Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95FD7M8S7EANWGEMR7HNPM

Run Details

Duration:
17.8s
Cost:
$0.001920
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air grew still first, a palpable hush that stole the usual rustle of Richmond Park’s leaves clean from the world. Aurora felt it prickle her skin, a subtle pressure change against her eardrums. Beside her, Nyx moved with unnerving fluidity, their form a deeper shadow clinging to the edge of her vision, the barely-there violet glow of their eyes the only hint of their presence. They had been walking for what felt like hours, though the sun still hung high and indifferent in the London sky. Isolde Varga, however, seemed unfettered by mortal constraints. She glided ahead, her silver hair a luminous cascade down her back, her light, Fae-touched steps disturbing not a single blade of grass. She was the reason they were here, a cryptic promise of knowledge for Aurora’s escalating troubles, a riddle wrapped in an enigma leading them toward… this. The trees ahead began to change. Their bark grew smoother, paler, almost like polished bone. The familiar oaks gave way to something taller, more elegantly twisted, their branches reaching not for the sky, but *into* it, as if grasping at a different, unseen firmament. Then, the boundary. Ancient oaks, impossibly thick and gnarled, stood in a rough circle. They weren’t just trees; they were monoliths, etched with spiral patterns that seemed to writhe just at the edge of perception. These were the standing stones Isolde had spoken of. The air between them shimmered, a faint distortion, like heat haze on a frozen day. Aurora clutched the Heartstone Pendant hidden beneath her shirt. Its usual faint warmth seemed to pulse, a hesitant thrum against her skin, like a distant heartbeat. Isolde paused, turning back. Her pale lavender eyes held a depth that Aurora couldn’t chart. "Between," she murmured, her voice like chimes in a breeze. "Between here and there. Between now and then." She stepped between two of the colossal oaks. For a fleeting instant, her form seemed to elongate, to stretch as if pulled by unseen currents, then she was simply gone. Nyx didn't hesitate. They flowed forward, their silhouette of living shadow elongating and reforming, weaving through the very light that seemed to bend around the standing stones. Aurora could feel the tremor of *something* against the Veil, the metaphysical barrier that kept worlds apart. It was thinner here, frayed. She took a breath, the air suddenly sharp, charged. Her childhood scar, a small crescent on her left wrist, itched with a phantom memory of cold. She gripped the worn leather pommel of the Fae-Forged Blade at her hip. It felt unusually cold, the moonsilver it was crafted from seeming to absorb the sunlight rather than reflect it. With a surge of mingled dread and defiance, Aurora stepped through the shimmering archway. The world dissolved. It wasn't a falling sensation, not a stumble, but a *rearrangement*. The muted greens and browns of the park vanished, replaced by a light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once. It was warm, diffused, bathing everything in a honeyed glow that painted colours Aurora had never seen. The sounds shifted too. The distant hum of traffic, the birdsong, the wind – all faded. In their place, a gentle symphony emerged: the soft chime of unseen bells, the murmur of water that sounded like a thousand hushed voices, a melodic hum that vibrated not in her ears, but deep within her bones. She stood on a carpet of moss so thick it felt yielding, yet firm beneath her worn trainers. Wildflowers, impossibly vibrant, bloomed in riots of colour all around her. Not the shy, fleeting blossoms of Earth, but robust, extravagant things that pulsed with their own inner light. Flowers like sapphire bells, others like spun gold, and some that unfurled petals of crimson and violet, shimmering with an iridescence that shifted with every tiny movement of air. They bloomed in clusters, in swathes, defying any season, any logic. The air itself tasted sweet, laden with the perfume of flowers and the rich, damp scent of ancient earth, a fragrance so potent it felt like a physical presence. Nyx stood a few paces away, a more defined outline now. Their shadow-form seemed to catch the unusual light, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying, reflecting the alien landscape. They tilted their head, a gesture that spoke of observation, perhaps even curiosity, a rare flicker in their usual detached demeanor. "This place," Nyx’s voice whispered, like wind rustling through dry leaves, "it breathes." Aurora looked down at her hands. Her skin seemed paler, tinged with the pervasive golden light. She flexed her fingers, trying to ground herself. The Heartstone Pendant against her chest gave another distinct thrum, warmer this time, a soft beat of warning or welcome. It wasn't just the visual or olfactory onslaught; it was the *feeling* of the place. An ancient, potent stillness that felt less like peace and more like immense, contained power. Time here didn't merely *feel* different; it *was* different. A second stretched, then snapped back, leaving Aurora momentarily disoriented, as if she’d blinked and missed a subtle shift in reality. Isolde was already heading deeper into the grove, her silver hair a beacon. Aurora pushed herself to follow, her boots sinking slightly into the moss. The trees here were even stranger, their trunks twisting into impossible knots, bark like carved mother-of-pearl. Luminous moss dripped from branches like spectral streamers, casting faint, cool light that contrasted with the warm glow of the flowers. Each step was a revelation, a discovery of a world woven from dream and starlight. She reached out, her fingers trembling, and touched a petal of a bloom that resembled a starburst of violet light. It was cool, silken, and thrummed with a faint, internal vibration, like a minute, captured heartbeat. She pulled her hand back as if burned. This was no mere garden. This was a place intrinsically tied to the Fae realm, a pocket dimension where the laws of her world bent and broke. "Beware the echoes," Isolde’s voice called back, echoing slightly, though she hadn't moved her lips. "What was, and what might be, converse here." Aurora’s mind raced. Echoes? Converse? She noticed now, small movements in her peripheral vision – a flicker of light that vanished when she turned her head, a shadow detaching itself from another, only to melt back into it. Was it Nyx, shifting? Or something else? The air itself seemed to hum with a low frequency, a song just beyond comprehension. She looked at Nyx again. They seemed… contained. Their shadowy form was less a passive cloak and more a deliberate, shifting presence. Their violet eyes swept across the landscape, taking in details Aurora could only guess at. A soft, fluting sound drifted through the air. It wasn't a bird, or an instrument she recognized. It was pure tone, mournful yet beautiful, and it seemed to weave through the very fabric of the grove, making the light ripple. Aurora found herself drawn towards it, towards a denser cluster of the glowing flora. Her Fae-Forged Blade felt colder still at her hip, its moonsilver seemingly drinking the ambient magic. She resisted the urge to draw it. Isolde had brought them here, not to fight, but to learn. As they rounded a cluster of trees that seemed to be woven together, their forms merging like dancers, the grove opened out. Before them lay not a clearing, but an expanse where the golden light intensified, pooling around a central, crystalline pool. The water within was utterly still, reflecting the unearthly flora and the perpetually twilight sky above like a perfect mirror. And around the pool, scattered amongst the perpetually blooming flowers, were figures. They were indistinct, shimmering, like heat hazes given form, their outlines blurred, their presence felt more than seen. They moved with a grace that was both beautiful and unnerving, their forms wavering like reflections on troubled water. Fae? Or something else born of this liminal space? Aurora’s breath hitched. The Heartstone Pendant pulsed insistently against her skin, a steady, warm rhythm now, as if confirming the profound otherworldly nature of their location. This place, the Fae Grove, was more than a hidden clearing. It was a threshold, a wound in reality, a beautiful, terrifying testament to the worlds that lay just beyond the Veil. She felt a thrill of wonder, sharp and sudden, instantly tempered by a cold knot of unease in her stomach. They had stepped into something ancient, something powerful, and the silence of the grove seemed to hold its breath, waiting.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:09:07.449Z" 2/25/2026, 1:09:07 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.8
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
78.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count2
3
adverb"utterly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"suddenly"
2"slightly"
3"utterly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1421
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"palpable"
count1
1
word"enigma"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count1
3
word"etched"
count1
4
word"shimmered"
count1
5
word"warmth"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"fleeting"
count2
8
word"could feel"
count1
9
word"charged"
count1
10
word"symphony"
count1
11
word"vibrated"
count1
12
word"pulsed"
count2
13
word"flicker"
count2
14
word"tinged"
count1
15
word"beacon"
count1
16
word"spectral"
count1
17
word"echoes"
count2
18
word"echoing"
count1
19
word"raced"
count1
20
word"crystalline"
count1
21
word"perfect"
count1
22
word"wavering"
count1
23
word"profound"
count1
24
word"otherworldly"
count1
25
word"testament"
count1
26
word"stomach"
count1
27
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"palpable"
1"enigma"
2"familiar"
3"etched"
4"shimmered"
5"warmth"
6"pulse"
7"fleeting"
8"could feel"
9"charged"
10"symphony"
11"vibrated"
12"pulsed"
13"flicker"
14"tinged"
15"beacon"
16"spectral"
17"echoes"
18"echoing"
19"raced"
20"crystalline"
21"perfect"
22"wavering"
23"profound"
24"otherworldly"
25"testament"
26"stomach"
27"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences101
matches
0"a thrill of wonder"
1"felt a thrill"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount11
narrationSentences101
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences102
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans6
markdownWords6
totalWords1423
ratio0.004
matches
0"into"
1"something"
2"rearrangement"
3"feeling"
4"feel"
5"was"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions51
wordCount1399
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Nyx6
London1
Varga1
Fae-touched1
Aurora14
Isolde6
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Veil2
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Earth1
Fae6
Grove1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Pendant"
4"Blade"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Veil"
4"Fae"
5"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences83
glossingSentenceCount11
matches
0"felt like hours, though the sun still h"
1"seemed unfettered by mortal constraints"
2"as if grasping at a different, unseen firmament"
3"patterns that seemed to writhe just at the edge of perception"
4"light that seemed to emanate from nowhere and everywhere at once"
5"sounded like a thousand hushed voices, a m"
6"felt like a physical presence"
7"seemed paler tinged with the pervasive golden light"
8"its moonsilver seemingly drinking the ambien"
9"trees that seemed to be woven together, their forms merging like dancers, the grove opened out"
10"as if confirming the profound otherworldly nature of their location"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords4.216
wordCount1423
matches
0"not for the sky, but *into* it, as if grasping at a different, unseen firmament"
1"not a stumble, but a *rearrangement*"
2"not in her ears, but deep within her bones"
3"Not the shy, fleeting blossoms of Earth, but robust, extravagant things"
4"not to fight, but to learn"
5"not a clearing, but an expanse"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences102
matches(empty)
90.46% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs17
mean83.71
std39.06
cv0.467
sampleLengths
0144
1129
263
3107
414
53
6105
7116
864
9104
1077
1171
1223
1397
1488
15120
1698
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences101
matches
0"was crafted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs224
matches
0"was already heading"
2.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences102
ratio0.049
matches
0"They weren’t just trees; they were monoliths, etched with spiral patterns that seemed to writhe just at the edge of perception."
1"The distant hum of traffic, the birdsong, the wind – all faded."
2"It wasn't just the visual or olfactory onslaught; it was the *feeling* of the place."
3"Time here didn't merely *feel* different; it *was* different."
4"She noticed now, small movements in her peripheral vision – a flicker of light that vanished when she turned her head, a shadow detaching itself from another, only to melt back into it."
93.87% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1404
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount66
adverbRatio0.04700854700854701
lyAdverbCount23
lyAdverbRatio0.01638176638176638
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences102
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences102
mean13.95
std7.88
cv0.565
sampleLengths
021
113
232
321
48
523
625
71
86
99
1029
113
1211
1321
149
1515
169
1717
184
1911
2010
2116
2222
233
2424
2517
265
279
2817
2913
3019
3114
323
3311
3423
3517
364
3712
3838
3918
4011
4118
4229
4311
4429
4511
4619
4721
4813
496
55.23% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.37254901960784315
totalSentences102
uniqueOpeners38
35.09% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Then, the boundary."
ratio0.011
51.58% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount40
totalSentences95
matches
0"They had been walking for"
1"She glided ahead, her silver"
2"She was the reason they"
3"Their bark grew smoother, paler,"
4"They weren’t just trees; they"
5"Its usual faint warmth seemed"
6"Her pale lavender eyes held"
7"she murmured, her voice like"
8"She stepped between two of"
9"They flowed forward, their silhouette"
10"It was thinner here, frayed."
11"She took a breath, the"
12"Her childhood scar, a small"
13"She gripped the worn leather"
14"It felt unusually cold, the"
15"It wasn't a falling sensation,"
16"It was warm, diffused, bathing"
17"She stood on a carpet"
18"They bloomed in clusters, in"
19"Their shadow-form seemed to catch"
ratio0.421
38.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences95
matches
0"The air grew still first,"
1"Aurora felt it prickle her"
2"They had been walking for"
3"Isolde Varga, however, seemed unfettered"
4"She glided ahead, her silver"
5"She was the reason they"
6"The trees ahead began to"
7"Their bark grew smoother, paler,"
8"The familiar oaks gave way"
9"They weren’t just trees; they"
10"These were the standing stones"
11"The air between them shimmered,"
12"Aurora clutched the Heartstone Pendant"
13"Its usual faint warmth seemed"
14"Isolde paused, turning back."
15"Her pale lavender eyes held"
16"she murmured, her voice like"
17"She stepped between two of"
18"Nyx didn't hesitate."
19"They flowed forward, their silhouette"
ratio0.842
52.63% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences95
matches
0"Before them lay not a"
ratio0.011
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences65
technicalSentenceCount13
matches
0"The familiar oaks gave way to something taller, more elegantly twisted, their branches reaching not for the sky, but *into* it, as if grasping at a different, u…"
1"Aurora could feel the tremor of *something* against the Veil, the metaphysical barrier that kept worlds apart."
2"In their place, a gentle symphony emerged: the soft chime of unseen bells, the murmur of water that sounded like a thousand hushed voices, a melodic hum that vi…"
3"Flowers like sapphire bells, others like spun gold, and some that unfurled petals of crimson and violet, shimmering with an iridescence that shifted with every …"
4"Their shadow-form seemed to catch the unusual light, the violet glow of their eyes intensifying, reflecting the alien landscape."
5"They tilted their head, a gesture that spoke of observation, perhaps even curiosity, a rare flicker in their usual detached demeanor."
6"An ancient, potent stillness that felt less like peace and more like immense, contained power."
7"A second stretched, then snapped back, leaving Aurora momentarily disoriented, as if she’d blinked and missed a subtle shift in reality."
8"Luminous moss dripped from branches like spectral streamers, casting faint, cool light that contrasted with the warm glow of the flowers."
9"She reached out, her fingers trembling, and touched a petal of a bloom that resembled a starburst of violet light."
10"She noticed now, small movements in her peripheral vision – a flicker of light that vanished when she turned her head, a shadow detaching itself from another, o…"
11"They moved with a grace that was both beautiful and unnerving, their forms wavering like reflections on troubled water."
12"The Heartstone Pendant pulsed insistently against her skin, a steady, warm rhythm now, as if confirming the profound otherworldly nature of their location."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx’s voice whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde’s voice called back (call back)"
dialogueSentences5
tagDensity0.6
leniency1
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio1
66.6486%