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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95CEGM8HBKWK5WSJC9E8D2
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 2.5 Flash (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Romance: separated couple reunites
Duration:
23.4s
Cost:
$0.013070
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
62.64%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
28.67%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
66.67%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
97.22%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
48.33%
Name drop frequency
(details)
66.67%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
92.33%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
78.76%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
90.09%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
41.62%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
5.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
77.0441%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
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Meta
AI
The deadbolts clicked open one
by one, a
familiar
, metallic song against the
rhythmic
thrum of the curry ovens below.
Rory pulled the heavy door
inward, expecting Eva's usual absent-minded greeting, or perhaps a jostling package for the Golden Empress.
Instead, the faint light from
the landing illuminated a tailored charcoal suit and slicked-back platinum blond hair.
Lucien Moreau stood on the
threshold, a ghost from a past she’d
tried to
bury under London’s grime.
His heterochromatic eyes – one
amber, one
utterly
black – gleamed with an unsettling amusement. "Rough night, Carter?"
The air fizzed, thick with
unspoken
accusations and a shared history.
Ptolemy, Eva's chunky tabby, slunk
from under a precarious pile of grimoires, a low growl rumbling in his chest.
A rare sound from the
usually placid cat. "What do
you
want?" Rory asked, her voice flat, devoid of the tremor that
suddenly
tightened her gut.
Her left hand unconsciously traced
the crescent-shaped scar on her wrist. He didn't move.
A faint scent of expensive
cologne and something subtly metallic, like ozone before a storm, drifted into the cramped flat. "An invitation, perhaps? Or must I employ less… conventional methods of entry?"
A corner of his mouth
twitched, a shadow of a smile that never quite reached his eyes.
His ivory-handled cane tapped a
soft rhythm on the worn floorboards. "You're not invited." "A shame. And here I thought we were past such childish pleasantries."
He took a single step
forward, his presence immediately dominating the narrow hallway. Rory didn't step back.
Too much pride, too much
fight still
simmering
from their last
encounter
. "We're not 'past' anything, Lucien. We ended things. Messily, if I recall."
He paused, his gaze sweeping
over the stacks of books and scrolls that lined the walls, coming to rest on a half-eaten takeaway box perched precariously on a pile of necromantic texts. "Eva's scholarship needs a robust pest control solution. Or perhaps a fire hazard inspection." "Leave Eva out of this." "Can I? When her pursuits so frequently intersect with mine? And, by extension, yours."
He glided past her, a
ripple of movement in the confined space.
Rory felt the brush of
his tailored sleeve against her arm, a
fleeting
spark that she immediately
tried to
extinguish.
He stepped into the tiny
living area, Ptolemy hissing, a furry ball of indignant fury. "You
really
expect me to just let
you
walk in?"
Rory closed the door, the
three deadbolts remaining ominously unlocked. "You have before."
He turned, his amber eye
catching hers, pulling her in despite herself. "And
you
will again. This isn't a social call, Rory." The use of her nickname, usually reserved for friends,
felt like a deliberate provocation from
him. "It never is with
you
. So, get to it."
She crossed her arms, a
shield against the sudden
chill
his presence always brought. Lucien surveyed the room, his gaze lingering on a framed photo of Rory and Eva, arms slung around each other, laughing, taken years ago at Cardiff Bay. "Always so direct. I appreciate that. No wasted words."
He reached into his inner
jacket pocket, producing a slim, unmarked envelope.
It was too pristine for
this cluttered space. "This arrives for Eva an hour ago." Rory’s
eyes narrowed
. "And
you
know that how?" "My sources are… comprehensive."
He tossed the envelope onto
a stack of parchments.
It landed with a soft
*
thwack
*, startling Ptolemy, who fled under the sofa with an offended rumble. "It’s a summons. From a party Eva would do
very
well not to ignore." "Summons for what? She's buried in her research." Rory glanced at the envelope.
It was thick, heavier than
it looked. Intricate, arcane symbols embossed the wax seal. Not a typical post. "Precisely. Her research. It seems to have attracted unwanted attention." Lucien's voice was low, carrying a dangerous undercurrent she knew all too well. "She's been looking into the 'Veiled Court', hasn't she? Those historical texts about the missing artefact, the one that seals the Avaros Gate?" Rory
felt a jolt
. Eva had recently become obsessed with a particularly obscure branch of demonology, muttering about
fragmented
prophecies and ancient pacts. "What if she has? It’s academic." "Academic to
you
. To others, it's a treasure map. One which leads straight to certain… influential individuals."
He took another step, closing
the distance between them, until she
could feel
the faint
warmth
radiating from him.
His hand, surprisingly gentle, reached
out and brushed a stray strand of black hair from her face, tucking it behind her ear. The contact
sent a jolt down
her spine. "You look tired, *
chérie
*. Still running full tilt?" Rory slapped his hand away. "Don't '
chérie
' me, Lucien. We're not doing this. You show up here, uninvited, with some vague threat about Eva, and
you
think I'll just fall into line?" "Threat? No, never a threat. A warning. A *
courtesy
* call, if
you
will." His eyes, amber and black,
seemed to
penetrate hers, searching for weaknesses. "This 'artefact' concerns my… lineage. The Avaros Gate. It’s a
very
old wound, Rory. One that bleeds profusely when disturbed." "Your lineage? Avaros? What do
you
even mean?"
Rory demanded, a cold dread seeping into her bones
. She knew Lucien was half-demon, but he rarely spoke of his heritage with such gravity.
He sighed, a theatrical puff
of air that ruffled his sleek hair. "Let us say I have a vested interest in keeping certain ancient doors
firmly
bolted. And Eva, bless her scholarly heart, has managed to acquire one of the keys." "Eva has a key?" Rory felt a surge of protectiveness. Eva was brilliant, but often oblivious to the real-world dangers of her studies. "What kind of key?" "A minor fragment, harmless in itself. But it allows access to… records. Unpleasant records. Records suggesting the artefact is not as lost as some would prefer. And that Eva has been drawing quite the detailed map to its approximate location." He gestured towards the clutter of notes. "All of which is now the property of the 'Veiled Court'." "Property? She hasn't signed anything away." He chuckled
softly
. "They don't ask, Rory. When
you
're dealing with entities as old and powerful as the Court, ownership is a matter of declaration, not contract. Especially when that declaration comes with a rather explicit demand for her presence." He nodded towards the envelope again. "Tonight. Alone." Rory felt a sudden prickle of fear. "Tonight? That's insane. She couldn't possibly be ready." "Indeed. Which is why
you
have
precisely
one hour to get her here." He checked his expensive silver watch, polished to a mirror sheen. "Better make it forty-five minutes. Traffic is abysmal. And they are not known for their patience. Or their hospitality." "What makes
you
think I'd agree to this? To help
you
or them?" "Because Eva is your friend." His voice lost its mocking edge, becoming something deeper, more resonant. "And because if she goes alone, she won't be coming back. Not in one piece, anyway. And certainly not with her mind intact." The words
hung in the air
, heavy and absolute. Rory saw the truth in his eyes. Lucien
wasn't fabricating
this. Eva
truly
was in
grave
danger. Her cool-headed intelligence kicked in. She
quickly
assessed the situation, the possibilities, the impossible odds. "And
you
?" she asked, her gaze fixed on his. "Why are *
you
* here? Why are *
you
* protecting her?" "Self-preservation. A
chaotic
Avaros Gate would be… inconvenient. And," he paused, his gaze softening, just for a
flicker
, on her scar, "I owe a certain fiery Irishwoman a few outstanding debts." Rory swallowed, the past rearing its ugly head. The way he had left her, after… everything. "Debts
you
never repaid." "Some debts are meant to linger, *
ma belle
*. Like a good vintage. Others, however, urgently require settlement. Such as Eva's unwitting trespass." He took another step, raising his cane. The ivory handle gleamed. "So. Are we going to dawdle and debate the nuances of our complicated history, or are we going to save your friend?" He
began to
tap his cane with purpose. Not a soft rhythm, but a steady *
thump-thump
*, like a ticking clock counting down stolen moments. Rory looked at the ominous envelope, then at Lucien's impossibly calm, dangerous face. The curry house below sent up a wave of aromatic spices, a
stark
contrast to the cold dread now coiling in her
stomach
. "Fine,"
Rory said, her voice tight
. "But if this is another one of your games, Lucien, I swear–" "Games? Rory, this is far beyond games. This is life and death, and possibly the fate of certain cosmic alignments." He offered a small, disarming smile that didn't
quite reach his eyes
. "Now, where is Eva? We haven't much time." The smile
was gone
. His eyes darkened. "And if
you
truly
wish to save her,
you
will
ensure
she brings the key."
created_at
"2026-02-25T01:07:30.459Z"
2/25/2026, 1:07:30 AM
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native_tokens_reasoning
3081
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Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
25
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
53
tagDensity
0.472
leniency
0.943
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
62.64%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
1472
totalAiIsmAdverbs
11
found
0
adverb
"utterly"
count
1
1
adverb
"suddenly"
count
1
2
adverb
"really"
count
1
3
adverb
"very"
count
2
4
adverb
"precisely"
count
2
5
adverb
"softly"
count
1
6
adverb
"truly"
count
2
7
adverb
"quickly"
count
1
highlights
0
"utterly"
1
"suddenly"
2
"really"
3
"very"
4
"precisely"
5
"softly"
6
"truly"
7
"quickly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
28.67%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
1472
totalAiIsms
21
found
0
word
"familiar"
count
1
1
word
"rhythmic"
count
1
2
word
"unspoken"
count
1
3
word
"traced"
count
1
4
word
"simmering"
count
1
5
word
"encounter"
count
1
6
word
"fleeting"
count
1
7
word
"chill"
count
1
8
word
"pristine"
count
1
9
word
"intricate"
count
1
10
word
"fragmented"
count
1
11
word
"could feel"
count
1
12
word
"warmth"
count
1
13
word
"down her spine"
count
1
14
word
"firmly"
count
1
15
word
"grave"
count
1
16
word
"chaotic"
count
1
17
word
"flicker"
count
1
18
word
"stark"
count
1
19
word
"stomach"
count
1
20
word
"ensure"
count
1
highlights
0
"familiar"
1
"rhythmic"
2
"unspoken"
3
"traced"
4
"simmering"
5
"encounter"
6
"fleeting"
7
"chill"
8
"pristine"
9
"intricate"
10
"fragmented"
11
"could feel"
12
"warmth"
13
"down her spine"
14
"firmly"
15
"grave"
16
"chaotic"
17
"flicker"
18
"stark"
19
"stomach"
20
"ensure"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
3
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
1
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
1
2
label
"sent a shiver through"
count
1
highlights
0
"eyes narrowed"
1
"hung in the air"
2
"sent a jolt down"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
1
narrationSentences
75
matches
0
"felt a jolt"
66.67%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
4
narrationSentences
75
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"tried to"
1
"seemed to"
2
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
102
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
47
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
7
markdownWords
8
totalWords
1474
ratio
0.005
matches
0
"thwack"
1
"chérie"
2
"courtesy"
3
"you"
4
"you"
5
"ma belle"
6
"thump-thump"
97.22%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
9
unquotedAttributions
1
matches
0
"He stepped into the tiny living area, Ptolemy hissing, a furry ball of indignant fury."
48.33%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
38
wordCount
836
uniqueNames
10
maxNameDensity
2.03
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
3
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva
6
Golden
1
Empress
1
Moreau
1
London
1
Rory
17
Ptolemy
3
Lucien
6
Cardiff
1
Bay
1
persons
0
"Eva"
1
"Moreau"
2
"Rory"
3
"Ptolemy"
4
"Lucien"
places
0
"London"
1
"Cardiff"
2
"Bay"
globalScore
0.483
windowScore
0.667
66.67%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
60
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"felt like a deliberate provocation from"
1
"quite reach his eyes"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
1
per1kWords
0.678
wordCount
1474
matches
0
"Not a soft rhythm, but a steady *thump-thump*, like a ticking clock counting down s"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
102
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
42
mean
35.1
std
18.95
cv
0.54
sampleLengths
0
57
1
33
2
3
3
38
4
29
5
63
6
3
7
25
8
28
9
46
10
5
11
61
12
20
13
25
14
39
15
63
16
8
17
44
18
31
19
46
20
29
21
74
22
32
23
45
24
32
25
41
26
27
27
58
28
6
29
48
30
15
31
43
32
13
33
39
34
41
35
18
36
31
37
20
38
79
39
36
40
18
41
62
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
1
totalSentences
75
matches
0
"was gone"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
1
totalVerbs
130
matches
0
"wasn't fabricating"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
2
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
1
totalSentences
102
ratio
0.01
matches
0
"His heterochromatic eyes – one amber, one utterly black – gleamed with an unsettling amusement."
92.33%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
842
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
39
adverbRatio
0.04631828978622328
lyAdverbCount
19
lyAdverbRatio
0.022565320665083134
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
102
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
102
mean
14.45
std
9.38
cv
0.649
sampleLengths
0
20
1
20
2
17
3
18
4
15
5
3
6
11
7
19
8
8
9
18
10
11
11
3
12
20
13
29
14
11
15
3
16
25
17
4
18
12
19
12
20
32
21
14
22
5
23
26
24
20
25
15
26
20
27
15
28
10
29
16
30
23
31
27
32
21
33
8
34
7
35
3
36
5
37
13
38
17
39
14
40
13
41
7
42
7
43
4
44
23
45
23
46
4
47
19
48
6
49
36
78.76%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
3
diversityRatio
0.49019607843137253
totalSentences
102
uniqueOpeners
50
90.09%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
2
totalSentences
74
matches
0
"Instead, the faint light from"
1
"Too much pride, too much"
ratio
0.027
41.62%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
33
totalSentences
74
matches
0
"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
1
"Her left hand unconsciously traced"
2
"He didn't move."
3
"His ivory-handled cane tapped a"
4
"He took a single step"
5
"He paused, his gaze sweeping"
6
"He glided past her, a"
7
"He stepped into the tiny"
8
"He turned, his amber eye"
9
"She crossed her arms, a"
10
"He reached into his inner"
11
"It was too pristine for"
12
"He tossed the envelope onto"
13
"It landed with a soft"
14
"It was thick, heavier than"
15
"He took another step, closing"
16
"His hand, surprisingly gentle, reached"
17
"His eyes, amber and black,"
18
"She knew Lucien was half-demon,"
19
"He sighed, a theatrical puff"
ratio
0.446
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
69
totalSentences
74
matches
0
"The deadbolts clicked open one"
1
"Rory pulled the heavy door"
2
"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3
"His heterochromatic eyes – one"
4
"The air fizzed, thick with"
5
"Ptolemy, Eva's chunky tabby, slunk"
6
"A rare sound from the"
7
"Rory asked, her voice flat,"
8
"Her left hand unconsciously traced"
9
"He didn't move."
10
"A faint scent of expensive"
11
"A corner of his mouth"
12
"His ivory-handled cane tapped a"
13
"He took a single step"
14
"Rory didn't step back."
15
"He paused, his gaze sweeping"
16
"He glided past her, a"
17
"Rory felt the brush of"
18
"He stepped into the tiny"
19
"Rory closed the door, the"
ratio
0.932
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
74
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
26
technicalSentenceCount
1
matches
0
"It landed with a soft *thwack*, startling Ptolemy, who fled under the sofa with an offended rumble."
5.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
25
uselessAdditionCount
6
matches
0
"He took, his presence immediately dominating the narrow hallway"
1
"He glided, a ripple of movement in the confined space"
2
"He turned, his amber eye catching hers, pulling her in despite herself"
3
"Rory demanded, a cold dread seeping into her bones"
4
"he paused, his gaze softening, just for a flicker, on her scar,"
5
"Rory said, her voice tight"
100.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
4
fancyCount
1
fancyTags
0
"Rory demanded (demand)"
dialogueSentences
53
tagDensity
0.075
leniency
0.151
rawRatio
0.25
effectiveRatio
0.038
77.0441%