Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95DBE1Z9ZHRK40HEHZPZPW

Run Details

Duration:
17.1s
Cost:
$0.001741
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of Richmond Park stood like skeletal fingers against the bruised twilight sky. Rory pulled her denim jacket tighter, the worn fabric a familiar comfort against the sharp October chill. The air itself felt thinner here, scrubbed clean of city smog but layered thick with an ancient, earthy stillness. She’d told herself this was just another delivery route, a favour for Yu-Fei Cheung, but Silas had seen the slight tremor in her hands as she pocketed the cash yesterday. He’d just nodded, his grizzled face unreadable, and said, "Takes guts, kid." Guts. Or desperation. She navigated past the last of the park’s lamplit paths, her boots crunching on fallen leaves that whispered secrets older than the city below. Her phone’s borrowed flashlight beam sliced a narrow tunnel through the encroaching dark, illuminating only the immediate tangle of bracken and the looming silhouettes of trees. An hour ago, the Heartstone Pendant resting against her sternum had been cool, inert. Now, a faint warmth seeped through her shirt, a subtle thrumming she felt more than heard. It was her guide, her only clue to what Dymas had gifted her. Or perhaps, an advertisement for what it wanted. The path dissolved. She pushed through a screen of thorns, emerging into a space that felt both vast and claustrophobic. Before her stood the standing stones, dark monoliths of ancient oak, gnarled and pitted like the faces of forgotten gods. They marked the threshold, a boundary she already felt pressing against her skin. The usual sounds of the night – the distant thrum of traffic, the hoot of an owl, the rustle of small creatures – had utterly vanished. This silence was a void, a vacuum that seemed to suck sound molecules right out of the air. It pressed in, heavy and absolute. She swallowed, her throat suddenly dry. "Okay," she breathed, the word a tiny, fragile puff of vapor in the frigid air. "Just like Silas said. Isolde's grove." She stepped between two of the monolithic oaks. The air inside felt different. Warmer. Heavier. The darkness here wasn't just an absence of light; it was a tangible presence, a deep, ink-black dye seeping into everything. Yet, paradoxically, the ground beneath her feet became a riot of colour. Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, bloomed in impossible profusion, their petals glowing with a pale, phosphorescent light that cast long, distorted shadows. Blues so deep they verged on black, reds like freshly spilled blood, yellows that seemed to absorb the torchlight and push it back. They were here year-round, the stories went, untouched by frost or season. Now, in the pitch black of night, they looked predatory. Her gaze swept the clearing, seeking a reason for the warmth radiating from the pendant. No sign of any portal, Hel or otherwise. Just trees, stones, and the unnervingly vivid flowers. She took a step further in, her boots sinking slightly into the mossy ground. A faint scent assailed her, a heady perfume of honey and damp earth and something else… metallic, like old pennies. Her flashlight beam wavered. A scuff. Rory froze. The sound was faint, barely audible over the insistent thrumming of the pendant. She strained her ears. Nothing but the heavy silence and the pulse at her chest. “Just… my own footfall,” she murmured, though the sound had seemed distinct, separate. A skittering noise, like dry leaves being dragged. But there was no breeze. Not a whisper of wind stirred the unnaturally still boughs above. Her eyes darted to the periphery of her flashlight’s reach. A flicker. A shift in the texture of the gloom. She snapped her light in that direction. A thicket of moon-white foxgloves, their bell-shaped flowers hanging like dark, silent mouths. Nothing moved. Yet, the suggestion of movement lingered, a ghost imprint on her vision. She shook her head, trying to clear the fog of unease. This was the Fae Grove. Tricks of light, tricks of the mind. She’d come for answers, not to scare herself with shadows. She walked deeper, drawn by the growing insistence of the pendant’s warmth. It felt less like a heating element and more like a small creature stirring against her skin, a tiny, warm heart beating in sympathy with something unseen. The air grew colder again, a sharp contrast to the pendant’s heat. The flowers seemed to dim, their unnatural glow receding, leaving the clearing in deeper, more profound darkness. The silence deepened too, becoming a suffocating blanket. Her breath hitched. Another sound. This time, clearer. A low, wet drag. Like something heavy being pulled across damp earth. It wasn't a natural sound. It was deliberate. Measured. It seemed to come from the edge of the clearing, behind a stand of ancient yews whose branches drooped like skeletal arms. "Anyone there?" The question tore from her throat, sharper than she intended. Her voice sounded thin, alien in this place. It echoed strangely, then died, absorbed by the suffocating stillness. No answer came. But the pendant pulsed harder, a definite surge of heat against her ribs. It was reacting. To what? Her flashlight beam, now trembling in her grip, swept across the yews. Nothing. Just endless tangled darkness. But as the light moved, she caught it again. That flicker. This time, it wasn't at the edge of her vision. It was in the shadow clinging to the trunk of the largest yew. A shadow that moved independently of the tree it belonged to, detaching itself for a fleeting instant, a deeper stain against the already profound blackness. She swung the flashlight beam back, fixing it on the spot. The shadow snapped back into place, indistinguishable from the rest of the gloom. Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic, uncoordinated rhythm that seemed to mock her own attempt at composure. "This isn't funny," she whispered, her voice raspy. She took another step, aiming for the centre of the clearing, hoping to find the source of the pendant’s reaction. The ground felt strangely uneven now, as if she were treading over buried roots or uneven stones. Her ankle twisted slightly. She caught herself, her hand slamming against the rough bark of a nearby oak. The bark felt strangely smooth, slick almost, under her palm. Not like bark at all. But when she snatched her hand away, the texture was gone. The dragging sound came again, closer this time. It was accompanied by a soft, guttural sigh. A sound that was not human, not animal, but something in between. Something that belonged to the whispers of the Fae realm. The pendant’s warmth flared, a distinct pulse against her skin. It felt like a warning, a desperate plea. She held her breath, straining to hear over the roaring in her own ears. The air grew heavy with that metallic scent, sharper now, coppery. Her eyes, wide and searching, darted frantically through the oppressive dark. She felt it then, acutely. The certainty. Not a suspicion, not a guess, but a cold, hard fact settling in her gut. She was not alone. Something was here with her, watching, waiting. And it was not friendly. The drag, the sigh, the independent shadow—they coalesced into a singular, terrifying truth. Whatever dwelled within the Fae Grove, it knew she was here. And it was making its presence known.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He’d just [just]"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.833
leniency1
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.2
83.48% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
highlights
0"utterly"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1211
totalAiIsms30
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"unreadable"
count1
3
word"navigated"
count1
4
word"looming"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count4
6
word"silence"
count3
7
word"tangible"
count1
8
word"wavered"
count1
9
word"pulse"
count2
10
word"footfall"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"flicker"
count2
13
word"gloom"
count2
14
word"profound"
count2
15
word"measured"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"pulsed"
count1
18
word"fleeting"
count1
19
word"roaring"
count1
20
word"oppressive"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"chill"
2"unreadable"
3"navigated"
4"looming"
5"warmth"
6"silence"
7"tangible"
8"wavered"
9"pulse"
10"footfall"
11"whisper"
12"flicker"
13"gloom"
14"profound"
15"measured"
16"echoed"
17"pulsed"
18"fleeting"
19"roaring"
20"oppressive"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences117
matches
0"g in sympathy"
81.81% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount5
narrationSentences117
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences118
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1212
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount1193
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity0.25
worstName"Fae"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Fae"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
October1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Silas1
Guts1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Dymas1
Hel1
Fae3
Grove2
persons
0"October"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cheung"
3"Silas"
4"Dymas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pendant"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences82
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"vacuum that seemed to suck sound molecules right out of the air"
1"yellows that seemed to absorb the torchlight and push it back"
2"seemed distinct separate"
3"rhythm that seemed to mock her own attempt at composure"
4"felt like a warning, a desperate plea"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.3
wordCount1212
matches
0"not human, not animal, but something in between"
1"not animal, but something in between"
2"Not a suspicion, not a guess, but a cold, hard fact settling in her gut"
3"not a guess, but a cold, hard fact settling in her gut"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences118
matches(empty)
99.95% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean71.29
std35.63
cv0.5
sampleLengths
093
13
2101
3109
421
5113
669
72
867
987
1076
1151
1251
13119
1489
1556
16105
93.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences117
matches
0"being dragged"
1"being pulled"
2"was gone"
3"was accompanied"
84.39% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs173
matches
0"was reacting"
1"were treading"
2"was making"
70.22% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences118
ratio0.025
matches
0"The usual sounds of the night – the distant thrum of traffic, the hoot of an owl, the rustle of small creatures – had utterly vanished."
1"The darkness here wasn't just an absence of light; it was a tangible presence, a deep, ink-black dye seeping into everything."
2"The drag, the sigh, the independent shadow—they coalesced into a singular, terrifying truth."
93.91% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1197
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"deep, ink-black dye"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.040100250626566414
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.015873015873015872
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences118
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences118
mean10.27
std6.49
cv0.632
sampleLengths
015
117
219
330
412
51
62
724
826
914
1016
1113
128
133
1417
1520
1613
1726
1818
196
206
2115
226
238
245
251
261
2721
2812
2920
3023
3112
3210
3315
348
358
3614
3716
384
394
402
412
4213
434
4411
4513
468
475
4811
4910
46.61% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3050847457627119
totalSentences118
uniqueOpeners36
64.72% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences103
matches
0"Just trees, stones, and the"
1"Just endless tangled darkness."
ratio0.019
49.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences103
matches
0"She’d told herself this was"
1"He’d just nodded, his grizzled"
2"She navigated past the last"
3"Her phone’s borrowed flashlight beam"
4"It was her guide, her"
5"She pushed through a screen"
6"They marked the threshold, a"
7"It pressed in, heavy and"
8"She swallowed, her throat suddenly"
9"she breathed, the word a"
10"She stepped between two of"
11"They were here year-round, the"
12"Her gaze swept the clearing,"
13"She took a step further"
14"Her flashlight beam wavered."
15"She strained her ears."
16"she murmured, though the sound"
17"Her eyes darted to the"
18"She snapped her light in"
19"She shook her head, trying"
ratio0.427
61.94% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences103
matches
0"The iron gates of Richmond"
1"Rory pulled her denim jacket"
2"The air itself felt thinner"
3"She’d told herself this was"
4"He’d just nodded, his grizzled"
5"She navigated past the last"
6"Her phone’s borrowed flashlight beam"
7"An hour ago, the Heartstone"
8"It was her guide, her"
9"The path dissolved."
10"She pushed through a screen"
11"They marked the threshold, a"
12"The usual sounds of the"
13"This silence was a void,"
14"It pressed in, heavy and"
15"She swallowed, her throat suddenly"
16"she breathed, the word a"
17"She stepped between two of"
18"The air inside felt different."
19"The darkness here wasn't just"
ratio0.796
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount5
totalSentences103
matches
0"Now, a faint warmth seeped"
1"Before her stood the standing"
2"Yet, paradoxically, the ground beneath"
3"Now, in the pitch black"
4"Yet, the suggestion of movement"
ratio0.049
82.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"She navigated past the last of the park’s lamplit paths, her boots crunching on fallen leaves that whispered secrets older than the city below."
1"She pushed through a screen of thorns, emerging into a space that felt both vast and claustrophobic."
2"A shadow that moved independently of the tree it belonged to, detaching itself for a fleeting instant, a deeper stain against the already profound blackness."
3"Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic, uncoordinated rhythm that seemed to mock her own attempt at composure."
4"The ground felt strangely uneven now, as if she were treading over buried roots or uneven stones."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He’d just, his grizzled face unreadable, and said,"
1"she whispered, her voice raspy"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she breathed (breathe)"
1"she murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
70.3918%