| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 19 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Eva asked softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.487 | | leniency | 0.974 | | rawRatio | 0.053 | | effectiveRatio | 0.051 | |
| 94.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1741 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.31% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1741 | | totalAiIsms | 18 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "rhythmic" | | 1 | "mechanical" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "scanning" | | 4 | "methodical" | | 5 | "familiar" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "synthetic" | | 9 | "velvet" | | 10 | "silk" | | 11 | "chill" | | 12 | "sanctuary" | | 13 | "echo" | | 14 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 73.17% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 82 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | 0 | "seemed to" | | 1 | "try to" | | 2 | "began to" |
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| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 102 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 49 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1738 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 53 | | wordCount | 1172 | | uniqueNames | 14 | | maxNameDensity | 1.96 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Tube | 2 | | Camden | 2 | | Harlow | 2 | | Quinn | 23 | | Miller | 7 | | Met | 1 | | Morris | 2 | | Eva | 8 | | London | 1 | | Kowalski | 1 | | Veil | 1 | | Compass | 1 | | British | 1 | | Museum | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Harlow" | | 1 | "Quinn" | | 2 | "Miller" | | 3 | "Morris" | | 4 | "Eva" | | 5 | "Kowalski" |
| | places | | 0 | "Met" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Compass" |
| | globalScore | 0.519 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 67 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like the static that preceded a st" | | 1 | "It was as if the fluid had decided to ignore gravity, clinging instead to the edges of the wound in dark, congealed beads" | | 2 | "sigils that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long" | | 3 | "hair that seemed to defy the humidity" | | 4 | "looked like oil on water, a distortion th" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1738 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 48.28 | | std | 25.34 | | cv | 0.525 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 98 | | 1 | 37 | | 2 | 74 | | 3 | 53 | | 4 | 59 | | 5 | 13 | | 6 | 2 | | 7 | 91 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 83 | | 10 | 85 | | 11 | 12 | | 12 | 47 | | 13 | 104 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 37 | | 17 | 37 | | 18 | 37 | | 19 | 51 | | 20 | 57 | | 21 | 54 | | 22 | 56 | | 23 | 44 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 69 | | 27 | 63 | | 28 | 43 | | 29 | 34 | | 30 | 59 | | 31 | 37 | | 32 | 28 | | 33 | 19 | | 34 | 59 | | 35 | 72 |
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| 92.43% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "been opened" | | 1 | "was etched" | | 2 | "been found" | | 3 | "been locked" |
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| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 7 | | totalVerbs | 187 | | matches | | 0 | "wasn't pointing" | | 1 | "was spinning" | | 2 | "was clutching" | | 3 | "was shimmering" | | 4 | "wasn't looking" | | 5 | "was watching" | | 6 | "was currently crawling" |
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| 30.81% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 4 | | totalSentences | 102 | | ratio | 0.039 | | matches | | 0 | "The moisture in the abandoned Tube station wasn't just water; it was a slick, oily film that clung to the tiles of the Camden deep-level shelter like sweat on a feverish brow." | | 1 | "A small, carved piece of ivory—no, bone." | | 2 | "She was clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest as if it were a shield, her fingers frantically tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear—a nervous habit that spoke of a mind moving at a hundred miles an hour." | | 3 | "A low, rhythmic thumping began to echo from the blackness—the sound of something heavy dragging itself over the sleepers." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1186 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.022765598650927487 | | lyAdverbCount | 11 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00927487352445194 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 102 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 102 | | mean | 17.04 | | std | 11.51 | | cv | 0.675 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 35 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 27 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 2 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 30 | | 12 | 10 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 2 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 8 | | 18 | 27 | | 19 | 13 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 10 | | 23 | 39 | | 24 | 25 | | 25 | 6 | | 26 | 42 | | 27 | 20 | | 28 | 21 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 23 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 16 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 28 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 12 | | 37 | 12 | | 38 | 47 | | 39 | 5 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 43 | | 44 | 3 | | 45 | 30 | | 46 | 15 | | 47 | 10 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 27 |
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| 39.22% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 15 | | diversityRatio | 0.3235294117647059 | | totalSentences | 102 | | uniqueOpeners | 33 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 47.85% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 34 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "She stood five-foot-nine in her" | | 1 | "Her sharp jaw was set," | | 2 | "She looked down." | | 3 | "She’d seen one before, tucked" | | 4 | "she said, pointing a gloved" | | 5 | "They weren't filled with cheap" | | 6 | "She saw bundles of dried" | | 7 | "He led her toward the" | | 8 | "His throat had been opened" | | 9 | "It was as if the" | | 10 | "She reached out, her fingers" | | 11 | "It was a brass compass," | | 12 | "It was spinning in slow," | | 13 | "She was small, barely five-four," | | 14 | "Her green eyes were wide" | | 15 | "She was clutching a worn" | | 16 | "Her breath hitched." | | 17 | "She ignored the Miller was" | | 18 | "She looked at the blood" | | 19 | "It was moving." |
| | ratio | 0.43 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 73 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | | 0 | "The moisture in the abandoned" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the" | | 2 | "She stood five-foot-nine in her" | | 3 | "DS Miller said, his breath" | | 4 | "Quinn didn't look at him." | | 5 | "Her sharp jaw was set," | | 6 | "This felt like the static" | | 7 | "Miller continued, gesturing toward the" | | 8 | "Quinn stepped past him, her" | | 9 | "She looked down." | | 10 | "A small, carved piece of" | | 11 | "A token, etched with a" | | 12 | "She’d seen one before, tucked" | | 13 | "Quinn said, her voice a" | | 14 | "she said, pointing a gloved" | | 15 | "They weren't filled with cheap" | | 16 | "She saw bundles of dried" | | 17 | "Miller chuckled, a dry, dismissive" | | 18 | "He led her toward the" | | 19 | "The man was young, dressed" |
| | ratio | 0.924 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 79 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 41 | | technicalSentenceCount | 9 | | matches | | 0 | "The moisture in the abandoned Tube station wasn't just water; it was a slick, oily film that clung to the tiles of the Camden deep-level shelter like sweat on a…" | | 1 | "Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the worn leather strap of the watch on her left wrist, the metal casing ticking against her skin with a rhythmic, mechanical pul…" | | 2 | "She saw bundles of dried herbs that smelled of sulfur and old blood, jars of thick, iridescent fluids that pulsed with a faint, internal light, and rolls of par…" | | 3 | "She reached out, her fingers hovering over a small object clutched in the victim’s cooling hand." | | 4 | "Unlike any navigation tool she’d seen in the service, its face was etched with swirling, protective sigils that seemed to shift if she looked at them too long." | | 5 | "She was small, barely five-four, with a shock of curly red hair that seemed to defy the humidity." | | 6 | "She was clutching a worn leather satchel to her chest as if it were a shield, her fingers frantically tucking a stray lock of hair behind her left ear—a nervous…" | | 7 | "She felt a sudden, sharp chill penetrate her coat, a cold that went deeper than the London winter." | | 8 | "She didn't understand the alchemical substances or the bone tokens or why the British Museum was employing girls who knew too much about the dark." |
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| 46.05% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 19 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn said, her voice a low, raspy rasp" | | 1 | "Quinn said, her voice cold" | | 2 | "Eva said, her voice gaining a sudden, desperate strength" |
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| 47.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Miller continued (continue)" | | 1 | "Eva whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Quinn shouted (shout)" | | 3 | "Miller stammered (stammer)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 39 | | tagDensity | 0.308 | | leniency | 0.615 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.205 | |