Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ959GADF24A7QAEH7PRW45M

Run Details

Duration:
30.4s
Cost:
$0.013194
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ancient oaks of Richmond Park stood like skeletal sentries in the fading London light. Aurora adjusted the strap of her bag, her palm brushing the Heartstone pendant beneath her shirt. The crimson gem throbbed, a rhythmic, oily heat that pulsed against her skin whenever they neared the standing stones. Isolde Varga led the way. The Half-Fae moved with a disturbing, fluid grace, her silver hair trailing behind her like a comet’s tail in the gloaming. She left no trace of her passage; the long grass didn't even bend under her weight. "The skin of the world grows thin here." Isolde gestured toward a patch of air between two gnarled trees. To Aurora’s eyes, it looked like nothing more than a trick of the evening mist, a slight shimmer that made her vision swim if she stared too long. Nyx drifted alongside them, a humanoid smudge of indigo and charcoal shadow. Faintly glowing violet eyes flickered within the void of their face. When they spoke, the sound didn't come from a throat, but echoed in the inner ear like a dying breeze. "The Gateway of Gluttony. It smells of rot and honey." Aurora pulled the Fae-forged blade from its sheath. The moonsilver metal caught what little light remained, casting a cold, blue luminescence across her knuckles. The dagger stayed icy to the touch, a sharp contrast to the mounting fever of the Heartstone. She stepped forward, her boots crunching on dry leaves that seemed to belong to a different season. "Stay close. I don't want to find out what happens if we get separated in the transition." Aurora reached out. Her fingers met a resistance like cold syrup. The air rippled, turning from the damp chill of a London autumn to a suffocating, heavy warmth. She pushed through. The world didn't just change; it exploded into a sensory assault. Aurora stumbled onto ground that felt like packed velvet. She blinked against a sky the color of a bruised apricot—a deep, permanent amber that held no sun but glowed with its own internal radiance. The horizon didn't end; it melted into a haze of golden dust. "Dymas." Isolde stood perfectly still, her lavender eyes wide as they drank in the landscape. A sprawling vineyard stretched out before them, but the vines weren't wood and leaf. They were thick, undulating ropes of deep violet, thick as a man’s thigh, winding around trellises crafted from polished white bone. Huge, translucent fruits hung from the boughs, glowing with a soft, internal light like lanterns. They looked like oversized grapes, but their skins pulsed with the slow cadence of a heartbeat. The air tasted of fermented peaches, woodsmoke, and something metallic—the sharp, copper tang of blood. Every breath felt like a meal, heavy and cloying. "Look at the ground." Aurora pointed the tip of her moonsilver blade toward the soil. It wasn't dirt. The earth consisted of crushed spices and dark, crystalline grains that looked like black sugar. Small, iridescent beetles scurried between the mounds, their shells sounding like clinking coins as they collided. Nyx’s form wavered, their shadow stretching unnaturally long across the sugar-sand. They reached out a hand, or the suggestion of one, toward a hanging fruit. "The nectar here sustains the Prince's court. To taste is to never hunger again, and to never leave." A low, melodic humming drifted on the warm wind. It wasn't a song, but the collective vibration of a million insects or perhaps the ground itself. Aurora wiped sweat from her forehead, her black hair sticking to her temples. The heat in Dymas felt intimate, like being wrapped in a heavy, fur-lined cloak in the middle of a desert. "We need to move. The Heartstone is dragging me toward the center." Aurora gripped the pendant through her shirt. It didn't just pulse now; it tugged, a magnetic force pulling her deeper into the orchards. They walked along a path lined with trees that bore silver-skinned pears. Each time a fruit fell, it didn't thud; it shattered like glass, spilling a thick, golden syrup that the sugar-sand drank greedily. The scent of overripe sweetness intensified until it became a physical pressure behind Aurora’s eyes. Farther in, the architecture of the realm began to emerge from the amber haze. Spires of twisted obsidian rose in the distance, carved into shapes that looked like roasting spits or giant, curved cutlery. There were no straight lines in Dymas, only the curves of a belly or the arch of a glutton's throat. "Hear that?" Aurora froze. She lowered her center of gravity, the blade held low. Beyond the next row of bone-white trellises, a sound like heavy fabric tearing echoed through the golden air. It was followed by a wet, rhythmic thumping. Isolde tilted her head, her silver hair swaying. "The harvesters. They do not appreciate guests who do not come to dine." The Half-Fae gestured for them to duck behind a thick cluster of violet vines. Aurora pressed her back against the cool moonsilver of her dagger, her heart hammering. Through the gaps in the leaves, she saw them. They were tall, spindly things, draped in robes of stained silk that might have once been white. Their faces were hidden behind masks of hammered gold, each one frozen in a wide, joyous laugh. They moved with a jerky, stop-motion gait, carrying baskets woven from human hair. One of the harvesters reached up and squeezed a glowing fruit. The fruit let out a soft, pathetic whimper before it burst, filling the harvester’s basket with a fountain of violet juice. "They aren't demons." Nyx’s whisper was a chilling breath against Aurora’s ear. "They are the contracts. Souls who traded their eternity for a single, perfect feast. Now they serve the kitchen." Aurora watched as a harvester turned its head. The golden mask had no eye holes, yet it seemed to stare directly at their hiding spot. It tilted its head, the metal jaw of the mask creaking open to reveal a cavity filled with nothing but shifting amber smoke. She tightened her grip on the Fae-forged blade. The silver light of the weapon seemed to aggravate the amber glow of the realm, creating a shimmering halo of conflict around her hand. "They're moving closer." The harvesters began to hum, a discordant harmony that vibrated in Aurora’s teeth. They didn't walk; they drifted, their silk robes hissing against the sugar-sand like snakes. Isolde stepped out from the shadows of the vines, her lavender eyes glowing with a sudden, fierce intensity. She didn't draw a weapon. Instead, she raised her hands, her fingers weaving a pattern in the heavy air. "The feast is not yet laid. The guests are not yet called." Her voice didn't sound like a riddle now; it carried the weight of her Fae heritage, cold and commanding. The harvesters stopped mid-stride. Their golden masks twitched, the metal groaning as they fought the compulsion of her words. One of them dropped its basket. The shattered fruit spilled across the sugar-sand, the scent of fermented honey becoming so thick Aurora had to cover her mouth to keep from gagging. "Move now. While the vision holds them." Isolde didn't look back. She glided deeper into the vineyard, toward the silhouette of the obsidian spires. Aurora signaled to Nyx and followed, her boots slipping slightly on the slick, sweet earth. As they moved, the landscape began to distort. The vineyards gave way to gardens where the flowers were made of spun sugar and the fountains ran with thick, dark wine. The sound of laughter started—distanced, echoing, and layered with the clink of silverware against porcelain. It came from the great hall ahead, a structure that looked like a ribcage of a leviathan, vaulted and vast, glowing with the heat of a thousand hearths. The Heartstone burned against Aurora’s chest, the silver chain digging into her neck. She could feel the portal’s anchor somewhere inside that hall, buried beneath the excess of Prince Belphegor’s table. "The air is getting hotter." Aurora pointed toward the hall’s entrance. The doors were made of solid gold, carved with scenes of hunts and banquets that seemed to move if she caught them in her peripheral vision. "And the smell... it's changing." It wasn't just sweet anymore. It was the smell of a roasting carcass, seasoned with cloves and cinnamon, so potent it made her stomach cramp with a sudden, ravenous hunger. Her mouth watered involuntarily. She bit her tongue, the sharp tang of her own blood cutting through the magical allure of the scent. "Do not breathe deeply." Nyx’s shadow form flared, a dark umbrella shielding Aurora from the worst of the golden haze. "The atmosphere here is designed to consume from the inside out." They reached the base of the golden doors. The sheer scale of the entrance made Aurora feel like an ant at the foot of a god's pantry. She looked at the Fae-forged blade, its moonsilver surface now clouded by the amber steam of the realm. Aurora placed her hand on the cold metal of the door. The gold was soft, almost like skin, and it yielded slightly under her touch. "On three." Isolde stood to her left, her expression unreadable, her lavender eyes fixed on the carvings. To the right, Nyx was a gathering storm of violet shadow. Aurora pushed. The doors didn't creak; they sighed open. A wave of heat and sound hit them. A hall the size of a cathedral stretched out, filled with long tables that groaned under the weight of impossible delicacies. Thousands of candles floated in the air, their wax dripping like slow rain onto the diners below. But it wasn't the food that stopped Aurora's breath. It was the ceiling. Above them, thousands of souls hung suspended in webs of spun silver, their mouths open in a silent, eternal yawn, catching the rising steam from the feasts below. Each breath they took fed the realm, their exhaustion turning into the amber light that powered Dymas. "We have to find the anchor." Aurora stepped into the hall, her blue eyes scanning the chaos of the banquet. At the far end of the room, seated on a throne made of fused silver platters, a figure sat shrouded in the steam of a hundred roasting boars. The Heartstone screamed against Aurora’s skin, the red glow now bright enough to shine through her shirt like a beacon. The diners—creatures of all shapes, some human-looking, some with too many limbs and eyes like polished olives—turned as one. The clatter of forks stopped. The laughter died into a wet, expectant silence. Aurora raised the Fae blade, the cold moonsilver reflecting the heat of the Prince’s hearth. "Keep moving. Don't look at the plates."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"perfectly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1792
totalAiIsms36
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count2
2
word"pulsed"
count2
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"chill"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"velvet"
count1
9
word"crystalline"
count1
10
word"wavered"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"shattered"
count2
14
word"silk"
count2
15
word"whisper"
count1
16
word"chilling"
count1
17
word"perfect"
count1
18
word"vibrated"
count1
19
word"intensity"
count1
20
word"carried the weight"
count1
21
word"echoing"
count1
22
word"porcelain"
count1
23
word"structure"
count1
24
word"could feel"
count1
25
word"stomach"
count1
26
word"unreadable"
count1
27
word"scanning"
count1
28
word"beacon"
count1
29
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"rhythmic"
2"pulsed"
3"weight"
4"flickered"
5"echoed"
6"chill"
7"warmth"
8"velvet"
9"crystalline"
10"wavered"
11"pulse"
12"magnetic"
13"shattered"
14"silk"
15"whisper"
16"chilling"
17"perfect"
18"vibrated"
19"intensity"
20"carried the weight"
21"echoing"
22"porcelain"
23"structure"
24"could feel"
25"stomach"
26"unreadable"
27"scanning"
28"beacon"
29"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences116
matches(empty)
44.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount7
narrationSentences116
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences137
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1787
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
69.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions66
wordCount1618
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.61
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London2
Heartstone4
Varga1
Half-Fae2
Aurora26
Fae-forged3
Dymas3
Fae7
Nyx6
Prince2
Belphegor1
Isolde7
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Varga"
2"Half-Fae"
3"Aurora"
4"Fae"
5"Nyx"
6"Prince"
7"Belphegor"
8"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Fae-forged"
4"Dymas"
globalScore0.697
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences103
glossingSentenceCount9
matches
0"looked like nothing more than a trick of"
1"leaves that seemed to belong to a different season"
2"felt like packed velvet"
3"looked like oversized grapes, but their s"
4"felt like a meal, heavy and cloying"
5"looked like black sugar"
6"looked like roasting spits or giant, curv"
7"looked like a ribcage of a leviathan, vau"
8"banquets that seemed to move if she caught them in her peripheral vision"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.56
wordCount1787
matches
0"no sun but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs70
mean25.53
std17.6
cv0.69
sampleLengths
050
142
28
339
443
510
658
717
831
911
1046
111
1214
1366
1424
154
1645
1725
1818
1959
2012
2123
2249
2354
242
2512
2626
278
2813
2937
3047
3132
323
339
3419
3548
3632
373
3827
3937
4012
4138
4231
437
4417
4545
4643
4731
485
4932
90.14% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences116
matches
0"being wrapped"
1"was followed"
2"were hidden"
3"were made"
4"were made"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs253
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount8
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences137
ratio0.088
matches
0"She left no trace of her passage; the long grass didn't even bend under her weight."
1"The world didn't just change; it exploded into a sensory assault."
2"She blinked against a sky the color of a bruised apricot—a deep, permanent amber that held no sun but glowed with its own internal radiance."
3"The horizon didn't end; it melted into a haze of golden dust."
4"The air tasted of fermented peaches, woodsmoke, and something metallic—the sharp, copper tang of blood."
5"It didn't just pulse now; it tugged, a magnetic force pulling her deeper into the orchards."
6"Each time a fruit fell, it didn't thud; it shattered like glass, spilling a thick, golden syrup that the sugar-sand drank greedily."
7"They didn't walk; they drifted, their silk robes hissing against the sugar-sand like snakes."
8"Her voice didn't sound like a riddle now; it carried the weight of her Fae heritage, cold and commanding."
9"The sound of laughter started—distanced, echoing, and layered with the clink of silverware against porcelain."
10"The doors didn't creak; they sighed open."
11"The diners—creatures of all shapes, some human-looking, some with too many limbs and eyes like polished olives—turned as one."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1638
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy, fur-lined cloak"
adverbCount44
adverbRatio0.026862026862026864
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.007326007326007326
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences137
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences137
mean13.04
std6.46
cv0.495
sampleLengths
015
116
219
35
421
516
68
711
828
912
1011
1120
1210
138
1416
1517
1617
1717
183
198
2017
213
2211
239
2425
2512
261
2714
2814
2921
3015
3116
3215
339
344
3511
363
3715
3816
3911
4014
4118
429
4317
4413
4520
4612
477
4816
4912
44.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.2846715328467153
totalSentences137
uniqueOpeners39
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"Faintly glowing violet eyes flickered"
1"Instead, she raised her hands,"
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences114
matches
0"She left no trace of"
1"She stepped forward, her boots"
2"Her fingers met a resistance"
3"She pushed through."
4"She blinked against a sky"
5"They were thick, undulating ropes"
6"They looked like oversized grapes,"
7"It wasn't dirt."
8"They reached out a hand,"
9"It wasn't a song, but"
10"It didn't just pulse now;"
11"They walked along a path"
12"She lowered her center of"
13"It was followed by a"
14"They were tall, spindly things,"
15"Their faces were hidden behind"
16"They moved with a jerky,"
17"It tilted its head, the"
18"She tightened her grip on"
19"They didn't walk; they drifted,"
ratio0.289
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount96
totalSentences114
matches
0"The ancient oaks of Richmond"
1"Aurora adjusted the strap of"
2"The crimson gem throbbed, a"
3"Isolde Varga led the way."
4"The Half-Fae moved with a"
5"She left no trace of"
6"Isolde gestured toward a patch"
7"Nyx drifted alongside them, a"
8"Aurora pulled the Fae-forged blade"
9"The moonsilver metal caught what"
10"The dagger stayed icy to"
11"She stepped forward, her boots"
12"Aurora reached out."
13"Her fingers met a resistance"
14"The air rippled, turning from"
15"She pushed through."
16"The world didn't just change;"
17"Aurora stumbled onto ground that"
18"She blinked against a sky"
19"The horizon didn't end; it"
ratio0.842
87.72% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences114
matches
0"To Aurora’s eyes, it looked"
1"To the right, Nyx was"
ratio0.018
74.01% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences83
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She stepped forward, her boots crunching on dry leaves that seemed to belong to a different season."
1"She blinked against a sky the color of a bruised apricot—a deep, permanent amber that held no sun but glowed with its own internal radiance."
2"The earth consisted of crushed spices and dark, crystalline grains that looked like black sugar."
3"They walked along a path lined with trees that bore silver-skinned pears."
4"The harvesters began to hum, a discordant harmony that vibrated in Aurora’s teeth."
5"It came from the great hall ahead, a structure that looked like a ribcage of a leviathan, vaulted and vast, glowing with the heat of a thousand hearths."
6"A hall the size of a cathedral stretched out, filled with long tables that groaned under the weight of impossible delicacies."
7"Each breath they took fed the realm, their exhaustion turning into the amber light that powered Dymas."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.7692%