Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95CGDRJF76J8RDTM9AM756

Run Details

Duration:
12.3s
Cost:
$0.006173
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain, cold and relentless, plastered Harlow’s closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair to her skull. Her boots slapped against the slick pavement, water splashing with each heavy stride. A low groan pulled from her lungs as she rounded a overflowing bin, the alley narrowing, becoming a dark tunnel between brick behemoths. Up ahead, Tomás Herrera’s dark curls bounced with each sprint. He moved like a shadow, weaving through the overflowing refuse with an unnatural grace, his olive skin gleaming under the sporadic streetlamp glow. Each beat of her heart echoed the insistent rhythm of her worn leather watch ticking on her left wrist. She tasted metal on her tongue, blood from a bitten lip she did not remember biting. Two blocks, three, maybe four, the chase stretched, a relentless push into the city's sodden underbelly. He was fast, quicker than she expected, a flicker of movement rather than a solid form. She held her breath, pushed her chest forward, and drove her legs harder. The memory of Morris’s face, pale and still, flashed behind her eyes, a sharp spur digging into her resolve. This one, she swore, would not vanish. Herrera cut left, a sudden, sharp turn, vanishing between a bolted fire escape and a stained metal door. Quinn threw herself into the corner, momentum nearly sending her sprawling. Her fingers grazed the cold, rusted metal of the doorframe, steadying herself. Here, the city’s usual symphony of sirens and distant traffic faded, replaced by the persistent drumming of the rain and her own ragged inhalations. The alley became a chasm, walled by towering, anonymous buildings whose windows gazed down like vacant eyes. She saw the glint of his Saint Christopher medallion as he ducked under a sagging tarpaulin, disappearing entirely behind a stack of waterlogged crates. “Herrera!” Her voice cracked, hoarse, stolen by the wind and rain. She plunged into the gloom, past the crates, hands reaching out, but the space where he had been stood empty. Only the faint scent of something herbal, something acrid and strange, lingered on the saturated air. Her sharp jaw tightened. He played cat and mouse. He *knew* these backstreets, these hidden veins of London, far better than any map could show. He pulled at loose stones from a crumbling wall, dislodging ancient mortar, revealing a low, arched passage. Darkness swallowed him instantly. Quinn hesitated, her military precision warring with the wildness of the chase. This was not a street. This was a rat run, an unmapped artery of the forgotten city. The passage exuded a damp, earthy chill, a smell of stagnant water and decaying brick. Her hand went to her sidearm, the cold grip a familiar comfort against the wet fabric of her coat. She peered into the archway. It descended, a winding, uneven staircase of broken flagstones, leading only to deeper blackness. Her breath came in ragged gasps, misting in the cold air. She followed despite the misgivings, her footfalls echoing, amplified by the confined space. The descent was steeper than it looked, the air growing heavier, colder. A faint, distant hum thrummed through the soles of her boots. The tunnel widened, then abruptly opened into a vast cavern. The silence here was complete, broken only by the drip of unseen water, a profound hush that felt heavier than any noise. The stench intensified, a heady mix of damp earth, something vaguely sulphuric, and an underlying, sickly sweetness. Here, the stone walls were not natural. They were shaped, carved, and painted with faded, cryptic symbols she did not recognize – spirals, eyes, interlocking geometric patterns that throbbed with a faint, internal light. Ahead, a heavy, wrought-iron gate, taller than two men, loomed out of the darkness. No padlock, no visible mechanism, just a solid barrier of archaic metal. Herrera was already through it, a dark silhouette against a burgeoning glow beyond. He turned, his warm brown eyes meeting hers across the cavernous void. He offered no challenge, no taunt, just a calm, assessing stare. Then he vanished. Quinn reached the gate. Its iron bars were thick, cold. The strange symbols on the rock pulsed brighter, catching the light from beyond the gate. She pressed her palm against the iron, feeling a faint, unsettling vibration. A barely audible hum filled the air, the same low thrumming she felt in her boots. A strange current ran through the gate, a silent, invisible barrier. She saw no hinges, no locks, no point of entry. It simply *was*. A thought, cold and unsettling, wormed into her mind. *Abandoned Tube station beneath Camden*. The market, moving every full moon. The bone token. Was this it? Was this the place Morris had warned her about, in hushed, fragmented words just before he disappeared? Her breath hitched. The air here felt thicker, charged, carrying the whisper of things unseen, unheard. She looked back at the narrow, winding passage she had come through, now a black mouth in the rock face. The world beyond the gate glowed, a kaleidoscope of colours flickering through the gaps in the iron. Shadows danced, strange shapes undulated, and the murmur of countless voices, low and indistinct, reached her. Her training screamed, *Unfamiliar territory. Unknown variables. Retreat.* But the image of Herrera’s retreating back, the almost casual certainty in his warm brown eyes, held her. He expected her to stop. He believed this gate, this place, would be enough. Morris found something here. Something supernatural. Her jaw clenched. She had to know. Her hand, trembling slightly, reached for the gate again. She pushed, but it stood solid, unyielding. No sound, no creak of old metal, just the humming silence. The glow beyond beckoned, a siren's call in the subterranean darkness. She could turn back. Walk away. But the cold dread that settled in her gut told her she would never find him again if she did. This was the opening. This was the moment. She pressed her face to the cold iron, gazing into the pulsing, vibrant chaos beyond.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:07:32.413Z" 2/25/2026, 1:07:32 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.96% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount992
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount992
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"gleaming"
count1
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"flicker"
count1
3
word"resolve"
count1
4
word"symphony"
count1
5
word"glint"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"echoing"
count1
10
word"silence"
count2
11
word"profound"
count1
12
word"throbbed"
count1
13
word"loomed"
count1
14
word"pulsed"
count1
15
word"fragmented"
count1
16
word"charged"
count1
17
word"whisper"
count1
18
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
19
word"variables"
count1
20
word"jaw clenched"
count1
highlights
0"gleaming"
1"echoed"
2"flicker"
3"resolve"
4"symphony"
5"glint"
6"gloom"
7"chill"
8"familiar"
9"echoing"
10"silence"
11"profound"
12"throbbed"
13"loomed"
14"pulsed"
15"fragmented"
16"charged"
17"whisper"
18"kaleidoscope"
19"variables"
20"jaw clenched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"jaw clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences86
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen26
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords12
totalWords993
ratio0.012
matches
0"knew"
1"was"
2"Abandoned Tube station beneath Camden"
3"Unfamiliar territory. Unknown variables. Retreat."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount992
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.4
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Tomás1
Herrera4
Morris3
Saint1
Christopher1
London1
Tube1
Quinn3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Quinn"
places
0"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences63
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount993
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
40.80% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs12
mean82.75
std24.23
cv0.293
sampleLengths
082
1106
2106
311
482
593
685
799
877
979
1073
11100
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"been stood"
1"were shaped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs157
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences86
ratio0.012
matches
0"They were shaped, carved, and painted with faded, cryptic symbols she did not recognize – spirals, eyes, interlocking geometric patterns that throbbed with a faint, internal light."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount994
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.029175050301810865
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.014084507042253521
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.55
std6.22
cv0.539
sampleLengths
013
113
223
310
423
519
616
716
816
913
1019
117
1218
1311
1412
1524
1617
1724
1811
1920
2016
214
225
2316
2417
254
2612
275
2812
2915
3019
315
3214
3311
3413
3512
3611
3710
3822
3917
407
4127
4214
4312
4413
4512
4611
473
484
496
45.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.3488372093023256
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners30
80.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences83
matches
0"Only the faint scent of"
1"Then he vanished."
ratio0.024
46.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her boots slapped against the"
1"He moved like a shadow,"
2"She tasted metal on her"
3"He was fast, quicker than"
4"She held her breath, pushed"
5"Her fingers grazed the cold,"
6"She saw the glint of"
7"Her voice cracked, hoarse, stolen"
8"She plunged into the gloom,"
9"Her sharp jaw tightened."
10"He played cat and mouse."
11"He *knew* these backstreets, these"
12"He pulled at loose stones"
13"Her hand went to her"
14"She peered into the archway."
15"It descended, a winding, uneven"
16"Her breath came in ragged"
17"She followed despite the misgivings,"
18"They were shaped, carved, and"
19"He turned, his warm brown"
ratio0.434
38.31% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences83
matches
0"Her boots slapped against the"
1"A low groan pulled from"
2"He moved like a shadow,"
3"Each beat of her heart"
4"She tasted metal on her"
5"He was fast, quicker than"
6"She held her breath, pushed"
7"The memory of Morris’s face,"
8"This one, she swore, would"
9"Herrera cut left, a sudden,"
10"Quinn threw herself into the"
11"Her fingers grazed the cold,"
12"Here, the city’s usual symphony"
13"The alley became a chasm,"
14"She saw the glint of"
15"Her voice cracked, hoarse, stolen"
16"She plunged into the gloom,"
17"Her sharp jaw tightened."
18"He played cat and mouse."
19"He *knew* these backstreets, these"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The silence here was complete, broken only by the drip of unseen water, a profound hush that felt heavier than any noise."
1"They were shaped, carved, and painted with faded, cryptic symbols she did not recognize – spirals, eyes, interlocking geometric patterns that throbbed with a fa…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.7783%