Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95C2PWN4T32QQJ3HW1117B

Run Details

Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.002961
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed down, slicking the cobblestones of the alley off Brewer Street. Headlights from the main road bled into the narrow passage, painting everything in a watery, distorted glow. Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed thick white in the damp air, ragged gasps tearing past the ache in her lungs. Her worn leather watch strap chafed her wrist, a familiar sensation that did little to anchor her against Elias Vance’s frantic flight. Vance sprinted, his battered trainers splashing through puddles that mirrored the bruised sky above. Quinn’s military bearing kept her stride long and efficient, a predator’s rhythm developed over eighteen years on the force. This chase felt different. Vance wasn't just another street rat; he was a twitchy nexus of whispers, a known runner for faces Quinn couldn't quite put a name to. Tonight, he clutched a small, dark package like a lifeline. The reason for his desperation was exactly why Quinn pushed harder, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair plastered to her skull. Vance veered sharply, skidding around an overflowing skip. The stench of rotting refuse momentarily filled the air. Quinn didn't falter, her sharp jaw set, eyes locked on the fleeting shadow ahead. He was fast, faster than she’d anticipated, but his path grew erratic, a frantic zig-zag as if he were trying to lose her in the labyrinthine backstreets of Soho. A dead end loomed – a high brick wall, slick with condensation. *No. He wouldn’t go there.* Quinn’s boots pounded the ground, her gaze fixed ahead. But Elias Vance didn't slam into the wall. Instead, just as Quinn closed the distance, he threw himself sideways, disappearing behind a darkened, boarded-up shopfront. A clatter echoed, followed by the groan of rusted metal. Quinn arrived seconds later, chest heaving. No Vance. Only a narrow, vertical slit in the brickwork, obscured by grimy boarding, now hanging ajar. A faint, metallic clang from within. And the faintest whisper of cool, moving air, carrying an odour unlike the city's usual decay – something earthy, mineral, and strangely ancient. Quinn stopped, the rain plastering her uniform to her skin. The package Vance carried vanished from view. She edged closer, peering into the blackness. It was less a doorway, more a wound in the façade of the building. A few loose planks of wood leaned against it, carelessly shoved aside. She knelt, rain dripping from her short hair onto her brow, and peered through the gap. A steep, narrow flight of rough-hewn stone steps descended into absolute darkness, damp and smelling of stagnant water. It wasn't a basement. It felt like the throat of the earth. A chill, unconnected to the weather, snaked up her spine. This was the kind of place her partner, Morris, would have warned her about. The kind of place that swallowed people whole, never to be seen again. She straightened up, pressing a hand to the small of her back, feeling the familiar, phantom ache. Three years. Three years since Morris vanished into shadows just like these, his case file ending abruptly, filled with whispers of things that defied logic, things Quinn still couldn’t quite grasp. The supernatural. She didn’t believe in ghosts, not really. But she believed in the unexplained terror that had etched itself onto her soul. This dark path felt unnervingly similar. A scraping sound from the stairwell. Vance was moving deeper. "Vance!" Quinn's voice, hoarse, cut through the night, sharp as broken glass. "Stop! It's over! You running won't change a damn thing!" Only the drip, drip, drip of water answered her, a metronome for her pounding heart. The air seemed to grow heavy, pressing in on her, as if the act of standing at this threshold pulled the world tighter around her. From the voice that echoed from the deep shadow at the base of the steps, a voice rasped, dry as old parchment. "Turn back, copper. This ain't for your kind." Quinn froze, the rain plastering her salt-and-pepper hair to her forehead. The voice wasn't Vance's. It was deeper, older, layered with a weariness that spoke of centuries rather than years. She strained her eyes, seeing only the oppressive blackness that seemed to absorb the scant light filtering from the alley. No figure, no face, just an unsettling presence. "Who are you?" she demanded, her hand moving to the cool steel of the sidearm holstered at her hip. It was a futile gesture, she knew, against whatever force guarded this place, but it grounded her. "A keeper," the voice replied, a dry chuckle like pebbles shifting in a dry riverbed. "A guardian. Call me what you will. The Market doesn't suffer uniforms. Not unless they wear the right colours." Another pause, longer this time. "Or bring the right... toll." The last words dripped with a finality that offered no room for negotiation. The Market. The Veil Market. The name surfaced in Quinn’s mind, instantly recognizable, a ghost from hushed informant whispers and fragmented, impossible case files. A place that moved, they said, a phantom bazaar beneath the city that reappeared only when the moon waxed full over London's dirty skies. It dealt in the forbidden, the arcane, the things the ordinary world tried its best to ignore, and more importantly, to forget. Vance hadn't just scrambled into a dark hole; he'd found an escape route into another, hidden reality. She glanced back up the alley, the rain a constant, monotonous curtain that washed over the derelict buildings. The world she knew, with its predictable laws and tangible threats, was up there, wet and indifferent. Down here, darkness promised not just secrets, but tangible danger, and the very spectral horrors that had shattered her partner’s life, and her own peace, three years prior. The memory of DS Morris, his face in her last memory of him – confused, terrified, before the unexplained went dark – coiled in her gut. This descent felt like stepping onto the same precipice that had claimed him. Her heart hammered a frantic tattoo against her ribs, a desperate war drumbeat of fear and an unyielding resolve. Following Vance meant stepping into a territory charted only by myth and desperation. It meant entering places whispered about in hushed tones by informants who themselves trafficked in the unnatural, places where her badge was meaningless, and where the physics she understood might simply cease to exist. "I'm not leaving him," Quinn stated, her voice firm, a steel rod cutting through the damp quiet, betraying none of the turmoil churning beneath her polished exterior. The package Vance carried. The information it might contain. It was all down there. And whatever had happened to Morris, whatever foulness lurked in the shadows that had consumed him, it had to be confronted. You didn't reach eighteen years of decorated service by turning back at the first sign of trouble, especially when that trouble might finally offer a path to the truth she craved. "Your choice," the voice from the darkness conceded, devoid of emotion, granting no comfort or warning, just an indifferent acknowledgement. "But the entrance closes. The token must be given." A faint clinking sound, metal on stone, perhaps something dropped from a height into the darkness. Then, silence. Vance had moved on, deeper into whatever abyssal depths lay below, and the voice, the keeper, had retreated into the gloom. Quinn took a deep, steadying breath, forcing the stale, mineral-laced air into her protesting lungs. She gripped the rough stone doorframe, her knuckles white, bracing herself for the plunge. Her gaze raked over the dark opening, the absolute blackness that seemed to swallow light and sound at its edges. The rain continued its patter on the alleyway behind her, a fading echo of the world she knew. Her path lay downward. She dropped her gaze to the bottom of the rough-hewn steps, searching the impenetrable shadows for any glint, any sign of the package, its contents, or the man who had just vanished. The air grew colder, not from the rain, but from the deep, intrinsic chill emanating from the earth below. This was more personal than any case she had ever worked. Her partner’s unexplained fate, and her own gnawing need for answers, urged her on. Her boot met the first slick, cold stone step.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:07:18.37Z" 2/25/2026, 1:07:18 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.7
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"really"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1367
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"efficient"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"fleeting"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count1
7
word"chill"
count2
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"pounding"
count1
10
word"oppressive"
count1
11
word"fragmented"
count1
12
word"predictable"
count1
13
word"tangible"
count2
14
word"spectral"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count1
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"churning"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
19
word"abyssal"
count1
20
word"depths"
count1
21
word"gloom"
count1
22
word"echo"
count1
23
word"glint"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"efficient"
2"predator"
3"fleeting"
4"loomed"
5"echoed"
6"whisper"
7"chill"
8"etched"
9"pounding"
10"oppressive"
11"fragmented"
12"predictable"
13"tangible"
14"spectral"
15"shattered"
16"resolve"
17"churning"
18"silence"
19"abyssal"
20"depths"
21"gloom"
22"echo"
23"glint"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
66.87% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"happened to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences96
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1371
ratio0.004
matches
0"No. He wouldn’t go there."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions42
wordCount1308
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.15
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Brewer1
Street1
Harlow1
Quinn15
Elias2
Vance13
Soho1
Morris4
Market2
Veil1
London1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Elias"
3"Vance"
4"Morris"
places
0"Brewer"
1"Street"
2"Soho"
3"London"
globalScore0.927
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"quite put a name to"
1"felt like the throat of the earth"
2"quite grasp"
3"blackness that seemed to absorb the scant light filtering from the alley"
4"felt like stepping onto the same precip"
5"blackness that seemed to swallow light and sound at its edges"
54.12% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.459
wordCount1371
matches
0"not just secrets, but tangible danger"
1"not from the rain, but from the deep, intrinsic chill emanating from the earth belo"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
90.19% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean68.55
std31.92
cv0.466
sampleLengths
085
178
272
314
487
566
667
777
810
922
1070
1158
1236
1357
1487
15102
1666
1793
1868
19156
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs205
matches
0"were trying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences96
ratio0.052
matches
0"Vance wasn't just another street rat; he was a twitchy nexus of whispers, a known runner for faces Quinn couldn't quite put a name to."
1"A dead end loomed – a high brick wall, slick with condensation."
2"And the faintest whisper of cool, moving air, carrying an odour unlike the city's usual decay – something earthy, mineral, and strangely ancient."
3"Vance hadn't just scrambled into a dark hole; he'd found an escape route into another, hidden reality."
4"The memory of DS Morris, his face in her last memory of him – confused, terrified, before the unexplained went dark – coiled in her gut."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1313
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount45
adverbRatio0.03427265803503427
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.014470677837014471
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences96
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences96
mean14.28
std7.81
cv0.547
sampleLengths
012
117
220
322
414
519
64
725
810
920
108
119
1214
1329
1412
151
1613
178
1817
1910
206
212
2215
236
2423
2510
267
277
2814
2912
3016
3118
324
338
3410
3514
3613
3717
382
3929
402
417
4214
436
446
454
4612
4710
4815
4925
43.75% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3125
totalSentences96
uniqueOpeners30
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"Instead, just as Quinn closed"
1"Only a narrow, vertical slit"
2"Only the drip, drip, drip"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences88
matches
0"Her worn leather watch strap"
1"He was fast, faster than"
2"He wouldn’t go there.* Quinn’s"
3"She edged closer, peering into"
4"It was less a doorway,"
5"She knelt, rain dripping from"
6"It wasn't a basement."
7"It felt like the throat"
8"She straightened up, pressing a"
9"She didn’t believe in ghosts,"
10"It was deeper, older, layered"
11"She strained her eyes, seeing"
12"she demanded, her hand moving"
13"It was a futile gesture,"
14"It dealt in the forbidden,"
15"She glanced back up the"
16"Her heart hammered a frantic"
17"It meant entering places whispered"
18"It was all down there."
19"You didn't reach eighteen years"
ratio0.295
33.86% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rain lashed down, slicking the"
1"Headlights from the main road"
2"Detective Harlow Quinn’s breath plumed"
3"Her worn leather watch strap"
4"Vance sprinted, his battered trainers"
5"Quinn’s military bearing kept her"
6"This chase felt different."
7"Vance wasn't just another street"
8"Tonight, he clutched a small,"
9"The reason for his desperation"
10"Vance veered sharply, skidding around"
11"The stench of rotting refuse"
12"Quinn didn't falter, her sharp"
13"He was fast, faster than"
14"A dead end loomed –"
15"He wouldn’t go there.* Quinn’s"
16"A clatter echoed, followed by"
17"Quinn arrived seconds later, chest"
18"A faint, metallic clang from"
19"Quinn stopped, the rain plastering"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount12
matches
0"Her worn leather watch strap chafed her wrist, a familiar sensation that did little to anchor her against Elias Vance’s frantic flight."
1"Vance sprinted, his battered trainers splashing through puddles that mirrored the bruised sky above."
2"He was fast, faster than she’d anticipated, but his path grew erratic, a frantic zig-zag as if he were trying to lose her in the labyrinthine backstreets of Soh…"
3"She straightened up, pressing a hand to the small of her back, feeling the familiar, phantom ache."
4"The air seemed to grow heavy, pressing in on her, as if the act of standing at this threshold pulled the world tighter around her."
5"From the voice that echoed from the deep shadow at the base of the steps, a voice rasped, dry as old parchment."
6"It was deeper, older, layered with a weariness that spoke of centuries rather than years."
7"She strained her eyes, seeing only the oppressive blackness that seemed to absorb the scant light filtering from the alley."
8"A place that moved, they said, a phantom bazaar beneath the city that reappeared only when the moon waxed full over London's dirty skies."
9"Down here, darkness promised not just secrets, but tangible danger, and the very spectral horrors that had shattered her partner’s life, and her own peace, thre…"
10"Her gaze raked over the dark opening, the absolute blackness that seemed to swallow light and sound at its edges."
11"She dropped her gaze to the bottom of the rough-hewn steps, searching the impenetrable shadows for any glint, any sign of the package, its contents, or the man …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she demanded (demand)"
1"Quinn stated (state)"
2"the darkness conceded (concede)"
dialogueSentences10
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.6
70.9275%