Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95C6MTJB22X8P6DV1P9PVF

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Duration:
18.0s
Cost:
$0.009982
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rapid thudding against the flimsy door nearly rattled it off its hinges. Rory grimaced, a dull ache throbbing behind her eyes. Another complaint about the noise from Silas, probably. Or a delivery mix-up. She dragged herself across the small living room, every muscle protesting, and wrenched open the worn timber. Lucien Moreau stood on her landing. He looked exactly as she remembered, a stark silhouette against the dim hallway bulb. His slicked-back platinum blond hair caught the faint yellow light, and his tailored charcoal suit seemed impossibly elegant in her scruffy building. One amber eye gleamed, the other a void of perfect black, both fixed on her. The ivory-handled cane rested against his hip, its familiar shape a silent threat and a subtle support. She should have known better than to think a locked door would keep him out, or that time would make him a faded memory. He always did enjoy defying expectations. "You look well, *Malphora*." His voice, a low rumble with that precise French timbre, smoothed over the name like a lover’s caress. Or a predator’s promise. "You're not exactly subtle, are you, Luc?" Rory didn't move from the doorway, blocking his entry, though she knew it was a symbolic gesture. He could be past her in an heartbeat if he chose. "After all this time, a knock? I expected something more theatrical." He offered a slow, almost imperceptible tilt of his head. "One grows weary of dramatics. Sometimes, a direct approach proves... more efficient." His gaze dropped to her left wrist, lingering for a fraction on the small crescent-shaped scar, then lifted back to her eyes. "May I come in?" "What makes you think I'd let you?" "Courtesy." He took a single, deliberate step forward, crowding her space, the scent of expensive cologne and something subtly earthy, dangerous, enveloping her. "Or perhaps the inconvenient truth that I am already here. I would not wish to cause a scene." His eyes flickered past her shoulder, scanning the dim confines of her flat. "Though I doubt your neighbours would stir themselves." Rory’s jaw tightened. He always sliced through her defences like that, with a quiet certainty that defied argument. She stepped back, her hand brushing against the chipped paint of the doorframe. The air in the flat, stale with sleep and yesterday's takeaway, suddenly felt charged, too thin to breathe. He entered with the silent grace of a phantom, his cane tapping softly on the worn floorboards. He didn't look at her again, instead taking in the cluttered space: the overflowing bookshelves, the stack of delivery thermal bags in the corner, a half-finished mug of tea on the small coffee table. "Still living above the bar, I see." His tone held no judgement, only observation, yet it felt like a comment on her entire existence since their parting. A comfortable purgatory he’d left her in. "It suits me." She closed the door, the click of the lock feeling ridiculously inadequate. "Unlike some, I don't need a sprawling estate to feel important." Lucien turned, a faint, almost imperceptible smile playing on his lips. "Perhaps you merely choose to define importance differently. A commendable trait, *ma belle*. And one I have always admired." His gaze travelled from her dishevelled hair to the faded t-shirt she wore. "Though your current ensemble suggests a more... relaxed interpretation of the day's events." "It's early." Rory crossed her arms, ignoring the heat rising in her cheeks. He always had a way of making her feel exposed, like he could see every sleepless night, every anxious thought. "And you have no right to be here." "A fair point." He moved further into the room, stopping by the window that overlooked the busy street below. The distant rumble of traffic was a dull hum. "However, necessity often overrides such pleasantries." He turned, resting one hand lightly on the ivory handle of his cane. It was an elegant posture, languid and supremely confident. "We have a mutual acquaintance with a rather pressing concern." "Eva?" The name was a sharp shard of ice in the sudden quiet. Lucien nodded. "Indeed. Though she is not currently available for consultation." "What happened?" Rory's voice was tight, thin. Her heart hammered against her ribs. Eva was her oldest friend, her refuge. If something had happened to Eva, she would burn London to the ground. "She has... stepped away for a time." He watched her face, his heterochromatic eyes unblinking. "Voluntarily, I assure you. But it leaves certain matters unattended. Matters that, it appears, require your particular talents." "My talents?" She scoffed, relief for Eva warring with a prickle of old resentment. He was manipulating her, always. "I'm a delivery driver and a former law student. What talent could I possibly have that you, the great Lucien Moreau, fixer of London's underbelly, can't handle?" "Your intellect, *Malphora*." He stepped closer, his voice dropping to a near whisper. "Your remarkable ability to see patterns where others see chaos. To connect the unseen threads." He paused, his gaze softening, just barely, for a fleeting moment. "And your stubborn refusal to break, no matter the pressure." "That's not a compliment, Luc. That's a burden you helped create." The words spilled out, edged with years of hurt she thought she'd buried. His jaw tightened, the faint smile vanishing. "Perhaps. But it is also a strength. One we now require." He turned, his gaze sweeping over her small, cluttered kitchen, then back to her. "Eva was working on something. Something intricate. Powerful. And now it has been... disturbed." "Disturbed how?" Rory bristled. "Speak plainly." "Pieces are missing." He picked up a small, smooth river stone from her coffee table, turning it over in his gloved fingers before placing it back precisely where it had been. "Key components of a larger puzzle. And certain interested parties believe you might know where to find them. Or at least, how to reassemble the fragments." "Why would anyone think that?" "You were Eva's confidante. Her partner in, shall we say, her more... esoteric pursuits." His eyes, normally cold and calculating, held a glint of something akin to exasperation. "And you have a history, an undeniable connection to this world, despite your best efforts to deny it." "Evan." The name was a bitter taste in her mouth. Her abusive ex, the reason she fled Cardiff, the reason she ended up entangled with Eva’s strange life in the first place. And Lucien knew all about him, knew the dark corners he’d dragged her through. "Indeed. A rather unsavoury common denominator." He walked to her small kitchenette, his movements fluid and silent. "May I have some of that tea? Or perhaps something stronger? It has been a long night of... observation." "You've been watching me?" The accusation hung heavy in the air. The relief she felt for Eva evaporated, replaced by cold fury. He didn't deny it. "Prudence dictates a certain level of diligence when tracking an individual of your... particular temperament. Especially when so much is at stake." He turned back, his expression unreadable. "You vanished. You cut ties. It was not unreasonable to seek assurance of your well-being." "My well-being was fine before you showed up." "Is it now?" He raised a perfectly sculpted eyebrow. "You seem less than tranquil, *Malphora*." Rory grit her teeth. "What exactly do these 'interested parties' want? And what makes you think I'd get involved in Eva's messes? I left all that behind." "Did you?" Lucien's gaze bore into her. "Or did it simply lie dormant? We both know the truth of your nature, Aurora Carter. You are drawn to the shadows, whether you admit it or not." He took another step, closing the distance between them until he stood just an arm's length away. The faint scent of him, dangerous and enticing, filled her senses. "And as for what they want... let us merely say it involves power. A great deal of it. More than even I am comfortable with them wielding." "You, uncomfortable?" She let out a humourless laugh. "That's a new one. I thought you lived for uncomfortable situations." "There are lines, even for me." He extended a gloved hand, slowly, deliberately. His fingers, long and elegant, brushed her cheek, a featherlight touch that sent a jolt through her. Memories, sharp and unwelcome, flooded her mind – of other touches, other promises, other betrayals. "And this is one I will not see crossed. I require your assistance, *Malphora*. Not merely as a favour, but as a necessity." His eyes, one amber, one black, held hers captive. Past hurt warred with a primal pull she’d tried to deny for years. He always knew how to twist the knife, how to make her question her own resolve. "What if I refuse?" she whispered, her voice barely audible. It was a foolish question. He knew her too well. "Then I am afraid," Lucien said, his thumb stroking a slow, possessive line along her jaw, "that this will become significantly more complicated. For both of us."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"He moved further [further]"
1"He turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.069
effectiveRatio0.069
76.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1498
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
6
adverb"deliberately"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"lightly"
3"precisely"
4"perfectly"
5"slowly"
6"deliberately"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.58% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1498
totalAiIsms19
found
0
word"stark"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"predator"
count1
4
word"efficient"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"scanning"
count1
7
word"charged"
count1
8
word"comfortable"
count2
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"remarkable"
count1
11
word"fleeting"
count1
12
word"intricate"
count1
13
word"calculating"
count1
14
word"glint"
count1
15
word"unreadable"
count1
16
word"eyebrow"
count1
17
word"resolve"
count1
highlights
0"stark"
1"perfect"
2"familiar"
3"predator"
4"efficient"
5"flickered"
6"scanning"
7"charged"
8"comfortable"
9"whisper"
10"remarkable"
11"fleeting"
12"intricate"
13"calculating"
14"glint"
15"unreadable"
16"eyebrow"
17"resolve"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
1
label"sent a shiver through"
count1
highlights
0"hung heavy in the air"
1"sent a jolt through"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences78
matches(empty)
87.91% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences78
filterMatches
0"feel"
hedgeMatches
0"happened to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences103
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen45
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans5
markdownWords6
totalWords1499
ratio0.004
matches
0"Malphora"
1"ma belle"
2"Malphora"
3"Malphora"
4"Malphora"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount920
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity0.76
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Silas1
Moreau1
French1
Rory7
Lucien6
Eva5
London1
Cardiff1
persons
0"Silas"
1"Moreau"
2"Rory"
3"Lucien"
4"Eva"
places
0"London"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
36.36% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"seemed impossibly elegant in her scruffy building"
1"felt like a comment on her entire exist"
2"something akin to exasperation"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.667
wordCount1499
matches
0"Not merely as a favour, but as a necessity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean36.56
std19.9
cv0.544
sampleLengths
051
16
268
330
426
546
648
77
862
949
1051
1134
1226
1356
1441
1566
1613
1711
1833
1933
2046
2149
2224
2346
246
2557
265
2746
2846
2936
3022
3147
328
3315
3427
3590
3619
3768
3838
3920
4027
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs143
matches
0"was manipulating"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences103
ratio0.01
matches
0"Memories, sharp and unwelcome, flooded her mind – of other touches, other promises, other betrayals."
89.23% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount924
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar,"
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.045454545454545456
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.01948051948051948
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences103
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences103
mean14.55
std8.49
cv0.584
sampleLengths
013
19
28
34
417
56
614
722
815
917
1024
116
1222
134
1424
1511
1611
1710
1834
194
207
2123
2231
238
243
2515
2613
2718
2817
2934
3027
317
3215
3311
3411
3532
3613
3713
3820
398
4019
419
4219
439
4410
4513
462
479
487
496
70.87% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.4368932038834951
totalSentences103
uniqueOpeners45
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount46
totalSentences76
matches
0"She dragged herself across the"
1"He looked exactly as she"
2"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
3"She should have known better"
4"He always did enjoy defying"
5"His voice, a low rumble"
6"He could be past her"
7"He offered a slow, almost"
8"His gaze dropped to her"
9"He took a single, deliberate"
10"His eyes flickered past her"
11"He always sliced through her"
12"She stepped back, her hand"
13"He entered with the silent"
14"He didn't look at her"
15"His tone held no judgement,"
16"She closed the door, the"
17"His gaze travelled from her"
18"He always had a way"
19"He moved further into the"
ratio0.605
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount71
totalSentences76
matches
0"The rapid thudding against the"
1"Rory grimaced, a dull ache"
2"Another complaint about the noise"
3"She dragged herself across the"
4"Lucien Moreau stood on her"
5"He looked exactly as she"
6"His slicked-back platinum blond hair"
7"The ivory-handled cane rested against"
8"She should have known better"
9"He always did enjoy defying"
10"His voice, a low rumble"
11"Rory didn't move from the"
12"He could be past her"
13"He offered a slow, almost"
14"His gaze dropped to her"
15"He took a single, deliberate"
16"His eyes flickered past her"
17"Rory’s jaw tightened."
18"He always sliced through her"
19"She stepped back, her hand"
ratio0.934
65.79% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences76
matches
0"If something had happened to"
ratio0.013
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"His fingers, long and elegant, brushed her cheek, a featherlight touch that sent a jolt through her."
4.31% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"She closed, the click of the lock feeling ridiculously inadequate"
1"He watched, his heterochromatic eyes unblinking"
2"He stepped, his voice dropping to a near whisper"
3"He paused, his gaze softening, just barely, for a fleeting moment"
4"He turned back, his expression unreadable"
5"she whispered, her voice barely audible"
6"Lucien said, his thumb stroking a slow, possessive line along her jaw,"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.034
77.8120%