Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ955V7SSK98TNS5VTE3GJMN

Run Details

Duration:
24.4s
Cost:
$0.002074
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The last of the evening’s patrons had shuffled out an hour ago, leaving The Raven’s Nest to the hushed hum of the refrigerator and the distant rumble of Soho traffic. Rory Carter traced the rim of her empty glass, the condensation cool against her fingertip. Silas, a shadow by the far end of the bar, meticulously arranged bottles, his movements economical, his sharp gaze missing little. The air hung thick with the scent of aged wood, stale beer, and something indefinably like secrets. Rory worked the late shift sometimes, helping Silas out, claiming the flat above the Nest felt less like loneliness and more like solitude when the city quieted. Tonight, she was just sitting, nursing a water, the black of her shoulder-length hair a stark contrast to the muted tones of Silas’s establishment. The bell above the door gave a low scrape, more a sigh than a chime. Rory’s head lifted. A block of London’s damp night air rushed in, carrying with it the faintest hint of expensive cologne. A man stood there, framed by the green neon sign, shedding the street’s glare. He wore a charcoal suit, impeccably tailored, a stark grey against the bar's dim warmth. He moved with a practiced grace that caught her eye. He scanned the room, his gaze sweeping past Silas, landing briefly on her. And then, it snagged. A peculiar stillness settled over him. He pushed the door shut, the bell’s chime swallowed by the click of its latch. He took a step in, then another, his movements losing some of their initial polish, replaced by a hesitant curiosity. Rory’s breath hitched, a faint tremor running down her spine. The angle of his jaw. The way he ran a hand over his neatly slicked-back hair, a gesture she hadn’t seen in a decade. "Rory?" The voice was deeper, richer, but possessed a familiar cadence. It was an echo from a life carefully packed away. She pushed her glass aside, her own voice a rougher edge than she intended. "Liam?" He offered a small, tight smile. It stretched his lips, but the flicker of recognition in his storm-grey eyes did little to warm their depths. Years had etched faint lines around them, and his once boyish face had settled into a more severe, guarded geometry. The suit, the posture, the reserved nod he gave Silas – it was all a performance of arrival. "Bloody hell," he breathed, stepping closer. "Rory Carter. I thought… I thought that was you. You haven’t changed." She met his gaze, a wry twist playing on her lips. "You're lying. Or you have a terrible memory." She gestured loosely around the bar. "This is me now. The girl who delivers noodles and lives above a bar." He chuckled, a dry sound. "Still looking out for Yu-Fei's, then?" "When the rent needs paying." She watched him, the suit, the expensive watch glinting. He looked like someone who’d stepped out of a magazine her mother might have read. "And you? You look like you've conquered every city, bought up half the world, and still wear suits to bed." He took her comment with a slight tightening around his mouth. He finally reached the bar, stopping a few stools away. Silas’s hazel eyes flickered towards them, a brief, almost imperceptible nod, before he returned to his bottles. Liam slid onto a stool. "Silas," Liam acknowledged, his tone polite, distant. "Liam went to school with Rory, Liam," Silas said, his voice a low rumble, cutting through the small talk without actually cutting it. He moved towards them, his slight limp almost invisible on the worn floorboards. "Fancy seeing you in this part of town." "Just passing through for a meeting," Liam replied, his attention already drifting back to Rory. He raised a hand. "A double whiskey. Scotch, if you have it." Silas nodded, a ghost of a smile playing on his lips as he walked away. "So," Liam began, turning to her, the initial shock giving way to a practiced ease. "Cardiff feels like another lifetime, doesn't it? We were going to change everything." Rory leaned back, the worn leatherette of the stool cool against her arms. "You were. I was mostly trying to pass my tutorials and avoid my father’s disappointed silences." He winced, a fleeting shadow crossing his face before it smoothed over. "Brendan. Right. Tough bloke." He looked at his hands, turning them over as if seeing them for the first time. His left wrist bore no scar. "You were always the one with the sharp mind, the quick retort. I always imagined you in court, a formidable prosecutor." "I imagined you building bridges," she countered, her voice low. "Or designing them. Something solid. Constructive." The whiskey arrived, amber and potent. Liam picked up the glass, his knuckles white for a second before he relaxed. He took a long sip. "Life takes… unexpected turns." "So I've heard," Rory said. She watched his eyes, searching for the boy who’d talked about architectural marvels and dreamt of leaving their damp Welsh town. This man was a stranger wearing a familiar face. She could feel the weight of years settling between them, not just the time elapsed, but the vast, uncharted territories of lives lived apart. "I saw your mother at Christmas," Liam offered, his tone carefully neutral. "She still asks about you regularly. Worries. You know how she is." Rory’s expression remained unreadable. "She always worried." She remembered her mother’s gentle anxieties, her father’s gruff pragmatism. Evans, her ex, and the terror he’d instilled, had forced her to find a resilience she hadn’t known she possessed. London, then. London had been a refuge, a place to disappear and then, slowly, rebuild. "She told me you'd moved to London. Works for a bar owner. That wasn't quite the barrister's chambers I pictured." He swirled the amber liquid, the ice clinking like tiny bones. "No," Rory conceded. "It isn't. But Silas runs a tight ship. And the rent's manageable." She felt a peculiar detachment, as if recounting a story about someone else. The sharp-witted student, the determined law applicant – that person felt distant, a sketch in a notebook. This Rory, the one who understood the rhythm of late-night deliveries and the quiet competence of Silas Blackwood, was real. "And you? Heard you went into finance. Became one of those sharp-suited dragons breathing fire on the trading floor." The words came out too quickly. Liam’s jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. He took another sip, the whiskey doing little to soften the hard edges of his face. "Something like that. It’s… challenging." "Challenging," Rory echoed softly. She knew that word. She knew the way people used it to paper over a multitude of things they’d rather not examine too closely. The way she’d used it herself when she first landed in London, fresh from an abusive relationship Evan had meticulously crafted. "So, this… Silas," Liam continued, shifting uncomfortably, his gaze flicking to the owner who now stood polishing glasses at the other end of the bar, a quiet sentinel. "He's a friend?" "He's… complicated," Rory said. Silas was her anchor, her unexpected guardian angel in a city that had initially felt like a hungry maw. He saw things. He knew things. He’d offered her the flat above the Nest when she’d arrived, broke and adrift, having fled Cardiff with only a suitcase and the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist as proof of her past. Liam let out a short, dry laugh. "Complicated is good. Means there’s a story. My life is all… streamlined. Efficient. Every step calculated." He met her eyes. "Sometimes I wonder if I forgot how to just… stop. To breathe. To remember what it felt like before all the calculations." "Cardiff," she supplied. "Before the calculations began." He nodded, his gaze fixed on the swirling amber in his glass. "Before the choices were made. Before… well, before we knew what was at stake for everyone else." He lifted the glass, a toast in the dim light. "To the crossroads, I suppose. The ones you took, and the ones you left standing behind you." Rory watched him, the sentiment a bittersweet ache deep in her chest. She’d left Cardiff to escape Evan, yes, but also to escape the suffocating certainty of a future that felt pre-ordained, a path she hadn’t chosen. Liam had chosen a different kind of path, one that clearly weighed on him now. The easy camaraderie they’d shared, the shared dreams whispered in late-night cafes, the fierce loyalty—it all seemed to have been shed like an outgrown, ill-fitting coat. "We were never good at goodbyes, were we?" Liam’s voice was softer now, the practiced veneer cracking. "Or perhaps, at saying hello to what came next." She finally picked up her own glass, turning it slowly. "The goodbye usually happens before you even realize it’s started." A faint smile touched her lips. They were in a bar, miles from home, surrounded by maps and shadows, talking about a life that had dissolved like sugar in this very drink. The weight of it all settled, not with a crash, but with the quiet, insistent pressure of returning tide.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:03:54.113Z" 2/25/2026, 1:03:54 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured loosely [loosely]"
1"Rory echoed softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
73.75% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count2
1
adverb"loosely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"loosely"
2"slowly"
3"quickly"
4"softly"
5"very"
80.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found
0"Evans"
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
11.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1524
totalAiIsms27
found
0
word"traced"
count1
1
word"stark"
count2
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"down her spine"
count1
5
word"familiar"
count2
6
word"echo"
count1
7
word"flicker"
count1
8
word"depths"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"glinting"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"practiced ease"
count1
13
word"fleeting"
count1
14
word"could feel"
count1
15
word"weight"
count2
16
word"unreadable"
count1
17
word"determined"
count1
18
word"echoed"
count1
19
word"sentinel"
count1
20
word"maw"
count1
21
word"streamlined"
count1
22
word"efficient"
count1
23
word"calculated"
count1
highlights
0"traced"
1"stark"
2"warmth"
3"scanned"
4"down her spine"
5"familiar"
6"echo"
7"flicker"
8"depths"
9"etched"
10"glinting"
11"flickered"
12"practiced ease"
13"fleeting"
14"could feel"
15"weight"
16"unreadable"
17"determined"
18"echoed"
19"sentinel"
20"maw"
21"streamlined"
22"efficient"
23"calculated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences94
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1525
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1162
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest3
Soho1
Carter1
Silas10
London4
Rory13
Welsh1
Evans1
Blackwood1
Liam11
Evan2
Cardiff2
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Silas"
4"Rory"
5"Evans"
6"Blackwood"
7"Liam"
8"Evan"
places
0"Soho"
1"London"
2"Welsh"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.941
windowScore0.833
13.01% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"looked like someone who’d stepped out of"
1"as if seeing them for the first time"
2"as if recounting a story about someone else"
3"felt like a hungry maw"
68.85% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.311
wordCount1525
matches
0"not just the time elapsed, but the vast, uncharted territories of lives lived apart"
1"not with a crash, but with the quiet, insistent pressure of returning tide"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences113
matches
0"knew that word"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean42.36
std26.44
cv0.624
sampleLengths
0134
188
279
321
415
563
618
739
811
949
1043
117
1244
1327
1415
1528
1629
1759
1816
1929
2059
2124
2252
2331
2465
2525
2626
2749
2831
2962
3049
317
3256
3378
3426
3571
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences94
matches
0"been shed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs190
matches
0"was just sitting"
67.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences113
ratio0.027
matches
0"The suit, the posture, the reserved nod he gave Silas – it was all a performance of arrival."
1"The sharp-witted student, the determined law applicant – that person felt distant, a sketch in a notebook."
2"The easy camaraderie they’d shared, the shared dreams whispered in late-night cafes, the fierce loyalty—it all seemed to have been shed like an outgrown, ill-fitting coat."
91.59% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1169
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount58
adverbRatio0.04961505560307956
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.018819503849443968
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean13.5
std7.48
cv0.554
sampleLengths
030
115
221
317
427
524
615
73
818
914
1015
1110
1213
134
146
1515
1620
1710
185
1919
2011
2110
2214
231
246
2519
2620
2718
286
2912
3011
3114
3214
335
346
3514
3615
3720
3811
3910
4017
415
427
4323
4413
458
4615
474
488
4915
43.36% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3185840707964602
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners36
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
35.73% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences89
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit,"
1"He moved with a practiced"
2"He scanned the room, his"
3"He pushed the door shut,"
4"He took a step in,"
5"It was an echo from"
6"She pushed her glass aside,"
7"He offered a small, tight"
8"It stretched his lips, but"
9"he breathed, stepping closer"
10"She met his gaze, a"
11"She gestured loosely around the"
12"He chuckled, a dry sound."
13"She watched him, the suit,"
14"He looked like someone who’d"
15"He took her comment with"
16"He finally reached the bar,"
17"He moved towards them, his"
18"He raised a hand."
19"He winced, a fleeting shadow"
ratio0.461
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount88
totalSentences89
matches
0"The last of the evening’s"
1"Rory Carter traced the rim"
2"Silas, a shadow by the"
3"The air hung thick with"
4"Rory worked the late shift"
5"Tonight, she was just sitting,"
6"The bell above the door"
7"Rory’s head lifted."
8"A block of London’s damp"
9"A man stood there, framed"
10"He wore a charcoal suit,"
11"He moved with a practiced"
12"He scanned the room, his"
13"A peculiar stillness settled over"
14"He pushed the door shut,"
15"He took a step in,"
16"Rory’s breath hitched, a faint"
17"The angle of his jaw."
18"The way he ran a"
19"The voice was deeper, richer,"
ratio0.989
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences50
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"She watched his eyes, searching for the boy who’d talked about architectural marvels and dreamt of leaving their damp Welsh town."
1"Silas was her anchor, her unexpected guardian angel in a city that had initially felt like a hungry maw."
2"She’d left Cardiff to escape Evan, yes, but also to escape the suffocating certainty of a future that felt pre-ordained, a path she hadn’t chosen."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Liam acknowledged, his tone polite, distant"
1"Liam replied, his attention already drifting back to Rory"
2"she countered, her voice low"
3"Liam offered, his tone carefully neutral"
4"He swirled, the ice clinking like tiny bones"
5"She felt, as if recounting a story about someone else"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he breathed (breathe)"
1"Liam acknowledged (acknowledge)"
2"Rory conceded (concede)"
3"Liam continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.182
leniency0.364
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.182
70.9048%