| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | |
| 95.32% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 2139 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 36.89% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 2139 | | totalAiIsms | 27 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "chaotic" | | 2 | "rhythmic" | | 3 | "echoed" | | 4 | "mechanical" | | 5 | "flicker" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "scanning" | | 8 | "charged" | | 9 | "unreadable" | | 10 | "fractured" | | 11 | "familiar" | | 12 | "tension" | | 13 | "marble" | | 14 | "warmth" | | 15 | "reminder" | | 16 | "shattered" | | 17 | "silence" | | 18 | "chill" | | 19 | "potential" | | 20 | "gloom" | | 21 | "weight" | | 22 | "glint" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 3 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
| | 2 | | label | "sent a shiver through" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "hung in the air" | | 2 | "sent a jolt through" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 46.70% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 6 | | narrationSentences | 104 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 145 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 43 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 2131 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 10 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 92.02% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 1466 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.16 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Ptolemy | 3 | | Thames | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | Eva | 2 | | Lucien | 13 | | Rory | 17 | | Victorian | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Ten | 1 | | Bells | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Ptolemy" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Eva" | | 3 | "Lucien" | | 4 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Brick" | | 1 | "Lane" | | 2 | "Thames" | | 3 | "Marseille" | | 4 | "Ten" | | 5 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.92 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 9.55% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 89 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "looked like a king waiting for an audienc" | | 1 | "tasted like copper in her mouth" | | 2 | "felt like heated marble" | | 3 | "felt like a physical chill" | | 4 | "felt like they finally had room to expa" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 2131 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 145 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 79 | | mean | 26.97 | | std | 18.4 | | cv | 0.682 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 87 | | 1 | 11 | | 2 | 60 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 41 | | 5 | 73 | | 6 | 16 | | 7 | 20 | | 8 | 34 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 18 | | 12 | 45 | | 13 | 18 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 15 | | 16 | 57 | | 17 | 32 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 42 | | 20 | 24 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 44 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 43 | | 25 | 38 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 1 | | 30 | 35 | | 31 | 31 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 39 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 43 | | 37 | 27 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 12 | | 41 | 24 | | 42 | 17 | | 43 | 9 | | 44 | 38 | | 45 | 17 | | 46 | 9 | | 47 | 62 | | 48 | 15 | | 49 | 34 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 104 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 229 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 24.63% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 145 | | ratio | 0.041 | | matches | | 0 | "Beyond the wood, the chaotic noise of Brick Lane—shouted barters and the occasional screech of a motorbike—muffled her own ragged breathing." | | 1 | "That sequence—two sharp raps followed by a dragging pause—belonged to a man who lived in the shadows of the city’s supernatural commerce." | | 2 | "He didn't look like a man who had been missing for half a year; he looked like a king waiting for an audience in a tenement slum." | | 3 | "He didn't wait for permission; he simply occupied the space Rory occupied, his height forcing her to step back or be brushed by his sleeve." | | 4 | "She felt the strength there—the inhuman power held back by nothing but a tailored suit and a silver-topped cane." | | 5 | "He didn't kiss her, but the threat—or the promise—of it hung in the air like a bared blade." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1485 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "ancient, leather-bound scrolls," | | 1 | "cool, spice-laden air" |
| | adverbCount | 34 | | adverbRatio | 0.022895622895622896 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.006734006734006734 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 145 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 145 | | mean | 14.7 | | std | 8.39 | | cv | 0.571 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 7 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 8 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 14 | | 15 | 17 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 11 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 20 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 5 | | 24 | 18 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 18 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 29 | | 32 | 18 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 3 | | 37 | 25 | | 38 | 14 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 27 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 24 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 20 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 41.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.21379310344827587 | | totalSentences | 145 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 32.36% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, his gaze drifted past" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 56.89% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 42 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She reached down to scratch" | | 1 | "Her hand tightened around the" | | 2 | "She hadn't heard that sound" | | 3 | "She worked the locks in" | | 4 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 5 | "He didn't look like a" | | 6 | "She didn't invite him in." | | 7 | "Her pulse hammered against the" | | 8 | "He took in the precarious" | | 9 | "He stepped forward." | | 10 | "He didn't wait for permission;" | | 11 | "She chose the step back," | | 12 | "He turned to face her" | | 13 | "He looked at a stack" | | 14 | "Her hands shook as she" | | 15 | "He stopped just outside the" | | 16 | "She leaned against the counter," | | 17 | "He was close enough now" | | 18 | "He reached out, his gloved" | | 19 | "He didn't smile." |
| | ratio | 0.408 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 97 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked into" | | 1 | "Rory leaned her forehead against" | | 2 | "She reached down to scratch" | | 3 | "The tabby cat sat on" | | 4 | "A rhythmic tap-tap-tap echoed from" | | 5 | "Her hand tightened around the" | | 6 | "That sequence—two sharp raps followed" | | 7 | "She hadn't heard that sound" | | 8 | "The tapping repeated." | | 9 | "Rory reached for the first" | | 10 | "The metal felt ice-cold." | | 11 | "She worked the locks in" | | 12 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 13 | "His platinum hair caught the" | | 14 | "The ivory handle of his" | | 15 | "He didn't look like a" | | 16 | "Rory pushed the door wider," | | 17 | "She didn't invite him in." | | 18 | "Her pulse hammered against the" | | 19 | "Lucien tilted his head." |
| | ratio | 0.942 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 68.23% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "That sequence—two sharp raps followed by a dragging pause—belonged to a man who lived in the shadows of the city’s supernatural commerce." | | 1 | "She chose the step back, a retreat that tasted like copper in her mouth." | | 2 | "He stripped the glove from his right hand, revealing skin that looked human but felt like heated marble." | | 3 | "The heat of him poured into her, a seductive, dangerous warmth that made her want to lean in and scream all at once." | | 4 | "The kettle began to shriek, a high-pitched alarm that shattered the silence." | | 5 | "Rory pulled back just enough to look at him, her blue eyes searching his face for the broker, the liar, and the man who had sat with her on a pier six months ag…" | | 6 | "She watched him until he vanished around the corner toward the Ten Bells, her hand resting on the glass, her heart beating a rhythm that sounded suspiciously li…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 0 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |