adverb"slightly"
count4
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"slightly"
2"really"
3"utterly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1352
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"velvet"
count2
1
word"vibrated"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"desire"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"throbbed"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count3
7
word"searing"
count1
8
word"racing"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"complex"
count1
11
word"intricate"
count1
12
word"fluttered"
count1
13
word"stark"
count1
14
word"oppressive"
count1
15
word"tangible"
count1
16
word"reminder"
count1
17
word"profound"
count2
18
word"sense of"
count2
19
word"structure"
count2
20
word"unwavering"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"vibrated"
2"unreadable"
3"desire"
4"pulse"
5"throbbed"
6"warmth"
7"searing"
8"racing"
9"echoing"
10"complex"
11"intricate"
12"fluttered"
13"stark"
14"oppressive"
15"tangible"
16"reminder"
17"profound"
18"sense of"
19"structure"
20"unwavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences83
matches
0"t with awe"
1"felt a shiver"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount11
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1353
ratio0.001
matches
0"too much"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1259
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.87
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Aurora11
Veil1
London1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Nyx6
Isolde6
Half-Fae1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Dymas4
Ahead1
Hel1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Veil"
2"Pendant"
3"Nyx"
4"Isolde"
5"Half-Fae"
places
0"London"
1"Heartstone"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"as if wading through warm honey"
1"felt like an indulgence, the soft groun"
2"light that seemed to breathe with the realm"
3"looked like enormous, exotic mushrooms, t"
4"looked like a cluster of polished jade eg"
5"looked like a clearing"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords4.435
wordCount1353
matches
0"Not heavy, not suffocating, but dense with a thousand competing scents"
1"not suffocating, but dense with a thousand competing scents"
2"Not searing, but a deep, resonant pulse"
3"not exactly, but it was *too much*"
4"no true shade but"
5"not just as a sin, but as a physical force, a relentless drive to consume"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean58.83
std29.88
cv0.508
sampleLengths
081
1107
219
344
4117
561
650
710
832
974
1094
1148
1235
1340
1468
1513
1663
1784
1871
1989
2016
2147
2290
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences83
matches
0"was dominated"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs200
matches
0"was standing"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences87
ratio0.011
matches
0"Fruits dangled from them – some the size of gourds, others smaller than Aurora’s fist, but all radiating an intoxicating sheen."
69.79% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1059
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"crushed jewel-toned leaves"
adverbCount56
adverbRatio0.05288007554296506
lyAdverbCount30
lyAdverbRatio0.028328611898016998
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean15.55
std7.35
cv0.472
sampleLengths
011
121
214
318
417
521
616
717
811
924
1018
1119
1215
1311
141
151
1616
1721
1824
1921
2037
2114
2213
2313
2415
2520
267
2721
2810
2912
309
311
3223
339
348
355
3617
379
3819
3916
4024
4117
4231
4322
4414
4519
464
4711
4813
4922
63.60% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.40229885057471265
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners35
82.30% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences81
matches
0"More like a carpet of"
1"Instead, it was dominated by"
ratio0.025
81.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences81
matches
0"She stumbled, catching herself mid-air"
1"It felt less like solid"
2"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
3"Her long silver hair, reaching"
4"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
5"They were a riot of"
6"Its crimson glow, usually faint,"
7"She instinctively clutched it, her"
8"It was a dizzying blend"
9"It wasn't unpleasant, not exactly,"
10"It wasn't moss, not exactly."
11"She knelt, digging a finger"
12"It felt warm, surprisingly moist,"
13"She rubbed it off, suddenly"
14"They began to move deeper,"
15"They were the color of"
16"They looked utterly delicious."
17"Her fingers grazed them, the"
18"She glanced at Isolde, the"
19"They didn't grow from the"
ratio0.346
58.77% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount65
totalSentences81
matches
0"The air, impossibly, became thicker,"
1"She stumbled, catching herself mid-air"
2"It felt less like solid"
3"Nyx, a shadow made manifest,"
4"Their faintly glowing violet eyes"
5"Isolde, a wisp of silver"
6"Her long silver hair, reaching"
7"Isolde’s voice, a soft chime,"
8"Aurora said nothing, her throat"
9"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
10"The names whispered through her"
11"The vines themselves seemed to"
12"Fruits dangled from them –"
13"They were a riot of"
14"The overall impression was one"
15"The Heartstone Pendant, nestled against"
16"Its crimson glow, usually faint,"
17"She instinctively clutched it, her"
18"A scent, rich and complex,"
19"It was a dizzying blend"
ratio0.802
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
16.13% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences62
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"The air, impossibly, became thicker, as if wading through warm honey."
1"Not heavy, not suffocating, but dense with a thousand competing scents that flooded Aurora’s senses the moment the Veil rippled open."
2"There was no sun, no moon, just this immense, overarching color that vibrated with suppressed sound."
3"Her long silver hair, reaching her waist, seemed to catch the amber light as if spun from it."
4"Giant, fleshy blossoms, impossibly vibrant in hues of magenta and gold, unfurled from thick, muscular vines that snaked across the landscape."
5"They were a riot of colors: obsidian black, iridescent emerald, deep amethyst, all ripening, splitting, oozing fragrant juices that dripped onto the velvet-like…"
6"Not searing, but a deep, resonant pulse that mirrored her own racing heart."
7"More like a carpet of crushed jewel-toned leaves and velvety fungi, all intertwined, absorbing everything that fell."
8"They began to move deeper, following a path that wasn't really a path, but merely a slightly less dense area of the colossal flora."
9"Towering trees, their trunks spiraling upwards like gargantuan corkscrews, bore leaves of burnished gold and rust-red, casting no true shade but simply filterin…"
10"They didn't grow from the ground but rather seemed to sprout from the side of a massive, upturned root, as if the entire landscape was one living, intertwined o…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Aurora managed, her voice a little breathy"
1"Nyx spoke, their voice barely a rustle"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Nyx's voice whispered (whisper)"
1"Isolde observed (observe)"
2"Nyx spoke (speak)"
3"Nyx noted (note)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.727
67.8445%