Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ959P8MXFM487HBA1F59BDK

Run Details

Duration:
18.8s
Cost:
$0.009095
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The solid oak door swung inward, revealing Lucien. Rory froze, her hand still resting on the cool metal knob. He stood framed against the dim landing, a figure carved from shadow and sharp angles. His tailored charcoal suit, always immaculate, seemed to absorb the meagre light, making his platinum blond hair gleam almost impossibly bright. One amber eye, then the black, tracked her with an unnerving precision. He held his ivory-handled cane, its ornate handle a smooth curve against his palm, barely leaning on it. A hollow space opened in her chest. Not just surprise, but a sudden, sharp ache that had long since become a dull throb. Months had passed since their last encounter, since he had simply… vanished. “Lucien.” Her voice left her throat a dry whisper, a sound she hardly recognized as her own. She recovered, hardening her tone. “What d’you want?” A faint, almost imperceptible tilt of his head. A ghost of a smile touched the corner of his mouth, a gesture that always felt more like a challenge than amusement. “Is that how you greet old associates, Rory?” “We’re not ‘associates’.” She pushed the door wider, a silent invitation, more a challenge than hospitality. She hated that he saw her like this, dressed in comfortable sweats and an old Cardiff University hoodie, her shoulder-length black hair pulled into a messy knot. She closed the door behind him, the heavy thud echoing in the small hallway of her flat. “Not anymore.” He stepped across the threshold, bringing with him the faint scent of expensive cologne and something else—something sharp, electric, a whiff of the supernatural world he inhabited. His gaze swept over the cramped space, taking in the overflowing bookshelf, the discarded takeaway cartons on the coffee table, the general disarray of a life lived, unbothered by appearances. His eyes, those mismatched windows to whatever dark magic pulsed inside him, lingered on her for a fraction too long. “My apologies. I should have called.” He moved deeper into the room, his movements fluid, silent. His cane tapped softly on the wooden floorboards. “Though I doubt you would have answered.” “You think?” She crossed her arms, a shield against the sudden chill his presence brought. “After you ghosted me for three months? Left me hanging after everything that happened? You really think I’d just pick up a call from ‘Lucien Moreau’?” His gaze found the smallrescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a faint line almost hidden by the sleeve of her hoodie. He looked away just as quickly, his expression unreadable. “I had… matters to attend to.” “Matters?” A bitter laugh escaped her. “_Matters_? That’s what you call it? One minute we’re facing down a vengeful spirit, the next you’re gone. Poof. Like you never existed. Like _we_ never existed.” He finally stopped, turning to face her fully, his back to the window overlooking the street below. He looked impossibly tall, his tailored suit a stark contrast to her casual attire. The light from the window cast strange shadows over his face, making his features sharper, more angular. He remained silent, allowing her words to hang in the air, weighted with frustration and lingering pain. “I spent weeks wondering if you were dead,” Rory continued, her voice rising now, losing its careful control. “Or worse. If I’d done something. Called you too much. Expected too much. And then I just stopped.” She swallowed, her throat tight. “I just stopped caring eventually.” His head tilted again, a dangerous glint in his black eye. “Did you, now?” The words were soft, yet they carried a surprising edge, a challenge to her claim. “What else was I supposed to do?” She gestured helplessly around her small flat. “Sit around forever, waiting for a text that never comes? You made your choice, Lucien. You walked away.” “Sometimes, walking away is a necessity. For the safety of all involved.” “That’s an excuse,” she snapped, taking a step closer, irritation getting the better of her. “That’s what you say when you don’t want to explain yourself. When you don’t want to deal with the consequences.” He shifted his weight, his eyes darkening. “And what precisely are the consequences you believe I should be dealing with?” “The consequence of making me worry. Of leaving me in the lurch. Of making me feel like an idiot for trusting you.” She met his gaze squarely, refusing to back down. The attraction, a potent, volatile force, still simmered beneath the surface, a dangerous current pulling at them both despite the wall of hurt she had carefully constructed. “The consequence of making me… care.” Her voice dropped to a near whisper on the last word, the admission an accidental crack in her armour. Lucien took a slow breath, his chest expanding under the charcoal fabric of his jacket. His hand tightened imperceptibly on the cane’s handle. “Rory.” His voice, usually so smooth and controlled, carried a tremor she had never heard before. “I never intended to cause you distress.” “Distress hardly covers it,” she scoffed, though the tremor in his voice had unsettled her. “You don’t just vanish after the kind of… intensity we shared. Not without a word. Not without a damn good reason.” She paused, the anger momentarily overshadowed by a sudden, aching curiosity. “So, tell me. What was it? What was so important that you couldn’t spare a single text? A ‘sorry, gotta go, be back in three months’?” He lowered his gaze, studying the polished tip of his shoe for a moment, an unusual display of hesitation. When he looked up, his expression was veiled, almost regretful. “It was not a situation that permitted communication. And you… you were in enough danger as it was.” “Danger?” She laughed, a short, sharp sound. “I’m always in danger around you, Lucien. That’s just part of the package, isn’t it? The fixer, the half-demon, the man who deals with things from places I can barely imagine. I signed up for that. Not for the radio silence.” She pushed her hands through her hair, frustration coiling in her gut. “You could have trusted me.” “Trust,” he repeated, the word a soft murmur. He took a step towards her, and she instinctively held her ground, a part of her wanting him closer, another screaming for him to stay away. “Sometimes, trust dictates distance, Rory. It dictates a temporary separation to ensure a permanent well-being.” “That sounds like something you’d read in a self-help book for emotionally stunted demons,” she retorted, a flicker of her usual sharp wit returning. “If you cared about my well-being, you’d have told me what was going on. You’d have given me an option. Not just pulled the plug.” His eyes, those fascinating pools of amber and black, seemed to bore into hers, searching, assessing. “There was no option. Not one I could afford to give you at the time.” “Afford to give me?” Her voice rose again. “What, was it too expensive? Did it cost too much of your precious time away from your shadowy business dealings?” “It cost too much risk,” he stated, his voice now firm, but a tension tightened his jaw. “Too much danger to you. To… to everything.” His gaze dropped to her lips for a fleeting second, then snapped back to her eyes. The air between them thickened, charged with the unspoken words, the lingering questions, the undeniable pull that had always existed. Rory felt her cheeks flush, a warmth spreading through her veins despite her anger. She hated that he could still make her feel this way, even after everything. “So you just decided for me?” she challenged, regaining some composure. “That’s your move? To protect me by shutting me out completely?” “It was the only viable move.” He offered no compromise, no further explanation, just that resolute declaration. “And now?” She took another step, closing the remaining distance between them until she could almost feel the warmth radiating from him. The scent of his cologne, sharp and clean, filled her senses. “Why are you here, now, if all you know is moving away?” Her voice was softer now, tinged with a raw vulnerability she despised. “What changed?” He reached out, his hand hovering, for a bare second, above her shoulder, then dropped it to his side. The small movement felt charged with a profound restraint. “A situation presented itself.” “Right. Work, always work. Never anything else, is it?” Rory looked away, scanning her messily decorated flat, the indignation flaring anew. “Never anything that goes beyond your bloody contracts and ‘situations’.” “Do you believe that?” His voice was a low murmur, closer now, directly behind her. She spun back around, facing him. His eyes held hers, a silent challenge in their depths. The air hummed with an unspoken question, a history too complicated to be reduced to simple anger or simple hurt. It was all tangled up, a Gordian knot of attraction, resentment, and a potent longing she had tried to bury. Lucien reached out again, this time his cool fingers brushing the crescent scar on her left wrist, a light, almost ethereal touch that sent a jolt up her arm. His thumb traced its faint line, a ghost of memory. “Tell me you stopped caring, Rory,” he challenged, his voice raspy, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers. “Tell me it meant nothing.”
created_at"2026-02-25T01:06:00.097Z" 2/25/2026, 1:06:00 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"She gestured helplessly [helplessly]"
1"Rory looked away [away]"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.074
effectiveRatio0.074
77.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1556
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"quickly"
count1
3
adverb"helplessly"
count1
4
adverb"precisely"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"really"
2"quickly"
3"helplessly"
4"precisely"
5"carefully"
6"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1556
totalAiIsms34
found
0
word"throb"
count1
1
word"encounter"
count1
2
word"whisper"
count2
3
word"comfortable"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"electric"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"glint"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"lurch"
count1
13
word"constructed"
count1
14
word"unsettled"
count1
15
word"intensity"
count1
16
word"silence"
count1
17
word"ensure"
count1
18
word"flicker"
count1
19
word"fascinating"
count1
20
word"tension"
count1
21
word"fleeting"
count1
22
word"charged"
count2
23
word"unspoken"
count2
24
word"warmth"
count2
25
word"tinged"
count1
26
word"profound"
count1
27
word"scanning"
count1
28
word"depths"
count1
29
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"throb"
1"encounter"
2"whisper"
3"comfortable"
4"echoing"
5"electric"
6"pulsed"
7"chill"
8"unreadable"
9"stark"
10"glint"
11"weight"
12"lurch"
13"constructed"
14"unsettled"
15"intensity"
16"silence"
17"ensure"
18"flicker"
19"fascinating"
20"tension"
21"fleeting"
22"charged"
23"unspoken"
24"warmth"
25"tinged"
26"profound"
27"scanning"
28"depths"
29"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences75
matches
0"d with frustration"
66.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences75
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences100
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1555
ratio0.001
matches
0"Matters"
1"we"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions10
wordCount1020
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity0.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Lucien3
Cardiff1
University1
Gordian1
Rory4
persons
0"Lucien"
1"Rory"
places
0"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences69
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.643
wordCount1555
matches
0"Not just surprise, but a sudden, sharp ache"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences100
matches
0"hated that he"
1"hated that he"
83.82% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean42.03
std18.63
cv0.443
sampleLengths
085
135
225
338
462
577
631
741
836
933
1065
1146
1229
1332
1412
1535
1620
1783
1846
1973
2047
2165
2249
2349
2431
2528
2641
2748
2822
2917
3059
3132
3231
3315
3456
3539
3622
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences75
matches
0"was veiled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs163
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences100
ratio0.01
matches
0"He stepped across the threshold, bringing with him the faint scent of expensive cologne and something else—something sharp, electric, a whiff of the supernatural world he inhabited."
91.42% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1024
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount51
adverbRatio0.0498046875
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.017578125
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences100
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences100
mean15.55
std8.18
cv0.526
sampleLengths
08
111
215
321
412
518
67
716
811
91
1017
115
123
138
1422
158
1616
1727
1817
192
2027
2130
2220
2316
248
257
2615
2726
2821
299
306
316
3227
3317
3414
3517
3617
3718
3823
395
4011
4118
4214
4318
4412
4515
4620
477
4813
4931
62.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.42
totalSentences100
uniqueOpeners42
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount52
totalSentences74
matches
0"He stood framed against the"
1"His tailored charcoal suit, always"
2"He held his ivory-handled cane,"
3"Her voice left her throat"
4"She recovered, hardening her tone."
5"She pushed the door wider,"
6"She hated that he saw"
7"She closed the door behind"
8"He stepped across the threshold,"
9"His gaze swept over the"
10"His eyes, those mismatched windows"
11"He moved deeper into the"
12"His cane tapped softly on"
13"She crossed her arms, a"
14"His gaze found the smallrescent-shaped"
15"He looked away just as"
16"He finally stopped, turning to"
17"He looked impossibly tall, his"
18"He remained silent, allowing her"
19"She swallowed, her throat tight"
ratio0.703
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences74
matches
0"The solid oak door swung"
1"Rory froze, her hand still"
2"He stood framed against the"
3"His tailored charcoal suit, always"
4"He held his ivory-handled cane,"
5"A hollow space opened in"
6"Months had passed since their"
7"Her voice left her throat"
8"She recovered, hardening her tone."
9"A faint, almost imperceptible tilt"
10"A ghost of a smile"
11"She pushed the door wider,"
12"She hated that he saw"
13"She closed the door behind"
14"He stepped across the threshold,"
15"His gaze swept over the"
16"His eyes, those mismatched windows"
17"He moved deeper into the"
18"His cane tapped softly on"
19"She crossed her arms, a"
ratio0.959
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The air between them thickened, charged with the unspoken words, the lingering questions, the undeniable pull that had always existed."
1"Lucien reached out again, this time his cool fingers brushing the crescent scar on her left wrist, a light, almost ethereal touch that sent a jolt up her arm."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount10
matches
0"Her voice left, a sound she hardly recognized as her own"
1"She pushed, a silent invitation, more a challenge than hospitality"
2"He moved, his movements fluid, silent"
3"Rory continued, her voice rising now, losing its careful control"
4"She swallowed, her throat tight"
5"She met, refusing to back down"
6"She paused, the anger momentarily overshadowed by a sudden, aching curiosity"
7"She pushed, frustration coiling in her gut"
8"she retorted, a flicker of her usual sharp wit returning"
9"he challenged, his voice raspy, his heterochromatic eyes locking onto hers"
1.85% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Rory continued (continue)"
1"she snapped (snap)"
2"She laughed (laugh)"
3"he repeated (repeat)"
4"she retorted (retort)"
5"he stated (state)"
6"she challenged (challenge)"
7"he challenged (challenge)"
dialogueSentences54
tagDensity0.148
leniency0.296
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.296
72.7756%