Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ958VF68CMJGE71SNZWKCSX

Run Details

Duration:
28.3s
Cost:
$0.013015
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon sign hummed, casting a faint glow onto the wet pavement outside The Raven’s Nest. Inside, the air hung thick with the scent of aged wood and stale hops, comforting and familiar. Rory ran a damp cloth across the polished bar, her movements economical, muscle memory guiding her hands. She hummed a low tune, a familiar melody picked up from the jukebox. Her straight shoulder-length black hair swayed rhythmically with her actions. Silas polished a tumbler behind the bar, his silver signet ring flashing under the dim lights as his wrist turned. He moved with a slight limp, his gaze distant. The door swung inward, letting in a sudden gust of London chill and a blast of late-night street noise. Rory glanced up, expecting another regular, then froze. The smile she’d been cultivating for incoming patrons simply died. A man stood framed in the doorway, a stranger to this place, yet painfully familiar to her. He wore a charcoal suit, expensive wool draped over a frame that had broadened, a subtle layer of adult weight smoothing out the sharp angles of his youth. His hair, once a shaggy mess, now lay impeccably styled, a sheen of product catching the light. Rory remembered it untamed, falling into eyes that held genuine mischief. His gaze swept the room, dismissive of the old maps and black-and-white photos until it landed on her. A slow, uncertain smile bloomed across his face, a movement that felt alien on his mouth. “Rory?” The name, a half-whisper, cut through the quiet hum of the bar. It sounded distant, a ghost from another life. Rory’s breath caught. Her hands tightened on the cloth. The crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, usually forgotten, suddenly felt a sharp awareness. “Liam.” He strolled deeper into the room, his expensive leather shoes quiet on the worn floorboards. He carried himself with a new confidence, a measured stride that announced his arrival. His eyes, she saw now, held a hardness, a knowing glint that hadn’t been there before. He stopped a few feet from the bar, close enough for her to catch the expensive tang of his cologne, a sharp contrast to the earthy scents of the pub. “It is you. I wasn’t sure. Heard you’d vanished.” He gestured vaguely, his hand sweeping towards the city beyond the bar’s walls. That gestured held a hint of judgment. “I’m here.” She looked at him, truly looked, the boy from Cardiff replaced by this impeccably tailored man. His expression, once open, now shielded something. “Here, in Soho. Running a bar?” He arched a dark brow, amusement playing on his lips, though his eyes remained unsmiling. “I work here. Sometimes.” The words came out flat. Silas, a silent sentinel, placed the polished tumbler upside down on the shelf. He looked at Rory, then at Liam, his hazel eyes unreadable. He remained quiet, letting the scene unfold. Liam let out a soft laugh, a sound that grated. “Right. Not exactly Pre-Law at Cardiff, is it?” He pulled out a stool, the scrape of wood on wood loud in the sudden silence. “Pint of whatever’s strongest.” Rory moved, the action stiff, pulling a fresh glass. “You still drink that cheap lager, then?” Her voice gained a sarcastic edge, a defensive shield. He leaned forward on the bar, forearms neatly cuffed. A heavy silver watch glinted on his wrist. “Sometimes a man needs to remember his roots.” His eyes met hers, a complicated glint held within them. “Guess you’ve forgotten yours.” She slammed the pint glass onto the counter. The stout flowed, a rich dark stream. “I remember plenty.” The image of dripping grey skies and endless university halls, the suffocating politeness of her parents’ home, and the chilling grip of Evan’s hand flashed through her mind. “Do you?” Liam picked up the glass, took a long swallow, the foam clinging to his neat moustache. “Because last I heard, you’d packed a single bag and vanished. No note. No goodbye. Just… gone.” He spoke slowly, deliberately, each word a stone in a well. “What was I supposed to say, Liam? ‘Sorry, heading to London to avoid a breakdown’?” She hated the tremor in her voice, the way his presence unravelled her carefully constructed composure. She tightened her grip on the cloth, knuckles white. “A call might have been nice. Your parents were worried sick. Your mother, especially.” He took another drink, his gaze steady over the rim of the glass. “Still the same, then. Running when things get tough.” Her bright blue eyes flashed. “Things got more than tough. They got dangerous.” “Did they?” He put the glass down, a distinct challenge in the soft clink. “Or did you just get cold feet about getting serious? About Evan, about your degree, about… life.” “You have no idea what you’re talking about.” Her voice dropped to a low growl, her hands flexing. Liam leaned back, a casual pose that felt entirely too calculated. “I think I do. I was there. We all were. You were so bright, Rory. So fierce. And then… you just broke.” “I didn’t break. I survived.” She leaned across the bar, her face inches from his. “And what about you, Liam? Still chasing the ghost of your father’s approval? Still wearing that expensive suit he bought you?” His smile vanished. A flicker of something cold, something she hadn’t seen in him before, crossed his face. “I built this, Rory. Every thread of this suit, every penny in my bank account. Nothing was given.” He tapped the watch. “And I didn’t run from anything. I stayed. I faced it.” “You stayed in Cardiff. In that… suffocating little world.” She felt a renewed surge of the old resentment, the feeling of being trapped. Each word was a lash. “It’s called loyalty. Commitment. Something you seemed to struggle with.” He picked up his pint again, his hand steady. “You know, Evan actually missed you. Even after everything. He tried for weeks.” A cold dread seeped into Rory. Her scar pulsed faintly. “Don’t you dare.” “He was lost without you. Said you were the only one who truly understood him.” Liam offered a brittle shrug, an infuriating mimicry of casual indifference. “Of course, he quickly moved on. Found someone else to replace you. Someone less prone to dramatics.” Rory inhaled sharply, the sharp scent of stale beer suddenly cloying. She remembered the bruising grip, the shouting, the terror that had driven her across the country. Liam sat there, an embodiment of the past she had desperately tried to outrun, and he was rewriting it. “You always did have a knack for twisting things.” Her voice was tight with suppressed fury. “He wasn’t lost. He was controlling. Abusive.” The words hung in the air, heavy and raw. Liam’s expression remained infuriatingly neutral, a mask of polished disdain. “Such strong words, Rory. Always the dramatist. Is that what you tell yourself to sleep at night? To justify abandoning everything?” “I justified it by living. By breathing. By not being trapped in a life that suffocated me.” She grabbed a rag, scrubbing furiously at a nonexistent smudge on the counter. The rhythmic friction created a counterpoint to the racing beat of her heart. “And this is living?” He gestured around the dimly lit bar, his eyes lingering on the old maps and faded photos. “This bohemian escape? You used to talk about the High Court, Rory. About making a real difference. Now you’re pouring pints in a back alley.” “It’s honest work, Liam. And I make a difference in my own way.” Her gaze drifted to Silas, who now watched them openly, his calm presence a quiet anchor. “It’s more than you can say for the soulless corporate ladder you’ve undoubtedly climbed.” He let out a short, sharp laugh, devoid of any real humor. “Spoken like a true romantic. Still dreaming, even after the world chewed you up and spat you out.” He took another long swig of his beer, the taste metallic on her own tongue just from watching him. “Funny, I thought you’d be past all that. I thought London would have hardened you.” “London taught me what matters, Liam. And it’s not status or money or pretending the past away.” She met his gaze, her blue eyes unwavering. “It’s about protecting yourself. And those you care about.” “Protecting yourself by vanishing? Sounds like a convenient excuse to me.” A sneer twisted his lips. “You know, it’s a shame. We all thought you had potential. Real potential.” Potential. The word echoed from a lifetime ago, a heavy cloak draped over her shoulders. She had felt its weight, its promise, before everything unravelled. “And what do you think I have now, Liam?” She pushed the last of her anger down, replacing it with a cold, almost detached curiosity. She wanted to see how far he would go. He leaned back, assessing her, taking in her simple jeans, the practical trainers, sensing the lack of the corporate sheen he now wore like a second skin. “You’re different. Harder, yes. But… smaller.” He gestured to her, a dismissive flick of his wrist. “You used to fill a room, Rory. Command it. Now you blend into the shadows, a ghost of what you could have been.” The insult landed with brutal precision, a direct hit to the lingering doubts she battled during sleepless nights. He saw her flight as defeat, her survival as shrinkage. She felt the bitter taste of unshed tears sting her eyes, but she blinked them back, refusing him that victory. “Maybe I just learned there are other ways to be big than making noise in a courtroom.” Her voice was quiet now, a steady rumble beneath the surface. “Maybe I found peace somewhere you can’t even imagine.” He drained his pint, pushing the empty glass forward. “Peace, or just resignation?” Liam rose, grabbing his coat from the adjacent stool. The expensive fabric rustled. He moved towards the door, his movements sharp and precise. “And you, Liam?” She watched him, a knot tightening in her stomach. “Have you found peace? Or just a bigger office?” He paused at the threshold, the neon sign painting him in an eerie green glow for a moment. He didn't turn back, his shoulder a rigid line. “Some of us just get on with it, Rory. While others hide in the dark.” The door swung shut behind him, cutting off his silhouette and returning the bar to its familiar, quiet hum. Rory stood gripping the bar, her knuckles white. The scent of his cologne lingered, a phantom reminder of a past that now felt impossibly distant, yet painfully present.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:05:32.652Z" 2/25/2026, 1:05:32 AM
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native_tokens_reasoning2827
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
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provider_responses
0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"He spoke slowly [slowly]"
2"He gestured around [around]"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.545
leniency1
rawRatio0.1
effectiveRatio0.1
74.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1774
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count2
1
adverb"truly"
count2
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"quickly"
count1
6
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"truly"
2"slowly"
3"deliberately"
4"carefully"
5"quickly"
6"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
15.45% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1774
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"comforting"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count4
2
word"chill"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"measured"
count1
6
word"glint"
count2
7
word"sentinel"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"silence"
count1
10
word"chilling"
count1
11
word"constructed"
count1
12
word"calculated"
count1
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"casual indifference"
count1
16
word"rhythmic"
count1
17
word"racing"
count1
18
word"unwavering"
count1
19
word"potential"
count3
20
word"echoed"
count1
21
word"stomach"
count1
22
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"comforting"
1"familiar"
2"chill"
3"weight"
4"whisper"
5"measured"
6"glint"
7"sentinel"
8"unreadable"
9"silence"
10"chilling"
11"constructed"
12"calculated"
13"flicker"
14"pulsed"
15"casual indifference"
16"rhythmic"
17"racing"
18"unwavering"
19"potential"
20"echoed"
21"stomach"
22"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences98
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences120
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1774
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount1180
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Liam"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Cardiff1
Silas3
Rory9
Liam8
Potential1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Rory"
2"Liam"
places
0"Raven"
1"London"
2"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1774
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences120
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean38.57
std19.29
cv0.5
sampleLengths
0103
137
2107
321
424
575
629
725
821
99
1031
1138
1225
1339
1446
1546
1640
1736
1813
1931
2018
2133
2236
2351
2428
2532
2613
2743
2846
2932
3031
3143
3246
3343
3464
3534
3629
3725
3834
3966
4048
4137
4236
4321
4442
4547
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs176
matches
0"was rewriting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences120
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1180
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.03220338983050847
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.01864406779661017
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences120
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences120
mean14.78
std7.39
cv0.5
sampleLengths
017
117
217
313
410
520
69
719
88
910
1017
1128
1217
1311
1418
1516
1613
178
183
196
2014
211
2215
2314
2416
2530
2622
277
2818
297
3021
319
3213
3311
347
3510
3624
374
389
3916
409
418
4218
434
448
457
4631
4718
4828
4931
51.11% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3416666666666667
totalSentences120
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences97
matches
0"She hummed a low tune,"
1"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
2"He moved with a slight"
3"He wore a charcoal suit,"
4"His hair, once a shaggy"
5"His gaze swept the room,"
6"It sounded distant, a ghost"
7"Her hands tightened on the"
8"He strolled deeper into the"
9"He carried himself with a"
10"His eyes, she saw now,"
11"He stopped a few feet"
12"He gestured vaguely, his hand"
13"She looked at him, truly"
14"His expression, once open, now"
15"He arched a dark brow,"
16"He looked at Rory, then"
17"He remained quiet, letting the"
18"He pulled out a stool,"
19"Her voice gained a sarcastic"
ratio0.588
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences97
matches
0"The green neon sign hummed,"
1"Rory ran a damp cloth"
2"She hummed a low tune,"
3"Her straight shoulder-length black hair"
4"Silas polished a tumbler behind"
5"He moved with a slight"
6"The door swung inward, letting"
7"Rory glanced up, expecting another"
8"The smile she’d been cultivating"
9"A man stood framed in"
10"He wore a charcoal suit,"
11"His hair, once a shaggy"
12"Rory remembered it untamed, falling"
13"His gaze swept the room,"
14"A slow, uncertain smile bloomed"
15"The name, a half-whisper, cut"
16"It sounded distant, a ghost"
17"Rory’s breath caught."
18"Her hands tightened on the"
19"The crescent-shaped scar on her"
ratio0.99
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences97
matches(empty)
ratio0
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He wore a charcoal suit, expensive wool draped over a frame that had broadened, a subtle layer of adult weight smoothing out the sharp angles of his youth."
1"A slow, uncertain smile bloomed across his face, a movement that felt alien on his mouth."
2"He carried himself with a new confidence, a measured stride that announced his arrival."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"He gestured vaguely, his hand sweeping towards the city beyond the bar’s walls"
1"He arched, amusement playing on his lips, though his eyes remained unsmiling"
2"He took, his gaze steady over the rim of the glass"
3"Her voice dropped, her hands flexing"
4"She felt, the feeling of being trapped"
5"He picked up, his hand steady"
6"He gestured around, his eyes lingering on the old maps and faded photos"
7"She met, her blue eyes unwavering"
8"She watched, a knot tightening in her stomach"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"He spoke slowly (speak)"
dialogueSentences55
tagDensity0.018
leniency0.036
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.036
77.6825%