Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95BY60JA8GVE95H64JHEDF

Run Details

Duration:
24.0s
Cost:
$0.011342
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The Raven’s Nest pulsed with a familiar hum, a low murmur of voices and the clink of glasses. Rory moved with practised ease behind the bar, her movements economical. She wiped down the polished wood, trailing a damp cloth over invisible rings left by absent patrons. The green neon sign above the entrance cast a soft, emerald glow over the street outside, blurring the edge of Soho’s late afternoon bustle. Silas, perched on a stool at the far end of the bar, polished a single malt glass, his movements slow and deliberate. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the dim light, mirroring the subtle sheen of his signet ring. A figure filled the doorway, blocking the last sliver of natural light. Rory lifted her gaze. The man stood framed in the archway, a tailored suit clinging to his broad shoulders, a stark contrast to the usual denim and leather crowd. He surveyed the room, his eyes sharp, scanning over the old maps and black-and-white photographs that lined the walls. Rory’s hand tightened on the cloth, knuckles white. The air thinned in her lungs. The man turned, his gaze sweeping across the bar, before landing on her. A slow smile spread across his face, not quite reaching his eyes. "Malphora?" he called, his voice booming slightly in the quiet space. The name, dusty with disuse, grated against her ears. Rory felt the blood drain from her face. She hadn’t heard that name in years. She hadn't been Malphora since Cardiff, since before London. Her heart hammered a frantic rhythm against her ribs. "Liam O’Connell," she replied, her voice flat, barely a whisper. Her bright blue eyes widened, betraying the cool mask she usually wore. Liam walked towards the bar, his gait confident, the expensive leather of his shoes making no sound on the worn floorboards. He stopped a respectful distance away, leaning forward slightly on his elbows. His perfectly coiffed dark hair hadn't a strand out of place. He’d filled out since she last saw him, the angular intensity of his university days replaced by something harder, more defined. But the eyes, those deep brown eyes that always held a spark of ambition, they hadn’t changed. They still probed, assessed. “Last place I expected to find you, Carter,” Liam said, a glint entering his eyes. He glanced around the bar, a hint of disdain lingering in his peripheral vision. “Working here, of all places.” Rory swallowed, her throat suddenly dry. She unclenched her hand from the cloth, smoothing its dampness against the bar. Her fingers brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a ghost of an old childhood accident. “Things change, Liam.” “Indeed they do,” he murmured, his gaze lingering on her face. “You certainly have.” He paused, his head cocked. “Still refusing to be Malphora, I see. Always did hate that name.” “It’s Aurora now. Or Rory.” She watched him, an old tightness settling in her stomach. He was a fragment of a life she’d deliberately cleaved away. “Rory,” he repeated, testing the sound. It felt alien on his tongue. “Right. Always knew you as Malphora. Or Carter. Malphora Carter, the girl who was going to take the legal world by storm.” He straightened, a faint smile on his lips. “I remember our last tute. You were arguing the finer points of common law versus civil jurisdiction. Passionate. Fierce.” Rory gripped a fresh glass, polishing it with unnecessary vigour. “That was a long time ago.” “Was it?” Liam’s eyebrows rose. “Felt like yesterday. Then you just… vanished. No word, no explanation. Just gone. Everyone back in Cardiff wondered what happened. We all thought you were going to be the first Associate from our year to make partner.” He leaned closer, lowering his voice slightly. “Evan was… quite beside himself. He looked for you, you know.” The mention of Evan’s name was a physical blow. Rory flinched, almost dropping the glass. She placed it carefully on the shelf beneath the bar. A cold dread seeped into her bones. Silas, from his end, paused his polishing, his head tilted just enough to catch the exchange, though he offered no visible reaction. “Did he?” Rory asked, her voice tight, barely audible. She kept her gaze fixed on the pristine rows of bottles. “For a while,” Liam continued, oblivious to the shift in her demeanour. “Then he moved on. Got a good gig at Davies & Finch. He’s doing well. Married, actually. To… what was her name? Gemma, I think. She was a year below us.” A bitter laugh escaped Rory. “Good for him.” The words felt like ash in her mouth. She remembered Gemma, the girl with the wide, admiring eyes who always seemed to be around Evan when Rory wasn’t. Liam watched her, a calculating expression in his eyes. “You always did hate the small talk, didn’t you? Cutting straight to the chase. That’s what made you such a formidable debater.” He paused, a new note entering his voice. “So, seriously, Rory. What happened? Why the sudden vanishing act? Why give up everything?” She finally met his gaze, her blue eyes colder than he remembered. “It wasn’t sudden. And it wasn’t ‘everything’.” She wiped down the same spot on the bar again. “Some things aren’t worth holding onto.” “Like a promising career? A future already mapped out?” Liam scoffed softly. “Or a relationship that was the envy of the entire campus?” Her jaw clenched. The memory of Evan, of the careful control he exerted, of the slow erosion of her confidence, washed over her. The casual dismissiveness in Liam’s tone, the way he framed her past as a series of enviable accomplishments, grated. He presented it as a given, a path she had no right to deviate from. “You don’t know anything about it, Liam.” “Maybe not the specifics, no,” Liam conceded, raising his hands slightly in a gesture of surrender that felt more like a prelude to attack. “But it was a shock. You were our star, Malphora. The one everyone expected to blaze a trail. And then, poof. You drop off the grid, end up in a London dive bar.” He gestured vaguely around The Raven's Nest, the gesture encompassing the dimly lit room, the worn leather banquettes, the very essence of Rory’s current life. It was a judgment, plain and unambiguous. Silas, at the end of the bar, finally placed his polished glass down with a soft *clink*. “This isn’t a ‘dive bar’,” Rory countered, her voice low, a dangerous edge to it. “This is a living, breathing place with its own history. Its own character.” “Sure, sure,” Liam said, his tone patronizing. “Character. Look, I’m not saying it’s a bad place, just… not you. Not the Malphora Carter I knew. I mean, you were always so driven. So ambitious. What happened to that ambition?” She met his gaze head-on. “It didn’t vanish. It just… found new directions.” Liam’s eyes narrowed. “New directions. Serving drinks? Delivering takeaway?” The question hung in the air, a thinly veiled insult. Rory gripped the edge of the bar, her knuckles white. She could feel the familiar burn behind her eyes, the familiar urge to lash out. But then Silas’s quiet presence, his steady gaze from the corner of the room, anchored her. She took a slow, deep breath. “It’s an honest living,” she said, her voice even. “It’s honest work. And it’s mine. From the ground up.” Liam let out a short, humourless laugh. “From the ground up. You always did have a flair for the dramatic, Malphora. I remember when we were arguing that property law case, you turned a simple tenancy dispute into a battle for human rights.” He smiled, a nostalgic, self-satisfied smile that made Rory’s stomach churn. He remembered the moments of her brilliance, but he hadn’t seen the quiet desperation that fuelled her, the fear of disappointing the expectations of others. He saw the performance, not the performer. “You still have that fire, I can see it,” Liam continued, oblivious to the resentment building in her. “It’s just… misplaced now, isn’t it? Wasted on…” He gestured vaguely around the bar again. “On this.” Rory felt a cold fury begin to simmer. He stood there, impeccable in his suit, his success radiating off him like heat, judging her and the choices she’d made to survive. He saw what she was doing, but not *why*. He saw a failure where she saw a rebuild. “And you, Liam?” Rory challenged, her voice low and sharp. “What about you? Still chasing the next big case? Still measuring yourself against everyone else in the room?” Liam’s smile faltered slightly. “Someone has to make a difference, Rory. Someone has to uphold the law.” He puffed out his chest almost imperceptibly. “I work for one of the top firms in the city now. We handle high-profile corporate litigation. It’s exactly what we talked about, back in the day.” “Yes,” Rory murmured, her eyes holding his. “We always talked about it. The prestige. The power. The money.” She let the unspoken implication hang between them: a future she was meant to want, a future he had achieved, and a future that felt utterly hollow to her now. Liam’s expression hardened. The easy confidence he’d arrived with began to crack, replaced by a flicker of defensiveness. “And you’re saying you don’t care about any of that? The girl who worked herself to the bone, who pulled all-nighters in the library just to perfect an essay, suddenly doesn’t care about success?” “I care about different things now,” Rory said simply. She reached for a clean rag beneath the counter, gripping it like a lifeline. “Things you wouldn’t understand.” “Try me,” Liam scoffed. Rory looked at him, truly looked at him, noticing the subtle lines of stress around his eyes, the tightness in his jaw despite his polished exterior. He was a perfect picture of the life she could have had, the life everyone expected of her. But she also saw the hollowness. He hadn’t changed as much as she thought. He was still striving, still performing, still chasing. And it seemed he was still, in his own way, as trapped as she once was. “Freedom,” Rory said. “Peace. A life where I don’t have to pretend to be someone I’m not.”
created_at"2026-02-25T01:07:13.733Z" 2/25/2026, 1:07:13 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags27
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"The words felt like [like]"
1"Liam scoffed softly [softly]"
2"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
3"Rory said simply [simply]"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.509
leniency1
rawRatio0.148
effectiveRatio0.148
59.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1714
totalAiIsmAdverbs14
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count5
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count2
3
adverb"deliberately"
count1
4
adverb"carefully"
count1
5
adverb"softly"
count1
6
adverb"very"
count1
7
adverb"utterly"
count1
8
adverb"truly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
3"deliberately"
4"carefully"
5"softly"
6"very"
7"utterly"
8"truly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
38.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1714
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count3
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"whisper"
count1
5
word"intensity"
count1
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"stomach"
count2
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"calculating"
count1
10
word"jaw clenched"
count1
11
word"could feel"
count1
12
word"churn"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"implication"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count1
16
word"perfect"
count2
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"familiar"
2"stark"
3"scanning"
4"whisper"
5"intensity"
6"glint"
7"stomach"
8"pristine"
9"calculating"
10"jaw clenched"
11"could feel"
12"churn"
13"unspoken"
14"implication"
15"flicker"
16"perfect"
33.33% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches4
maxInWindow3
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count2
1
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
2
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
1"eyes narrowed"
2"jaw clenched"
3"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences104
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences104
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"begin to"
2"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1714
ratio0.001
matches
0"clink"
1"why"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.19% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1152
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.74
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Soho1
Malphora1
Cardiff1
London1
Rory20
Evan3
Gemma1
Liam15
Silas4
persons
0"Raven"
1"Rory"
2"Evan"
3"Gemma"
4"Liam"
5"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.632
windowScore0.667
92.53% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences87
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite reaching his eyes"
1"felt like ash in her mouth"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1714
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences129
matches
0"heard that name"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean38.95
std21.03
cv0.54
sampleLengths
0108
160
239
320
433
522
686
734
840
931
1026
1161
1216
1342
1418
1554
1620
1743
1836
1953
2035
2123
2257
237
2457
2549
2628
2739
2813
299
3057
3119
3243
3343
3435
3549
3628
3751
3848
3952
4027
414
4282
4317
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs192
matches
0"was doing"
1"was still striving"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences129
ratio0
matches(empty)
85.97% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1158
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"nostalgic, self-satisfied smile"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.04231433506044905
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.019861830742659757
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean13.29
std8.1
cv0.609
sampleLengths
018
111
217
324
422
516
612
74
825
919
108
116
1213
1312
1411
159
168
177
189
199
2010
2112
2221
2312
2411
2521
2617
274
2815
2914
305
316
3213
3318
343
3511
368
3712
3815
3911
406
416
4230
4319
4410
456
465
4737
487
4911
54.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.37209302325581395
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners48
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount51
totalSentences102
matches
0"She wiped down the polished"
1"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
2"He surveyed the room, his"
3"he called, his voice booming"
4"She hadn’t heard that name"
5"She hadn't been Malphora since"
6"Her heart hammered a frantic"
7"she replied, her voice flat,"
8"Her bright blue eyes widened,"
9"He stopped a respectful distance"
10"His perfectly coiffed dark hair"
11"He’d filled out since she"
12"They still probed, assessed."
13"He glanced around the bar,"
14"She unclenched her hand from"
15"Her fingers brushed the small"
16"he murmured, his gaze lingering"
17"He paused, his head cocked"
18"She watched him, an old"
19"He was a fragment of"
ratio0.5
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences102
matches
0"The Raven’s Nest pulsed with"
1"Rory moved with practised ease"
2"She wiped down the polished"
3"The green neon sign above"
4"Silas, perched on a stool"
5"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
6"A figure filled the doorway,"
7"Rory lifted her gaze."
8"The man stood framed in"
9"He surveyed the room, his"
10"Rory’s hand tightened on the"
11"The air thinned in her"
12"The man turned, his gaze"
13"A slow smile spread across"
14"he called, his voice booming"
15"The name, dusty with disuse,"
16"Rory felt the blood drain"
17"She hadn’t heard that name"
18"She hadn't been Malphora since"
19"Her heart hammered a frantic"
ratio0.961
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.69% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"He surveyed the room, his eyes sharp, scanning over the old maps and black-and-white photographs that lined the walls."
1"The man turned, his gaze sweeping across the bar, before landing on her."
2"He smiled, a nostalgic, self-satisfied smile that made Rory’s stomach churn."
3"He remembered the moments of her brilliance, but he hadn’t seen the quiet desperation that fuelled her, the fear of disappointing the expectations of others."
4"He stood there, impeccable in his suit, his success radiating off him like heat, judging her and the choices she’d made to survive."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags27
uselessAdditionCount12
matches
0"he called, his voice booming slightly in the quiet space"
1"she replied, her voice flat, barely a whisper"
2"Liam said, a glint entering his eyes"
3"he murmured, his gaze lingering on her face"
4"He paused, his head cocked"
5"She watched, an old tightness settling in her stomach"
6"Rory asked, her voice tight, barely audible"
7"He paused, a new note entering his voice"
8"Rory countered, her voice low, a dangerous edge to it"
9"Liam said, his tone patronizing"
10"Rory challenged, her voice low and sharp"
11"Rory murmured, her eyes holding his"
17.92% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"he repeated (repeat)"
2"Liam continued (continue)"
3"Liam conceded (concede)"
4"Liam continued (continue)"
5"Rory challenged (challenge)"
6"Rory murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.283
leniency0.566
rawRatio0.467
effectiveRatio0.264
69.2886%