Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ955FDK866YRQ74TYCBB70M

Run Details

Duration:
21.4s
Cost:
$0.009905
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign of The Raven’s Nest pulsed a steady rhythm against the Soho drizzle, casting a watery sheen across the pavement. Inside, the usual Friday night hum settled in. Rory Carter polished the same spot on the dark wood counter for the third time, the cloth rough against the grain. Silas Blackwood, a quiet presence behind the bar, wiped condensation from a row of tumblers, a faint clink punctuating the jazzy murmur from the speakers tucked in the corners. Rory’s delivery shift had ended an hour ago, but the lull of the Nest, the comforting scent of aged wood and stout, kept her rooted. She took a slow sip of her ginger ale, watching the faint reflection of the old maps unfurl on the opposite wall. A gust of wind rattled the entrance door chime. Cold sliced through the warmth for a fleeting moment. Rory lifted her gaze, the movement lazy, expecting another rain-soaked regular or a tourist seeking refuge. The woman who stepped inside defied both. She moved with an effortless grace, her charcoal suit tailored to an impossible sharpness that belied the damp evening. A silk scarf, the colour of amethyst, draped over one shoulder, catching the dim light. Her hair, once a wild tumble of auburn curls, now lay in a sleek, severe bob, framing a face Rory almost recognised. Her bright blue eyes narrowed, searching the woman’s features. There was a confidence in her stride, a certain polished veneer that seemed alien, yet hauntingly similar to someone she once knew. The woman paused, her gaze sweeping the room, then landing on Rory. A ghost of a smile, thin and precise, touched her lips. “Rory? Aurora Carter, I don’t believe it.” Her voice, though softer than Rory remembered, carried an unfamiliar edge, an almost imperious tone. Rory’s glass met the counter with a soft thud. A jolt, cold and sudden, sliced through her. The name, the cadence of her speech, the ghost of a freckle on the bridge of her nose. Seraphina. Seraphina Doyle. Her stomach tightened. “Sera? Is that really you?” Rory pushed herself off the barstool, her movements stiff, unpractised. The years peeled back, revealing glimpses of a vivacious, ambitious girl with a laugh that filled every room. This woman, cool and composed, wore her past like a discarded skin. Seraphina moved towards her, traversing the distance between them with a deliberate stride that suggested power, not reunion. Her gaze, once wide and earnest, now held a calculating glint. “It is. Though I suppose you wouldn’t have expected me here.” She stopped before Rory, extending a manicured hand. Her grip was firm, brief, cold. “In London, I mean. Or a place like this.” Rory’s eyes flickered across Seraphina’s immaculate ensemble, then to her own worn jeans and the faint stain on her Golden Empress t-shirt. The unspoken comparison hung heavy in the air, a silent judgment. “No, I… I didn’t. What brings you to this part of town?” “A rather tedious arbitration case this week.” Seraphina waved a dismissive hand, her movements economical. “Client insisted on a meeting near Mayfair. Decided to indulge myself with a walk afterward. Found your little haven.” Her gaze drifted around the dimly lit bar, lingering on the eccentric decor, a faint, almost pitying curve to her lips. “Still working, I see. Or is this a new venture?” Rory bristled, a slow heat rising in her cheeks. It had been years. Years since they’d last spoken, since that bitter, tear-soaked argument in a Cardiff pub. Sera had always had a way of cutting straight to the bone. “This is Silas’s bar. I live above it. And I was just finishing a shift.” “Right. Good old Silas.” Seraphina nodded towards Blackwood, who offered a curt, unsmiling nod in return. “Still playing the enigmatic host, I see. So, the courier gig, then? After all those promises of chambers and courtrooms.” Her tone managed to convey both surprise and disappointment, a casual barb cloaked in feigned concern. Rory’s jaw tightened. “Things change, Sera. People change.” Seraphina let out a short, hollow laugh. “Indeed they do. Though I always imagined you’d be the last one to stray from the path. Remember all those late nights, cramming for tort law? You practically memorised the textbooks.” “I remember.” Rory forced the words out. She remembered trying to outrun the echoes of Evan’s anger in those textbooks, losing herself in the minutiae of legal precedent until her head throbbed. Seraphina had seen it as dedication, not an escape. “And now this.” Seraphina gestured vaguely, encompassing the bar, Rory's clothes, her current life. “Delivering spring rolls, I assume?” “Peking duck, mostly,” Rory said, her voice dry. “And occasionally a few harsh truths for people too comfortable in their own assumptions.” The retort felt childish, but it tasted sweet on her tongue. Seraphina’s smile thinned further. “Hard words for old friends, Rory. Or perhaps you’re simply reflecting your current clientele.” She leaned against the bar, her posture still impeccable, a stark contrast to Rory’s slightly slumped shoulders. “Last I heard, you’d gone completely off the grid. Worried everyone, you know.” “Worried everyone?” Rory’s voice rose, edged with incredulity. “You were the last person to call, Sera. Or text. Or even send a pigeon after I packed up my life and left Cardiff with less than a week’s notice.” Her hands clenched into fists, the crescent scar on her left wrist a pale ridge against her skin. The memory of her flight, the desperation, the shame, still raw beneath the surface. Seraphina’s finely sculpted eyebrows arched, a picture of feigned innocence. “One must pick their battles, Rory. You made your choices. We all do. I had my own career to focus on. Not everyone gets to simply disappear into obscurity. Some of us have responsibilities.” “Right.” Rory scoffed, a bitter laugh escaping her. “Responsibilities. Is that what you call it now? Leaving a friend when she was falling apart?” “Falling apart?” Seraphina’s voice adopted a soft, almost pitying drone. “You were seeing that… what was his name? Evan. The one who was practically suffocating you. We tried to warn you. You chose to ignore us, chose to stay.” The accusation twisted in Rory’s gut. “He wasn’t suffocating me. He was…” The words caught in her throat. She closed her eyes for a brief moment, picturing the quiet terror, the careful steps, the endless nights spent walking on eggshells. “It doesn’t matter now. I left. I got out. That’s what matters.” “And look where it got you.” Seraphina swept her hand around, the gesture encompassing the bar again, an implicit declaration of failure. “A barmaid. A delivery girl. After all that potential. After all those dreams we shared.” “My dreams didn’t involve grey suits and sterile courtrooms, Sera. Not entirely, anyway. I wanted more than that. Something real.” Rory met Seraphina’s cool gaze, refusing to back down. Her current life, simple as it was, felt far more authentic than the polished facade Seraphina presented. “Real?” Seraphina’s tone dripped with unconcealed disdain. “Is this real? This… quaint little establishment? What about the law firm, the partnership track, the impact we talked about making?” “Impact?” Rory echoed, a sharp edge in her voice. “You truly believe you’re making an impact? Or simply serving the highest bidder, polishing corporate rhetoric for another faceless entity?” A muscle in Seraphina’s jaw tightened. The composure, for a fleeting second, cracked. “That’s incredibly cynical, even for you, Rory. I’m a barrister. I uphold the law. I build cases. I protect my clients’ interests.” “Did you ever think to protect ours?” Rory watched her, the silence stretching between them, thick with unaddressed grievances. Seraphina’s gaze darted away, to a framed black-and-white photograph on the wall, one of old London street scenes. She meticulously adjusted her scarf, a small, nervous habit Rory recognised from their university days. “Some things are beyond protection, Rory,” Seraphina finally said, her voice tight, controlled. “We all grow up. We all make choices. And sometimes those choices take us down very different paths. You left. I stayed. I built a life. I succeeded.” “Succeeded at what?” Rory challenged, stepping a little closer. “At forgetting? At letting go of anything that didn’t fit into your perfect little plan?” Seraphina turned back, her eyes flashing, a fire in their depths Rory hadn’t seen in years. “Don’t you dare, Aurora. Don’t you dare imply I abandoned you. I had my own battles, my own climb. I didn’t have the luxury of running away and starting fresh in a new city with no fixed address or proper employment.” “No fixed address?” Rory’s lip curled. “I live above this bar, Sera. I have a roof over my head. I pay my bills. I work hard. And I don’t owe anyone an explanation for getting out of a situation that was making me miserable and dangerous.” Seraphina crossed her arms, a defensive gesture. “And I suppose you expected me to drop everything to follow you? To unravel my entire life because you had a crisis of conscience?” “I expected a phone call, Sera,” Rory said, her voice softer now, but with an underlying current of pain. “A single message. Something. Anything. After everything we went through. After all those promises.” The jazz music from the speakers seemed to swell, then fade, leaving the quiet hum of the bar in its wake. Seraphina looked at her then, truly looked at her, and Rory saw a flicker of something in her eyes — not regret, perhaps, but a recognition of the chasm that had opened between them.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:03:42.009Z" 2/25/2026, 1:03:42 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
84.62% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Her gaze drifted around [around]"
1"Seraphina gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
2"Seraphina finally said [finally]"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.542
leniency1
rawRatio0.115
effectiveRatio0.115
81.19% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1595
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count2
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"completely"
3"truly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
21.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1595
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"comforting"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"fleeting"
count2
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"stomach"
count1
7
word"calculating"
count1
8
word"glint"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
11
word"enigmatic"
count1
12
word"echoes"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count1
14
word"comfortable"
count1
15
word"stark"
count1
16
word"potential"
count1
17
word"facade"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"silence"
count1
20
word"perfect"
count1
21
word"depths"
count1
22
word"unravel"
count1
23
word"flicker"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"comforting"
2"warmth"
3"fleeting"
4"effortless"
5"silk"
6"stomach"
7"calculating"
8"glint"
9"flickered"
10"unspoken"
11"enigmatic"
12"echoes"
13"throbbed"
14"comfortable"
15"stark"
16"potential"
17"facade"
18"echoed"
19"silence"
20"perfect"
21"depths"
22"unravel"
23"flicker"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches3
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"clenched jaw/fists"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"clenched into fists"
2"hung heavy in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences78
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen48
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1596
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount962
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity2.91
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Seraphina"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest2
Soho1
Friday1
Carter1
Blackwood2
Rory28
Doyle1
Seraphina22
Golden1
Empress1
Cardiff1
Evan1
London1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Carter"
2"Blackwood"
3"Rory"
4"Doyle"
5"Seraphina"
6"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.045
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.627
wordCount1596
matches
0"not regret, perhaps, but a recognition of the chasm"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences100
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean44.33
std22.22
cv0.501
sampleLengths
0128
141
2110
322
441
545
629
734
845
965
1054
1152
128
1338
1441
1519
1633
1748
1870
1944
2024
2139
2252
2337
2446
2528
2629
2735
2852
2941
3024
3157
3246
3331
3433
3555
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"was, felt"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences100
ratio0.01
matches
0"Seraphina looked at her then, truly looked at her, and Rory saw a flicker of something in her eyes — not regret, perhaps, but a recognition of the chasm that had opened between them."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount965
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"bitter, tear-soaked argument"
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.03316062176165803
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008290155440414507
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean15.96
std9.48
cv0.594
sampleLengths
023
18
221
329
425
522
69
79
816
97
1019
1115
1222
139
1422
1512
1611
1722
189
198
2018
211
222
233
2415
2518
2612
2718
2811
2919
306
319
3222
3311
3412
3515
3640
3710
389
394
4014
4112
4215
4316
4436
453
465
477
4831
497
70.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.44
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners44
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences76
matches
0"She took a slow sip"
1"She moved with an effortless"
2"Her hair, once a wild"
3"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
4"Her voice, though softer than"
5"Her stomach tightened."
6"Her gaze, once wide and"
7"She stopped before Rory, extending"
8"Her grip was firm, brief,"
9"Her gaze drifted around the"
10"It had been years."
11"Her tone managed to convey"
12"She remembered trying to outrun"
13"She leaned against the bar,"
14"Her hands clenched into fists,"
15"She closed her eyes for"
16"Her current life, simple as"
17"She meticulously adjusted her scarf,"
ratio0.237
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences76
matches
0"The green neon sign of"
1"Rory Carter polished the same"
2"Silas Blackwood, a quiet presence"
3"Rory’s delivery shift had ended"
4"She took a slow sip"
5"A gust of wind rattled"
6"Rory lifted her gaze, the"
7"The woman who stepped inside"
8"She moved with an effortless"
9"A silk scarf, the colour"
10"Her hair, once a wild"
11"Her bright blue eyes narrowed,"
12"The woman paused, her gaze"
13"A ghost of a smile,"
14"Her voice, though softer than"
15"Rory’s glass met the counter"
16"A jolt, cold and sudden,"
17"The name, the cadence of"
18"Her stomach tightened."
19"Rory pushed herself off the"
ratio0.961
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences31
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She moved with an effortless grace, her charcoal suit tailored to an impossible sharpness that belied the damp evening."
1"There was a confidence in her stride, a certain polished veneer that seemed alien, yet hauntingly similar to someone she once knew."
2"The woman paused, her gaze sweeping the room, then landing on Rory."
3"The years peeled back, revealing glimpses of a vivacious, ambitious girl with a laugh that filled every room."
9.62% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Rory pushed, her movements stiff, unpractised"
1"Seraphina waved, her movements economical"
2"Rory said, her voice dry"
3"Rory scoffed, a bitter laugh escaping her"
4"Rory met, refusing to back down"
5"Seraphina finally said, her voice tight, controlled"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Her tone managed (manage)"
1"Rory challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences48
tagDensity0.104
leniency0.208
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.083
74.8470%