Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95EM35YJF4ZHCC97TS0W1J

Run Details

Duration:
22.0s
Cost:
$0.013026
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora’s boots crunched on fallen leaves, a sound far too loud in the sudden hush. The light from her phone’s torch barely pierced the oppressive darkness clinging to the edge of Richmond Park. A cold seeped into her bones, sharper than the late autumn air. The Heartstone pendant, a deep crimson gem the size of a thumbnail, lay cool against her skin, unusually quiet. Its silence had drawn her here, more than any thrum or pulse. The energy it always radiated felt… stifled, flattened, almost afraid. She reached the perimeter, the ancient oak standing stones looming like hunched giants against the faint glow of the distant city. Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt slick with an unnatural dampness under her gloved fingers. This was it: Isolde’s grove. The Fae Grove. A place where time played tricks, where wildflowers bloomed in the dead of winter. Tonight, though, the air felt less like magic and more like something heavy, holding its breath. She flicked her torch beam across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours. A faint, almost imperceptible shimmer, like heat rising from tarmac, caught her eye between two particularly gnarled oaks. That was her way in. She stepped through the shimmering barrier. The air shifted, thick and still. The distant hum of London traffic vanished, replaced by a complete, echoing silence. This deep quiet, a void of sound, pricked at her skin. The only noise came from her own breathing, ragged and shallow. She swung her phone’s beam around, its weak light struggling to push back the inky black. Tree trunks, impossibly thick and scarred, rose into an unseen canopy. Their branches, skeletal fingers against the black sky, seemed to twist inward, closing off the world behind her. A damp, earthy scent filled her lungs, mixed with something else, metallic and faintly floral, like old blood spilled on rose petals. She moved deeper, her steps tentative, the leaves underfoot cushioning her progress. The ground grew soft, the earth giving slightly with each step. Her eyes strained, seeking form in the dark. Shapes at the edge of her vision seemed to coalesce and dissolve, like smoke. A stump became a crouched animal, a tangle of branches a contorted face, only to resolve back into wood as her torch fixed on them. A rustling broke the silence, not from the ground, but from above, faint and quick. Aurora jerked her head up, catching a flash of darker shadow against the already profound dark. Squirrel? Owl? Her rational mind offered explanations, but her pulse hammered in her throat. The pendant against her chest began to warm, a slow, gentle heat at first, then a throbbing warmth. It was subtle, unlike the frantic pulse it made near Hel portals, more like a steady, insistent hum. She took another step, then stopped. A sound, like a gentle, rhythmic scratching, came from behind a massive oak. It wasn't the natural scuttling of insects or the rustle of leaves. This was deliberate. Too even. Too close. She rotated slowly, her phone beam sweeping across the tree's thick trunk. Nothing. But the scratching continued, a low *shhhk, shhhk, shhhk*, growing louder, as if whatever made it was circling the trunk, just out of sight. She tightened her grip on her phone, her thumb hovering over the call button. Who would she call? Eva? Silas? What would she say? "Hey, I'm in a magic grove and something's scratching a tree?" She couldn't. This was her investigation. Her burden. The scratching stopped abruptly, replaced by a wet, sucking sound, like something being dragged through mud. It moved closer. Aurora froze, every muscle taut. The air grew heavy, thick with that metallic-floral scent, pressing down on her. The warmth from the pendant intensified, spreading across her chest, a burning reminder. She forced herself to move, to circle the tree in the opposite direction from the sound. Her torch beam cut through the darkness, illuminating a patch of gnarled roots, then damp earth, then more roots. Nothing. Yet the sound of dragging, wet and close, seemed to come from directly where her light fell. She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated. Her breath caught. A flicker. Right at the edge of her peripheral vision, behind a thick curtain of ivy, something moved. Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows. It was too tall, too slender. A shiver ran down her spine, raising gooseflesh on her arms despite the pendant’s heat. This wasn’t a trick of light, not the playful distortion of the Fae. This felt… predatory. She squeezed her eyes shut, then opened them, taking a deep, shuddering breath. "Get it together, Rory," she whispered, her voice swallowed by the vast quiet. She swung her torch back to the ivy-covered section. Nothing visible. The drag-and-suck sound had stopped. The silence returned, more profound and menacing than before. But the silence was not empty. It was filled now, with a hum, a low vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her. It wasn't sound, but a felt presence, like walking into a massive, unseen bell. The wildflowers, usually vibrant even at night, now looked pale and sickly in the torchlight, their colours muted, their petals almost translucent. A sharp snap echoed from behind her, a twig breaking underfoot. She whipped around, beam flashing. Nothing. Just the endless, tangled undergrowth. Yet whoever, or whatever, had done it stood there, breathing. She felt it, a cold waft of air against her cheek, laden with that cloying scent. Her scar, a small crescent on her left wrist from a childhood fall, suddenly itched, a phantom sensation. She took a step back, then another, trying to put distance between herself and the unseen presence. Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes scanning, searching for any break in the oppressive darkness. The trees seemed to press in closer, their rough bark feeling like skin. The sense of being watched intensified, a weight on her shoulders, on her scalp. The pendant burned against her chest now, a constant, consuming heat. It pulsed in time with her frantic heartbeat. This wasn't a warning for Hel. This was something else. Someone else. A low groan, like wood settling, or bones shifting, rumbled from straight ahead, from the deep dark where her torch light couldn’t reach. It wasn't the wind. There was no wind. She began to walk faster, not running, but a hurried stride. Her phone’s light bobbed frantically, creating more unsettling shadows than it dispersed. Her breathing grew shallow, punctuated by gasps. The groan sounded again, closer this time, and another, softer one, seemed to answer it from behind her. They were surrounding her. She spun, her mind racing. Her quick wit, her cool head, felt dulled, bogged down by the sheer, unreasoning terror clutching at her. This wasn’t a puzzle to solve. This was something ancient, something that smelled of graves and blooms. The ground under her foot felt unstable, shifting. She looked down, her torch beam cutting through the gloom. The earth directly beneath her was churned, as if something had recently clawed its way out. The metallic-floral scent was overwhelming here, thick enough to taste. The pendant throbbed violently against her skin, hot as a live coal. Then, from the darkness just beyond the reach of her light, she heard it. A faint chuckle. Dry, brittle, like old leaves skittering across pavement. It wasn't human. It was too thin, too sharp. It echoed, not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her. The chuckling grew louder, joined by another, and another, all thin, reedy, utterly devoid of mirth. Aurora ripped her gaze away from the churned earth, her head whipping up into the darkness. She was no longer alone.Aurora’s boots crunched on fallen leaves, a sound far too loud in the sudden hush. The light from her phone’s torch barely pierced the oppressive darkness clinging to the edge of Richmond Park. A cold seeped into her bones, sharper than the late autumn air. The Heartstone pendant, a deep crimson gem the size of a thumbnail, lay cool against her skin, unusually quiet. Its silence had drawn her here, more than any thrum or pulse. The energy it always radiated felt… stifled, flattened, almost afraid. She reached the perimeter, the ancient oak standing stones looming like hunched giants against the faint glow of the distant city. Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt slick with an unnatural dampness under her gloved fingers. This was it: Isolde’s grove. The Fae Grove. A place where time played tricks, where wildflowers bloomed in the dead of winter. Tonight, though, the air felt less like magic and more like something heavy, holding its breath. She flicked her torch beam across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours. A faint, almost imperceptible shimmer, like heat rising from tarmac, caught her eye between two particularly gnarled oaks. That was her way in. She stepped through the shimmering barrier. The air shifted, thick and still. The distant hum of London traffic vanished, replaced by a complete, echoing silence. This deep quiet, a void of sound, pricked at her skin. The only noise came from her own breathing, ragged and shallow. She swung her phone’s beam around, its weak light struggling to push back the inky black. Tree trunks, impossibly thick and scarred, rose into an unseen canopy. Their branches, skeletal fingers against the black sky, seemed to twist inward, closing off the world behind her. A damp, earthy scent filled her lungs, mixed with something else, metallic and faintly floral, like old blood spilled on rose petals. She moved deeper, her steps tentative, the leaves underfoot cushioning her progress. The ground grew soft, the earth giving slightly with each step. Her eyes strained, seeking form in the dark. Shapes at the edge of her vision seemed to coalesce and dissolve, like smoke. A stump became a crouched animal, a tangle of branches a contorted face, only to resolve back into wood as her torch fixed on them. A rustling broke the silence, not from the ground, but from above, faint and quick. Aurora jerked her head up, catching a flash of darker shadow against the already profound dark. Squirrel? Owl? Her rational mind offered explanations, but her pulse hammered in her throat. The pendant against her chest began to warm, a slow, gentle heat at first, then a throbbing warmth. It was subtle, unlike the frantic pulse it made near Hel portals, more like a steady, insistent hum. She took another step, then stopped. A sound, like a gentle, rhythmic scratching, came from behind a massive oak. It wasn't the natural scuttling of insects or the rustle of leaves. This was deliberate. Too even. Too close. She rotated slowly, her phone beam sweeping across the tree's thick trunk. Nothing. But the scratching continued, a low *shhhk, shhhk, shhhk*, growing louder, as if whatever made it was circling the trunk, just out of sight. She tightened her grip on her phone, her thumb hovering over the call button. Who would she call? Eva? Silas? What would she say? "Hey, I'm in a magic grove and something's scratching a tree?" She couldn't. This was her investigation. Her burden. The scratching stopped abruptly, replaced by a wet, sucking sound, like something being dragged through mud. It moved closer. Aurora froze, every muscle taut. The air grew heavy, thick with that metallic-floral scent, pressing down on her. The warmth from the pendant intensified, spreading across her chest, a burning reminder. She forced herself to move, to circle the tree in the opposite direction from the sound. Her torch beam cut through the darkness, illuminating a patch of gnarled roots, then damp earth, then more roots. Nothing. Yet the sound of dragging, wet and close, seemed to come from directly where her light fell. She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated. Her breath caught. A flicker. Right at the edge of her peripheral vision, behind a thick curtain of ivy, something moved. Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows. It was too tall, too slender. A shiver ran down her spine, raising gooseflesh on her arms despite the pendant’s heat. This wasn’t a trick of light, not the playful distortion of the Fae. This felt… predatory. She squeezed her eyes shut, then opened them, taking a deep, shuddering breath. "Get it together, Rory," she whispered, her voice swallowed by the vast quiet. She swung her torch back to the ivy-covered section. Nothing visible. The drag-and-suck sound had stopped. The silence returned, more profound and menacing than before. But the silence was not empty. It was filled now, with a hum, a low vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her. It wasn't sound, but a felt presence, like walking into a massive, unseen bell. The wildflowers, usually vibrant even at night, now looked pale and sickly in the torchlight, their colours muted, their petals almost translucent. A sharp snap echoed from behind her, a twig breaking underfoot. She whipped around, beam flashing. Nothing. Just the endless, tangled undergrowth. Yet whoever, or whatever, had done it stood there, breathing. She felt it, a cold waft of air against her cheek, laden with that cloying scent. Her scar, a small crescent on her left wrist from a childhood fall, suddenly itched, a phantom sensation. She took a step back, then another, trying to put distance between herself and the unseen presence. Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes scanning, searching for any break in the oppressive darkness. The trees seemed to press in closer, their rough bark feeling like skin. The sense of being watched intensified, a weight on her shoulders, on her scalp. The pendant burned against her chest now, a constant, consuming heat. It pulsed in time with her frantic heartbeat. This wasn't a warning for Hel. This was something else. Someone else. A low groan, like wood settling, or bones shifting, rumbled from straight ahead, from the deep dark where her torch light couldn’t reach. It wasn't the wind. There was no wind. She began to walk faster, not running, but a hurried stride. Her phone’s light bobbed frantically, creating more unsettling shadows than it dispersed. Her breathing grew shallow, punctuated by gasps. The groan sounded again, closer this time, and another, softer one, seemed to answer it from behind her. They were surrounding her. She spun, her mind racing. Her quick wit, her cool head, felt dulled, bogged down by the sheer, unreasoning terror clutching at her. This wasn’t a puzzle to solve. This was something ancient, something that smelled of graves and blooms. The ground under her foot felt unstable, shifting. She looked down, her torch beam cutting through the gloom. The earth directly beneath her was churned, as if something had recently clawed its way out. The metallic-floral scent was overwhelming here, thick enough to taste. The pendant throbbed violently against her skin, hot as a live coal. Then, from the darkness just beyond the reach of her light, she heard it. A faint chuckle. Dry, brittle, like old leaves skittering across pavement. It wasn't human. It was too thin, too sharp. It echoed, not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her. The chuckling grew louder, joined by another, and another, all thin, reedy, utterly devoid of mirth. Aurora ripped her gaze away from the churned earth, her head whipping up into the darkness. She was no longer alone.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:08:41.706Z" 2/25/2026, 1:08:41 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.81% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount2605
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"utterly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
4"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount2605
totalAiIsms66
found
0
word"oppressive"
count4
1
word"silence"
count10
2
word"pulse"
count6
3
word"looming"
count2
4
word"flicked"
count2
5
word"echoing"
count2
6
word"resolve"
count2
7
word"profound"
count4
8
word"warmth"
count4
9
word"rhythmic"
count2
10
word"reminder"
count2
11
word"flicker"
count2
12
word"down her spine"
count2
13
word"echoed"
count4
14
word"scanning"
count2
15
word"sense of"
count2
16
word"weight"
count2
17
word"pulsed"
count2
18
word"racing"
count2
19
word"gloom"
count2
20
word"churned"
count4
21
word"throbbed"
count2
highlights
0"oppressive"
1"silence"
2"pulse"
3"looming"
4"flicked"
5"echoing"
6"resolve"
7"profound"
8"warmth"
9"rhythmic"
10"reminder"
11"flicker"
12"down her spine"
13"echoed"
14"scanning"
15"sense of"
16"weight"
17"pulsed"
18"racing"
19"gloom"
20"churned"
21"throbbed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"shiver down spine"
count2
highlights
0"A shiver ran down her spine"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences249
matches(empty)
51.06% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount16
narrationSentences249
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences249
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords6
totalWords2605
ratio0.002
matches
0"shhhk, shhhk, shhhk"
1"shhhk, shhhk, shhhk"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount2575
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.31
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity1
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Heartstone2
Isolde2
Fae4
Grove2
London2
Hel4
Aurora8
persons
0"Isolde"
1"Aurora"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"London"
5"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences174
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her"
1"vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches8
per1kWords3.071
wordCount2605
matches
0"not from the ground, but from above, faint"
1"Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows"
2"not running, but a hurried stride"
3"not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her"
4"not from the ground, but from above, faint"
5"Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows"
6"not running, but a hurried stride"
7"not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences249
matches(empty)
59.08% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs37
mean70.41
std25.12
cv0.357
sampleLengths
086
1115
292
392
481
575
643
750
869
965
1051
1162
1266
1360
1462
1552
1640
1756
18171
19115
2092
2192
2281
2375
2443
2550
2669
2765
2851
2962
3066
3160
3262
3352
3440
3556
3686
96.81% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount6
totalSentences249
matches
0"being dragged"
1"was filled"
2"was churned"
3"being dragged"
4"was filled"
5"was churned"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs428
matches
0"was circling"
1"were surrounding"
2"was circling"
3"were surrounding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences249
ratio0
matches(empty)
71.09% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount2587
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"lay cool against her"
1"rough, bark-covered surfaces"
2"lay cool against her"
3"rough, bark-covered surfaces"
adverbCount118
adverbRatio0.04561267877850792
lyAdverbCount40
lyAdverbRatio0.015461925009663703
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences249
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences249
mean10.46
std6.16
cv0.589
sampleLengths
015
118
212
319
412
56
64
721
814
95
103
1114
1216
1319
1418
155
166
176
1813
1911
2011
2116
2211
2318
2422
2512
2611
278
2814
2925
3015
3116
321
331
3412
3518
3618
376
3813
3912
403
412
422
4312
441
4524
4614
474
481
491
37.15% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats32
diversityRatio0.14056224899598393
totalSentences249
uniqueOpeners35
61.44% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences217
matches
0"Just the endless, tangled undergrowth."
1"Then, from the darkness just"
2"Just the endless, tangled undergrowth."
3"Then, from the darkness just"
ratio0.018
57.79% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount88
totalSentences217
matches
0"Its silence had drawn her"
1"She reached the perimeter, the"
2"Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt"
3"She flicked her torch beam"
4"She stepped through the shimmering"
5"She swung her phone’s beam"
6"Their branches, skeletal fingers against"
7"She moved deeper, her steps"
8"Her eyes strained, seeking form"
9"Her rational mind offered explanations,"
10"It was subtle, unlike the"
11"She took another step, then"
12"It wasn't the natural scuttling"
13"She rotated slowly, her phone"
14"She tightened her grip on"
15"It moved closer."
16"She forced herself to move,"
17"Her torch beam cut through"
18"She spun, her eyes darting,"
19"Her breath caught."
ratio0.406
19.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount191
totalSentences217
matches
0"Aurora’s boots crunched on fallen"
1"The light from her phone’s"
2"A cold seeped into her"
3"The Heartstone pendant, a deep"
4"Its silence had drawn her"
5"The energy it always radiated"
6"She reached the perimeter, the"
7"Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt"
8"This was it: Isolde’s grove."
9"The Fae Grove."
10"A place where time played"
11"Tonight, though, the air felt"
12"She flicked her torch beam"
13"A faint, almost imperceptible shimmer,"
14"That was her way in."
15"She stepped through the shimmering"
16"The air shifted, thick and"
17"The distant hum of London"
18"This deep quiet, a void"
19"The only noise came from"
ratio0.88
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences217
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences142
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"She flicked her torch beam across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours."
1"But the scratching continued, a low *shhhk, shhhk, shhhk*, growing louder, as if whatever made it was circling the trunk, just out of sight."
2"She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated."
3"Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes scanning, searching for any break in the oppressive darkness."
4"She flicked her torch beam across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours."
5"But the scratching continued, a low *shhhk, shhhk, shhhk*, growing louder, as if whatever made it was circling the trunk, just out of sight."
6"She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated."
7"Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes scanning, searching for any break in the oppressive darkness."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences4
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
74.5043%