Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95DN51RVYJR93YWH5YJYRE

Run Details

Duration:
26.8s
Cost:
$0.002408
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots crunched on grit and fallen plaster. The beam from her powerful Maglite cut through the Stygian gloom, painting stripes across sagging arches and rusted signage. This was no ordinary crime scene, no blood-spattered flat or grim alleyway. This was beneath London, deep beneath, where the city’s forgotten arteries pulsed with a stale, metallic breath. Police tape, stark yellow against the decaying brickwork, seemed pathetically optimistic in this netherworld. "Detective Quinn," a uniformed officer, Constable Davies according to his nametag, stepped aside, his face pale under the drone of portable floodlights. "Glad you could make it. It's... well, you'll see." Harlow’s gaze swept the cavernous space. Abandoned rail cars, skeletal remains of forgotten journeys, lay scattered like toys. Dimly lit stalls, some crudely constructed of wood and canvas, others elaborate creations adorned with symbols that made fleeting, unsettling impressions on her mind, were packed away haphazardly, or simply collapsed into heaps of debris. The place smelled of damp earth, decaying machinery, and something else – ozone, sharp and clean, fighting a cloying sweetness like overripe fruit. "Victim is over here, Ma'am," Davies gestured towards a slumped figure near a stall that had once displayed an array of polished stones and intricate carvings. The victim, a man in his late thirties, sat propped against a grimy support pillar, his body contorted at an impossible angle. His skin had a papery, desiccated quality, pulled taut over bone, a shade of ash grey that didn't belong to the living. There was no visible blood, no obvious wound. It was as if the life had been siphoned out, leaving behind a husk. Harlow approached, her sharp jaw set. Eighteen years on the force hadn't prepared her for this kind of quiet horror. Her partner, Morris, met a fate involving too much of this ‘unexplained’ kind of death three years ago. Her eyes, brown and observant, scanned the perimeter. No footprints in the thick dust, other than those of the initial responders. No signs of forced entry into the cavernous space, though Davies explained the specific derelict entrance they’d used had been discovered by patrol officers responding to a vague tip about suspicious activity. "Forensics say the time of death is difficult to pinpoint," Davies offered, his voice tight. "Rigour mortis is... inconsistent. And there's no biological trace they can find. No fibres, no prints, nothing on the victim besides his own DNA." Harlow knelt, her worn leather watch glinting under the harsh lights. She didn't touch the body, not yet. Instead, she traced the outline of a peculiar mark on the stone floor, close to the victim's feet. It looked like a scorch mark, but it was a clean line, precisely etched, and horizontal. It didn't radiate outwards from a central point of intense heat. It simply *was*, a perfect, shallow groove in the concrete that seemed almost carved. Her mind filed it away, a detail that snagged at her professional instinct for order. "Anything taken?" she asked, her gaze still fixed on the mark. "We think so," Davies replied with a sigh. "His pockets were turned out. Whatever he had on him, they didn't leave it. But what they took... it's not clear. We found this." He pointed to a small item lying a few feet away, near where the victim's hand might have fallen. It was a small brass compass. Its casing was dull, deeply patinated with verdigris. The face, instead of cardinal directions, was etched with intricate, jagged lines and symbols, protective sigils, Harlow's mind supplied unbidden, a flash of half-forgotten lore. The needle, a sliver of dark metal, trembled, not pointing north, but quivering erratically towards a dark, uninviting tunnel branching off the main station chamber. A Veil Compass. Origin: the Veil Market. She knew its reputation, a clandestine bazaar that traded in the ephemeral and the illicit, a place whispered about in whispers, a place that moved like a phantom. This crime scene wasn't just unusual; it was inside something she'd only peripherally investigated. "Who called you in?" Harlow asked, her tone sharpening. "Special Branch, Ma'am. They got word there was chatter about... unusual goods being moved through old tunnels. Then patrol found this entrance. Just standard procedure, they said, to get an expert opinion on the layout." He cleared his throat. "But they also called in a civilian consultant. Someone with specific knowledge of... this sort of thing." A figure emerged from the deeper shadows, a woman whose bright red curls seemed an affront to the oppressive grey. Eva Kowalski, looking small but resolute, adjusted her round glasses, her freckled face set in a look of intense concentration. She carried her worn leather satchel like a shield. "Harlow." Eva's greeting was strained, her green eyes meeting Harlow's with a familiar mix of concern and something unreadable. Eva tucked a stray curl behind her ear, a nervous habit Harlow knew well. "Eva. What in God's name are you doing down here?" Harlow’s voice was low, edged with irritation. "This is a crime scene, not a field trip for the British Museum's backroom scribes." "Sergeant Davies explained the situation," Eva said calmly, moving closer to the victim, her gaze immediately drawn to the unnatural texture of his skin, then to the peculiar scorch mark on the floor, and finally to the trembling needle of the Veil Compass. She didn't flinch. "He said it looked... unnatural. And from what I'm seeing, unnatural doesn't quite capture it." "Unnatural is putting it mildly," Harlow scoffed, straightening up. "No signs of a struggle, no witnesses, no motive, and a victim who looks like he went through a dehydrator set to 'instant mummify.' Forensics is stumped. Standard procedure is hitting a brick wall, or in this case, a concrete tunnel." Eva circled the victim slowly, her eyes tracing invisible lines in the air. She ran a gloved finger near, but not touching, the desiccated flesh. "The energy residual here is… potent. And very, very old. Not just residual, but woven into the fabric of this place." She gestured to the scorch mark. "That's not from fire. Fire burns, it chars, it leaves ash. This is… a severance. Something was cut clean through, but not with a blade. More like an excision." "An excision?" Harlow’s skepticism was a physical barrier. "What are you talking about, Eva? Who excises someone in an abandoned Tube station?" "Someone, or something, that doesn't operate by our rules," Eva murmured, her eyes now fixed on the Veil Compass. Its needle continued to quiver, pulling towards the dark tunnel. "This compass," she pointed, "it's attuned to rifts. To places where the fabric between… worlds… is thin. Whoever attacked him, or whatever caused him to die like this, it came through one of those thin places. Or he was trying to get to one." "Worlds? Eva, this is Detective Quinn, Metropolitan Police. I deal with facts, things I can catalogue, things I can put in front of a jury. Not 'thin places' and 'severances'." Harlow ran a hand over her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, her sharp jawline working. She remembered DS Morris’s last moments, a flash of impossible light, a bone-deep cold that no ambient temperature could explain, a void where an explanation should be. This felt the same. A deep sense of *wrongness* that defied her training. "But the evidence *doesn't* add up when you apply your facts, does it, Harlow?" Eva’s voice was quiet but firm. "No struggle, no weapon, but a body that looks like it’s been aged centuries in minutes. A clean cut on the floor that defies physics. No traceable forensic evidence, yet a palpable sense of dread thicker than the dust. What if the facts *require* a different interpretation?" Harlow’s gaze drifted from Eva, from the body, to the gaping maw of the tunnel that the Veil Compass indicated. The air near its entrance felt colder, deadlier. The dust patterns on the floor near that tunnel were disturbed, but not in the way of recent footsteps. It looked as if something had *slid* or *bled* away from that extreme cold, leaving a faint, shimmering trail barely visible in the dim light. A trail leading further into the suffocating darkness, an echo of that impossible severing. This wasn't just a crime. It was a trespass. And the laws she knew didn't apply here.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:08:10.024Z" 2/25/2026, 1:08:10 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Eva said calmly [calmly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.067
85.58% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slowly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1387
totalAiIsms28
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"constructed"
count1
4
word"fleeting"
count1
5
word"intricate"
count2
6
word"scanned"
count1
7
word"glinting"
count1
8
word"traced"
count1
9
word"etched"
count2
10
word"perfect"
count1
11
word"trembled"
count1
12
word"clandestine"
count1
13
word"ephemeral"
count1
14
word"standard"
count2
15
word"oppressive"
count1
16
word"familiar"
count1
17
word"unreadable"
count1
18
word"tracing"
count1
19
word"sense of"
count2
20
word"palpable"
count1
21
word"maw"
count1
22
word"footsteps"
count1
23
word"echo"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"pulsed"
2"stark"
3"constructed"
4"fleeting"
5"intricate"
6"scanned"
7"glinting"
8"traced"
9"etched"
10"perfect"
11"trembled"
12"clandestine"
13"ephemeral"
14"standard"
15"oppressive"
16"familiar"
17"unreadable"
18"tracing"
19"sense of"
20"palpable"
21"maw"
22"footsteps"
23"echo"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences71
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences71
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords1388
ratio0.004
matches
0"was"
1"wrongness"
2"doesn't"
3"require"
4"slid"
5"bled"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount946
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Harlow13
Quinn1
Maglite1
Stygian1
London1
Constable1
Davies5
Morris2
Veil5
Compass4
Market1
Kowalski1
Eva8
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Constable"
3"Davies"
4"Morris"
5"Compass"
6"Kowalski"
7"Eva"
places
0"Stygian"
1"London"
globalScore0.813
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"seemed pathetically optimistic in this netherworld"
1"It was as if the life had been siphoned out, leaving behind a husk"
2"looked like a scorch mark, but it was a c"
3"seemed almost carved"
55.91% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.441
wordCount1388
matches
0"not pointing north, but quivering erratically towards a dark, uninviting tunnel bran"
1"Not just residual, but woven into the fabric of this place"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
92.71% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean60.35
std28.64
cv0.475
sampleLengths
072
131
276
392
491
539
692
711
851
9113
109
1156
1249
1333
1432
1561
1650
1781
1822
1973
2084
2167
22103
80.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount5
totalSentences71
matches
0"were packed"
1"been siphoned"
2"been discovered"
3"was etched"
4"was strained"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs140
matches(empty)
71.43% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences80
ratio0.025
matches
0"The place smelled of damp earth, decaying machinery, and something else – ozone, sharp and clean, fighting a cloying sweetness like overripe fruit."
1"This crime scene wasn't just unusual; it was inside something she'd only peripherally investigated."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount675
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount22
adverbRatio0.03259259259259259
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.013333333333333334
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean17.35
std10.64
cv0.613
sampleLengths
010
119
212
317
414
522
69
76
812
935
1023
1126
1222
1322
148
1514
166
1714
1818
198
2013
2132
2215
2324
2411
257
2618
2716
2811
2914
3015
3111
328
3343
346
358
3625
3725
383
394
4028
4114
429
4339
4417
4520
4620
479
4819
4914
67.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4625
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners37
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Dimly lit stalls, some crudely"
1"Instead, she traced the outline"
ratio0.029
88.57% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences70
matches
0"His skin had a papery,"
1"It was as if the"
2"Her partner, Morris, met a"
3"Her eyes, brown and observant,"
4"She didn't touch the body,"
5"It looked like a scorch"
6"It didn't radiate outwards from"
7"It simply *was*, a perfect,"
8"Her mind filed it away,"
9"she asked, her gaze still"
10"He pointed to a small"
11"It was a small brass"
12"Its casing was dull, deeply"
13"She knew its reputation, a"
14"He cleared his throat"
15"She carried her worn leather"
16"She didn't flinch."
17"She ran a gloved finger"
18"She gestured to the scorch"
19"Its needle continued to quiver,"
ratio0.329
24.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences70
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn’s boots crunched"
1"The beam from her powerful"
2"This was no ordinary crime"
3"This was beneath London, deep"
4"Police tape, stark yellow against"
5"a uniformed officer, Constable Davies"
6"Harlow’s gaze swept the cavernous"
7"The place smelled of damp"
8"Davies gestured towards a slumped"
9"The victim, a man in"
10"His skin had a papery,"
11"It was as if the"
12"Harlow approached, her sharp jaw"
13"Her partner, Morris, met a"
14"Her eyes, brown and observant,"
15"Davies offered, his voice tight"
16"Harlow knelt, her worn leather"
17"She didn't touch the body,"
18"It looked like a scorch"
19"It didn't radiate outwards from"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
61.22% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Dimly lit stalls, some crudely constructed of wood and canvas, others elaborate creations adorned with symbols that made fleeting, unsettling impressions on her…"
1"Her mind filed it away, a detail that snagged at her professional instinct for order."
2"She knew its reputation, a clandestine bazaar that traded in the ephemeral and the illicit, a place whispered about in whispers, a place that moved like a phant…"
3"It looked as if something had *slid* or *bled* away from that extreme cold, leaving a faint, shimmering trail barely visible in the dim light."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Davies offered, his voice tight"
1"she asked, her gaze still fixed on the mark"
2"Harlow asked, her tone sharpening"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Eva murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.185
leniency0.37
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.074
76.5863%