Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95DMZHKZ0FD3M60FMXZT32

Run Details

Duration:
38.1s
Cost:
$0.014105
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The iron gates of the Camden street-level entrance groaned, protesting the bolt cutters. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through the breach, her boots clicking against the grime-slicked tiles of the descent. The air in the abandoned Tube station didn't circulate. It hung heavy with the scent of damp brick, ozone, and a cloying sweetness that reminded her of lilies left too long in a vase. Her flashlight cut a harsh white path through the soup of dust. She adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch, her thumb tracing the scarred hide. Eighteen years on the force taught her the weight of a room. This one felt bloated. Further down the spiral stairs, the darkness swallowed the light. The walls transitioned from standard-issue transit tiles to something older—rough-hewn stone and timber reinforces that predated the Blitz. "Quinn! Over here." The voice echoed, distorted by the narrow tunnels. Quinn reached the platform level and found Detective Sergeant Miller standing near a makeshift stall. Yellow police tape fluttered in a draft that shouldn't have existed. Miller looked pale under the floodlights the forensics team had dragged down. He gestured toward a huddle of shadow near the tracks. "Simple business, really. Another squatter dispute over territory. Looks like he took a bad fall or his heart just gave out from the cold. No obvious trauma. No blood." Quinn didn't answer. She walked past him, her military bearing making the younger detective seem slouching and uncertain. She crouched by the body. The man lay among shattered jars and bundles of dried herbs that smelled faintly of sulfur. His skin held a translucent, waxy quality. Green eyes stared at nothing, frozen in a state of mild surprise. "Look at the hands, Miller." "I did. Dirty, probably from living down here. A real shame." Quinn pulled a pen from her pocket and lifted the victim’s right hand. The fingertips weren't just dirty. A deep, violet stain saturated the skin, creeping under the nails like ink. She leaned closer. The man’s clothes were thin, yet a fine layer of frost coated his eyelashes and the wool of his collar, despite the humidity of the underground. "Search the pockets? Or did you just decide the cause of death based on his zip code?" "We did a preliminary. He’s got nothing. No wallet, no phone. Just a few odd bits of bone and some scrap metal. Typical for the Camden underground crowd." Quinn stood up, her sharp jaw tightening. She scanned the "Market," as the whispers in the precinct called it. The stalls weren't built for commerce. They were altars. One table held rows of glass vials filled with a shimmering, iridescent liquid that hummed at the edge of her hearing. Another was draped in heavy velvet, displaying rusted keys and bird skulls. "This isn't a squatter camp. Look at the perimeter. See the way the dust settles?" "It’s an old station, Quinn. Dust is part of the decor." "It's not uniform. There’s a perfect circle around the body where the grime doesn't touch. Like a physical barrier slapped the air away." She moved toward a tipped-over display case made of dark, polished wood—a stark contrast to the rotting crates nearby. Tangled in a web of silk thread was a small brass object. Quinn pulled on a latex glove and carefully extracted it. The brass was heavy, bitten by a thick patina of verdigris that felt like velvet against her fingertip. Sigils—jagged, hungry-looking things—were etched into the casing. She flipped the lid. Inside, the needle didn't point North. It spun in a lazy, erratic circle, clicking softly against the glass face each time it passed a specific marking. "A compass? Miller, tell me a vagrant carries a specialized nautical tool that doesn't respect the Earth's magnetic field." "Could be a prop. There’s a lot of performance art types in Camden. They love this occult aesthetic. It sells to the tourists who think they’re finding the real London." Quinn ignored him and held the device level. As she stepped closer to the victim’s chest, the needle stopped spinning. It vibrated, pointing directly at the man’s sternum with such force it rattled in the casing. She noticed a faint shimmer in the air above the body, a distortion like heat rising from asphalt. "Check the temperature in this specific two-foot radius." "Why? The forensics guy said it’s about fifty-eight degrees throughout the tunnel." "Check it again. Right above his chest." Miller sighed, pulling a digital thermometer from his kit. He clicked the trigger, the red laser dot dancing on the dead man’s shirt. He squinted at the readout, then shook the device. "This must be faulty. It’s reading twelve degrees." "The frost didn't come from the weather, Miller. It came from him. He didn't fall. He was emptied." Quinn’s eyes tracked a trail of the violet ink leading away from the body toward a dark alcove stuffed with crates of leather-bound books. She recognized the typeface on one of the spines—a specific, archaic font she’d seen in a file regarding a certain research assistant at the British Museum. "He was clutching this compass when he died. It’s a Veil Compass. Used for tracking rifts." "Rifts? Quinn, you’re doing that thing again. The Morris thing. Let’s stick to the evidence we can actually put in a report without the Captain laughing us out of the office." Quinn’s grip tightened on the brass casing. Mentioning her old partner was a mistake, but she didn't let the flinch show. She remembered the way Morris’s eyes had looked at the end—the same hollow, echoing emptiness as the man on the tracks. "The evidence is right here. The ink on his fingers matches the alchemical residue in those jars. He wasn't a buyer. He was a seller. And someone didn't like his prices." She stepped into the alcove, her flashlight beam catching a flash of red hair in the distance. A woman stood by a rusted service door, her silhouette framed by the dim amber glow of a street heater. The woman clutched a leather satchel to her chest, her round glasses reflecting the flashlight's glare. "Halt! Police!" The girl, Eva Kowalski, didn't run. She stood frozen, her left hand reaching up to tuck a stray red curl behind her ear. Her freckled face was ghostly, her green eyes wide with a mixture of terror and something more calculating. "I didn't do anything. I was just... I was looking for a book." "Down here? At three in the morning? In a cordoned-off Tube station?" Quinn moved with predatory efficiency, closing the distance. She kept her hand near her belt, her eyes never leaving Eva’s satchel. The girl’s knuckles were white as she gripped the leather. "This market isn't for books you find in a library, Kowalski. Talk to me about the man on the tracks. He was holding something that belongs to your circle." "I don't have a circle. I’m a researcher. I study history." "History doesn't usually leave a body with frozen lungs in the middle of July. What was he selling you? Was it the compass?" Eva looked down at the brass device in Quinn’s hand. Her breath hitched. She didn't look like a killer, but she looked like someone who knew the shape of the shadows. "That doesn't belong to you. You shouldn't be touching it without protection. The sigils... they aren't just for show." "Miller, get over here and secure the witness." Miller jogged over, his boots splashing through a puddle of spilled iridescent oil. The liquid flared blue where his heel struck it, a brief spark of cold fire that vanished as quickly as it appeared. He reached for his cuffs, but stopped, looking between Quinn and the girl. "Wait, is this the Kowalski girl from the museum archives? The one you’ve been flagging in the reports?" "The very one. It seems she has a taste for late-night shopping in the Veil Market." "Detective Quinn, please. You don't understand what’s happening here. The man—his name was Silas. He wasn't murdered. He was a conduit. Something came through him." Quinn’s sharp jaw set. She leaned in, the salt-and-pepper hair around her temples damp with the underground’s humidity. "Things don't 'come through' people in the Metropolitan Police District. People kill people. They use knives, they use guns, or they use poison. My partner died because someone played with things they didn't understand, and I won't let another body hit the floor while you play researcher." "It wasn't a person! Look at the tracks!" Eva pointed toward the soot-covered rails. Quinn turned her light. The dust there wasn't disturbed by footsteps. Instead, long, rhythmic grooves were carved into the metal, as if something heavy and multifaceted had dragged itself along the line. The grooves glowed with a faint, residual violet light, the same color as the ink on the dead man’s fingers. The brass compass in Quinn’s hand began to vibrate violently. The lid snapped shut of its own accord, the metal burning cold against her palm. "Miller, get her out of here. Now." "What about the scene? forensics hasn't finished the transit mapping." "Forget the mapping. Clear the station. Seal the Camden entrance and get the tactical unit down here. We aren't dealing with a squatter dispute." Quinn looked back at the body. The waxy skin was beginning to crack, and from the fissures, a thin, purple vapor began to rise, curling into the air like a living thing. The compass in her hand pointed straight down, the needle spinning so fast it hummed. "Quinn, your hand..." She looked down. The violet ink from the compass’s sigils was bleeding onto her glove, soaking through the latex and staining her skin. "It’s just ink, Miller. Move the witness!" Eva Kowalski gripped her satchel tighter, her voice a frantic whisper as Miller began to lead her away. "It’s not ink. It’s a map. And it’s already started drawing." Quinn watched them disappear into the darkness of the stairwell. She turned back to the man on the tracks. The man's mouth drifted open, and the sweet scent of lilies exploded into the air, overwhelming the smell of the city. She reached for her radio, but the device emitted only a high-pitched screech. The station’s floodlights flickered, the humming of the iridescent spills growing into a roar. Quinn stood her ground, her salt-and-pepper hair casting long shadows against the ancient brickwork as she felt the first true chill of the deep underground settle into her bones. She didn't look away from the violet vapor. She adjusted the leather watch on her wrist, marking the second the world stopped making sense. The needle of the compass in her pocket was still clicking, a frantic, rhythmic sound like a heart beating against brass. The silence that followed was heavier than the darkness. Quinn took a step toward the tracks, her boots Crunching over a discarded bone token that lay shattered in the dust. The market was empty, but the air was crowded with things that had no names. She pulled her service weapon, the weight of the metal familiar and grounded. The violet light on the rails was spreading, illuminating symbols carved into the ties that hadn't been there a minute before. "Miller? Report." No response came from the stairwell. Only the sound of something heavy dragging itself through the tunnels further down the line—a rhythmic, metallic scrape that echoed against the Victorian stone. Quinn tightened her grip on the Veil Compass, the verdigris staining her palm a deep, bruised purple. The needle stopped clicking. It pointed directly behind her. She turned, her flashlight cutting through the haze. The service door Miller and Eva had used was gone. In its place was a wall of solid, unblemished brick, as if the exit had never existed at all. Quinn didn't panic. She reset her stance, her sharp jaw locked in a grim line. She checked her watch. It was 3:14 AM. The sun wouldn't rise for hours, and the Veil Market was no longer interested in sellers. It wanted a witness. She aimed her flashlight into the yawning throat of the tunnel. The violet light was pulsing now, synchronized with the vibration in the compass. "Fine. Let's see what you are."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.024
leniency0.049
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
87.80% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2049
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"carefully"
2"softly"
3"quickly"
4"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
24.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2049
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"standard"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count2
4
word"fluttered"
count1
5
word"shattered"
count2
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count2
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"stark"
count1
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"etched"
count1
12
word"magnetic"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"dancing"
count1
15
word"echoing"
count1
16
word"calculating"
count1
17
word"footsteps"
count1
18
word"rhythmic"
count3
19
word"whisper"
count1
20
word"flickered"
count1
21
word"chill"
count1
22
word"silence"
count1
23
word"familiar"
count1
24
word"synchronized"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"weight"
2"standard"
3"echoed"
4"fluttered"
5"shattered"
6"scanned"
7"velvet"
8"perfect"
9"stark"
10"silk"
11"etched"
12"magnetic"
13"vibrated"
14"dancing"
15"echoing"
16"calculating"
17"footsteps"
18"rhythmic"
19"whisper"
20"flickered"
21"chill"
22"silence"
23"familiar"
24"synchronized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences112
matches(empty)
66.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences112
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences152
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords2040
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount1416
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.48
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Harlow1
Quinn21
Tube1
Blitz1
Detective2
Sergeant1
Miller6
North1
British1
Museum1
Morris1
Eva6
Kowalski2
Crunching1
Victorian1
Veil2
Compass1
Market1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Detective"
3"Sergeant"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
6"Eva"
7"Kowalski"
places
0"Camden"
1"British"
2"Compass"
globalScore0.758
windowScore0.667
97.37% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences95
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"felt like velvet against her fingertip"
1"looked like someone who knew the shape of"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount2040
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences152
matches
0"reinforces that predated"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs74
mean27.57
std17.64
cv0.64
sampleLengths
064
143
228
33
456
529
658
75
811
960
1017
1128
1261
1315
1411
1523
1641
1755
1819
1930
2054
218
2212
237
2432
258
2618
2750
2816
2931
3042
3131
3253
332
3441
3513
3612
3731
3829
3911
4023
4131
4219
438
4448
4518
4616
4725
4818
4947
92.73% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences112
matches
0"was draped"
1"were etched"
2"were carved"
3"was gone"
56.94% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs233
matches
0"was beginning"
1"was bleeding"
2"was still clicking"
3"was spreading"
4"was pulsing"
30.08% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences152
ratio0.039
matches
0"The walls transitioned from standard-issue transit tiles to something older—rough-hewn stone and timber reinforces that predated the Blitz."
1"She moved toward a tipped-over display case made of dark, polished wood—a stark contrast to the rotting crates nearby."
2"Sigils—jagged, hungry-looking things—were etched into the casing."
3"She recognized the typeface on one of the spines—a specific, archaic font she’d seen in a file regarding a certain research assistant at the British Museum."
4"She remembered the way Morris’s eyes had looked at the end—the same hollow, echoing emptiness as the man on the tracks."
5"Only the sound of something heavy dragging itself through the tunnels further down the line—a rhythmic, metallic scrape that echoed against the Victorian stone."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1436
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.022284122562674095
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.006963788300835654
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences152
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences152
mean13.42
std7.55
cv0.562
sampleLengths
013
117
29
325
412
515
612
74
810
918
103
118
1215
1311
1412
1510
1629
173
1815
195
2016
217
2212
235
2411
2513
265
2713
283
2926
3017
3128
327
3312
346
353
3621
3712
3815
3911
4023
4119
4212
4310
4418
457
464
476
4820
4919
43.86% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3026315789473684
totalSentences152
uniqueOpeners46
89.29% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences112
matches
0"Further down the spiral stairs,"
1"Instead, long, rhythmic grooves were"
2"Only the sound of something"
ratio0.027
77.14% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences112
matches
0"It hung heavy with the"
1"Her flashlight cut a harsh"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"He gestured toward a huddle"
4"She walked past him, her"
5"She crouched by the body."
6"His skin held a translucent,"
7"She leaned closer."
8"She scanned the as the"
9"They were altars."
10"She moved toward a tipped-over"
11"She flipped the lid."
12"It spun in a lazy,"
13"It vibrated, pointing directly at"
14"She noticed a faint shimmer"
15"He clicked the trigger, the"
16"He squinted at the readout,"
17"She recognized the typeface on"
18"She remembered the way Morris’s"
19"She stepped into the alcove,"
ratio0.357
18.04% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount99
totalSentences112
matches
0"The iron gates of the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped through"
2"The air in the abandoned"
3"It hung heavy with the"
4"Her flashlight cut a harsh"
5"She adjusted the worn leather"
6"This one felt bloated."
7"The walls transitioned from standard-issue"
8"The voice echoed, distorted by"
9"Quinn reached the platform level"
10"Miller looked pale under the"
11"He gestured toward a huddle"
12"Quinn didn't answer."
13"She walked past him, her"
14"She crouched by the body."
15"The man lay among shattered"
16"His skin held a translucent,"
17"Quinn pulled a pen from"
18"The fingertips weren't just dirty."
19"A deep, violet stain saturated"
ratio0.884
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences112
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.98% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences74
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"It hung heavy with the scent of damp brick, ozone, and a cloying sweetness that reminded her of lilies left too long in a vase."
1"She walked past him, her military bearing making the younger detective seem slouching and uncertain."
2"One table held rows of glass vials filled with a shimmering, iridescent liquid that hummed at the edge of her hearing."
3"The brass was heavy, bitten by a thick patina of verdigris that felt like velvet against her fingertip."
4"Instead, long, rhythmic grooves were carved into the metal, as if something heavy and multifaceted had dragged itself along the line."
5"The violet ink from the compass’s sigils was bleeding onto her glove, soaking through the latex and staining her skin."
6"She adjusted the leather watch on her wrist, marking the second the world stopped making sense."
7"The violet light on the rails was spreading, illuminating symbols carved into the ties that hadn't been there a minute before."
8"Only the sound of something heavy dragging itself through the tunnels further down the line—a rhythmic, metallic scrape that echoed against the Victorian stone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
80.2189%