Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ9551A8TAFJ9AYFSF4GA2Y7

Run Details

Duration:
25.8s
Cost:
$0.011733
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The London mist clung to Aurora’s lungs, a damp weight that tasted of exhaust and cold river water. She adjusted the strap of her bag, her thumb brushing the Heartstone Pendant through the fabric of her coat. The crimson gem remained dormant, a cold lump against her chest. Beside her, Nyx existed as a smudge against the concrete, a silhouette that swallowed the streetlamp’s yellow glow without reflecting a single photon. Isolde Varga didn't look back as she stepped off the gravel path of Richmond Park. The Half-Fae’s silver hair trailed behind her like a comet’s tail, reaching down to her waist. Her feet moved with a rhythmic, haunting grace, leaving the dew-heavy grass undisturbed. "The seam is thin here." Isolde pointed a slender finger toward a cluster of ancient oaks. Between two gnarled trunks, the air didn't just shimmer; it curdled. It looked like oil on water, a greasy distortion that blurred the trees behind it into smears of impossible color. Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver hilt sat ice-cold in her palm, the metal leeching the heat from her skin. "Is this the Veil?" Nyx’s voice drifted past her ear, a dry whisper that sent a shiver down her spine. "It is a wound. A doorway kept open by things that do not wish to be forgotten." Isolde stepped into the distortion. One moment her boot touched the edge of the London grass; the next, she vanished as if she’d walked behind a mirror. Aurora took a breath, gripped the cold moon-silver tighter, and plunged through the ripple. The transition felt like a sudden plunge into deep, freezing water. Her ears popped. The pressure in her skull spiked and then vanished, replaced by a lightness that made her knees feel weak. She stood on a carpet of wildflowers that defied every season she knew. Bluebells the size of tea sets bloomed alongside autumnal crocuses and spring lilies. Their petals didn't just vibrate with color; they pulsed. A soft, rhythmic hum rose from the ground, vibrating through the soles of Aurora's boots. The sky above wasn't the charcoal grey of a London night. It glowed with a bruised, sunset purple, though no sun was visible. Massive standing stones made of petrified oak circled the clearing, their surfaces etched with runes that bled silver light. "Time feels... incorrect." Aurora checked her watch. The second hand twitched, moved backward three spaces, then spun rapidly in a clockwise circle before snapping off the pin. She dropped her arm. Nyx solidified beside her. Their violet eyes glowed with a sharper intensity, reflecting the alien flora. They reached out a shadowy hand toward a nearby flower. The moment their form neared the petals, the blossom hissed and folded inward, turning into a sharp, obsidian thorn. "The life here is aggressive. It recognizes the static nature of your soul, Shadow-Kin." Isolde stood in the center of the grove, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the canopy. Overhead, the branches of the ancient oaks didn't just sway; they reached and retracted, weaving together in a slow-motion dance that blocked out the violet sky. "Everything is breathing," Aurora whispered. She reached out to touch one of the standing stones. The petrified wood felt warm, like a feverish forehead. Beneath the bark, she could swear she felt a pulse—slow, tectonic, and immensely powerful. The moon-silver dagger in her other hand began to glow, a soft luminescent white that cut through the kaleidoscopic shadows of the grove. "It reacts to the blade." Isolde turned her head, her expression unreadable and ageless. "Moonsilver remembers its home. You carry a piece of the moon into a land that has never known its light." A heavy, sweet scent filled the air—overripe peaches and ozone. It was cloying, sticking to the back of Aurora’s throat. She moved deeper into the grove, following a path of white pebbles that looked suspiciously like polished teeth. The silence here was absolute, yet noisy. There was no wind, no birdsong, no city hum. Instead, there was the sound of growth—the wet crackle of stems expanding, the soft rustle of leaves that moved of their own accord, and the distant, rhythmic thumping of the grove's heart. "Look at the water." Nyx pointed a flickering finger toward a basin carved into the roots of the largest oak. The liquid inside wasn't water. It was thick and silver, flowing upward in tiny, gravity-defying droplets that vanished into the leaves above. Aurora leaned over the pool. Her reflection didn't show her face. Instead, it showed a girl with eyes of fire and skin like cracked porcelain, a version of herself she didn't recognize. She jerked back, her hand flying to the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. The scar tingled, a dull ache radiating through her arm. "The grove shows possibilities, not truths." Isolde’s voice sounded muffled, as if she were speaking through a heavy curtain. "Do not look too long, Aurora. The Fae realm eats the identity of those who linger at the mirror’s edge." The ground beneath them groaned. A massive root, thick as a man’s torso and covered in glowing moss, shifted across the pebble path. It moved with the deliberate grace of a python, resettling itself with a thud that shook the earth. Aurora stepped over the root, her boots sinking into a patch of moss that felt like velvet-covered sponge. Small, translucent insects with wings made of literal stained glass rose from the moss, circling her head in a dizzying pattern. They made no sound as they flew, but where their wings brushed her skin, she felt a spark of static electricity. "The air is getting thicker." Aurora wiped a bead of sweat from her brow. Despite the coolness of the moonsilver blade, the grove felt like a greenhouse—stifling and humid. The scent of the flowers was becoming intoxicating, a sugary weight that made her head swim. The Heartstone Pendant against her chest suddenly flared with heat. It didn't pulse; it burned. Aurora hissed, clutching at the fabric of her shirt as a dull, red light began to bleed through the cotton. "It’s reacting to something." Nyx stepped in front of her, their shadowy form expanding, the violet light in their eyes turning to narrow slits. "Something is under us." The rhythmic thumping accelerated. The standing stones began to vibrate, the silver runes on their surfaces glowing so bright they burned afterimages into Aurora's retinas. The white pebbles on the path began to dance, rattling against one another like dice in a cup. Isolde didn't move. She stood with her arms at her sides, watching the center of the grove where the petrified oaks met. The ground there began to spiral downward, the earth folding in on itself like a closing iris. "The gate is not just a place." Isolde’s lavender eyes remained fixed on the opening. "It is a hunger." A gush of amber light erupted from the hole in the ground. It wasn't the soft, bruised violet of the grove's sky, but a harsh, golden glare that smelled of roasted meat and expensive wine. The heat increased tenfold, scorched-earth dry and heavy with the scent of unwashed excess. Aurora raised her hand to shield her eyes, the Heartstone Pendant now thudding in sync with the violent vibrations of the earth. The Fae flowers near the opening shriveled instantly, their vibrant colors turning to grey ash in the wake of the heat. "Dymas." Nyx’s voice was barely a breath, a sliver of shadow forced to withdraw from the encroaching amber light. Aurora gripped the hilt of the moonsilver dagger until her knuckles turned white. The transition from the ethereal, alien beauty of the grove to this raw, suffocating heat felt like a physical blow. She stepped toward the edge of the spiraling iris, the light reflecting off the blade in her hand. Below the opening, a landscape of sprawling vineyards stretched out under a warm amber sky. Even from this height, she could see the glint of gold-leafed towers and the movement of figures gathered around long, laden tables. The air rising from the pit carried the sound of distant, raucous laughter and the clatter of silverware. "We go down." Isolde didn't wait for an answer. She stepped into the void, her silver hair flowing upward as she descended into the amber glow of the Gluttony realm. Aurora looked at Nyx. The Shade flickered, their form unstable in the harsh light, but they inclined their head. Aurora took a step forward, the soles of her boots crunching on the last of the pebble path before she tipped into the warmth.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:03:27.567Z" 2/25/2026, 1:03:27 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
23.61% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1440
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count4
2
word"whisper"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"intensity"
count1
7
word"dance"
count2
8
word"pulse"
count2
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"silence"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"glint"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"whisper"
3"down her spine"
4"pulsed"
5"etched"
6"intensity"
7"dance"
8"pulse"
9"unreadable"
10"silence"
11"porcelain"
12"velvet"
13"glint"
14"flickered"
15"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
1"sent a shiver down"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences93
matches(empty)
35.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences93
filterMatches
0"feel"
1"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1436
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.79% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1307
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London3
Aurora16
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Nyx7
Varga1
Richmond1
Park1
Half-Fae1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
Fae3
Gluttony1
Shade1
Isolde9
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Varga"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Fae"
5"Shade"
6"Isolde"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore0.888
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences79
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"looked like oil on water, a greasy distor"
1"felt like a sudden plunge into deep, fr"
2"felt like velvet-covered sponge"
3"felt like a greenhouse—stifling and hum"
4"felt like a physical blow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1436
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs53
mean27.09
std19.05
cv0.703
sampleLengths
071
144
25
342
421
54
616
717
841
933
1050
1142
123
1328
1445
1514
1642
175
1856
195
209
2120
2238
2348
244
2538
2656
276
2813
2920
3041
3160
325
3340
3435
354
3620
374
3843
3939
407
418
424
4349
4443
451
4618
4751
4855
493
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences93
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs205
matches
0"was cloying"
1"were speaking"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences110
ratio0.082
matches
0"Between two gnarled trunks, the air didn't just shimmer; it curdled."
1"One moment her boot touched the edge of the London grass; the next, she vanished as if she’d walked behind a mirror."
2"Their petals didn't just vibrate with color; they pulsed."
3"Overhead, the branches of the ancient oaks didn't just sway; they reached and retracted, weaving together in a slow-motion dance that blocked out the violet sky."
4"Beneath the bark, she could swear she felt a pulse—slow, tectonic, and immensely powerful."
5"A heavy, sweet scent filled the air—overripe peaches and ozone."
6"Instead, there was the sound of growth—the wet crackle of stems expanding, the soft rustle of leaves that moved of their own accord, and the distant, rhythmic thumping of the grove's heart."
7"Despite the coolness of the moonsilver blade, the grove felt like a greenhouse—stifling and humid."
8"It didn't pulse; it burned."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1323
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.021164021164021163
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.0045351473922902496
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean13.05
std6.64
cv0.509
sampleLengths
018
119
211
323
415
516
613
75
811
911
1020
115
1216
134
1416
1517
165
1722
1814
1911
203
2119
2213
2313
249
2515
2611
2712
2819
293
304
3120
324
334
3412
3510
3619
3714
3816
3926
405
4110
429
4314
4423
455
469
4720
4810
4910
44.55% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2909090909090909
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners32
72.46% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences92
matches
0"Instead, there was the sound"
1"Instead, it showed a girl"
ratio0.022
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences92
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"Her feet moved with a"
2"It looked like oil on"
3"Her ears popped."
4"She stood on a carpet"
5"Their petals didn't just vibrate"
6"It glowed with a bruised,"
7"She dropped her arm."
8"Their violet eyes glowed with"
9"They reached out a shadowy"
10"She reached out to touch"
11"It was cloying, sticking to"
12"She moved deeper into the"
13"It was thick and silver,"
14"Her reflection didn't show her"
15"She jerked back, her hand"
16"It moved with the deliberate"
17"They made no sound as"
18"It didn't pulse; it burned."
19"She stood with her arms"
ratio0.25
30.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount79
totalSentences92
matches
0"The London mist clung to"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The crimson gem remained dormant,"
3"Isolde Varga didn't look back"
4"The Half-Fae’s silver hair trailed"
5"Her feet moved with a"
6"Isolde pointed a slender finger"
7"It looked like oil on"
8"Aurora drew the Fae-Forged Blade."
9"The moonsilver hilt sat ice-cold"
10"Nyx’s voice drifted past her"
11"Isolde stepped into the distortion."
12"Aurora took a breath, gripped"
13"The transition felt like a"
14"Her ears popped."
15"The pressure in her skull"
16"She stood on a carpet"
17"Bluebells the size of tea"
18"Their petals didn't just vibrate"
19"A soft, rhythmic hum rose"
ratio0.859
54.35% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences92
matches
0"Even from this height, she"
ratio0.011
20.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"The London mist clung to Aurora’s lungs, a damp weight that tasted of exhaust and cold river water."
1"Beside her, Nyx existed as a smudge against the concrete, a silhouette that swallowed the streetlamp’s yellow glow without reflecting a single photon."
2"It looked like oil on water, a greasy distortion that blurred the trees behind it into smears of impossible color."
3"Nyx’s voice drifted past her ear, a dry whisper that sent a shiver down her spine."
4"Massive standing stones made of petrified oak circled the clearing, their surfaces etched with runes that bled silver light."
5"She moved deeper into the grove, following a path of white pebbles that looked suspiciously like polished teeth."
6"Instead, there was the sound of growth—the wet crackle of stems expanding, the soft rustle of leaves that moved of their own accord, and the distant, rhythmic t…"
7"It was thick and silver, flowing upward in tiny, gravity-defying droplets that vanished into the leaves above."
8"It moved with the deliberate grace of a python, resettling itself with a thud that shook the earth."
9"Aurora stepped over the root, her boots sinking into a patch of moss that felt like velvet-covered sponge."
10"Nyx stepped in front of her, their shadowy form expanding, the violet light in their eyes turning to narrow slits."
11"It wasn't the soft, bruised violet of the grove's sky, but a harsh, golden glare that smelled of roasted meat and expensive wine."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
94.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.111
78.7041%