| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.079 | | leniency | 0.158 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 90.83% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1636 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "really" | | 2 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.04% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1636 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "vibrated" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "stark" | | 3 | "flicker" | | 4 | "fluttered" | | 5 | "grave" | | 6 | "pulse" | | 7 | "charged" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "tracing" | | 10 | "firmly" | | 11 | "flickered" | | 12 | "weight" | | 13 | "could feel" | | 14 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 95.76% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 126 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 37 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1632 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 72.21% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 46 | | wordCount | 1157 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.56 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Eva | 5 | | French | 1 | | Moreau | 1 | | London | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Hoarder | 1 | | Soho | 1 | | Brick | 1 | | Lane | 1 | | Savile | 1 | | Row | 1 | | Lucien | 13 | | Whitechapel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Moreau" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Hoarder" | | 4 | "Row" | | 5 | "Lucien" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Soho" | | 2 | "Brick" | | 3 | "Lane" | | 4 | "Savile" |
| | globalScore | 0.722 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 85.06% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like an oven door left open" | | 1 | "felt like it was melting into something" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1632 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 126 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 65 | | mean | 25.11 | | std | 20.16 | | cv | 0.803 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 66 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 77 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 43 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 54 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 9 | | 13 | 71 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 50 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 27 | | 22 | 11 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 57 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 14 | | 29 | 44 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 53 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 11 | | 35 | 15 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 3 | | 38 | 15 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 23 | | 42 | 64 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 16 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 55 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 58 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 184 | | matches | | |
| 52.15% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 126 | | ratio | 0.032 | | matches | | 0 | "The flat was a Hoarder’s dream of occult research—books lined every wall, and loose parchment fluttered in the draft from the window." | | 1 | "Rory watched his hands—long, elegant fingers that she knew were capable of snapping bone or tracing the line of a spine with equal precision." | | 2 | "The scent of him was overwhelming—a mix of cold night air and that lingering, infernal heat." | | 3 | "Lucien’s hands were everywhere now—her waist, her thighs, her face." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1167 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 25 | | adverbRatio | 0.021422450728363324 | | lyAdverbCount | 6 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.005141388174807198 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 126 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 126 | | mean | 12.95 | | std | 6.56 | | cv | 0.506 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 18 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 3 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 28 | | 8 | 16 | | 9 | 11 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 14 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 17 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 18 | | 21 | 14 | | 22 | 17 | | 23 | 24 | | 24 | 14 | | 25 | 8 | | 26 | 22 | | 27 | 10 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 13 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 11 | | 33 | 5 | | 34 | 30 | | 35 | 18 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 11 | | 40 | 5 | | 41 | 12 | | 42 | 22 | | 43 | 11 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 42.86% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 9 | | diversityRatio | 0.24603174603174602 | | totalSentences | 126 | | uniqueOpeners | 31 | |
| 37.04% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, she leaned into him," |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 64.44% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 35 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "She cracked the door an" | | 1 | "His slicked-back platinum hair caught" | | 2 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 3 | "His voice carried that low," | | 4 | "She didn't widen the gap." | | 5 | "He didn't ask for permission." | | 6 | "He stepped forward, forcing Rory" | | 7 | "She retreated into the cramped" | | 8 | "He looked out of place" | | 9 | "She crossed her arms, fingers" | | 10 | "Her pulse thrummed against the" | | 11 | "He reached out, the silver" | | 12 | "He took a half-step closer." | | 13 | "It was empty and cold." | | 14 | "She set it back down" | | 15 | "He reached into his inner" | | 16 | "He pulled out a folded" | | 17 | "She looked at the floor," | | 18 | "He reached out, his thumb" | | 19 | "His thumb was rough, a" |
| | ratio | 0.389 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 83 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | 0 | "The third deadbolt clicked into" | | 1 | "Rory froze, her hand still" | | 2 | "Shadows from the streetlamp outside" | | 3 | "Eva didn't knock." | | 4 | "Eva fumbled with her keys" | | 5 | "Rory wiped her palms on" | | 6 | "She cracked the door an" | | 7 | "The stench of garam masala" | | 8 | "Lucien Moreau stood in the" | | 9 | "His slicked-back platinum hair caught" | | 10 | "He leaned on his ivory-handled" | | 11 | "His voice carried that low," | | 12 | "She didn't widen the gap." | | 13 | "Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes narrowed." | | 14 | "The amber one glowed with" | | 15 | "He didn't ask for permission." | | 16 | "He stepped forward, forcing Rory" | | 17 | "Rory slammed the door shut" | | 18 | "She retreated into the cramped" | | 19 | "Ptolemy, the tabby cat, let" |
| | ratio | 0.922 | |
| 55.56% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | | | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 59.52% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 60 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Shadows from the streetlamp outside filtered through the frosted glass, outlining a broad-shouldered silhouette that didn't belong to Eva." | | 1 | "The stench of garam masala from the curry house below wafted into the hallway, mingling with a scent that made her heart stutter: sandalwood and expensive Frenc…" | | 2 | "He reached out, his thumb catching her chin, forcing her to look up." | | 3 | "He reached past her, his hand grasping the edge of the desk on either side of her hips, pinning her into the small space." | | 4 | "Rory reached up, her hand finding the back of his neck, pulling him down the final inch." | | 5 | "The kiss was desperate, a collision of teeth and tongue that tasted of salt and old regrets." | | 6 | "Lucien groaned into her mouth, a low, demonic sound that vibrated in his chest." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "she whispered, her voice losing its edge" |
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| 97.37% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "she warned (warn)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 38 | | tagDensity | 0.079 | | leniency | 0.158 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.105 | |