Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95B0VSG9VB1XNX4QJZJAJ2

Run Details

Duration:
34.9s
Cost:
$0.014089
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s Specialized Sirrus hissed over the damp asphalt of Sawyers Hill, the rhythmic click of the chain the only sound in the suffocating dark of Richmond Park. To her left, the lightless sprawl of the meadow swallowed the glow of her handlebar lamp. The city’s amber hum felt a thousand miles away, muffled by the ancient oaks and the heavy, humid fog rolling off the Thames. She adjusted the strap of the delivery bag. The scent of ginger and soy sauce from the Golden Empress clung to her, a mundane anchor in the encroaching gloom. Underneath her thermal shirt, the Heartstone Pendant pricked her skin. It sat against her sternum, usually a dull weight, but now it radiated a focused, rhythmic heat. A heartbeat of crimson light bled through the fabric of her collar, pulsing in time with her own quickening pulse. "Too far for stir-fry, Rory. Way too far." Her breath hitched, spinning into a pale cloud that lingered too long in the stagnant air. She braked at the edge of a woodland path she didn't remember on the map. The bike’s LED flickered, a staccato strobe that turned the twisting branches into grasping fingers, then died completely. Darkness rushed in, thick and heavy as oil. She fumbled for the light, clicking the switch with a thumb that refused to stop shaking. "Great. Fantastic timing, Yu-Fei. Just brilliant." The silence of the park wasn't empty; it was a pressurized thing, pushing against her eardrums. She dismounted, her boots crunching on grit that sounded like breaking bone. As she pushed the bike forward, the Heartstone flared. The heat intensified, a sharp burn that forced her to reach into her shirt and pull the silver chain out. The deep crimson gem glowed with an internal, angry light. It pointed toward the dense cluster of oaks ahead. The standing stones loomed out of the fog. They weren't carved granite, but ancient oak trunks, petrified and gnarled, arranged in a perfect, unnatural circle. The boundary shimmered. Aurora stepped through, and the world tilted. The temperature plummeted. The humid London night vanished, replaced by an air that tasted of ozone and ancient mulch. Wildflowers, vibrant and luminous, carpeted the clearing even though no sun reached this place. They were wrong—petals the color of bruised lungs, stems that twined together like veins. "Is someone here? I have the order for 'The Traveler'." Her voice lacked its usual Cardiff steel. The words didn't echo; they simply fell flat, absorbed by the moss. Aurora checked her watch. The second hand swept backward, then spun in a frantic, blurred circle. At the edge of the clearing, the shadows deep between the standing stones rippled. It wasn't the wind—not a single leaf stirred on the petrified trees. A sound drifted from the periphery. A wet, rhythmic sliding, like a heavy length of raw meat dragged over velvet. "Not funny, Evan. If this is you, I’m calling the police." The name felt like a hollow shield. Evan was back in Cardiff, or London, or wherever he prowled, but he wasn't here. Nothing human was here. The Heartstone grew uncomfortably hot, the silver chain singing against her neck. She dropped the bike. The metal frame hit the moss with a dull thud that sent a vibration through the soles of her boots. Something clicked in the darkness behind the largest stone. It was a sharp, chitinous sound, the noise a crab might make, or a giant set of shears. "I'm leaving the food by the stone. You can have it." She reached for the delivery bag, her fingers fumbling with the buckle. She didn't look up, but she felt the gaze. It was a physical pressure, a weight settling on her shoulders that made her spine want to curl. A tall shadow detached itself from the oaks. It didn't move like a person; it unfolded, its limbs lengthening with the sound of snapping green wood. Aurora backed away, her hands empty, the insulated bag forgotten on the glowing flowers. "Stay back. I mean it." The thing in the shadows mimicked the shape of her words, but not the sound. It produced a series of clicks and whistles that harmonized into a distorted, melodic version of her own voice. *Stay back. I mean it.* She turned to run toward the gap in the stones, but the path had vanished. Where she had entered, there was only a wall of thorns, the briars thick as a man’s wrist and tipped with ivory spikes. The clearing had shrunk. The standing stones seemed closer now, leaning inward as if to listen. "Where is the gate? I just came through here!" She spun in a circle, her boots treading on the bruised wildflowers. They bled a thick, translucent sap that smelled of honey and copper. The sliding sound returned, faster now. It circled the perimeter of the Grove, staying just beyond the reach of the Heartstone’s crimson glow. A pale hand, far too long and possessesing too many knuckles, gripped the edge of a standing stone ten feet away. The skin was the color of a drowned moon, translucent and stretched tight over shifting bone. "I don't have anything else for you." Aurora gripped the Heartstone, her knuckles white. The gem throbbed, a violent red light that cut through the gloom, illuminating the thing's face for a fraction of a second. It had no eyes—only deep, weeping hollows—and a mouth that stitched itself shut with silver thread every time it closed. The creature didn't move, but the air around it began to vibrate. The smell of the Golden Empress’s ginger chicken was gone, replaced by the scent of a long-opened tomb. "I’m leaving. Now." She didn't believe herself. She backed toward the center of the clearing, her heels catching on the petrified roots. The creature at the stone let go. It began to prowl the edge of the light, its movements jerky, like a film missing every third frame. It was taller than the trees, yet it moved without rustling a single leaf. Another clicking sound erupted from behind her. Then another from the left. "There’s more of you." The Heartstone burned a searing heat into her palm. She looked down at the pendant. The crimson depths weren't just glowing; they were swirling, a miniature storm of blood-colored energy. It was trying to tell her something, a warning that the boundary wasn't just a door—it was a lure. The first creature stepped into the light. It wore a tattered reflection of her own Golden Empress jacket, the fabric fused to its grey, translucent skin. It tilted its head, the motion accompanied by the sound of grinding stone. "That's mine. Give that back." The creature’s mouth tore open, the silver threads snapping one by one. It didn't scream. It spoke with the voice of her father, deep and melodic, echoing from a Cardiff courtroom twenty years ago. "Aurora, come home. It's getting dark, Rory." The dissonance of the voice coming from that hollow, eyeless face made her knees buckle. She scrambled backward, her hand hitting the petrified wood of a standing stone. It wasn't cold. It was fever-hot, and it pulsed with the same rhythm as the pendant. "You aren't him. You aren't anything." The thing leaned forward, its long fingers grazing the edge of the Heartstone's light. Where the red glow touched the creature's skin, the grey flesh hissed and turned to black ash, but it didn't recoil. It seemed fascinated by the pain. More shapes emerged from the thorns. They were all different—some squat and multi-limbed, others like ribbons of smoke given solid form—but they all moved toward her with a singular, hungry intent. The flowers beneath their feet didn't bend; they withered, turning to gray dust instantly. "I have the pendant! Stay away!" She held the Heartstone out like a weapon. The light flared, a blinding burst of scarlet that pushed the shadows back for a heartbeat. In that flash, she saw the reality of the Grove. The trees weren't petrified wood; they were pillars of fused bone. The standing stones were tombstones, larger than any churchyard. The creature in her jacket reached out. Its fingers were inches from her throat, the nails like black glass. "Why are you late, Laila?" The use of her middle name, the one only her mother used, froze the blood in her veins. The creature’s jaw unhinged further, releasing a cloud of white moths that smelled of dust and old paper. Aurora pressed her back against the bone-stone, looking for any gap in the thorns, any way out of the pocket between worlds. The Heartstone went cold. The red light died down to a faint, dying ember. The darkness in the Grove rushed back in, closer than before. Aurora could hear the creatures breathing now—a wet, whistling sound that synchronized with her own panicked gasps. The one in her jacket leaned down, its eyeless face inches from hers, and whispered in a voice that was a perfect, terrifying mirror of her own. "We've been waiting for the delivery."
created_at"2026-02-25T01:06:43.712Z" 2/25/2026, 1:06:43 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
96.71% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
27.54% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1518
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count3
1
word"gloom"
count2
2
word"weight"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"silence"
count1
6
word"loomed"
count1
7
word"perfect"
count2
8
word"shimmered"
count1
9
word"echo"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count1
11
word"throbbed"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
13
word"depths"
count1
14
word"echoing"
count1
15
word"pulsed"
count1
16
word"synchronized"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"gloom"
2"weight"
3"pulse"
4"flickered"
5"silence"
6"loomed"
7"perfect"
8"shimmered"
9"echo"
10"velvet"
11"throbbed"
12"searing"
13"depths"
14"echoing"
15"pulsed"
16"synchronized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences110
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences126
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen27
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1510
ratio0.003
matches
0"Stay back. I mean it."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1401
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.64
worstName"Heartstone"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Heartstone"
discoveredNames
Specialized1
Sirrus1
Sawyers1
Hill1
Richmond1
Park1
Thames1
Golden3
Empress3
Heartstone9
Pendant1
London2
Cardiff3
Grove3
Aurora7
persons
0"Sirrus"
1"Empress"
2"Heartstone"
3"Grove"
4"Aurora"
places
0"Sawyers"
1"Hill"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Thames"
5"Golden"
6"London"
7"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
46.91% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences97
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like breaking bone"
1"felt like a hollow shield"
2"seemed closer now, leaning inward as if to listen"
3"seemed fascinated by the pain"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1510
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"warning that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean32.13
std23.85
cv0.742
sampleLengths
095
147
28
373
46
576
635
747
810
961
1020
1111
1262
1327
1411
1565
1614
175
1839
1954
209
2147
2237
237
2449
2530
263
2759
2812
294
3049
3139
325
3334
347
3544
366
3741
3845
396
4054
4119
425
4358
4414
4555
466
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences110
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs229
matches
0"were swirling"
1"weren't just glowing"
2"was trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount6
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences126
ratio0.095
matches
0"The silence of the park wasn't empty; it was a pressurized thing, pushing against her eardrums."
1"They were wrong—petals the color of bruised lungs, stems that twined together like veins."
2"The words didn't echo; they simply fell flat, absorbed by the moss."
3"It wasn't the wind—not a single leaf stirred on the petrified trees."
4"It didn't move like a person; it unfolded, its limbs lengthening with the sound of snapping green wood."
5"It had no eyes—only deep, weeping hollows—and a mouth that stitched itself shut with silver thread every time it closed."
6"The crimson depths weren't just glowing; they were swirling, a miniature storm of blood-colored energy."
7"It was trying to tell her something, a warning that the boundary wasn't just a door—it was a lure."
8"They were all different—some squat and multi-limbed, others like ribbons of smoke given solid form—but they all moved toward her with a singular, hungry intent."
9"The flowers beneath their feet didn't bend; they withered, turning to gray dust instantly."
10"The trees weren't petrified wood; they were pillars of fused bone."
11"Aurora could hear the creatures breathing now—a wet, whistling sound that synchronized with her own panicked gasps."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1413
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.020523708421797595
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.006369426751592357
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences126
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences126
mean11.98
std5.88
cv0.491
sampleLengths
027
116
223
38
421
510
617
720
88
916
1015
1118
128
1316
146
1516
1612
179
1820
1910
209
218
2217
233
247
253
2616
2714
2814
2910
307
3112
324
3312
3414
3512
366
3714
3811
397
4015
414
4212
434
4420
459
4618
4711
4812
499
37.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats16
diversityRatio0.2619047619047619
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners33
30.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"Then another from the left."
ratio0.009
69.54% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount41
totalSentences109
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"It sat against her sternum,"
2"Her breath hitched, spinning into"
3"She braked at the edge"
4"She fumbled for the light,"
5"She dismounted, her boots crunching"
6"It pointed toward the dense"
7"They weren't carved granite, but"
8"They were wrong—petals the color"
9"Her voice lacked its usual"
10"It wasn't the wind—not a"
11"She dropped the bike."
12"It was a sharp, chitinous"
13"She reached for the delivery"
14"She didn't look up, but"
15"It was a physical pressure,"
16"It didn't move like a"
17"It produced a series of"
18"I mean it.*"
19"She turned to run toward"
ratio0.376
1.28% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount100
totalSentences109
matches
0"Aurora’s Specialized Sirrus hissed over"
1"The city’s amber hum felt"
2"She adjusted the strap of"
3"The scent of ginger and"
4"It sat against her sternum,"
5"A heartbeat of crimson light"
6"Her breath hitched, spinning into"
7"She braked at the edge"
8"The bike’s LED flickered, a"
9"Darkness rushed in, thick and"
10"She fumbled for the light,"
11"The silence of the park"
12"She dismounted, her boots crunching"
13"The heat intensified, a sharp"
14"The deep crimson gem glowed"
15"It pointed toward the dense"
16"The standing stones loomed out"
17"They weren't carved granite, but"
18"The boundary shimmered."
19"Aurora stepped through, and the"
ratio0.917
45.87% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences109
matches
0"To her left, the lightless"
ratio0.009
64.58% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences73
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Her breath hitched, spinning into a pale cloud that lingered too long in the stagnant air."
1"The bike’s LED flickered, a staccato strobe that turned the twisting branches into grasping fingers, then died completely."
2"She dismounted, her boots crunching on grit that sounded like breaking bone."
3"They were wrong—petals the color of bruised lungs, stems that twined together like veins."
4"It didn't move like a person; it unfolded, its limbs lengthening with the sound of snapping green wood."
5"The creature’s jaw unhinged further, releasing a cloud of white moths that smelled of dust and old paper."
6"Aurora could hear the creatures breathing now—a wet, whistling sound that synchronized with her own panicked gasps."
7"The one in her jacket leaned down, its eyeless face inches from hers, and whispered in a voice that was a perfect, terrifying mirror of her own."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.6770%