Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ9568PRQHBG7EGSB82405DX

Run Details

Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.010563
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The first bolt slid back with a metallic rasp that echoed through the small flat. Rory paused, her fingers hovering over the second lock. It was nearly eleven on a Tuesday, and the rhythmic thumping of the bass from the curry house below had begun to vibrate through the floorboards. Eva was away in Oxford tracking a lead on a fourteenth-century grimoire, and Ptolemy, the tabby cat, was currently a judging lump of fur atop a stack of precarious scrolls. No one should be at the door. Rory turned the second deadbolt, then the third. She told herself she wasn't afraid. She had survived Cardiff, survived Evan, and she was building a life in London that didn't involve looking over her shoulder. But as the door creaked open, the practiced mask of cool-headedness she wore for her delivery shifts at the Golden Empress faltered. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim, spice-scented hallway of the Brick Lane tenement like a predatory bird in a cage too small for its wingspan. He was impeccably, almost offensively, dressed in a charcoal suit that probably cost more than Rory’s annual rent. The ivory handle of his cane glinted under the flickering hallway light, the silver filigree catching the shadows. "Rory," he said. His voice was a rich, low cello note that skipped down her spine despite her best efforts to remain numb. Rory didn't step back, but she gripped the edge of the door until the wood bit into her palm. "You have a lot of nerve showing up here, Lucien. Or did you forget how we left things in Southwark?" Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes searched hers. The black one was a bottomless well, the amber one a spark of trapped sunlight. He looked tired, though on him, fatigue merely looked like a more dangerous version of elegance. "I haven't forgotten a single second of Southwark. That is precisely why I am here." "I told you I was done with the broker business. I'm delivering noodles and studying law. I'm a civilian." "You were never a civilian, Malphora," he murmured, using the name he’d given her in the underworld, a name that tasted like smoke and secrets. "And you have a tabby cat trying to escape between your ankles." Rory looked down. Ptolemy was indeed attempting to squeeze past her shins to investigate the expensive scent of Lucien’s cologne—sandalwood and something sharper, something metallic. She nudged the cat back with her heel and sighed, the fight draining out of her, replaced by a weary, thrumming heat. "Get in. Before the neighbors think I’m being audited by the world’s most expensive debt collector." She stepped aside. Lucien entered the flat with a limp so slight it was almost imperceptible, the silent blade hidden within his ivory cane clicking softly against the floor. He seemed to take up all the available oxygen in the room. The flat was a labyrinth of books, scrolls, and Eva’s research notes, a chaotic contrast to Lucien’s precision. He stopped in the center of the room, his gaze snagging on a pile of Rory’s law textbooks. "Is this the life you wanted? Hiding behind three deadbolts and lukewarm curry?" "It’s a safe life," Rory snapped, closing the door and engaging all three locks again. The sound was deliberate. "Safety is a luxury I didn’t have for a long time. You of all people should understand that." Lucien turned to face her. He didn't lean on his cane; he held it like a scepter. "There is a difference between being safe and being buried alive. You were meant for more than delivering Yu-Fei’s spicy wontons, Rory. You have a mind that can deconstruct a security net in seconds. You are wastefully brilliant." "And you’re still a manipulative half-demon who uses people like chess pieces," she countered, walking past him into the tiny kitchenette. She needed distance. The air around him felt charged, the atmosphere thickening with the history they had tried to bury. "Why are you here, Luc? And don't tell me it’s for my 'brilliant mind.' You could hire ten crackers with my skill set." "None of them have your soul," he said, his voice dropping an octave. Rory froze, her hand on the handle of the kettle. She felt the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist throb, a phantom ache from a childhood accident that always seemed to flare when she was stressed. She turned, her blue eyes bright with a sudden, sharp anger. "Don't. Don’t talk about my soul. Not after you walked away when things got complicated. You left me in that warehouse with the Avaros enforcers because it was 'economically unviable' to stay." Lucien’s expression shifted, a flicker of genuine pain crossing his aristocratic features before he smoothed it back into a mask of indifference. He moved toward her, his movements fluid and predatory. He stopped just outside her personal space, the scent of him now overwhelming the smell of ginger and old paper. "I left because if I had stayed, I would have burned that entire district to the ground to keep them from touching you," he whispered. "And if I had done that, the Council would have come for both of us. I chose the only path that kept you breathing, even if it meant you hated me for it." "I don't hate you," Rory said, though it was a lie. It was worse than hate; it was an exhausting, tethering longing. "I just realized that in your world, love is a liability you can't afford. And I’ve had enough of being someone’s liability." Lucien reached out, his gloved hand hovering near her face before he pulled it back, gripping the ivory head of his cane instead. "I didn't come here to ask you back into the trade, Rory. I came because Evan is in London." The name hit her like a physical blow. The room seemed to tilt. Rory’s breath hitched, her lungs suddenly too small. "He... he doesn't know where I am. I changed everything. Eva helped me disappear." "He has been asking the wrong people the right questions," Lucien said, his amber eye glowing with a faint, demonic light. "He’s been seen at Silas’ bar. He’s looking for a girl with black hair and blue eyes who works for the Empress. He’s closer than you think." Rory leaned back against the counter, her knees weak. The "cool-headed" Aurora Carter felt herself slipping away, replaced by the terrified girl from Cardiff. But then she felt a hand on hers. Lucien had moved closer, his hand covering hers on the laminate countertop. His touch was warm—too warm for a human, a reminder of his lineage from the realm of Avaros. His leather glove was soft, but the grip was firm, grounding her. "I won't let him find you," Lucien promised. Rory looked up at him, searching his heterochromatic eyes for the lie. "And what’s the price, Luc? What do you want in exchange for your protection this time? Information? A job?" Lucien stepped into her space, his chest mere inches from hers. He was taller, his 5’11” frame casting a shadow over her. He reached out with his free hand, his thumb brushing the line of her jaw, the contact electric. "The price is your presence," he said softly. "I have spent six months trying to convince myself that I was better off without the distraction of you. I have traveled from Marseille to Moscow, broker-dealing in secrets and blood, and every time I closed my eyes, I saw you in that Southwark warehouse, looking at me like I was the monster they said I was." "You are a monster," Rory whispered, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird. "Perhaps," he conceded, his face dipping closer to hers. "But I am *your* monster, if you will have me. Let me take you somewhere safe. Not a flat with three locks, but a place where you don't need locks at all." Rory’s mind raced, analyzing the variables. It was a risk. To go with him was to step back into the shadows she had fought so hard to escape. But to stay was to wait for Evan to find her, and she knew Evan’s brand of cruelty far better than Lucien’s. And beneath the logic, there was the heat. The way Lucien looked at her—as if she were the only thing in the world that held any value. He didn't see a delivery girl or a broken survivor; he saw a partner. "I won't be a chess piece," she said, her voice steadying. "If I go with you, we’re equal. No more secrets. No more 'economically unviable' exits." Lucien’s lips curled into a faint, rare smile. "A contract? You truly are a barrister’s daughter." "I'm a woman who knows her worth," Rory corrected. Lucien bowed his head slightly, his forehead almost touching hers. "Done. Although, I suspect I am getting the better end of this deal." He leaned in the rest of the way, and when his lips met hers, it wasn't the tentative kiss of a reunion. It was a claim—desperate, fierce, and tasting of everything Rory had missed. It was the heat of Avaros and the cold iron of London, a collision of worlds that left her breathless and clinging to his charcoal lapels. Ptolemy let out a loud, indignant meow and jumped off the table, knocking a stack of scrolls onto the floor. Rory pulled back just an inch, her eyes searching Lucien’s. "We have to take the cat." Lucien looked down at the tabby, who was currently sniffing the tip of his expensive cane. "The cat stays," he said firmly. "The cat stays, or I stay," Rory countered, a spark of the old Rory—the one who bargained with demons—returning to her gaze. Lucien sighed, the sound resigned but fond. "Fine. We take the cat. But he is not riding in the Bentley’s front seat." Rory smiled, a real one this time, as she reached for her coat. The three deadbolts felt suddenly unnecessary. For the first time in months, she wasn't just hiding; she was moving again. And as she followed Lucien out into the humid, spice-laden night of Brick Lane, she knew that whatever happened next, the terms had finally changed in her favor.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:04:07.902Z" 2/25/2026, 1:04:07 AM
model"google/gemini-3-flash-preview-20251217"
app_id182717
external_user(null)
streamedtrue
cancelledfalse
latency1701
moderation_latency(null)
generation_time28280
tokens_prompt808
tokens_completion3147
native_tokens_prompt786
native_tokens_completion3390
native_tokens_completion_images0
native_tokens_reasoning1084
native_tokens_cached0
num_media_prompt(null)
num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
num_search_results(null)
origin"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byokfalse
finish_reason"stop"
native_finish_reason"STOP"
usage0.010563
router(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id"6e82f652-2693-4b60-bbe0-7362d6e345f0"
is_byokfalse
latency1701
model_permaslug"google/gemini-3-flash-preview-20251217"
provider_name"Google AI Studio"
status200
api_type"completions"
id"gen-1771981447-FojGn0hIUuUVEJiqrwZN"
upstream_id(null)
total_cost0.010563
cache_discount(null)
upstream_inference_cost0
provider_name"Google AI Studio"

Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said softly [softly]"
1"Rory pulled back [back]"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.083
effectiveRatio0.083
79.69% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1723
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"softly"
2"suddenly"
3"truly"
4"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.28% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1723
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"down her spine"
count1
3
word"chaotic"
count1
4
word"charged"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"mask of indifference"
count1
8
word"reminder"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"raced"
count1
11
word"variables"
count1
12
word"firmly"
count1
highlights
0"echoed"
1"rhythmic"
2"down her spine"
3"chaotic"
4"charged"
5"throb"
6"flicker"
7"mask of indifference"
8"reminder"
9"electric"
10"raced"
11"variables"
12"firmly"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences84
matches(empty)
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences84
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1717
ratio0.001
matches
0"your"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.18% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions70
wordCount1193
uniqueNames22
maxNameDensity1.68
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Tuesday1
Oxford1
Ptolemy3
Cardiff2
Evan3
London2
Golden1
Empress1
Moreau1
Brick2
Lane2
Rory20
Lucien20
Eva2
Aurora1
Carter1
Avaros2
Marseille1
Moscow1
Southwark1
Let1
Bentley1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Evan"
2"Empress"
3"Moreau"
4"Rory"
5"Lucien"
6"Eva"
7"Aurora"
8"Carter"
9"Let"
places
0"Oxford"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Golden"
4"Brick"
5"Lane"
6"Marseille"
7"Moscow"
8"Bentley"
globalScore0.662
windowScore0.667
74.24% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like a more dangerous version of e"
1"tasted like smoke and secrets"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.582
wordCount1717
matches
0"Not a flat with three locks, but a place"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences100
matches
0"knew that whatever"
94.09% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs43
mean39.93
std19.14
cv0.479
sampleLengths
087
157
261
323
439
551
619
737
863
959
1031
1137
1255
1364
1413
1580
1651
1758
1844
1942
2035
2148
2232
2342
248
2531
2640
2765
2816
2941
3050
3141
3226
3316
349
3523
3660
3720
3816
3922
4022
4122
4261
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"was stressed"
63.25% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs195
matches
0"was building"
1"was indeed attempting"
2"was currently sniffing"
3"wasn't just hiding"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences100
ratio0.08
matches
0"Ptolemy was indeed attempting to squeeze past her shins to investigate the expensive scent of Lucien’s cologne—sandalwood and something sharper, something metallic."
1"He didn't lean on his cane; he held it like a scepter."
2"It was worse than hate; it was an exhausting, tethering longing."
3"His touch was warm—too warm for a human, a reminder of his lineage from the realm of Avaros."
4"And beneath the logic, there was the heat. The way Lucien looked at her—as if she were the only thing in the world that held any value. He didn't see a delivery girl or a broken survivor; he saw a partner."
5"He leaned in the rest of the way, and when his lips met hers, it wasn't the tentative kiss of a reunion. It was a claim—desperate, fierce, and tasting of everything Rory had missed. It was the heat of Avaros and the cold iron of London, a collision of worlds that left her breathless and clinging to his charcoal lapels."
6"\"The cat stays, or I stay,\" Rory countered, a spark of the old Rory—the one who bargained with demons—returning to her gaze."
7"Rory smiled, a real one this time, as she reached for her coat. The three deadbolts felt suddenly unnecessary. For the first time in months, she wasn't just hiding; she was moving again. And as she followed Lucien out into the humid, spice-laden night of Brick Lane, she knew that whatever happened next, the terms had finally changed in her favor."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1098
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"dim, spice-scented hallway"
1"small, crescent-shaped scar"
2"humid, spice-laden night"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03825136612021858
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.011839708561020037
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean17.17
std10.86
cv0.633
sampleLengths
015
19
226
330
47
58
66
721
822
925
1018
1118
123
1320
1419
1520
165
1715
1816
1915
2019
2125
2212
233
2422
2522
2616
273
2826
2912
3018
3118
3213
3315
344
3518
365
3712
3838
3921
403
4117
4223
4313
4410
4527
4611
4732
4822
499
41.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.26
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.10% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences79
matches
0"It was nearly eleven on"
1"She told herself she wasn't"
2"She had survived Cardiff, survived"
3"He was impeccably, almost offensively,"
4"His voice was a rich,"
5"He looked tired, though on"
6"he murmured, using the name"
7"She nudged the cat back"
8"She stepped aside."
9"He seemed to take up"
10"He stopped in the center"
11"He didn't lean on his"
12"she countered, walking past him"
13"She needed distance."
14"he said, his voice dropping"
15"She felt the small, crescent-shaped"
16"She turned, her blue eyes"
17"He moved toward her, his"
18"He stopped just outside her"
19"It was worse than hate;"
ratio0.38
16.96% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences79
matches
0"The first bolt slid back"
1"Rory paused, her fingers hovering"
2"It was nearly eleven on"
3"Eva was away in Oxford"
4"Rory turned the second deadbolt,"
5"She told herself she wasn't"
6"She had survived Cardiff, survived"
7"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
8"He was impeccably, almost offensively,"
9"The ivory handle of his"
10"His voice was a rich,"
11"Rory didn't step back, but"
12"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes searched hers."
13"The black one was a"
14"He looked tired, though on"
15"he murmured, using the name"
16"Rory looked down."
17"Ptolemy was indeed attempting to"
18"She nudged the cat back"
19"She stepped aside."
ratio0.886
63.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"Although, I suspect I am"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His voice was a rich, low cello note that skipped down her spine despite her best efforts to remain numb."
1"He leaned in the rest of the way, and when his lips met hers, it wasn't the tentative kiss of a reunion. It was a claim—desperate, fierce, and tasting of everyt…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
1"Lucien said, his amber eye glowing with a faint, demonic light"
2"Rory whispered, her heart hammering against her ribs like a trapped bird"
3"he conceded, his face dipping closer to hers"
4"she said, her voice steadying"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags14
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory snapped (snap)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
3"Lucien promised (promise)"
4"Rory whispered (whisper)"
5"he conceded (concede)"
6"Rory corrected (correct)"
7"Lucien sighed (sigh)"
dialogueSentences44
tagDensity0.318
leniency0.636
rawRatio0.571
effectiveRatio0.364
72.8634%