Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95CXRDHPZ9SNCEMZGFEMFS

Run Details

Duration:
21.2s
Cost:
$0.009007
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The silver chain of the Heartstone pendant bit into the back of Rory’s neck, a sharp reminder of the weight she carried. Against her chest, the thumbnail-sized crimson gem thrummed, a rhythmic heat that matched the quickening pace of her own pulse. She reached up, her thumb grazing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had followed her from the courtrooms of Cardiff to the rain-slicked streets of London, and now, to the boundary of worlds. Beside her, Isolde Varga moved with a grace that bordered on the offensive. The Half-Fae’s silver hair cascaded to her waist like a frozen waterfall, undisturbed by the breeze that rattled the ancient oaks of Richmond Park. As they approached the shimmering distortion in the air, Rory noticed that Isolde’s boots made no sound on the dry leaves. More unsettlingly, she left no footprints. "The threshold is a hungry thing," Isolde said, her pale lavender eyes fixed on the empty space between two standing stones. "It asks for the breath you hold and returns the sigh you owe." "Can’t you just say 'watch your step' once?" Rory muttered, though she tightened her grip on the hilt of the Fae-forged blade sheathed at her hip. The moonsilver pommel was ice-cold, a stark contrast to the burning Heartstone. A flicker of violet light pulsed to Rory’s left. Nyx, a silhouette of living shadow, drifted through the trunk of a tree as if the wood were nothing more than dark water. Their form was vaguely humanoid, standing over six feet tall, but the edges of their silhouette blurred and drifted like smoke. "The Veil is thin here, little mortal," Nyx’s voice arrived not as a sound, but as a whisper carried on a wind that wasn't blowing. "I can taste the amber on the other side. It smells of rot and honey." "Let’s get it over with," Rory said. She stepped forward, bracing for resistance. Instead, she felt a sensation of being turned inside out, a momentary vertigo that made her stomach lurch. The damp, chilly air of London vanished. In its place came a heat so thick and cloying it felt like a physical weight on her skin. Rory stumbled, her boots sinking into soil that felt as soft and fine as crushed velvet. She squinted against the sudden, overwhelming light. Above them, the sky was not blue or grey, but a vast, radiant expanse of warm amber, as if they were standing inside a jar of molten honey. There were no clouds, only swirled streaks of deeper gold that suggested a slow, atmospheric churn. "Dymas," Isolde whispered. "The land where the belly is king and the throat is a temple." Rory took a cautious breath. The air tasted of overripe peaches, cinnamon, and the metallic tang of old wine. It was intoxicating, a sensory assault that made her head swim. To her left, Nyx solidified, their violet eyes glowing with a faint, predatory light. The Shade seemed more substantial here, the darkness of their form sharper against the golden atmosphere. They stood at the edge of a gentle slope. Below them stretched a landscape of impossible fertility. Sprawling vineyards rolled toward the horizon, the vines heavy with clusters of grapes the size of plums, glowing with an inner luminescence. Orchards of trees with crystalline leaves shook in the heavy air, their branches sagging under the weight of fruits Rory didn't recognize—orbs of deep indigo, spiked gourds of neon orange, and translucent spheres that pulsed like beating hearts. "Is it always this... much?" Rory asked, her hand hovering near her dagger. "Excess is the only law here," Nyx replied, drifting slightly ahead. "Be wary of the beauty, Rory. In the realm of Gluttony, everything wants to be consumed, and everything wants to consume you." As they descended the slope, the scale of the world became clearer. The "bushes" lining the path were actually brambles of wild berries, each one the size of a fist and weeping a thick, iridescent nectar that stained the velvet soil. The sound of the place was a low, constant throb—the hum of millions of insects, perhaps, or the collective vibration of a world that was perpetually growing, ripening, and decaying all at once. In the distance, Rory spotted movement in the vineyards. She froze, signaling the others to stop. Humanoid figures moved among the vines, their motions slow and rhythmic. From this distance, they looked like ordinary laborers, but as the group drew closer, the illusion of normalcy shattered. The workers were thin—harrowed, skeletal forms that contrasted sharply with the obscene bounty of the land. They wore tattered remains of modern clothing—business suits, aprons, high-street fashion—now reduced to rags. They worked with a frantic, desperate intensity, plucking the oversized fruit and placing it into silver baskets. "Helbound," Isolde said, her voice devoid of its usual riddling tone. "Mortals who traded their souls for a taste of something they couldn't name. Now they harvest the feast they are never permitted to join." One of the workers, a man who might have been thirty but looked a hundred, turned toward them. His eyes were hollow, filled with a terrible, starving heat. He didn't speak; he simply watched them with a longing so profound it made Rory’s skin crawl. She looked away, her chest tightening. This wasn't just a garden; it was a gilded cage, a place where the concept of 'enough' had been scrubbed from existence. "Keep moving," Nyx hissed, their shadow stretching long and jagged across the golden grass. "The Prince’s overseers do not care for tourists." They pushed deeper into the groves. The humidity rose, and with it, the scent of the air changed. The sweetness became fermenting, alcoholic. Rory felt a strange lethargy creeping into her limbs, a desire to sit beneath one of the indigo-fruited trees and simply... rest. Her stomach gave a sharp, demanding growl, though she had eaten before they left. "The environment is a lure," Isolde warned, sensing Rory’s hesitation. "The air itself is a banquet. To breathe is to begin the meal. Focus on the cold, Aurora. Focus on the blade." Rory gripped the moonsilver hilt. The biting cold of the Fae metal cleared the fog in her mind. She looked at the Heartstone pendant; it was glowing fiercely now, the crimson light cutting through the amber haze like a bloody eye. It was pointing them toward a structure rising in the distance—a palace of white marble and gold that seemed to grow out of the very earth, surrounded by waterfalls of what looked like pale cream or silver oil. As they skirted a grove of trees whose bark resembled toasted almond, a sound broke through the hum of the realm. It wasn't the wind or the insects. it was the sound of silver clashing against porcelain, and a low, resonant laughter that felt like it was vibrating in Rory’s marrow. "A competition," Nyx whispered, their violet eyes flickering. "Prince Belphegor’s master chefs are at their work. We are close to the heart of the Gluttony." Rory stepped over a root that bled thick red sap, her eyes fixed on the palace. The wonder of the place was rapidly being eclipsed by a cold, sharp unease. Here, the colors were too bright, the scents too heavy, and the hunger too real. She was a delivery girl from Cardiff who had spent her nights weaving through London traffic to bring people tepid noodles. Now, she was walking through a living nightmare of indulgence where the very ground beneath her feet felt like it was waiting for her to fall. She adjusted the strap of her bag and kept her hand on her dagger. This wasn't a world of law and logic. It was a world of appetite. And as she looked at the skeletal figures in the fields and the shimmering, amber sky above, Rory realized that in Dymas, the only thing more dangerous than being hungry was being the meal.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
85.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"sharply"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1336
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"reminder"
count1
1
word"weight"
count3
2
word"rhythmic"
count2
3
word"pulse"
count1
4
word"stark"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count1
6
word"pulsed"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count2
9
word"lurch"
count1
10
word"velvet"
count2
11
word"radiant"
count1
12
word"churn"
count1
13
word"crystalline"
count1
14
word"throb"
count1
15
word"normalcy"
count1
16
word"shattered"
count1
17
word"intensity"
count1
18
word"profound"
count1
19
word"desire"
count1
20
word"structure"
count1
21
word"marble"
count1
22
word"porcelain"
count1
highlights
0"reminder"
1"weight"
2"rhythmic"
3"pulse"
4"stark"
5"flicker"
6"pulsed"
7"whisper"
8"stomach"
9"lurch"
10"velvet"
11"radiant"
12"churn"
13"crystalline"
14"throb"
15"normalcy"
16"shattered"
17"intensity"
18"profound"
19"desire"
20"structure"
21"marble"
22"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1329
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
75.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount1140
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.49
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Heartstone3
Rory17
Cardiff2
London3
Isolde6
Varga1
Half-Fae1
Richmond1
Park1
Fae-forged1
Nyx6
Shade1
One1
Fae3
Dymas1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Isolde"
2"Varga"
3"Half-Fae"
4"Nyx"
5"Shade"
6"Fae"
places
0"Heartstone"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
3"Richmond"
4"Park"
5"Dymas"
globalScore0.754
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like a physical weight on her skin"
1"seemed more substantial here, the darkness of their form sharper against the golden atmosphere"
2"looked like ordinary laborers, but as the"
3"looked like pale cream or silver oil"
4"felt like it was vibrating in Rory’s ma"
5"felt like it was waiting for her to fal"
49.51% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.505
wordCount1329
matches
0"not as a sound, but as a whisper carried on a wind"
1"not blue or grey, but a vast, radiant expanse of warm amber, as if they were stand"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"noticed that Isolde’s"
85.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs27
mean49.22
std22.18
cv0.451
sampleLengths
080
164
234
338
453
540
67
750
867
916
1060
1177
1213
1333
1474
1546
1647
1735
1873
1922
2059
2132
2279
2351
2425
2592
2662
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
0.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount11
totalVerbs177
matches
0"wasn't blowing"
1"were standing"
2"was intoxicating"
3"was perpetually growing"
4"was glowing"
5"was pointing"
6"was vibrating"
7"was rapidly being"
8"was walking"
9"was waiting"
10"was being"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences84
ratio0.107
matches
0"She reached up, her thumb grazing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had followed her from the courtrooms of Cardiff to the rain-slicked streets of London, and now, to the boundary of worlds."
1"Orchards of trees with crystalline leaves shook in the heavy air, their branches sagging under the weight of fruits Rory didn't recognize—orbs of deep indigo, spiked gourds of neon orange, and translucent spheres that pulsed like beating hearts."
2"The sound of the place was a low, constant throb—the hum of millions of insects, perhaps, or the collective vibration of a world that was perpetually growing, ripening, and decaying all at once."
3"The workers were thin—harrowed, skeletal forms that contrasted sharply with the obscene bounty of the land."
4"They wore tattered remains of modern clothing—business suits, aprons, high-street fashion—now reduced to rags."
5"He didn't speak; he simply watched them with a longing so profound it made Rory’s skin crawl."
6"This wasn't just a garden; it was a gilded cage, a place where the concept of 'enough' had been scrubbed from existence."
7"She looked at the Heartstone pendant; it was glowing fiercely now, the crimson light cutting through the amber haze like a bloody eye."
8"It was pointing them toward a structure rising in the distance—a palace of white marble and gold that seemed to grow out of the very earth, surrounded by waterfalls of what looked like pale cream or silver oil."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount831
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.026474127557160047
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010830324909747292
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean15.82
std8.21
cv0.519
sampleLengths
022
120
238
313
424
521
66
721
813
926
1012
119
1223
1321
1425
1515
167
176
1818
197
2019
2116
227
2328
2416
253
2613
275
2814
2911
3014
3116
329
338
3422
3538
3613
3711
3822
3912
4029
4133
429
437
4411
4519
4616
4714
4817
4911
77.38% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.5
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners42
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"More unsettlingly, she left no"
1"Instead, she felt a sensation"
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount21
totalSentences73
matches
0"She reached up, her thumb"
1"Their form was vaguely humanoid,"
2"She stepped forward, bracing for"
3"She squinted against the sudden,"
4"It was intoxicating, a sensory"
5"They stood at the edge"
6"She froze, signaling the others"
7"They wore tattered remains of"
8"They worked with a frantic,"
9"His eyes were hollow, filled"
10"He didn't speak; he simply"
11"She looked away, her chest"
12"They pushed deeper into the"
13"Her stomach gave a sharp,"
14"She looked at the Heartstone"
15"It was pointing them toward"
16"It wasn't the wind or"
17"it was the sound of"
18"She was a delivery girl"
19"She adjusted the strap of"
ratio0.288
83.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences73
matches
0"The silver chain of the"
1"She reached up, her thumb"
2"The Half-Fae’s silver hair cascaded"
3"Isolde said, her pale lavender"
4"Rory muttered, though she tightened"
5"The moonsilver pommel was ice-cold,"
6"A flicker of violet light"
7"Nyx, a silhouette of living"
8"Their form was vaguely humanoid,"
9"Nyx’s voice arrived not as"
10"She stepped forward, bracing for"
11"The damp, chilly air of"
12"Rory stumbled, her boots sinking"
13"She squinted against the sudden,"
14"Rory took a cautious breath."
15"The air tasted of overripe"
16"It was intoxicating, a sensory"
17"The Shade seemed more substantial"
18"They stood at the edge"
19"Orchards of trees with crystalline"
ratio0.753
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"To her left, Nyx solidified,"
1"Now, she was walking through"
ratio0.027
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences45
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Against her chest, the thumbnail-sized crimson gem thrummed, a rhythmic heat that matched the quickening pace of her own pulse."
1"She reached up, her thumb grazing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit that had followed her from the courtrooms of Cardiff to the …"
2"The Half-Fae’s silver hair cascaded to her waist like a frozen waterfall, undisturbed by the breeze that rattled the ancient oaks of Richmond Park."
3"Instead, she felt a sensation of being turned inside out, a momentary vertigo that made her stomach lurch."
4"Above them, the sky was not blue or grey, but a vast, radiant expanse of warm amber, as if they were standing inside a jar of molten honey."
5"Orchards of trees with crystalline leaves shook in the heavy air, their branches sagging under the weight of fruits Rory didn't recognize—orbs of deep indigo, s…"
6"The sound of the place was a low, constant throb—the hum of millions of insects, perhaps, or the collective vibration of a world that was perpetually growing, r…"
7"The workers were thin—harrowed, skeletal forms that contrasted sharply with the obscene bounty of the land."
8"it was the sound of silver clashing against porcelain, and a low, resonant laughter that felt like it was vibrating in Rory’s marrow."
9"She was a delivery girl from Cardiff who had spent her nights weaving through London traffic to bring people tepid noodles."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Rory asked, her hand hovering near her dagger"
1"Isolde said, her voice devoid of its usual riddling tone"
2"Nyx hissed, their shadow stretching long and jagged across the golden grass"
3"Nyx whispered, their violet eyes flickering"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory muttered (mutter)"
1"Isolde whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx hissed (hiss)"
3"Isolde warned (warn)"
4"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences20
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.5
71.3963%