| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 5 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.833 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.2 | | effectiveRatio | 0.2 | |
| 83.48% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1211 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 4 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "suddenly" | | 2 | "slightly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1211 | | totalAiIsms | 30 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "unreadable" | | 3 | "navigated" | | 4 | "looming" | | 5 | "warmth" | | 6 | "silence" | | 7 | "tangible" | | 8 | "wavered" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "footfall" | | 11 | "whisper" | | 12 | "flicker" | | 13 | "gloom" | | 14 | "profound" | | 15 | "measured" | | 16 | "echoed" | | 17 | "pulsed" | | 18 | "fleeting" | | 19 | "roaring" | | 20 | "oppressive" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | matches | | |
| 81.81% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 5 | | narrationSentences | 117 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 118 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 31 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1212 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 16 | | wordCount | 1193 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 0.25 | | worstName | "Fae" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1 | | worstWindowName | "Fae" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | October | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Guts | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Pendant | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "October" | | 1 | "Yu-Fei" | | 2 | "Cheung" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Dymas" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Fae" | | 4 | "Grove" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 82 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "vacuum that seemed to suck sound molecules right out of the air" | | 1 | "yellows that seemed to absorb the torchlight and push it back" | | 2 | "seemed distinct separate" | | 3 | "rhythm that seemed to mock her own attempt at composure" | | 4 | "felt like a warning, a desperate plea" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.3 | | wordCount | 1212 | | matches | | 0 | "not human, not animal, but something in between" | | 1 | "not animal, but something in between" | | 2 | "Not a suspicion, not a guess, but a cold, hard fact settling in her gut" | | 3 | "not a guess, but a cold, hard fact settling in her gut" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 118 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.95% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 17 | | mean | 71.29 | | std | 35.63 | | cv | 0.5 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 93 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 101 | | 3 | 109 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 113 | | 6 | 69 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 67 | | 9 | 87 | | 10 | 76 | | 11 | 51 | | 12 | 51 | | 13 | 119 | | 14 | 89 | | 15 | 56 | | 16 | 105 |
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| 93.27% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 4 | | totalSentences | 117 | | matches | | 0 | "being dragged" | | 1 | "being pulled" | | 2 | "was gone" | | 3 | "was accompanied" |
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| 84.39% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 173 | | matches | | 0 | "was reacting" | | 1 | "were treading" | | 2 | "was making" |
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| 70.22% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 3 | | totalSentences | 118 | | ratio | 0.025 | | matches | | 0 | "The usual sounds of the night – the distant thrum of traffic, the hoot of an owl, the rustle of small creatures – had utterly vanished." | | 1 | "The darkness here wasn't just an absence of light; it was a tangible presence, a deep, ink-black dye seeping into everything." | | 2 | "The drag, the sigh, the independent shadow—they coalesced into a singular, terrifying truth." |
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| 93.91% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1197 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | | adverbCount | 48 | | adverbRatio | 0.040100250626566414 | | lyAdverbCount | 19 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.015873015873015872 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 118 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 118 | | mean | 10.27 | | std | 6.49 | | cv | 0.632 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 19 | | 3 | 30 | | 4 | 12 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 24 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 14 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 26 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 6 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 5 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 1 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 12 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 12 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 15 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 8 | | 36 | 14 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 4 | | 40 | 2 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 13 | | 43 | 4 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 8 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 10 |
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| 46.61% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 5 | | diversityRatio | 0.3050847457627119 | | totalSentences | 118 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 64.72% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Just trees, stones, and the" | | 1 | "Just endless tangled darkness." |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 49.13% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 44 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "She’d told herself this was" | | 1 | "He’d just nodded, his grizzled" | | 2 | "She navigated past the last" | | 3 | "Her phone’s borrowed flashlight beam" | | 4 | "It was her guide, her" | | 5 | "She pushed through a screen" | | 6 | "They marked the threshold, a" | | 7 | "It pressed in, heavy and" | | 8 | "She swallowed, her throat suddenly" | | 9 | "she breathed, the word a" | | 10 | "She stepped between two of" | | 11 | "They were here year-round, the" | | 12 | "Her gaze swept the clearing," | | 13 | "She took a step further" | | 14 | "Her flashlight beam wavered." | | 15 | "She strained her ears." | | 16 | "she murmured, though the sound" | | 17 | "Her eyes darted to the" | | 18 | "She snapped her light in" | | 19 | "She shook her head, trying" |
| | ratio | 0.427 | |
| 61.94% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 82 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "The iron gates of Richmond" | | 1 | "Rory pulled her denim jacket" | | 2 | "The air itself felt thinner" | | 3 | "She’d told herself this was" | | 4 | "He’d just nodded, his grizzled" | | 5 | "She navigated past the last" | | 6 | "Her phone’s borrowed flashlight beam" | | 7 | "An hour ago, the Heartstone" | | 8 | "It was her guide, her" | | 9 | "The path dissolved." | | 10 | "She pushed through a screen" | | 11 | "They marked the threshold, a" | | 12 | "The usual sounds of the" | | 13 | "This silence was a void," | | 14 | "It pressed in, heavy and" | | 15 | "She swallowed, her throat suddenly" | | 16 | "she breathed, the word a" | | 17 | "She stepped between two of" | | 18 | "The air inside felt different." | | 19 | "The darkness here wasn't just" |
| | ratio | 0.796 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 5 | | totalSentences | 103 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, a faint warmth seeped" | | 1 | "Before her stood the standing" | | 2 | "Yet, paradoxically, the ground beneath" | | 3 | "Now, in the pitch black" | | 4 | "Yet, the suggestion of movement" |
| | ratio | 0.049 | |
| 82.32% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "She navigated past the last of the park’s lamplit paths, her boots crunching on fallen leaves that whispered secrets older than the city below." | | 1 | "She pushed through a screen of thorns, emerging into a space that felt both vast and claustrophobic." | | 2 | "A shadow that moved independently of the tree it belonged to, detaching itself for a fleeting instant, a deeper stain against the already profound blackness." | | 3 | "Her heart hammered against her ribs, a frantic, uncoordinated rhythm that seemed to mock her own attempt at composure." | | 4 | "The ground felt strangely uneven now, as if she were treading over buried roots or uneven stones." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 5 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "He’d just, his grizzled face unreadable, and said," | | 1 | "she whispered, her voice raspy" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she breathed (breathe)" | | 1 | "she murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 1 | |