Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95D6FVWRRGJJ3PNF8H62C1

Run Details

Duration:
26.1s
Cost:
$0.002800
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The low hum of conversation vibrated through the worn floorboards of The Raven's Nest. Amber light from the bar cast long shadows that stretched and contorted the faces of the few patrons scattered at tables. Rory leaned against the polished mahogany, tracing the grain with a fingertip. The scent of stale beer, lemon polish, and something faintly metallic – Silas’s perpetual hand sanitiser – hung in the air. It was a familiar smell, a comforting camouflage. Outside, Soho pulsed with its usual nocturnal energy, a restless beast that never slept. Inside, time often felt suspended, a forgotten relic behind the green neon sign. She finished wiping down the counter near the till, placing the damp cloth beside a stack of coasters. Silas was nowhere in sight, likely holed up in his office, poring over ledgers or whatever secrets the night demanded. A small smile touched her lips. He’d hired her for her discretion as much as her speed, a quiet understanding passing between them after she’d walked into his bar, looking like she’d been running from something important, clutching the keys to the flat above. The bell above the door jingled, a sharp, cheerful sound that cut through the bar’s low murmur. Rory glanced up, her mind already cataloguing the usual late-night arrivals: office workers unwinding, theatre folk seeking a final drink, the occasional lost tourist. But the man silhouetted against the illuminated street drew her gaze, a flicker of something she couldn't quite place. He stepped inside, shaking a stray drizzle from a dark, expensive-looking overcoat. He moved with a confidence, a practiced ease. Not the furtive shuffle of someone trying to disappear, but the purposeful stride of someone who belonged everywhere. He turned, his eyes scanning the room. And then they landed on her. His eyebrows, darker than she remembered, pulled together in confusion, then widened with a jolt of recognition. A slow, almost disbelieving smile unfurled across his lips. "Rory?" The name, when it came, was a question. A relic. Her breath hitched, just for a second. The smooth, worn wood of the bar suddenly felt foreign under her hands. "Ethan?" The name felt clunky, unfamiliar. It had been years. So many years that the boy who’d spoken it with a cheeky grin felt like a character in a book she’d long since finished. He approached, his gait even and steady, no hint of the awkward teenage sprawl she recalled. His jawline was sharper, his posture straighter. He wore a suit, tailored and dark, that seemed to absorb the bar’s dim light. On his right wrist, a gleam of gold caught her eye – a watch, impossibly sleek. Silas’s stories about the world beyond this one often featured such details, markers of ascent. "Bloody hell," Ethan said, stopping a few feet away. He chuckled, a low, resonant sound, nothing like the nervous bursts of laughter she remembered. "Aurora Carter. I didn't believe it was you. You look… well." He scanned her again, his gaze lingering for a fraction too long. It wasn't the casual appreciation of a stranger, but a more critical assessment. "Still serving drinks?" The question hung in the air, sharp and unexpected. She didn't flinch. "Something like that," she replied, her voice steady. "And you? You're a long way from Cardiff." "Only for the week," he said, his eyes bright. "Business. Closing a deal. London’s always buzzing, isn't it? Always something happening." He gestured vaguely with a hand that looked far too manicured. "Never thought I’d see you in a place like this, though. Always thought you'd end up… somewhere else." "Here works," she said, picking up the polishing cloth again. She’d learned that when life threw curveballs, neatness helped. "It's quiet. People don't ask too many questions." He leaned against the bar, not with the casual abandon of a patron, but with the possessive air of someone who expected service. "No questions? That's a change, isn't it? You used to have a thousand questions for everything. Used to want to know how it all worked, how it all fit together." He paused, his smile turning a fraction harder. "Still got that scar?" Her left wrist, unseen beneath her sleeve, tightened into a fist. The crescent moon ached, a phantom sensation. She met his gaze directly, her own blue eyes unreadable. "Some things stay with you." "Some things," he echoed softly. He signaled to a stool. "Mind if I…?" She nodded towards an unoccupied stool near the end of the bar. "Silas is usually around. He'll sort you out." She hadn't moved from her spot behind the counter. The dynamic felt wrong. He wasn't the impetuous boy who'd once tried to scale the tallest tree in Bute Park with her. This man was built of different materials. Ethan settled onto the stool, his movements fluid, his expensive shoes tapping a silent rhythm on the floor. A waiter, one of the younger ones Rory sometimes worked with, immediately appeared, a notepad at the ready. Ethan ordered a scotch, neat, with a casual wave of his hand that suggested he’d done it a thousand times. "So," Ethan began, turning back to her as the waiter retreated, "what about you? Eva said you just… vanished. Packed up and gone one day. Left everyone wondering." "Eva," Rory murmured, the name stirring a faint, unwelcome warmth. Eva, who’d found her, who’d pulled her from the wreckage. Eva had always been the rescuer. "She worries too much. I just needed… space." "Space?" He took a slow sip of his scotch, his hazel eyes appraising her over the rim of the glass. "London's a big place for 'space', Rory. Bigger than you needed, maybe." He set the glass down with a quiet click. "Still seeing Evan?" The question, so blunt, so carelessly dropped, landed like a stone. The air in the bar seemed to thicken, drawing in the shadows. Rory kept her gaze fixed on the bottles behind him, her hands stilling. She remembered the nights Evan’s shadow had fallen over her, the tight knot of fear in her stomach. She remembered Ethan, caught somewhere between oblivious and unwilling to see. "No," she said, her voice a low, level tone that didn't betray the tremor that ran through her. "I left him behind. A while ago. Long before London." Ethan nodded slowly, a thoughtful expression on his face. "Right. Of course. Eva mentioned… some trouble. Sorry, I didn’t mean to pry. Just curious how the brave Rory Carter ended up behind a bar in Soho." He paused, a glint in his eye. "Thought you’d be debating in Parliament by now. Or arguing some massive case. That fire you had, Rory. It was… something." "Fire gets banked, Ethan," she replied, picking up a clean glass and examining it for imperfections. "Doesn't mean it goes out." He chuckled again, that unnerving, smooth sound. "Maybe. Or maybe it just smoulders, waiting for the right wind. Mine never really caught. Not the way I intended, anyway." He gestured with his scotch. "Law school. You remember? Dad practically packed my bags the day graduation rolled around. Said there was good money in defence work. Cutthroat, but good money." Rory met his gaze, a subtle shift in her posture. Pre-Law. Her own father, the barrister, pushing her towards the same path. The suffocating weight of expectation. "So, you did it?" "I did it," he confirmed, taking another sip. "Been making my way. Got a firm now. Little one, but it's ours. Specialise in corporate mergers. Sounds dull, doesn't it? But the figures… they’re something else. Figures don't lie, Rory. They just add up. Or down." He turned the glass in his hand. "We built it, my partner and I. Brick by brick. Took a lot of late nights. A lot of… compromises." "Compromises," Rory repeated, the word tasting bitter. She knew about compromises. Her compromise was keeping her head down, serving drinks, keeping her silence, ensuring the crescent scar on her wrist never saw the light of day. His compromise… he hadn't elaborated, but the way he'd said "cutthroat" and the almost-too-bright gleam in his eyes suggested it was a different currency. "Yeah. You learn to see things differently when you're fighting for your own patch. You see what people are really made of. What they'll do for a piece of the pie." He leaned forward, his voice dropping slightly, though it still carried easily across the bar. "Evan… he was like that, wasn’t he? Always wanted a bigger slice, didn’t care who he stepped on to get it. I saw the way he looked at you even back then. Knew it wouldn't end well." "You saw?" A flicker of something – surprise, resentment – broke through her carefully constructed calm. He’d seen. And he’d done nothing. He’d just watched the boy with the "bigger slice" mentality circle her. "You never said anything." Ethan shrugged, a small, almost imperceptible movement of his broad shoulders. "What could I say? You were already in deep. And honestly, Rory, you were always the one who could handle things. You were the smart one. I figured you had it under control." He smiled, a tight, self-deprecating twist of his lips. "Turns out, I didn't. I just… drifted into my own fight. My own sort of survival." He looked around the bar, then back at her. "Still, The Raven's Nest. This little bolt-hole. It's a far cry from the life we talked about, isn't it? The globetrotting, the risks, the grand adventures? We were going to change the world, remember? Or at least shake it up." Rory picked up a clean glass, her fingers moving with a practiced efficiency. "The world keeps turning, Ethan. Sometimes it just doesn't go the way you planned." She ran her thumb over the smooth, cool surface of the glass. "You get off when you can. Find a place to land. Make do." He watched her for a moment, his gaze unreadable. The easy charm he’d displayed earlier had faded, replaced by a kind of weary appraisal. "Make do," he repeated, a low hum of something that might have been disappointment, or perhaps just resignation. He raised his glass again. "To making do, then." She met his gaze, her own unnervingly steady. She lifted her chin, her mouth forming a small, unsmiling curve. "I'll drink my own kind of toast, thanks." The waiter returned with Ethan's drink. He took a long, slow swallow, his eyes never leaving Rory. Her own hand rested near the crescent scar, a silent knot of history tight in her chest. The silence between them grew, a heavy, charged thing, filled with the ghosts of shared dreams and the stark outlines of lives irrevocably altered.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:07:55.009Z" 2/25/2026, 1:07:55 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
96.55% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags29
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"He gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1"he echoed softly [softly]"
2"He’d just [just]"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.569
leniency1
rawRatio0.103
effectiveRatio0.103
80.30% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"really"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"slightly"
5"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.47% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1777
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"comforting"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"flicker"
count2
6
word"practiced ease"
count1
7
word"scanning"
count1
8
word"scanned"
count1
9
word"unreadable"
count2
10
word"echoed"
count1
11
word"warmth"
count1
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"glint"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"silence"
count2
16
word"ensuring"
count1
17
word"constructed"
count1
18
word"charm"
count1
19
word"charged"
count1
20
word"stark"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"tracing"
2"familiar"
3"comforting"
4"pulsed"
5"flicker"
6"practiced ease"
7"scanning"
8"scanned"
9"unreadable"
10"echoed"
11"warmth"
12"stomach"
13"glint"
14"weight"
15"silence"
16"ensuring"
17"constructed"
18"charm"
19"charged"
20"stark"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count2
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences107
matches
0"r in confusion"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences129
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1782
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1227
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Ethan"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Silas3
Soho1
Bute1
Park1
Rory9
Eva2
Evan1
Ethan8
persons
0"Raven"
1"Silas"
2"Rory"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Ethan"
places
0"Soho"
1"Bute"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
93.82% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"quite place"
1"felt like a character in a book she’d l"
87.77% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.122
wordCount1782
matches
0"Not the furtive shuffle of someone trying to disappear, but the purposeful stride of someone who belonged everywhere"
1"not with the casual abandon of a patron, but with the possessive air of someone who expected service"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences129
matches(empty)
89.32% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean49.5
std22.9
cv0.463
sampleLengths
0103
182
298
313
426
511
654
769
863
928
1050
1127
1265
1333
1413
1558
1656
1728
1834
1944
2065
2128
2264
2321
2459
2531
2672
2760
2883
2938
3069
3149
3252
3351
3427
3558
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences107
matches
0"was built"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs193
matches
0"was keeping"
76.41% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences129
ratio0.023
matches
0"The scent of stale beer, lemon polish, and something faintly metallic – Silas’s perpetual hand sanitiser – hung in the air."
1"On his right wrist, a gleam of gold caught her eye – a watch, impossibly sleek."
2"\"You saw?\" A flicker of something – surprise, resentment – broke through her carefully constructed calm."
89.81% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1228
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"tight, self-deprecating twist"
adverbCount55
adverbRatio0.04478827361563518
lyAdverbCount15
lyAdverbRatio0.012214983713355049
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences129
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences129
mean13.81
std9.3
cv0.673
sampleLengths
014
121
212
321
48
514
613
718
820
96
1038
1117
1224
1319
1412
158
1618
177
186
1917
209
219
222
237
2413
256
264
2724
2816
297
3015
3116
3215
339
3415
3523
3613
373
389
393
408
418
429
4323
4418
4510
469
478
4823
4938
60.47% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3953488372093023
totalSentences129
uniqueOpeners51
32.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences103
matches
0"So many years that the"
ratio0.01
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount57
totalSentences103
matches
0"It was a familiar smell,"
1"She finished wiping down the"
2"He’d hired her for her"
3"He stepped inside, shaking a"
4"He moved with a confidence,"
5"He turned, his eyes scanning"
6"His eyebrows, darker than she"
7"Her breath hitched, just for"
8"It had been years."
9"He approached, his gait even"
10"His jawline was sharper, his"
11"He wore a suit, tailored"
12"He chuckled, a low, resonant"
13"He scanned her again, his"
14"It wasn't the casual appreciation"
15"She didn't flinch."
16"she replied, her voice steady"
17"he said, his eyes bright"
18"He gestured vaguely with a"
19"she said, picking up the"
ratio0.553
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount95
totalSentences103
matches
0"The low hum of conversation"
1"Amber light from the bar"
2"Rory leaned against the polished"
3"The scent of stale beer,"
4"It was a familiar smell,"
5"She finished wiping down the"
6"Silas was nowhere in sight,"
7"A small smile touched her"
8"He’d hired her for her"
9"The bell above the door"
10"Rory glanced up, her mind"
11"He stepped inside, shaking a"
12"He moved with a confidence,"
13"He turned, his eyes scanning"
14"His eyebrows, darker than she"
15"A slow, almost disbelieving smile"
16"The name, when it came,"
17"Her breath hitched, just for"
18"The smooth, worn wood of"
19"The name felt clunky, unfamiliar"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
36.47% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences47
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Amber light from the bar cast long shadows that stretched and contorted the faces of the few patrons scattered at tables."
1"He’d hired her for her discretion as much as her speed, a quiet understanding passing between them after she’d walked into his bar, looking like she’d been runn…"
2"Not the furtive shuffle of someone trying to disappear, but the purposeful stride of someone who belonged everywhere."
3"So many years that the boy who’d spoken it with a cheeky grin felt like a character in a book she’d long since finished."
4"He leaned against the bar, not with the casual abandon of a patron, but with the possessive air of someone who expected service."
5"Ethan ordered a scotch, neat, with a casual wave of his hand that suggested he’d done it a thousand times."
6"Her compromise was keeping her head down, serving drinks, keeping her silence, ensuring the crescent scar on her wrist never saw the light of day."
4.31% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags29
uselessAdditionCount7
matches
0"The name felt, unfamiliar"
1"He scanned, his gaze lingering for a fraction too long"
2"she replied, her voice steady"
3"he said, his eyes bright"
4"He paused, his smile turning a fraction harder"
5"Rory murmured, the name stirring a faint, unwelcome warmth"
6"Rory repeated, the word tasting bitter"
51.96% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"he confirmed (confirm)"
2"Rory repeated (repeat)"
3"he hadn't (have)"
4"he repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences51
tagDensity0.216
leniency0.431
rawRatio0.455
effectiveRatio0.196
73.2897%