Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95FES7J423WDEKNVC6954J

Run Details

Duration:
26.8s
Cost:
$0.011019
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The smell of cumin and turmeric was a permanent resident of the flat on Brick Lane, rising through the floorboards from the curry house below until it saturated every curtain and yellowing page of Eva’s research. Aurora Carter, known to the few friends she had left as Rory, ignored the olfactory assault as she nudged a stack of crumbling scrolls off the velvet sofa to make room for herself. Ptolemy, a tabby cat with an attitude problem and a penchant for sleeping on the rarest manuscripts, let out a sharp hiss before readjusting his weight on a leather-bound volume of demonology. Rory rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she’d never quite managed to shake. She was supposed to be organizing Eva’s notes, but the ink was blurring before her eyes. The silence of the flat was heavy, broken only by the muffled shouting of a street vendor three stories down and the rhythmic ticking of a clock that didn’t keep correct time. Then came the knock. It wasn't the frantic pounding of a delivery driver or the polite rap of a neighbor. It was three slow, deliberate strikes, the sound of wood meeting wood with the authority of a gavel. Rory froze. Her heart, usually a steady, cool-headed engine, gave a traitorous thump against her ribs. She knew that cadence. She stood, her movements stiff as she navigated the obstacle course of books and occult debris. At the door, she paused. Eva’s security was no joke—three heavy deadbolts that Rory had to slide back one by one. The metallic *clack-clack-clack* echoed in the small hallway, sounding like the loading of a weapon. She turned the final knob and pulled the door open. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim, flickering light of the hallway like a ghost from a much more expensive haunting. He was, as always, impeccably dressed. His charcoal suit was tailored to a degree that made the peeling wallpaper of the hallway look even more offensive. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a strand out of place despite the damp London mist that must have clung to him outside. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his posture radiating a predatory grace that he never quite managed to hide, no matter how much he played the part of the refined gentleman. "Aurora," he said. His voice was a low, smooth baritone that curled around her name with a familiar, dangerous warmth. Rory gripped the edge of the door, her knuckles white. "Lucien." The last time she had seen him, three months ago, she had told him to rot in whatever circle of the Avaros realm he’d crawled out of. They had stood in the rain outside Silas’ bar, words like broken glass flying between them until she had walked away, her heart feeling like it had been scraped raw. She hadn't expected to see him again. Certainly not here. "You look tired," he remarked, his heterochromatic eyes scanning her face. The amber eye flickered like a dying ember in the shadows, while the black one remained a bottomless, unreadable void. "And the smell in this building is... evocative." "It’s a curry house, Lucien. Not a Parisian bistro," Rory snapped, her defensive walls slamming into place. "What are you doing here? How did you even find this place?" "I am an information broker, *ma chère*. Finding people is what I do. And your friend Eva is not nearly as discreet with her digital footprint as she believes herself to be." He gestured toward the interior of the flat with the head of his cane. "Are you going to let me in, or shall we continue to scandalize the neighbors? I believe the gentleman in 3B is currently peering through his spyhole." Rory hesitated, then stepped aside. She hated how easily he commanded the space. As he crossed the threshold, the small flat seemed to shrink even further. He moved past her, his scent—expensive sandalwood and the faint, cold metallic tang that always clung to him—overpowering the turmeric. Ptolemy stood up on the sofa, his back arching, a low growl vibrating in his throat. "Easy, little beast," Lucien murmured, barely glancing at the cat. He turned to Rory, his gaze dropping to her wrist where she was still habitually tracing the crescent scar. He looked away quickly, but not before she saw the flicker of something that looked remarkably like guilt in his amber eye. "I didn't come here to trade barbs," he said, his tone softening. He set his cane against the side of a stack of books titled *Rituals of the Fourth Circle*. "There is a rumor in the underworld. Someone is asking questions about a girl from Cardiff. Someone who isn't interested in your delivery routes for the Golden Empress." Rory felt a cold drop of dread slide down her spine. "Evan?" "He’s looking for you, Aurora. And he’s hired people who don't care about jurisdictional boundaries." Lucien stepped closer, the distance between them narrowing until she could see the fine lines of tension around his mouth. "You left the bar. You left the protection of Silas. You thought you could disappear into the spice clouds of Brick Lane, but you are a beacon to those who know what to look for." "I don't need a protector, Lucien. Especially not a half-demon who treats people like assets on a ledger," Rory said, though her voice lacked its usual bite. Lucien’s expression tightened. He reached out as if to touch her shoulder, then pulled back at the last second, his fingers curling into a fist. "Is that what you think? That you were an asset?" "You left," she reminded him, the hurt finally bleeding through her cool exterior. "That night in the rain, when I told you how I felt, when I told you I didn't care about your father or where you came from... you didn't say a word. You just took your cane and your secrets and walked into the dark. You 'fixed' the problem by removing yourself from it." Lucien’s black eye seemed to swallow the light of the room. He took another step, venturing into her personal space. He was taller than her, enough that she had to tilt her head back to maintain eye contact. "I am a creature of Avaros, Aurora. My father’s realm is built on greed and consumption. When I look at you, I don't see an asset. I see the only thing in this miserable world that I cannot bring myself to possess, because to possess you would be to destroy the very thing that makes you... you." The air in the flat felt charged, thick with the kind of static that preceded a lightning strike. Rory’s breath hitched. She should pull away. She should tell him to leave, to go back to his charcoal suits and his ivory blades. But the way he was looking at her—with a desperate, restrained hunger that had nothing to do with his demonic heritage—pinned her to the spot. "You don't get to decide what destroys me," she whispered. "Don't I?" He reached out again, and this time, he didn't stop. His gloved hand brushed her cheek, his thumb tracing the line of her jaw. The leather was cool, but the heat of his skin beneath it was unmistakable. "I have spent thirty-two years learning how to survive the worst parts of both worlds. But three months without hearing your voice? That was a trial I wasn't prepared for." Rory leaned into his touch, a small, involuntary movement that broke the last of her resolve. "You’re an idiot, Lucien Moreau." "On that, we are in complete agreement," he murmured. He moved then, discarding the practiced stillness of the fixer. He caught her waist with his free hand, pulling her flush against him. Rory’s hands found the lapels of his suit, bunching the expensive fabric in her fists. When he kissed her, it wasn't the polite, distant gesture of a gentleman. It was fierce and reclaiming, tasting of suppressed longing and the dark, heady promise of things left unsaid for far too long. Rory responded with equal fervor, her fingers moving from his suit to the nape of his neck, feeling the softness of his platinum hair. The world outside—Evan, the Golden Empress, the scrolls, the looming threats—faded into a dull roar. There was only the heat of him, the solid weight of his body against hers, and the way his breath hitched when she pulled him closer. Ptolemy let out a loud, indignant meow and jumped off the sofa, vanishing into the bedroom, but neither of them noticed. When Lucien finally pulled back, just an inch, his forehead rested against hers. His amber eye was glowing now, a vibrant, molten gold. "I cannot stay away, Aurora. I tried. Heaven and Hell know I tried." Rory took a shaky breath, her heart racing. "Then don't. But if you walk out that door again without a word, don't bother coming back. Not even if the devil himself is at my heels." Lucien’s lips curved into a faint, dangerous smile—the first real smile she had seen on him in months. "The devil wouldn't dare. He knows I got to you first." He reached down, his fingers finding her left wrist, encircling the small crescent scar with a gentleness that contradicted everything he was. "We have to move you. Evan is close, and this flat is a deathtrap. But tonight..." He looked around the cluttered, spice-scented room, then back at her. "Tonight, I am not leaving." Rory nodded, the cool-headed intelligence that usually guided her life taking a backseat to the raw, undeniable electricity humming between them. She reached up, undoing the top button of his charcoal waistcoat. "Good. Because I have three months of things to say to you, Lucien. And not all of them are nice." "I look forward to every single one," he replied, and kissed her again, drowning out the rest of the world.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:09:09.039Z" 2/25/2026, 1:09:09 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.484
leniency0.968
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.065
91.06% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1677
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"quickly"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"quickly"
2"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.44% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1677
totalAiIsms24
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"rhythmic"
count1
4
word"pounding"
count1
5
word"navigated"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"familiar"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
9
word"scanning"
count1
10
word"flickered"
count1
11
word"unreadable"
count1
12
word"tracing"
count2
13
word"flicker"
count1
14
word"down her spine"
count1
15
word"tension"
count1
16
word"beacon"
count1
17
word"charged"
count1
18
word"restrained"
count1
19
word"resolve"
count1
20
word"looming"
count1
21
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"weight"
2"silence"
3"rhythmic"
4"pounding"
5"navigated"
6"echoed"
7"familiar"
8"warmth"
9"scanning"
10"flickered"
11"unreadable"
12"tracing"
13"flicker"
14"down her spine"
15"tension"
16"beacon"
17"charged"
18"restrained"
19"resolve"
20"looming"
21"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences81
matches(empty)
54.67% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences81
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords8
totalWords1668
ratio0.005
matches
0"clack-clack-clack"
1"ma chère"
2"Rituals of the Fourth Circle"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.68% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount1171
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Eva3
Carter1
Rory16
Moreau1
London1
Avaros1
Fourth1
Lucien7
Evan1
Golden1
Empress1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Eva"
1"Carter"
2"Rory"
3"Moreau"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
6"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.817
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1668
matches(empty)
98.64% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"knew that cadence"
1"enough that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean43.89
std25.64
cv0.584
sampleLengths
0101
166
24
334
420
562
620
783
820
911
1067
1139
1229
1373
1446
1516
1651
1758
1812
1970
2027
2135
2267
2395
2467
2510
2670
2721
289
2973
3065
3121
3236
3335
3429
3554
3652
3720
92.27% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences81
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was tailored"
2"was slicked"
93.62% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs188
matches
0"was blurring"
1"was looking"
2"was glowing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount9
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences98
ratio0.061
matches
0"Rory rubbed the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—a nervous habit she’d never quite managed to shake."
1"Eva’s security was no joke—three heavy deadbolts that Rory had to slide back one by one."
2"He moved past her, his scent—expensive sandalwood and the faint, cold metallic tang that always clung to him—overpowering the turmeric."
3"But the way he was looking at her—with a desperate, restrained hunger that had nothing to do with his demonic heritage—pinned her to the spot."
4"The world outside—Evan, the Golden Empress, the scrolls, the looming threats—faded into a dull roar."
5"Lucien’s lips curved into a faint, dangerous smile—the first real smile she had seen on him in months."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1142
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"steady, cool-headed engine,"
2"cluttered, spice-scented room,"
adverbCount30
adverbRatio0.02626970227670753
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008756567425569177
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean17.02
std10.64
cv0.625
sampleLengths
036
133
232
318
416
532
64
716
818
92
1014
114
1216
135
1416
1515
1610
1720
186
1920
2025
2132
223
2317
2410
251
2627
2730
287
293
3011
3120
328
3317
3412
3546
3627
375
388
3913
4020
4116
4210
4319
4422
4512
4618
4728
4811
491
48.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.336734693877551
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners33
86.58% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences77
matches
0"Then came the knock."
1"Certainly not here."
ratio0.026
22.60% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount38
totalSentences77
matches
0"She was supposed to be"
1"It wasn't the frantic pounding"
2"It was three slow, deliberate"
3"Her heart, usually a steady,"
4"She knew that cadence."
5"She stood, her movements stiff"
6"She turned the final knob"
7"He was, as always, impeccably"
8"His charcoal suit was tailored"
9"His platinum blond hair was"
10"He leaned slightly on his"
11"His voice was a low,"
12"They had stood in the"
13"She hadn't expected to see"
14"he remarked, his heterochromatic eyes"
15"He gestured toward the interior"
16"She hated how easily he"
17"He moved past her, his"
18"He turned to Rory, his"
19"He looked away quickly, but"
ratio0.494
11.95% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences77
matches
0"The smell of cumin and"
1"Aurora Carter, known to the"
2"Ptolemy, a tabby cat with"
3"Rory rubbed the small, crescent-shaped"
4"She was supposed to be"
5"The silence of the flat"
6"It wasn't the frantic pounding"
7"It was three slow, deliberate"
8"Her heart, usually a steady,"
9"She knew that cadence."
10"She stood, her movements stiff"
11"Eva’s security was no joke—three"
12"The metallic *clack-clack-clack* echoed in"
13"She turned the final knob"
14"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
15"He was, as always, impeccably"
16"His charcoal suit was tailored"
17"His platinum blond hair was"
18"He leaned slightly on his"
19"His voice was a low,"
ratio0.896
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
ratio0
5.49% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences52
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"His charcoal suit was tailored to a degree that made the peeling wallpaper of the hallway look even more offensive."
1"His voice was a low, smooth baritone that curled around her name with a familiar, dangerous warmth."
2"Ptolemy stood up on the sofa, his back arching, a low growl vibrating in his throat."
3"He turned to Rory, his gaze dropping to her wrist where she was still habitually tracing the crescent scar."
4"The air in the flat felt charged, thick with the kind of static that preceded a lightning strike."
5"But the way he was looking at her—with a desperate, restrained hunger that had nothing to do with his demonic heritage—pinned her to the spot."
6"Rory leaned into his touch, a small, involuntary movement that broke the last of her resolve."
7"Rory responded with equal fervor, her fingers moving from his suit to the nape of his neck, feeling the softness of his platinum hair."
8"He reached down, his fingers finding her left wrist, encircling the small crescent scar with a gentleness that contradicted everything he was."
9"Rory nodded, the cool-headed intelligence that usually guided her life taking a backseat to the raw, undeniable electricity humming between them."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"he remarked, his heterochromatic eyes scanning her face"
1"Rory snapped, her defensive walls slamming into place"
2"he said, his tone softening"
3"Rory said, though her voice lacked its usual bite"
4"she reminded, the hurt finally bleeding through her cool exterior"
20.97% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Rory snapped (snap)"
1"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
2"she whispered (whisper)"
3"he murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.258
leniency0.516
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.258
70.6316%