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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95EM35YJF4ZHCC97TS0W1J
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 2.5 Flash (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Horror: alone in an eerie place at night
Duration:
22.0s
Cost:
$0.013026
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
80.81%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
100.00%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
51.06%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
(details)
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
59.08%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
96.81%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
71.09%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
37.15%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
61.44%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
57.79%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
19.91%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
74.5043%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
Aurora’s boots crunched on fallen
leaves, a sound far too loud in the sudden hush.
The light from her phone’s
torch barely pierced the
oppressive
darkness clinging to the edge of Richmond Park.
A cold seeped into her
bones, sharper than the late autumn air.
The Heartstone pendant, a deep
crimson gem the size of a thumbnail, lay cool against her skin, unusually quiet.
Its silence had drawn her
here, more than any thrum or
pulse
.
The energy it always radiated
felt… stifled, flattened, almost afraid.
She reached the perimeter, the
ancient oak standing stones
looming
like hunched giants against the faint glow of the distant city.
Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt
slick with an unnatural dampness under her gloved fingers. This was it: Isolde’s grove. The Fae Grove.
A place where time played
tricks, where wildflowers bloomed in the dead of winter.
Tonight, though, the air felt
less like magic and more like something heavy, holding its breath.
She flicked her torch beam
across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours. A faint, almost imperceptible shimmer, like heat rising from tarmac, caught her eye between two particularly gnarled oaks. That was her way in.
She stepped through the shimmering
barrier.
The air shifted, thick and
still.
The distant hum of London
traffic vanished, replaced by a complete,
echoing
silence
.
This deep quiet, a void
of sound, pricked at her skin.
The only noise came from
her own breathing, ragged and shallow.
She swung her phone’s beam
around, its weak light struggling to push back the inky black. Tree trunks, impossibly thick and scarred, rose into an unseen canopy.
Their branches, skeletal fingers against
the black sky,
seemed to
twist inward, closing off the world behind her. A damp, earthy scent filled her lungs, mixed with something else, metallic and faintly floral, like old blood spilled on rose petals.
She moved deeper, her steps
tentative, the leaves underfoot cushioning her progress. The ground grew soft, the earth giving
slightly
with each step.
Her eyes strained, seeking form
in the dark. Shapes at the edge of her vision
seemed to
coalesce and dissolve, like smoke. A stump became a crouched animal, a tangle of branches a contorted face, only to
resolve
back into wood as her torch fixed on them. A rustling broke the
silence
,
not from the ground, but from above, faint
and quick. Aurora jerked her head up, catching a flash of darker shadow against the already
profound
dark. Squirrel? Owl? Her rational mind offered explanations, but her
pulse
hammered in her throat. The pendant against her chest
began to
warm, a slow, gentle heat at first, then a throbbing
warmth
.
It was subtle, unlike the
frantic
pulse
it made near Hel portals, more like a steady, insistent hum.
She took another step, then
stopped. A sound, like a gentle,
rhythmic
scratching, came from behind a massive oak.
It wasn't the natural scuttling
of insects or the rustle of leaves. This was deliberate. Too even. Too close.
She rotated slowly, her phone
beam sweeping across the tree's thick trunk. Nothing. But the scratching continued, a low *
shhhk, shhhk, shhhk
*, growing louder, as if whatever made it
was circling
the trunk, just out of sight.
She tightened her grip on
her phone, her thumb hovering over the call button. Who would she call? Eva? Silas? What would she say? "Hey, I'm in a magic grove and something's scratching a tree?" She couldn't. This was her investigation. Her burden. The scratching stopped abruptly, replaced by a wet, sucking sound, like something
being dragged
through mud. It moved closer. Aurora froze, every muscle taut. The air grew heavy, thick with that metallic-floral scent, pressing down on her. The
warmth
from the pendant intensified, spreading across her chest, a burning
reminder
. She forced herself to move, to circle the tree in the opposite direction from the sound.
Her torch beam cut through
the darkness, illuminating a patch of gnarled roots, then damp earth, then more roots. Nothing. Yet the sound of dragging, wet and close,
seemed to
come from directly where her light fell. She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated. Her breath caught. A
flicker
. Right at the edge of her peripheral vision, behind a thick curtain of ivy, something moved.
Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows
. It was too tall, too slender.
A shiver ran down her spine
, raising gooseflesh on her arms despite the pendant’s heat. This wasn’t a trick of light, not the playful distortion of the Fae. This felt… predatory. She squeezed her eyes shut, then opened them, taking a deep, shuddering breath. "Get it together, Rory," she whispered, her voice swallowed by the vast quiet. She swung her torch back to the ivy-covered section. Nothing visible. The drag-and-suck sound had stopped. The
silence
returned, more
profound
and menacing than before. But the
silence
was not empty. It
was filled
now, with a hum, a low
vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her
. It wasn't sound, but a felt presence, like walking into a massive, unseen bell. The wildflowers, usually vibrant even at night, now looked pale and sickly in the torchlight, their colours muted, their petals almost translucent. A sharp snap
echoed
from behind her, a twig breaking underfoot. She whipped around, beam flashing. Nothing. Just the endless, tangled undergrowth. Yet whoever, or whatever, had done it stood there, breathing. She felt it, a cold waft of air against her cheek, laden with that cloying scent. Her scar, a small crescent on her left wrist from a childhood fall,
suddenly
itched, a phantom sensation. She took a step back, then another, trying to put distance between herself and the unseen presence. Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes
scanning
, searching for any break in the
oppressive
darkness. The trees
seemed to
press in closer, their rough bark feeling like skin. The
sense of
being watched intensified, a
weight
on her shoulders, on her scalp. The pendant burned against her chest now, a constant, consuming heat. It
pulsed
in time with her frantic heartbeat. This wasn't a warning for Hel. This was something else. Someone else. A low groan, like wood settling, or bones shifting, rumbled from straight ahead, from the deep dark where her torch light couldn’t reach. It wasn't the wind. There was no wind. She
began to
walk faster,
not running, but a hurried stride
. Her phone’s light bobbed frantically, creating more unsettling shadows than it dispersed. Her breathing grew shallow, punctuated by gasps. The groan sounded again, closer this time, and another, softer one,
seemed to
answer it from behind her. They
were surrounding
her. She spun, her mind
racing
. Her quick wit, her cool head, felt dulled, bogged down by the sheer, unreasoning terror clutching at her. This wasn’t a puzzle to solve. This was something ancient, something that smelled of graves and blooms. The ground under her foot felt unstable, shifting. She looked down, her torch beam cutting through the
gloom
. The earth directly beneath her
was churned
, as if something had recently clawed its way out. The metallic-floral scent was overwhelming here, thick enough to taste. The pendant
throbbed
violently against her skin, hot as a live coal.
Then, from the darkness just
beyond the reach of her light, she heard it. A faint chuckle. Dry, brittle, like old leaves skittering across pavement. It wasn't human. It was too thin, too sharp. It
echoed
,
not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her
. The chuckling grew louder, joined by another, and another, all thin, reedy,
utterly
devoid of mirth. Aurora ripped her gaze away from the
churned
earth, her head whipping up into the darkness. She was no longer alone.
Aurora’s boots crunched on fallen
leaves, a sound far too loud in the sudden hush.
The light from her phone’s
torch barely pierced the
oppressive
darkness clinging to the edge of Richmond Park.
A cold seeped into her
bones, sharper than the late autumn air.
The Heartstone pendant, a deep
crimson gem the size of a thumbnail, lay cool against her skin, unusually quiet.
Its silence had drawn her
here, more than any thrum or
pulse
.
The energy it always radiated
felt… stifled, flattened, almost afraid.
She reached the perimeter, the
ancient oak standing stones
looming
like hunched giants against the faint glow of the distant city.
Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt
slick with an unnatural dampness under her gloved fingers. This was it: Isolde’s grove. The Fae Grove.
A place where time played
tricks, where wildflowers bloomed in the dead of winter.
Tonight, though, the air felt
less like magic and more like something heavy, holding its breath.
She flicked her torch beam
across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours. A faint, almost imperceptible shimmer, like heat rising from tarmac, caught her eye between two particularly gnarled oaks. That was her way in.
She stepped through the shimmering
barrier.
The air shifted, thick and
still.
The distant hum of London
traffic vanished, replaced by a complete,
echoing
silence
.
This deep quiet, a void
of sound, pricked at her skin.
The only noise came from
her own breathing, ragged and shallow.
She swung her phone’s beam
around, its weak light struggling to push back the inky black. Tree trunks, impossibly thick and scarred, rose into an unseen canopy.
Their branches, skeletal fingers against
the black sky,
seemed to
twist inward, closing off the world behind her. A damp, earthy scent filled her lungs, mixed with something else, metallic and faintly floral, like old blood spilled on rose petals.
She moved deeper, her steps
tentative, the leaves underfoot cushioning her progress. The ground grew soft, the earth giving
slightly
with each step.
Her eyes strained, seeking form
in the dark. Shapes at the edge of her vision
seemed to
coalesce and dissolve, like smoke. A stump became a crouched animal, a tangle of branches a contorted face, only to
resolve
back into wood as her torch fixed on them. A rustling broke the
silence
,
not from the ground, but from above, faint
and quick. Aurora jerked her head up, catching a flash of darker shadow against the already
profound
dark. Squirrel? Owl? Her rational mind offered explanations, but her
pulse
hammered in her throat. The pendant against her chest
began to
warm, a slow, gentle heat at first, then a throbbing
warmth
.
It was subtle, unlike the
frantic
pulse
it made near Hel portals, more like a steady, insistent hum.
She took another step, then
stopped. A sound, like a gentle,
rhythmic
scratching, came from behind a massive oak.
It wasn't the natural scuttling
of insects or the rustle of leaves. This was deliberate. Too even. Too close.
She rotated slowly, her phone
beam sweeping across the tree's thick trunk. Nothing. But the scratching continued, a low *
shhhk, shhhk, shhhk
*, growing louder, as if whatever made it
was circling
the trunk, just out of sight.
She tightened her grip on
her phone, her thumb hovering over the call button. Who would she call? Eva? Silas? What would she say? "Hey, I'm in a magic grove and something's scratching a tree?" She couldn't. This was her investigation. Her burden. The scratching stopped abruptly, replaced by a wet, sucking sound, like something
being dragged
through mud. It moved closer. Aurora froze, every muscle taut. The air grew heavy, thick with that metallic-floral scent, pressing down on her. The
warmth
from the pendant intensified, spreading across her chest, a burning
reminder
. She forced herself to move, to circle the tree in the opposite direction from the sound.
Her torch beam cut through
the darkness, illuminating a patch of gnarled roots, then damp earth, then more roots. Nothing. Yet the sound of dragging, wet and close,
seemed to
come from directly where her light fell. She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated. Her breath caught. A
flicker
. Right at the edge of her peripheral vision, behind a thick curtain of ivy, something moved.
Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows
. It was too tall, too slender.
A shiver ran down her spine
, raising gooseflesh on her arms despite the pendant’s heat. This wasn’t a trick of light, not the playful distortion of the Fae. This felt… predatory. She squeezed her eyes shut, then opened them, taking a deep, shuddering breath. "Get it together, Rory," she whispered, her voice swallowed by the vast quiet. She swung her torch back to the ivy-covered section. Nothing visible. The drag-and-suck sound had stopped. The
silence
returned, more
profound
and menacing than before. But the
silence
was not empty. It
was filled
now, with a hum, a low
vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her
. It wasn't sound, but a felt presence, like walking into a massive, unseen bell. The wildflowers, usually vibrant even at night, now looked pale and sickly in the torchlight, their colours muted, their petals almost translucent. A sharp snap
echoed
from behind her, a twig breaking underfoot. She whipped around, beam flashing. Nothing. Just the endless, tangled undergrowth. Yet whoever, or whatever, had done it stood there, breathing. She felt it, a cold waft of air against her cheek, laden with that cloying scent. Her scar, a small crescent on her left wrist from a childhood fall,
suddenly
itched, a phantom sensation. She took a step back, then another, trying to put distance between herself and the unseen presence. Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes
scanning
, searching for any break in the
oppressive
darkness. The trees
seemed to
press in closer, their rough bark feeling like skin. The
sense of
being watched intensified, a
weight
on her shoulders, on her scalp. The pendant burned against her chest now, a constant, consuming heat. It
pulsed
in time with her frantic heartbeat. This wasn't a warning for Hel. This was something else. Someone else. A low groan, like wood settling, or bones shifting, rumbled from straight ahead, from the deep dark where her torch light couldn’t reach. It wasn't the wind. There was no wind. She
began to
walk faster,
not running, but a hurried stride
. Her phone’s light bobbed frantically, creating more unsettling shadows than it dispersed. Her breathing grew shallow, punctuated by gasps. The groan sounded again, closer this time, and another, softer one,
seemed to
answer it from behind her. They
were surrounding
her. She spun, her mind
racing
. Her quick wit, her cool head, felt dulled, bogged down by the sheer, unreasoning terror clutching at her. This wasn’t a puzzle to solve. This was something ancient, something that smelled of graves and blooms. The ground under her foot felt unstable, shifting. She looked down, her torch beam cutting through the
gloom
. The earth directly beneath her
was churned
, as if something had recently clawed its way out. The metallic-floral scent was overwhelming here, thick enough to taste. The pendant
throbbed
violently against her skin, hot as a live coal.
Then, from the darkness just
beyond the reach of her light, she heard it. A faint chuckle. Dry, brittle, like old leaves skittering across pavement. It wasn't human. It was too thin, too sharp. It
echoed
,
not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her
. The chuckling grew louder, joined by another, and another, all thin, reedy,
utterly
devoid of mirth. Aurora ripped her gaze away from the
churned
earth, her head whipping up into the darkness. She was no longer alone.
created_at
"2026-02-25T01:08:41.706Z"
2/25/2026, 1:08:41 AM
model
"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
1889
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
21935
tokens_prompt
1038
tokens_completion
4900
native_tokens_prompt
963
native_tokens_completion
5095
native_tokens_completion_images
0
native_tokens_reasoning
1640
native_tokens_cached
0
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"STOP"
usage
0.0130264
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"16c01e26-9b91-4d22-b487-ed35634b017d"
is_byok
false
latency
1889
model_permaslug
"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771981721-IE6AHdMXx5NL8yeTXupJ"
upstream_id
(null)
total_cost
0.0130264
cache_discount
(null)
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
100.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
4
adverbTagCount
0
adverbTags
(empty)
dialogueSentences
4
tagDensity
1
leniency
1
rawRatio
0
effectiveRatio
0
80.81%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2605
totalAiIsmAdverbs
10
found
0
adverb
"slightly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
2
adverb
"very"
count
2
3
adverb
"suddenly"
count
2
4
adverb
"utterly"
count
2
highlights
0
"slightly"
1
"slowly"
2
"very"
3
"suddenly"
4
"utterly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
0.00%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2605
totalAiIsms
66
found
0
word
"oppressive"
count
4
1
word
"silence"
count
10
2
word
"pulse"
count
6
3
word
"looming"
count
2
4
word
"flicked"
count
2
5
word
"echoing"
count
2
6
word
"resolve"
count
2
7
word
"profound"
count
4
8
word
"warmth"
count
4
9
word
"rhythmic"
count
2
10
word
"reminder"
count
2
11
word
"flicker"
count
2
12
word
"down her spine"
count
2
13
word
"echoed"
count
4
14
word
"scanning"
count
2
15
word
"sense of"
count
2
16
word
"weight"
count
2
17
word
"pulsed"
count
2
18
word
"racing"
count
2
19
word
"gloom"
count
2
20
word
"churned"
count
4
21
word
"throbbed"
count
2
highlights
0
"oppressive"
1
"silence"
2
"pulse"
3
"looming"
4
"flicked"
5
"echoing"
6
"resolve"
7
"profound"
8
"warmth"
9
"rhythmic"
10
"reminder"
11
"flicker"
12
"down her spine"
13
"echoed"
14
"scanning"
15
"sense of"
16
"weight"
17
"pulsed"
18
"racing"
19
"gloom"
20
"churned"
21
"throbbed"
100.00%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
2
maxInWindow
1
found
0
label
"shiver down spine"
count
2
highlights
0
"A shiver ran down her spine"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
249
matches
(empty)
51.06%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
16
narrationSentences
249
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
1
"began to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
249
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
25
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
2
markdownWords
6
totalWords
2605
ratio
0.002
matches
0
"shhhk, shhhk, shhhk"
1
"shhhk, shhhk, shhhk"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
4
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
28
wordCount
2575
uniqueNames
9
maxNameDensity
0.31
worstName
"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity
1
worstWindowName
"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond
2
Park
2
Heartstone
2
Isolde
2
Fae
4
Grove
2
London
2
Hel
4
Aurora
8
persons
0
"Isolde"
1
"Aurora"
places
0
"Richmond"
1
"Park"
2
"Fae"
3
"Grove"
4
"London"
5
"Hel"
globalScore
1
windowScore
1
100.00%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
174
glossingSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her"
1
"vibration that seemed to resonate in the very air around her"
0.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
8
per1kWords
3.071
wordCount
2605
matches
0
"not from the ground, but from above, faint"
1
"Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows"
2
"not running, but a hurried stride"
3
"not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her"
4
"not from the ground, but from above, faint"
5
"Not entirely black, but a deeper void within the shadows"
6
"not running, but a hurried stride"
7
"not from a single source, but from all directions at once, enveloping her"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
249
matches
(empty)
59.08%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
37
mean
70.41
std
25.12
cv
0.357
sampleLengths
0
86
1
115
2
92
3
92
4
81
5
75
6
43
7
50
8
69
9
65
10
51
11
62
12
66
13
60
14
62
15
52
16
40
17
56
18
171
19
115
20
92
21
92
22
81
23
75
24
43
25
50
26
69
27
65
28
51
29
62
30
66
31
60
32
62
33
52
34
40
35
56
36
86
96.81%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
6
totalSentences
249
matches
0
"being dragged"
1
"was filled"
2
"was churned"
3
"being dragged"
4
"was filled"
5
"was churned"
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
4
totalVerbs
428
matches
0
"was circling"
1
"were surrounding"
2
"was circling"
3
"were surrounding"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
249
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
71.09%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
2587
adjectiveStacks
4
stackExamples
0
"lay cool against her"
1
"rough, bark-covered surfaces"
2
"lay cool against her"
3
"rough, bark-covered surfaces"
adverbCount
118
adverbRatio
0.04561267877850792
lyAdverbCount
40
lyAdverbRatio
0.015461925009663703
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
249
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
249
mean
10.46
std
6.16
cv
0.589
sampleLengths
0
15
1
18
2
12
3
19
4
12
5
6
6
4
7
21
8
14
9
5
10
3
11
14
12
16
13
19
14
18
15
5
16
6
17
6
18
13
19
11
20
11
21
16
22
11
23
18
24
22
25
12
26
11
27
8
28
14
29
25
30
15
31
16
32
1
33
1
34
12
35
18
36
18
37
6
38
13
39
12
40
3
41
2
42
2
43
12
44
1
45
24
46
14
47
4
48
1
49
1
37.15%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
32
diversityRatio
0.14056224899598393
totalSentences
249
uniqueOpeners
35
61.44%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
4
totalSentences
217
matches
0
"Just the endless, tangled undergrowth."
1
"Then, from the darkness just"
2
"Just the endless, tangled undergrowth."
3
"Then, from the darkness just"
ratio
0.018
57.79%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
88
totalSentences
217
matches
0
"Its silence had drawn her"
1
"She reached the perimeter, the"
2
"Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt"
3
"She flicked her torch beam"
4
"She stepped through the shimmering"
5
"She swung her phone’s beam"
6
"Their branches, skeletal fingers against"
7
"She moved deeper, her steps"
8
"Her eyes strained, seeking form"
9
"Her rational mind offered explanations,"
10
"It was subtle, unlike the"
11
"She took another step, then"
12
"It wasn't the natural scuttling"
13
"She rotated slowly, her phone"
14
"She tightened her grip on"
15
"It moved closer."
16
"She forced herself to move,"
17
"Her torch beam cut through"
18
"She spun, her eyes darting,"
19
"Her breath caught."
ratio
0.406
19.91%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
191
totalSentences
217
matches
0
"Aurora’s boots crunched on fallen"
1
"The light from her phone’s"
2
"A cold seeped into her"
3
"The Heartstone pendant, a deep"
4
"Its silence had drawn her"
5
"The energy it always radiated"
6
"She reached the perimeter, the"
7
"Their rough, bark-covered surfaces felt"
8
"This was it: Isolde’s grove."
9
"The Fae Grove."
10
"A place where time played"
11
"Tonight, though, the air felt"
12
"She flicked her torch beam"
13
"A faint, almost imperceptible shimmer,"
14
"That was her way in."
15
"She stepped through the shimmering"
16
"The air shifted, thick and"
17
"The distant hum of London"
18
"This deep quiet, a void"
19
"The only noise came from"
ratio
0.88
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
217
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
142
technicalSentenceCount
8
matches
0
"She flicked her torch beam across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours."
1
"But the scratching continued, a low *shhhk, shhhk, shhhk*, growing louder, as if whatever made it was circling the trunk, just out of sight."
2
"She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated."
3
"Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes scanning, searching for any break in the oppressive darkness."
4
"She flicked her torch beam across the rough stones, searching for a path that wasn't there during daylight hours."
5
"But the scratching continued, a low *shhhk, shhhk, shhhk*, growing louder, as if whatever made it was circling the trunk, just out of sight."
6
"She spun, her eyes darting, trying to catch the source before it evaporated."
7
"Her retreat was slow, careful, her eyes scanning, searching for any break in the oppressive darkness."
100.00%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
4
uselessAdditionCount
0
matches
(empty)
0.00%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
2
fancyCount
2
fancyTags
0
"she whispered (whisper)"
1
"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences
4
tagDensity
0.5
leniency
1
rawRatio
1
effectiveRatio
1
74.5043%