Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ956X7P3ZCB5CMJT734K6ZP

Run Details

Duration:
26.6s
Cost:
$0.002899
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The bolt slid back with a metallic click, then another, and a third. Rory Carter pulled the heavy oak door inward, bracing herself for the usual Friday night symphony of Brick Lane: the distant thrum of traffic, the sharper cries of vendors packing up, the clatter from the curry house downstairs. Tonight, however, the air outside carried a different scent – something sharp and clean, like ozone after a storm, cutting through the familiar spices. And standing just beyond the threshold, silhouetted against the dim glow of the hallway bulb, was Lucien Moreau. His platinum blond hair slicked back, glinting under the weak light. His tailored charcoal suit looked entirely out of place on the grimy landing, as did the ivory-handled cane held loosely in his hand, its smooth surface seemingly absorbing the surrounding grime without effect. Rory’s breath caught, a faint whisper lost in the sudden silence that fell between them, heavier than the weight of the three deadbolts she had just disengaged. "Lucien." The name was a question, a statement, a plea. Her bright blue eyes, usually sharp and assessing, widened fractionally, searching his face. The heterochromatic gaze met hers – one eye a warm amber, the other a startling, dark obsidian. He offered a slight incline of his head, a gesture that was less a greeting and more an acknowledgment of her surprise. "Aurora." His voice, a low murmur that still managed to command attention, was laced with an accent she knew well, from Marseille. It had always held an intoxicating danger. "You look... surprised." She blinked, a tiny movement that barely disturbed the frozen tableau. Surprised didn't quite cover the tremor that ran through her, the sudden chill despite the humid London evening. "What are you doing here?" The question was sharp, cutting through the politeness. This was Eva's flat, a sanctuary of sorts, crammed with ancient books and scrolls, smelling perpetually of cardamom and forgotten lives. It wasn't a place Lucien Moreau should be. He stepped forward, his polished shoes barely disturbing the threadbare rug. He didn't wait for an invitation, but then, he rarely did. He moved with an inherent grace, a predator’s economy of motion concealed beneath impeccable tailoring. His amber eye seemed to catch a stray glint of light from the ‘Curry King’ neon sign across the street, while the black one remained an impenetrable void. "A matter of mutual interest, perhaps?" His gaze swept around the cramped room, taking in the overflowing bookshelves, the stacks of papers threatening to slide from every horizontal surface, the faded cushions on the worn armchair. Ptolemy, Eva’s ginger tabby, emerged from beneath a precarious tower of leather-bound tomes, blinked at Lucien with the languid disdain only a cat can muster, then curled back into his slumber. Lucien’s lips twitched, a barely perceptible upward curve. "Ptolemy approves. He has excellent taste." Rory stood rooted to the spot by the doorway now, her hand still resting on the cool wood. Her scar, a small crescent on her left wrist, felt suddenly sensitive, a phantom echo of childhood scrapes. She pulled her hand back, tucking it into the pocket of her worn denim jeans. "Mutual interest? Lucien, I haven't seen you in-" She stopped herself. Months. Or was it over a year? Time blurred when she tried to pin it down. Especially time involving him. "This is Eva's flat. She’s not here." His attention returned to her, that impossibly steady gaze fixed on her face. He saw the flicker of confusion, the deeply buried hurt she tried to mask with a steely composure she usually reserved for dealing with difficult customers at the Golden Empress, or worse, her landlord. "I am aware Eva is not present. I was rather hoping *you* would be." The air thickened, charged with unspoken history. The attraction that had always hummed between them, a dangerous current beneath layers of caution and mistrust, seemed to surge in the confined space. He knew how to push her buttons, how to unsettle her carefully constructed calm. And she, in turn, knew how to meet his cool detachment with a defiance that usually amused him. "And what exactly did you think this 'mutual interest' entailed, showing up on a Friday night without so much as a warning?" Her voice remained level, betraying none of the jolt that had gone through her at the sight of him. She stepped aside, a grudging concession. The door, left ajar, began to swing shut with a soft click. "Perhaps I wanted to gauge your reaction." He took another step inside, the cane tapping lightly on the floorboards. The sound was soft but deliberate, like a heartbeat in the sudden quiet. He moved towards the back of the small living area, his eyes scanning a particularly dense stack of papers on a cluttered desk. "Or perhaps I have information that requires your immediate attention. Information, I might add, that could prove rather... illuminating." "Illuminating." Rory scoffed softly, too low for him to— she suspected he heard everything. He always did. She closed the door, the lock clicking shut definitively behind her, trapping them both in the narrow space with the scent of old paper and the lingering aroma of spices. "Your brand of 'illuminating' usually comes with a rather hefty price tag. And a trail of very complicated consequences." She pushed off the door frame, moving to lean against a bookshelf, willing herself to appear composed. Her shoulder brushed against the spines of ancient texts. Lucien turned from the desk, his gaze snagging on the small, faded crescent scar visible just above the cuff of her sleeve where it had ridden up slightly. He didn't comment, but she saw his eyes linger for a fraction of a second. A ghost of something – recognition? Regret? – flickered across his features, gone before she could properly register it. He straightened, his posture effortless. "Consequences are inherent to action, Aurora. You, of all people, should understand that. Particularly when certain... boundaries have been crossed." His tone was even, measured, carrying the weight of unspoken grievances. The air crackled. What boundaries? What had she crossed? Or had he? "Boundaries?" She met his gaze directly, her intelligence kicking in, dissecting his words, searching for the lie, the manipulation. "You’re the one who likes playing in the greyest of shadows, Lucien. I just deliver parcels and try to keep my head down." "And sometimes," he countered, his voice dropping almost to a whisper, "those parcels contain more than the customer expects. And keeping your head down doesn't shield you from the storm when the storm comes looking." He gestured with his cane towards a small, empty mug on a side table. "May I?" It was a polite request, utterly at odds with the electrifying tension that still thrummed between them. She gave a curt nod, turning back to Eva's overflowing bookshelves, needing something to ground her. She picked up a heavy, leather-bound volume, its title too faded to read, and pretended to examine it. Lucien moved to the small kitchen counter that served as Eva's workspace, peering at a heavily annotated map of London spread out amongst arcane diagrams. He poured water from a cheap kettle into the mug. His movements were precise, economical. He did not touch any of Eva’s notes, though his gaze lingered on them. "The information I possess pertains to unusual currents stirring within the city's underbelly," he began, speaking with his back still to her. "Elements that ripple outwards, affecting more than just the usual players. Elements that, I believe, have already brushed against your own particular... deliveries." Rory lowered the book. The Golden Empress. Her deliveries. She’d noticed odd things lately. Packages that seemed heavier than they should, clients who asked too many questions about the contents, routes that felt... watched. She'd dismissed it as paranoia, the natural consequence of living above a bar in this part of London. But Lucien was never one for coincidence. "You think my job has suddenly become dangerous?" She stepped away from the bookshelf, moving closer to the kitchen counter, closer to him. The cramped space felt smaller than ever. The faint scent of sandalwood and something else, something exotic and faintly metallic – Lucien’s personal scent, she realised – filled her senses, a disconcerting counterpoint to Eva’s incense. He turned, holding the mug. He didn't drink. His heterochromatic eyes assessed her, a subtle appraisal that made her skin prickle. "Dangerous is a relative term, Aurora. You have a knack for finding yourself in the eye of the storm, whether you seek it out or not. You always have. And this storm brewing," he took a step towards her, closing the distance between them until they stood mere feet apart, the space between them humming with an almost visible energy. "This one is particularly potent. It touches upon ancient lineage. Things Avaros would deem… problematic." Avaros. The realm Lucien’s father hailed from. A place neither human nor demon fully understood, a nexus of raw, untamed power. Rory swallowed, her throat suddenly dry. He rarely spoke of his heritage, and never so directly, never with such implication. "My deliveries are for Yu-Fei Cheung. Nothing arcane," she stated, her voice firm, a deliberate grounding in mundane reality. Lucien’s lips curved upwards, a genuine, if fleeting, smile that did little to soften the intensity of his gaze. "Are they? Or do you merely handle the final leg of a much longer, much older journey? Information, Aurora, travels on many routes. And sometimes, the delivery person becomes… integral to the package." He shifted his weight, leaning his hip against the counter, the ivory handle of his cane resting against his palm. The metal inlay on the handle gleamed faintly. "I came because *you* are integral. And because whatever this is, it’s too dangerous to navigate alone. And you, my dear Rory, tend to be rather stubborn when you believe you are in the right." "And you're offering your 'help'?" The sarcasm was thick, but beneath it hummed a dangerous curiosity. His offer; her history with him. It was a potent, volatile mix. She remembered the way he looked at her, the way he moved, the way he made her feel – seen, challenged, utterly captivated. And the crushing disappointment when that fascination curdled. "I am offering counsel. And a way out. Or perhaps, a way *through*. The choice, as always, is yours." His amber eye held a challenge, the black a silent plea. This was Lucien. Always leaving her with impossible choices, always making her want what she knew she shouldn't. The air in Eva's cramped flat felt charged, heavy with the past and the volatile present he had so carelessly, deliberately, injected into her life.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:04:28.923Z" 2/25/2026, 1:04:28 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"an accent she knew well [well]"
1"His gaze swept around [around]"
2"Rory scoffed softly [softly]"
3"She stepped away [away]"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.586
leniency1
rawRatio0.235
effectiveRatio0.235
66.29% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1780
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"loosely"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count3
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
3
adverb"lightly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count1
6
adverb"slightly"
count1
7
adverb"utterly"
count2
8
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"loosely"
1"suddenly"
2"carefully"
3"lightly"
4"softly"
5"very"
6"slightly"
7"utterly"
8"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
18.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1780
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"symphony"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"glinting"
count1
3
word"whisper"
count2
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"sanctuary"
count1
8
word"predator"
count1
9
word"glint"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"flicker"
count1
12
word"charged"
count2
13
word"unspoken"
count2
14
word"constructed"
count1
15
word"scanning"
count1
16
word"flickered"
count1
17
word"effortless"
count1
18
word"measured"
count1
19
word"tension"
count1
20
word"implication"
count1
21
word"fleeting"
count1
22
word"intensity"
count1
23
word"navigate"
count1
highlights
0"symphony"
1"familiar"
2"glinting"
3"whisper"
4"silence"
5"weight"
6"chill"
7"sanctuary"
8"predator"
9"glint"
10"echo"
11"flicker"
12"charged"
13"unspoken"
14"constructed"
15"scanning"
16"flickered"
17"effortless"
18"measured"
19"tension"
20"implication"
21"fleeting"
22"intensity"
23"navigate"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences104
matches
0"the flicker of confusion"
32.97% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences104
filterMatches
0"feel –"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
3"began to"
4"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences114
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen60
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords3
totalWords1787
ratio0.002
matches
0"you"
1"you"
2"through"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions41
wordCount1389
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.79
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Friday1
Brick1
Lane1
Lucien11
Moreau2
Marseille1
London3
Eva7
Ptolemy1
Months1
Golden2
Empress2
Rory6
Avaros1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Eva"
4"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
3"London"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
60.71% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences84
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"smooth surface seemingly absorbing the surro"
1"quite cover the tremor that ran through her, the sudden chill despite the humid London evening"
2"seemed heavier than they should, clients who asked too many questions about the contents, routes that felt"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.56
wordCount1787
matches
0"neither human nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences114
matches(empty)
64.44% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean59.57
std22.37
cv0.376
sampleLengths
075
118
271
340
422
532
671
765
881
989
1061
1163
1259
1374
1492
1567
1643
1742
1851
1951
2054
2145
2259
2359
2496
2541
2619
27115
2859
2973
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"was laced"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs225
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences114
ratio0.07
matches
0"Tonight, however, the air outside carried a different scent – something sharp and clean, like ozone after a storm, cutting through the familiar spices."
1"The heterochromatic gaze met hers – one eye a warm amber, the other a startling, dark obsidian."
2"\"Illuminating.\" Rory scoffed softly, too low for him to— she suspected he heard everything."
3"A ghost of something – recognition?"
4"– flickered across his features, gone before she could properly register it."
5"The faint scent of sandalwood and something else, something exotic and faintly metallic – Lucien’s personal scent, she realised – filled her senses, a disconcerting counterpoint to Eva’s incense."
6"His offer; her history with him."
7"She remembered the way he looked at her, the way he moved, the way he made her feel – seen, challenged, utterly captivated."
80.78% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1168
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, leather-bound volume,"
adverbCount59
adverbRatio0.05051369863013699
lyAdverbCount29
lyAdverbRatio0.02482876712328767
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences114
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences114
mean15.68
std11.43
cv0.729
sampleLengths
013
138
224
318
411
533
627
710
813
917
1022
1122
127
133
1411
1518
1613
1721
188
1911
2011
2115
2228
2336
2431
258
266
2718
2818
2915
3011
311
326
339
344
357
3613
3734
3814
397
4024
4114
4218
4341
446
4512
4619
4713
4823
4919
50.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.3508771929824561
totalSentences114
uniqueOpeners40
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Especially time involving him."
1"Always leaving her with impossible"
ratio0.02
3.67% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount53
totalSentences98
matches
0"His platinum blond hair slicked"
1"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
2"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
3"He offered a slight incline"
4"His voice, a low murmur"
5"It had always held an"
6"She blinked, a tiny movement"
7"It wasn't a place Lucien"
8"He stepped forward, his polished"
9"He didn't wait for an"
10"He moved with an inherent"
11"His amber eye seemed to"
12"His gaze swept around the"
13"Her scar, a small crescent"
14"She pulled her hand back,"
15"She stopped herself"
16"His attention returned to her,"
17"He saw the flicker of"
18"He knew how to push"
19"Her voice remained level, betraying"
ratio0.541
16.12% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount87
totalSentences98
matches
0"The bolt slid back with"
1"Rory Carter pulled the heavy"
2"Tonight, however, the air outside"
3"His platinum blond hair slicked"
4"His tailored charcoal suit looked"
5"Rory’s breath caught, a faint"
6"The name was a question,"
7"Her bright blue eyes, usually"
8"The heterochromatic gaze met hers"
9"He offered a slight incline"
10"His voice, a low murmur"
11"It had always held an"
12"She blinked, a tiny movement"
13"The question was sharp, cutting"
14"This was Eva's flat, a"
15"It wasn't a place Lucien"
16"He stepped forward, his polished"
17"He didn't wait for an"
18"He moved with an inherent"
19"His amber eye seemed to"
ratio0.888
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
68.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Rory’s breath caught, a faint whisper lost in the sudden silence that fell between them, heavier than the weight of the three deadbolts she had just disengaged."
1"He offered a slight incline of his head, a gesture that was less a greeting and more an acknowledgment of her surprise."
2"The attraction that had always hummed between them, a dangerous current beneath layers of caution and mistrust, seemed to surge in the confined space."
3"Lucien moved to the small kitchen counter that served as Eva's workspace, peering at a heavily annotated map of London spread out amongst arcane diagrams."
4"His heterochromatic eyes assessed her, a subtle appraisal that made her skin prickle."
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He took, the cane tapping lightly on the floorboards"
1"he countered, his voice dropping almost to a whisper,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she stated (state)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.069
69.8921%