Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95830Q783BBXS6XGBFCA5C

Run Details

Duration:
27.2s
Cost:
$0.011156
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt clicked into place, but the wood of the door vibrated under a heavy, rhythmic knock. Rory froze, her hand still clamped over the brass knob. Shadows from the streetlamp outside filtered through the frosted glass, outlining a broad-shouldered silhouette that didn't belong to Eva. Eva didn't knock. Eva fumbled with her keys and cursed at the temperamental lock until the door gave way. Rory wiped her palms on her jeans and checked the chain. She cracked the door an inch. The stench of garam masala from the curry house below wafted into the hallway, mingling with a scent that made her heart stutter: sandalwood and expensive French tobacco. Lucien Moreau stood in the dimly lit corridor, a stark contrast to the peeling floral wallpaper. His slicked-back platinum hair caught the flicker of the overhead bulb. He leaned on his ivory-handled cane, the charcoal wool of his suit jacket perfectly smooth despite the humidity of the London night. "The locks are new." His voice carried that low, melodic rasp that used to vibrate in Rory’s marrow. She didn't widen the gap. "The neighborhood’s gone downhill. Or so I thought until a demon showed up on my porch." Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes narrowed. The amber one glowed with a faint, predatory heat while the black one remained a bottomless pit. He didn't ask for permission. He stepped forward, forcing Rory to either unlatch the chain or let him talk to the wood. "Six months, Aurora. You haven't picked up a single burner phone." "I was busy reinventing myself as someone who doesn't deal with information brokers who sell out their partners." Rory slammed the door shut to slide the chain off, then swung it wide. She retreated into the cramped living room of Eva's flat, tripping over a stack of leather-bound grimoires. Ptolemy, the tabby cat, let out a protest of a meow from his perch atop a pile of scrolls and vanished into the kitchen. Lucien followed her, his cane tapping a steady, authoritative beat against the scuffed floorboards. He looked out of place in the mess. The flat was a Hoarder’s dream of occult research—books lined every wall, and loose parchment fluttered in the draft from the window. Lucien surveyed the chaos with a twitch of his lip. "You’re living in a paper grave." "It’s cozy. Helps me forget the smell of Avaros." Rory turned on him, her back hitting the edge of a mahogany desk. She crossed her arms, fingers digging into the denim of her sleeves. Her pulse thrummed against the crescent scar on her left wrist. Lucien stopped two paces away. The air between them grew thick, charged with the static of things left unsaid in Soho, under a rain-slicked awning where he’d told her to run and never look back. He reached out, the silver head of his cane pointed toward a stack of papers near her hip. "You left your jacket at my place. The one with the silk lining." "Keep it. Burn it. Give it to one of your sirens." "I kept it in the wardrobe." Lucien’s gaze dropped to her throat, watching the way she swallowed. He took a half-step closer. The heat radiating from him felt like an oven door left open. In the cramped confines of the Brick Lane flat, he felt mountainous, a predatory force of nature contained in Savile Row tailoring. "I didn't come here to discuss fashion, Aurora. You’re in trouble." "I’m always in trouble when you’re around, Lucien. It’s your primary export." Rory reached for a ceramic mug on the desk, needing something to hold. It was empty and cold. She set it back down with a sharp clack. "How did you find me? Eva swore she’d scrubbed my trail." "Eva is a talented witch, but she enjoys her curry from the same shop every Tuesday. Habits are beacons." Lucien leaned his cane against a stack of encyclopedias. He reached into his inner breast pocket, his movements fluid and deliberate. Rory watched his hands—long, elegant fingers that she knew were capable of snapping bone or tracing the line of a spine with equal precision. He pulled out a folded piece of parchment and held it out. "Don't." Rory shoved her hands into her pockets. "I’m out. I deliver noodles now. I deal in soy sauce and spring rolls, not soul debts or underworld politics." "The Golden Empress won't protect you from what’s coming. Evan is looking for you." The name hit her like a physical blow. The room seemed to shrink, the walls of books closing in. Rory’s breath hitched, a jagged sound in the quiet apartment. She looked at the floor, focusing on a coffee stain shaped like a crescent moon. "He doesn't know where I am. He thinks I’m still in Cardiff." "He has a new patron. Someone with deep pockets and a long reach into the Avaros realms. They’ve put a price on the girl who walked out of the Lion’s Den with a briefcase full of secrets." Lucien took another step. Now, he was firmly in her personal space. The scent of him was overwhelming—a mix of cold night air and that lingering, infernal heat. He reached out, his thumb catching her chin, forcing her to look up. His thumb was rough, a contrast to the polish of his appearance. "I told you to go to Paris. I had a flat waiting for you." "I don't take charity from demons who lie to my face." Rory jerked her head back, breaking the contact. The spot where he’d touched her tingled. "You said it was a simple courier job. You didn't mention the briefcase was chained to a dead man’s ghost." "I didn't know." The black eye flickered. For a second, the mask of the cool, detached fixer slipped. "I would have told you, Rory. I have many flaws, but I don't send you into a slaughterhouse without a knife." "You sent me away afterward. You didn't even say goodbye." "The contract required your absence. If you were with me, you were a target. If you were gone, you were just a ghost." Lucien’s voice dropped an octave, turning into something intimate and dangerous. He reached past her, his hand grasping the edge of the desk on either side of her hips, pinning her into the small space. He didn't touch her, but the proximity was a weight of its own. Rory could see the fine lines around his eyes, the slight silver sheen of his pupils. "I spent six months making sure nobody followed you. And then Evan started whispering in the wrong ears." "And you just happen to be the one to hear it? How convenient for your commission." "I’m not working for anyone on this, you stubborn girl." He leaned down, his face inches from hers. Rory could feel the warmth of his breath against her lips. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. She hated how easily he dismantled her defenses, how the anger she’d nursed for half a year felt like it was melting into something far more volatile. "Why are you really here, Lucien?" "Because I find I dislike London when you aren't in it." The admission was a jagged thing, unpolished and sharp. It didn't fit the man in the charcoal suit. Rory reached out, her fingers brushing the lapel of his jacket. The fabric was soft, expensive. Beneath it, she felt the hard muscle of his chest and the steady, slow thump of a heart that beat slower than a human’s. "You’re a liar," she whispered, her voice losing its edge. "I am. About many things. But not about the way I feel when I think of you in a cage." He shifted, his hand moving from the desk to her waist. The touch was firm, possessive. Rory didn't pull away. Instead, she leaned into him, the friction of his suit against her thin t-shirt sparking a fire she’d tried to douse months ago. "You shouldn't have come," she said, even as she tilted her head back. "I never was very good at doing what I should." Lucien’s hand slid up her back, his fingers tangling in her short black hair. He pulled her closer, eliminating the last of the air between them. The ivory cane clattered to the floor, forgotten. Outside, a siren wailed through the streets of Whitechapel, and the muffled thump of bass from a passing car vibrated through the floorboards. Inside the flat, the only sound was the frantic rustle of Rory’s breath and the scratch of Lucien’s stubble as he pressed his forehead against hers. "If I stay, they’ll come for both of us," she warned. "Let them. I’ve been looking for a reason to burn something down." Rory reached up, her hand finding the back of his neck, pulling him down the final inch. The kiss was desperate, a collision of teeth and tongue that tasted of salt and old regrets. It wasn't soft. It was the breaking of a dam. Lucien groaned into her mouth, a low, demonic sound that vibrated in his chest. He hoisted her up onto the desk, scattering a pile of Eva’s research notes. Ptolemy hissed from the kitchen doorway, but neither of them noticed. Lucien’s hands were everywhere now—her waist, her thighs, her face. He pulled back for a second, his amber eye burning like a coal. "Tell me to leave, Rory. Say it now, and I’ll walk out that door and you’ll never see me again." Rory looked at him, at the monster and the man, at the only person who had ever made her feel like more than a delivery girl or a victim. She wrapped her legs around his waist, pulling him back into the heat. "Shut up, Lucien."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags3
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.04% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsms17
found
0
word"vibrated"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"flicker"
count1
4
word"fluttered"
count1
5
word"grave"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"firmly"
count1
11
word"flickered"
count1
12
word"weight"
count1
13
word"could feel"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"rhythmic"
2"stark"
3"flicker"
4"fluttered"
5"grave"
6"pulse"
7"charged"
8"silk"
9"tracing"
10"firmly"
11"flickered"
12"weight"
13"could feel"
14"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences91
matches
0"was desperate"
95.76% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences91
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1632
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
72.21% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions46
wordCount1157
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva5
French1
Moreau1
London1
Rory18
Hoarder1
Soho1
Brick1
Lane1
Savile1
Row1
Lucien13
Whitechapel1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Hoarder"
4"Row"
5"Lucien"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"Brick"
3"Lane"
4"Savile"
globalScore0.722
windowScore0.833
85.06% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences77
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like an oven door left open"
1"felt like it was melting into something"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1632
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences126
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean25.11
std20.16
cv0.803
sampleLengths
066
117
277
34
419
516
643
711
818
955
1054
116
129
1371
1418
1513
1611
176
1850
1911
2012
2127
2211
2319
2457
251
267
2720
2814
2944
3012
3137
3253
3314
3411
3515
3620
373
3815
3921
4010
4123
4264
4318
4416
4510
4655
476
4811
4958
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs184
matches
0"was overwhelming"
52.15% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences126
ratio0.032
matches
0"The flat was a Hoarder’s dream of occult research—books lined every wall, and loose parchment fluttered in the draft from the window."
1"Rory watched his hands—long, elegant fingers that she knew were capable of snapping bone or tracing the line of a spine with equal precision."
2"The scent of him was overwhelming—a mix of cold night air and that lingering, infernal heat."
3"Lucien’s hands were everywhere now—her waist, her thighs, her face."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1167
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.021422450728363324
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.005141388174807198
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean12.95
std6.56
cv0.506
sampleLengths
018
110
219
33
416
511
66
728
816
911
1022
114
1214
135
1416
154
1617
175
1817
1911
2018
2114
2217
2324
2414
258
2622
2710
286
299
3013
3112
3211
335
3430
3518
3613
3711
386
3911
405
4112
4222
4311
4412
4513
465
479
4811
4919
42.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.24603174603174602
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners31
37.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Instead, she leaned into him,"
ratio0.011
64.44% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences90
matches
0"She cracked the door an"
1"His slicked-back platinum hair caught"
2"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
3"His voice carried that low,"
4"She didn't widen the gap."
5"He didn't ask for permission."
6"He stepped forward, forcing Rory"
7"She retreated into the cramped"
8"He looked out of place"
9"She crossed her arms, fingers"
10"Her pulse thrummed against the"
11"He reached out, the silver"
12"He took a half-step closer."
13"It was empty and cold."
14"She set it back down"
15"He reached into his inner"
16"He pulled out a folded"
17"She looked at the floor,"
18"He reached out, his thumb"
19"His thumb was rough, a"
ratio0.389
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount83
totalSentences90
matches
0"The third deadbolt clicked into"
1"Rory froze, her hand still"
2"Shadows from the streetlamp outside"
3"Eva didn't knock."
4"Eva fumbled with her keys"
5"Rory wiped her palms on"
6"She cracked the door an"
7"The stench of garam masala"
8"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
9"His slicked-back platinum hair caught"
10"He leaned on his ivory-handled"
11"His voice carried that low,"
12"She didn't widen the gap."
13"Lucien’s heterochromatic eyes narrowed."
14"The amber one glowed with"
15"He didn't ask for permission."
16"He stepped forward, forcing Rory"
17"Rory slammed the door shut"
18"She retreated into the cramped"
19"Ptolemy, the tabby cat, let"
ratio0.922
55.56% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences90
matches
0"Now, he was firmly in"
ratio0.011
59.52% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Shadows from the streetlamp outside filtered through the frosted glass, outlining a broad-shouldered silhouette that didn't belong to Eva."
1"The stench of garam masala from the curry house below wafted into the hallway, mingling with a scent that made her heart stutter: sandalwood and expensive Frenc…"
2"He reached out, his thumb catching her chin, forcing her to look up."
3"He reached past her, his hand grasping the edge of the desk on either side of her hips, pinning her into the small space."
4"Rory reached up, her hand finding the back of his neck, pulling him down the final inch."
5"The kiss was desperate, a collision of teeth and tongue that tasted of salt and old regrets."
6"Lucien groaned into her mouth, a low, demonic sound that vibrated in his chest."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags3
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she whispered, her voice losing its edge"
97.37% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she warned (warn)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.105
80.0285%