| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 12 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 82.53% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1431 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "perfectly" | | 1 | "softly" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "very" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 16.14% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1431 | | totalAiIsms | 24 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "silk" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "beacon" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "pulsed" | | 5 | "stark" | | 6 | "oppressive" | | 7 | "warmth" | | 8 | "searing" | | 9 | "stomach" | | 10 | "perfect" | | 11 | "marble" | | 12 | "shimmered" | | 13 | "reminder" | | 14 | "unreadable" | | 15 | "chill" | | 16 | "synchronized" | | 17 | "mechanical" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "air was thick with" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "The air was thick with" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | | |
| 69.60% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 4 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1424 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "This was just another job, she told herself, even if the stakes were her very soul." |
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| 96.95% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 51 | | wordCount | 1131 | | uniqueNames | 20 | | maxNameDensity | 1.06 | | worstName | "Aurora" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Aurora" | | discoveredNames | | Veil | 1 | | Aurora | 12 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Varga | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | University | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Ravenous | 1 | | Rory | 6 | | Sunday | 1 | | London | 2 | | Fae | 2 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Prince | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Veil" | | 1 | "Aurora" | | 2 | "Pendant" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Varga" | | 5 | "Nyx" | | 6 | "Blade" | | 7 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Cardiff" | | 3 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.969 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 68 | | glossingSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "obsidian that seemed to absorb the environment's radiance rather than reflect it" | | 1 | "looked like open mouths, their petals vei" | | 2 | "felt like a shard of winter held in her" | | 3 | "felt like a caloric intake" | | 4 | "looked like a pomegranate, but its skin w" | | 5 | "smelled like her mother’s kitchen on a Sun" | | 6 | "looked like it had been spun from sugar a" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1424 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 32 | | mean | 44.5 | | std | 23.05 | | cv | 0.518 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 53 | | 1 | 51 | | 2 | 13 | | 3 | 100 | | 4 | 5 | | 5 | 53 | | 6 | 58 | | 7 | 70 | | 8 | 53 | | 9 | 55 | | 10 | 34 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 59 | | 13 | 47 | | 14 | 71 | | 15 | 32 | | 16 | 1 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 35 | | 20 | 48 | | 21 | 61 | | 22 | 34 | | 23 | 71 | | 24 | 47 | | 25 | 75 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 39 | | 28 | 55 | | 29 | 75 | | 30 | 12 | | 31 | 33 |
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| 91.77% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 3 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | | 0 | "were arranged" | | 1 | "were drawn" | | 2 | "been spun" |
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| 51.85% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 180 | | matches | | 0 | "was standing" | | 1 | "was hammering" | | 2 | "was glowing" | | 3 | "was curdling" |
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| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 7 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 10 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.11 | | matches | | 0 | "The pressure of the Veil didn’t snap; it stretched, clinging to Aurora’s skin like wet silk before finally yielding." | | 1 | "Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant thrummed with a steady, rhythmic heat against her collarbone—a warning and a beacon." | | 2 | "Beside them, Isolde Varga stood as she always did—perfectly composed, her silver hair spilling down her back like a frozen waterfall." | | 3 | "To their left, an orchard of trees with bark like polished copper groaned under the weight of fruit that glowed with internal light—vibrant teals, pulsing oranges, and deep, matte purples." | | 4 | "The moonsilver dagger was a stark contrast to the oppressive warmth of the realm; it felt like a shard of winter held in her hand." | | 5 | "The air was thick with the scent of fermenting peaches and exotic spices—cinnamon, star anise, and something sharper, like searing fat on a grill." | | 6 | "The smell was transcendental—it smelled like her mother’s kitchen on a Sunday morning, like the crisp London air after a rainstorm, like everything she had ever lost and everything she had ever wanted." | | 7 | "The sound reached them then—a low, rhythmic thumping, like a massive drum, accompanied by the clatter of a thousand knives against stone." | | 8 | "The \"excess\" wasn't just about food; it was about the consumption of everything." | | 9 | "There was no talking, no laughter—only the mechanical precision of a workforce driven by an insatiable master." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1141 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "humid, moss-thick air" | | 1 | "small crescent-shaped scar" |
| | adverbCount | 39 | | adverbRatio | 0.03418054338299737 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.007887817703768623 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 15.65 | | std | 7.37 | | cv | 0.471 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 19 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 18 | | 4 | 14 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 2 | | 8 | 25 | | 9 | 22 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 10 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 14 | | 14 | 5 | | 15 | 20 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 28 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 25 | | 23 | 6 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 18 | | 30 | 15 | | 31 | 19 | | 32 | 5 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 22 | | 36 | 20 | | 37 | 15 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 20 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 33 | | 43 | 6 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 19 | | 46 | 1 | | 47 | 13 | | 48 | 8 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 58.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3956043956043956 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 44.44% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead of water, the liquid" |
| | ratio | 0.013 | |
| 97.33% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 23 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "It became heavy, saturated with" | | 1 | "She caught her balance, her" | | 2 | "Their violet eyes glowed with" | | 3 | "It cast the landscape in" | | 4 | "She began to walk, her" | | 5 | "She reached into the sheath" | | 6 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 7 | "They reached a grove where" | | 8 | "It wasn't set with food," | | 9 | "It looked like a pomegranate," | | 10 | "She found herself stepping toward" | | 11 | "Her hand reached out, her" | | 12 | "She pulled her hand back," | | 13 | "Her heart was hammering against" | | 14 | "They drifted toward the marble" | | 15 | "she said, pulling the pendant" | | 16 | "They crested a ridge and" | | 17 | "She looked back at Rory," | | 18 | "She reached down and felt" | | 19 | "She was a delivery girl" |
| | ratio | 0.307 | |
| 40.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "The pressure of the Veil" | | 1 | "It became heavy, saturated with" | | 2 | "Aurora stumbled, her boots sinking" | | 3 | "She caught her balance, her" | | 4 | "a voice whispered, sounding like" | | 5 | "Nyx was a jagged tear" | | 6 | "Their violet eyes glowed with" | | 7 | "Aurora glanced down at the" | | 8 | "The dark, loamy earth was" | | 9 | "Isolde left no footprints, her" | | 10 | "Aurora said, squinting" | | 11 | "The sky was a vast," | | 12 | "It cast the landscape in" | | 13 | "Isolde said, her lavender eyes" | | 14 | "She began to walk, her" | | 15 | "Aurora followed, keeping close to" | | 16 | "She reached into the sheath" | | 17 | "The moonsilver dagger was a" | | 18 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "The air was thick with" |
| | ratio | 0.84 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | | 0 | "Before them lay a valley" | | 1 | "To their left, an orchard" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 51 | | technicalSentenceCount | 12 | | matches | | 0 | "It became heavy, saturated with a cloying sweetness that coated the back of her throat." | | 1 | "Aurora stumbled, her boots sinking into soil that felt less like dirt and more like damp cake crumbs." | | 2 | "Nyx was a jagged tear in the light, a humanoid silhouette of deepest obsidian that seemed to absorb the environment's radiance rather than reflect it." | | 3 | "Before them lay a valley that defied every law of nature Aurora had studied in her brief, reluctant stint at Cardiff University." | | 4 | "Sprawling vineyards climbed the jagged obsidian cliffs that ringed the horizon, but the vines were thick as ship’s ropes, heaving with clusters of grapes the si…" | | 5 | "To their left, an orchard of trees with bark like polished copper groaned under the weight of fruit that glowed with internal light—vibrant teals, pulsing orang…" | | 6 | "She began to walk, her hem brushing against wildflowers that looked like open mouths, their petals veined with something that pulsed like a heartbeat." | | 7 | "Rory felt a strange, hollow ache in her stomach, a sudden, Ravenous hunger that made her mouth water." | | 8 | "It looked like a pomegranate, but its skin was translucent, revealing hundreds of seeds that shimmered like rubies." | | 9 | "Rory felt a chill that had nothing to do with her Fae blade." | | 10 | "And above it all, floating on a terrace of shimmering glass, sat a palace that looked like it had been spun from sugar and gold." | | 11 | "They began the descent into the heart of Gluttony, three shadows slipping through a world of golden light, moving toward a kitchen that never slept and a Prince…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 12 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Isolde said, her lavender eyes fixed on something far in the distance" | | 1 | "Nyx replied, their form flickering as they stepped over a stream" | | 2 | "Isolde said, her expression unreadable" | | 3 | "Aurora asked, her voice small" | | 4 | "she said, her voice steady" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 12 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "a voice whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "Nyx hissed (hiss)" | | 2 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 3 | "Isolde whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 26 | | tagDensity | 0.462 | | leniency | 0.923 | | rawRatio | 0.333 | | effectiveRatio | 0.308 | |