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Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95FSW5Z4V9J6G6ADQRR3N3
Run Details
Model:
Gemini 2.5 Flash (Reasoning)
Test:
Bad Writing Habits
Scenario:
Literary fiction: old friends reunite
Duration:
26.3s
Cost:
$0.014195
Provider:
Google AI Studio
Evaluation summary
Score
Evaluator
Details Link
0.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
(details)
49.37%
AI-ism adverb frequency
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism character names
(details)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
(details)
36.71%
AI-ism word frequency
(details)
33.33%
Cliché density
(details)
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
(details)
100.00%
Filter word density
(details)
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
(details)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
(details)
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
(details)
16.67%
Name drop frequency
(details)
20.69%
Narrator intent-glossing
(details)
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
(details)
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
(details)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
(details)
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
(details)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
(details)
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
(details)
99.46%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
(details)
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
(details)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
(details)
45.21%
Sentence opener variety
(details)
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
(details)
79.85%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
(details)
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
(details)
100.00%
Technical jargon density
(details)
41.67%
Useless dialogue additions
(details)
66.67%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
(details)
69.6539%
Overall
Model input
System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>
Model response
Messages
Meta
AI
The green neon sign of
The Raven’s Nest cast a faint, emerald glow across the rain-slicked pavement. Inside, the dim light clung to every surface, softening the edges of antique maps tacked to the walls and blurring the faces in the monochrome photographs.
A low murmur of conversation
and the clink of glasses provided the bar’s constant hum.
Rory, perched on a stool
at the far end of the long oak counter,
traced
the rim of an empty water glass with her thumb.
The day’s final delivery run
had left a dull ache in her shoulders, a
familiar
thrum of exhaustion beneath her skin.
Silas wiped down the rich
wood before her, his movements economical, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the light. “Another quiet one,”
Rory said, her voice a
low murmur against the bar’s backdrop. Silas grunted, a soft sound.
A faint clink of ice
cube in his hand accompanied his answer, as he reached for a glass. “They come and go.” His gaze, hazel and keen, held hers for a brief moment before drifting past her shoulder towards the door.
The bell above the entrance
jingled, a sharp, clear sound that cut through the bar’s usual din.
Rory barely registered it, turning
her attention to the
intricate
pattern of a watermark on her glass.
The smell of ozone and
damp wool drifted inland from the newly opened door as the rain found a temporary lull.
A woman stepped inside, shaking
out a heavy dark coat. Her hair, a vibrant blonde, glistened under the subdued lighting.
Rory heard the crisp click
of expensive heels across the polished floorboards, a sound alien to the worn comfort of the Nest. She turned her head
slowly
, her bright blue eyes meeting a pair of startled green ones across the room.
The woman paused, her coat
still halfway off, mouth
slightly
agape.
Recognition hit Rory like a
cold draft. Chloe.
Chloe’s hand dropped from her
coat, a small designer handbag clattering against her side. “Rory?” Rory pushed off the stool, her chair scraping against the floorboards, a jarring noise.
She felt a familiar tightening
in her chest, a knot of unease
unraveling
from years buried deep. Chloe moved forward, her steps hesitant but
determined
, weaving between tables. “Oh my god.
I
thought it was
you
.
I
really
did.”
She reached out, her hand
hovering, then clasping Rory’s arm, a grip that felt both tentative and possessive.
Her touch felt foreign against
Rory’s skin. Rory pulled her arm back, a small, subtle motion. “Chloe. What are
you
– here?” The last word came out flat, stripped of inflection.
She glanced at Silas, who
continued to polish a glass, but his gaze remained fixed on the unfolding tableau. Chloe laughed, a brittle sound. “What am *
I
* doing here? What are *
you
* doing here? Oh, Rory, it’s been… what? Years. Five? Six?” “Something like that,” Rory said, her voice even.
Her straight, shoulder-length black hair
swung
slightly
as she gave a small shake of her head. “You look… different.” Chloe’s gaze swept over Rory’s
slightly
worn black uniform, the practical trainers, then returned to her face.
Her own appearance radiated an
effortless
polish: a tailored jumpsuit, delicate gold jewellery, and a
perfectly
styled bob.
She looked meticulously curated, a
stark
contrast to Rory’s unembellished presence. Rory offered a tight smile. “So do
you
.” “Well,
you
know.” Chloe gestured vaguely. “London. New job. Moved down here about six months ago. Came here on a recommendation. Old jazz night.
I
had no idea.”
She peered around the dimly
lit space. “This is… quaint. Very
you
, actually, the old
you
. Secretive.”
Her voice dropped, a playful
conspiratorial tone. “Still keeping secrets?” Rory’s jaw hardened almost imperceptibly. “Not
really
.
I
work here. Deliveries mostly. My flat’s upstairs.” Chloe’s
eyes widened
, a
flicker
of something
unreadable
passing through them. “Deliveries? Rory,
you
were Pre-Law. Cardiff University. What happened to that?” The question
hung in the air
, heavy with
unspoken
judgment. “Things change,” Rory said.
She stepped back, putting a
little more distance between them.
She knew the crescent-shaped scar
on her left wrist, usually hidden by her sleeve,
felt like it was throbbing
. “Clearly.” Chloe’s smile faltered. “
I
heard… well, things. About Evan.
I
tried to call. You just vanished. Ghosted everyone.”
Her voice held a thin
edge of accusation now. “It was messy,” Rory conceded. She kept her gaze steady, refusing to wilt under Chloe’s probing. “
I
needed a clean break.” “A clean break.” Chloe
echoed
the phrase, then laughed without humour. “From everything? Us? Our lives? We were all so worried,
you
know. Eva was beside herself. And then
you
pop up here, working in a bar. It’s quite the pivot, Rory.” “A choice,” Rory corrected
softly
.
Her eyes flicked to Silas
again, standing motionless behind the bar, pretending not to listen, yet missing nothing.
His mere presence was a
shield, a silent affirmation of her new life. “A bold choice, then,” Chloe said, adjusting the strap of her handbag. “
I
work for Harrington & Finch now. Corporate Law. Funny, right? Remember all those late nights, cramming for torts? You always knew the answers.” A melancholic note entered her voice. “We were going to conquer the world, weren’t we? You, me, Eva.” “Dreams shift,” Rory said.
She folded her arms, her
posture closing her off. The conversation
felt like picking at an old wound, not
to heal it, but to remind herself of the pain. “They do, don’t they?” Chloe’s gaze lingered on Rory’s face, searching for something she couldn’t find. “You’ve changed, Rory. Really changed. You used to be… brighter. More spark.”
Her eyes narrowed slightly
. “What happened to the girl who believed in all the rules?” A sharp, brittle laugh escaped Rory’s lips, a sound she didn’t recognize as her own. She lifted a hand, gesturing vaguely around the bar. “Rules can be rewritten. Sometimes, they just break.” She caught a glimpse of her own reflection in the darkened glass of a framed photograph: her bright blue eyes held a new kind of depth, her features sharper. The old Rory, the girl from Cardiff,
felt like a distant echo
. “
I
suppose so.” Chloe finally gave in, her shoulders slumping. A genuine sigh escaped her. “
I
did miss
you
, though. We all did.” She looked around the bar again, as if the answers lay in the dusty bottles or the peeling wallpaper. “What kind of life is this, Rory? Delivering takeaways? You always had so much… ambition.” Rory met Chloe’s gaze unflinchingly. “
I
have a life. It's mine. And
I
’m good at what
I
do.” Her fingers brushed against the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a habitual gesture of comfort. “It’s enough.” Chloe opened her mouth, then closed it. The air between them thickened, heavy with
unspoken
words, with years of distance and diverging paths. The music from the speakers, a slow, melancholic jazz tune,
seemed to
underscore the vast chasm that had opened between them. Chloe’s
perfectly
made-up face creased with a subtle regret, a reflection that Rory herself felt, though she refused to show it.
The green neon sign of
The Raven’s Nest cast a faint, emerald glow across the rain-slicked pavement. Inside, the dim light clung to every surface, softening the edges of antique maps tacked to the walls and blurring the faces in the monochrome photographs.
A low murmur of conversation
and the clink of glasses provided the bar’s constant hum.
Rory, perched on a stool
at the far end of the long oak counter,
traced
the rim of an empty water glass with her thumb.
The day’s final delivery run
had left a dull ache in her shoulders, a
familiar
thrum of exhaustion beneath her skin.
Silas wiped down the rich
wood before her, his movements economical, the silver signet ring on his right hand catching the light. “Another quiet one,”
Rory said, her voice a
low murmur against the bar’s backdrop. Silas grunted, a soft sound.
A faint clink of ice
cube in his hand accompanied his answer, as he reached for a glass. “They come and go.” His gaze, hazel and keen, held hers for a brief moment before drifting past her shoulder towards the door.
The bell above the entrance
jingled, a sharp, clear sound that cut through the bar’s usual din.
Rory barely registered it, turning
her attention to the
intricate
pattern of a watermark on her glass.
The smell of ozone and
damp wool drifted inland from the newly opened door as the rain found a temporary lull.
A woman stepped inside, shaking
out a heavy dark coat. Her hair, a vibrant blonde, glistened under the subdued lighting.
Rory heard the crisp click
of expensive heels across the polished floorboards, a sound alien to the worn comfort of the Nest. She turned her head
slowly
, her bright blue eyes meeting a pair of startled green ones across the room.
The woman paused, her coat
still halfway off, mouth
slightly
agape.
Recognition hit Rory like a
cold draft. Chloe.
Chloe’s hand dropped from her
coat, a small designer handbag clattering against her side. “Rory?” Rory pushed off the stool, her chair scraping against the floorboards, a jarring noise.
She felt a familiar tightening
in her chest, a knot of unease
unraveling
from years buried deep. Chloe moved forward, her steps hesitant but
determined
, weaving between tables. “Oh my god.
I
thought it was
you
.
I
really
did.”
She reached out, her hand
hovering, then clasping Rory’s arm, a grip that felt both tentative and possessive.
Her touch felt foreign against
Rory’s skin. Rory pulled her arm back, a small, subtle motion. “Chloe. What are
you
– here?” The last word came out flat, stripped of inflection.
She glanced at Silas, who
continued to polish a glass, but his gaze remained fixed on the unfolding tableau. Chloe laughed, a brittle sound. “What am *
I
* doing here? What are *
you
* doing here? Oh, Rory, it’s been… what? Years. Five? Six?” “Something like that,” Rory said, her voice even.
Her straight, shoulder-length black hair
swung
slightly
as she gave a small shake of her head. “You look… different.” Chloe’s gaze swept over Rory’s
slightly
worn black uniform, the practical trainers, then returned to her face.
Her own appearance radiated an
effortless
polish: a tailored jumpsuit, delicate gold jewellery, and a
perfectly
styled bob.
She looked meticulously curated, a
stark
contrast to Rory’s unembellished presence. Rory offered a tight smile. “So do
you
.” “Well,
you
know.” Chloe gestured vaguely. “London. New job. Moved down here about six months ago. Came here on a recommendation. Old jazz night.
I
had no idea.”
She peered around the dimly
lit space. “This is… quaint. Very
you
, actually, the old
you
. Secretive.”
Her voice dropped, a playful
conspiratorial tone. “Still keeping secrets?” Rory’s jaw hardened almost imperceptibly. “Not
really
.
I
work here. Deliveries mostly. My flat’s upstairs.” Chloe’s
eyes widened
, a
flicker
of something
unreadable
passing through them. “Deliveries? Rory,
you
were Pre-Law. Cardiff University. What happened to that?” The question
hung in the air
, heavy with
unspoken
judgment. “Things change,” Rory said.
She stepped back, putting a
little more distance between them.
She knew the crescent-shaped scar
on her left wrist, usually hidden by her sleeve,
felt like it was throbbing
. “Clearly.” Chloe
echoed
the word, then laughed without humour. “
I
heard… well, things. About Evan.
I
tried to call. You just vanished. Ghosted everyone.”
Her voice held a thin
edge of accusation now. “It was messy,” Rory conceded. She kept her gaze steady, refusing to wilt under Chloe’s probing. “
I
needed a clean break.” “A clean break.” Chloe repeated the phrase, then huffed. “From everything? Us? Our lives? We were all so worried,
you
know. Eva was beside herself. And then
you
pop up here, working in a bar. It’s quite the pivot, Rory.” “A choice,” Rory corrected
softly
.
Her eyes flicked to Silas
again, standing motionless behind the bar, pretending not to listen, yet missing nothing.
His mere presence was a
shield, a silent affirmation of her new life. “A bold choice, then,” Chloe said, adjusting the strap of her handbag. “
I
work for Harrington & Finch now. Corporate Law. Funny, right? Remember all those late nights, cramming for torts? You always knew the answers.” A melancholic note entered her voice. “We were going to conquer the world, weren’t we? You, me, Eva.” “Dreams shift,” Rory said.
She folded her arms, her
posture closing her off. The conversation
felt like picking at an old wound, not
to heal it, but to remind herself of the pain. “They do, don’t they?” Chloe’s gaze lingered on Rory’s face, searching for something she couldn’t find. “You’ve changed, Rory. Really changed. You used to be… brighter. More spark.”
Her eyes narrowed slightly
. “What happened to the girl who believed in all the rules?” A sharp, brittle laugh escaped Rory’s lips, a sound she didn’t recognize as her own. She lifted a hand, gesturing vaguely around the bar. “Rules can be rewritten. Sometimes, they just break.” She caught a glimpse of her own reflection in the darkened glass of a framed photograph: her bright blue eyes held a new kind of depth, her features sharper. The old Rory, the girl from Cardiff,
felt like a distant echo
. “
I
suppose so.” Chloe finally gave in, her shoulders slumping. A genuine sigh escaped her. “
I
did miss
you
, though. We all did.” She looked around the bar again, as if the answers lay in the dusty bottles or the peeling wallpaper. “What kind of life is this, Rory? Delivering takeaways? You always had so much… ambition.” Rory met Chloe’s gaze unflinchingly. “
I
have a life. It’s mine. And
I
’m good at what
I
do.” Her fingers brushed against the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a habitual gesture of comfort. “It’s enough.” Chloe opened her mouth, then closed it. The air between them thickened, heavy with
unspoken
words, with years of distance and diverging paths. The music from the speakers, a slow, melancholic jazz tune,
seemed to
underscore the vast chasm that had opened between them. Chloe’s
perfectly
made-up face creased with a subtle regret, a reflection that Rory herself felt, though she refused to show it.
created_at
"2026-02-25T01:09:20.395Z"
2/25/2026, 1:09:20 AM
model
"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
app_id
182717
external_user
(null)
streamed
true
cancelled
false
latency
1258
moderation_latency
(null)
generation_time
26287
tokens_prompt
1094
tokens_completion
4898
native_tokens_prompt
1032
native_tokens_completion
5661
native_tokens_completion_images
0
native_tokens_reasoning
2397
native_tokens_cached
988
num_media_prompt
(null)
num_input_audio_prompt
(null)
num_media_completion
0
num_search_results
(null)
origin
"https://ncbench.com/"
is_byok
false
finish_reason
"stop"
native_finish_reason
"STOP"
usage
0.01419534
router
(null)
provider_responses
0
endpoint_id
"16c01e26-9b91-4d22-b487-ed35634b017d"
is_byok
false
latency
1257
model_permaslug
"google/gemini-2.5-flash"
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
status
200
api_type
"completions"
id
"gen-1771981760-uCEoPl8WLXQwAevluh5H"
upstream_id
(null)
total_cost
0.01419534
cache_discount
0.00026676
upstream_inference_cost
0
provider_name
"Google AI Studio"
Evaluation details
Result
Evaluator
Details
Meta Data
0.00%
Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags
48
adverbTagCount
10
adverbTags
0
"Chloe gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
1
"She peered around [around]"
2
"Rory corrected softly [softly]"
3
"Her eyes narrowed slightly [slightly]"
4
"She looked around [around]"
5
"Chloe gestured vaguely [vaguely]"
6
"She peered around [around]"
7
"Rory corrected softly [softly]"
8
"Her eyes narrowed slightly [slightly]"
9
"She looked around [around]"
dialogueSentences
72
tagDensity
0.667
leniency
1
rawRatio
0.208
effectiveRatio
0.208
49.37%
AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount
2370
totalAiIsmAdverbs
24
found
0
adverb
"slowly"
count
2
1
adverb
"slightly"
count
8
2
adverb
"really"
count
6
3
adverb
"perfectly"
count
4
4
adverb
"very"
count
2
5
adverb
"softly"
count
2
highlights
0
"slowly"
1
"slightly"
2
"really"
3
"perfectly"
4
"very"
5
"softly"
100.00%
AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0
"Blackwood"
found
(empty)
100.00%
AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
(empty)
found
(empty)
36.71%
AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount
2370
totalAiIsms
30
found
0
word
"traced"
count
2
1
word
"familiar"
count
4
2
word
"intricate"
count
2
3
word
"unraveling"
count
2
4
word
"determined"
count
2
5
word
"effortless"
count
2
6
word
"stark"
count
2
7
word
"flicker"
count
2
8
word
"unreadable"
count
2
9
word
"unspoken"
count
4
10
word
"echoed"
count
2
11
word
"flicked"
count
2
12
word
"echo"
count
2
highlights
0
"traced"
1
"familiar"
2
"intricate"
3
"unraveling"
4
"determined"
5
"effortless"
6
"stark"
7
"flicker"
8
"unreadable"
9
"unspoken"
10
"echoed"
11
"flicked"
12
"echo"
33.33%
Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches
6
maxInWindow
3
found
0
label
"eyes widened/narrowed"
count
4
1
label
"hung in the air"
count
2
highlights
0
"eyes widened"
1
"eyes narrowed"
2
"hung in the air"
100.00%
Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells
0
narrationSentences
145
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount
0
hedgeCount
2
narrationSentences
145
filterMatches
(empty)
hedgeMatches
0
"seemed to"
100.00%
Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences
167
gibberishSentences
0
adjustedGibberishSentences
0
longSentenceCount
0
runOnParagraphCount
0
giantParagraphCount
0
wordSaladCount
0
repetitionLoopCount
0
controlTokenCount
0
maxSentenceWordsSeen
39
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans
4
markdownWords
4
totalWords
2372
ratio
0.002
matches
0
"I"
1
"you"
2
"I"
3
"you"
100.00%
Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions
22
unquotedAttributions
0
matches
(empty)
16.67%
Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions
94
wordCount
1790
uniqueNames
6
maxNameDensity
2.57
worstName
"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity
4.5
worstWindowName
"Rory"
discoveredNames
Raven
2
Nest
4
Silas
8
Rory
46
Chloe
32
Cardiff
2
persons
0
"Raven"
1
"Nest"
2
"Silas"
3
"Rory"
4
"Chloe"
places
0
"Cardiff"
globalScore
0.215
windowScore
0.167
20.69%
Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences
116
glossingSentenceCount
6
matches
0
"felt like it was throbbing"
1
"felt like picking at an old wound, not"
2
"felt like a distant echo"
3
"felt like it was throbbing"
4
"felt like picking at an old wound, not"
5
"felt like a distant echo"
100.00%
"Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches
2
per1kWords
0.843
wordCount
2372
matches
0
"not to heal it, but to remind herself of the pain"
1
"not to heal it, but to remind herself of the pain"
100.00%
Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount
0
totalSentences
167
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs
55
mean
43.13
std
29.82
cv
0.691
sampleLengths
0
126
1
14
2
46
3
97
4
38
5
15
6
31
7
47
8
43
9
23
10
24
11
49
12
8
13
55
14
15
15
32
16
33
17
28
18
21
19
42
20
36
21
54
22
33
23
43
24
73
25
57
26
37
27
190
28
14
29
46
30
97
31
38
32
15
33
31
34
47
35
43
36
23
37
24
38
49
39
8
40
55
41
15
42
32
43
33
44
33
45
21
46
40
47
36
48
54
49
33
100.00%
Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount
0
totalSentences
145
matches
(empty)
100.00%
Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount
2
totalVerbs
271
matches
0
"was throbbing"
1
"was throbbing"
100.00%
Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount
0
semicolonCount
0
flaggedSentences
0
totalSentences
167
ratio
0
matches
(empty)
99.46%
Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount
1798
adjectiveStacks
0
stackExamples
(empty)
adverbCount
73
adverbRatio
0.040600667408231365
lyAdverbCount
36
lyAdverbRatio
0.020022246941045607
100.00%
Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences
167
echoCount
0
echoWords
(empty)
100.00%
Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences
167
mean
14.2
std
8.1
cv
0.57
sampleLengths
0
17
1
26
2
15
3
25
4
21
5
22
6
14
7
5
8
18
9
23
10
17
11
17
12
21
13
10
14
10
15
22
16
19
17
11
18
7
19
1
20
14
21
1
22
14
23
17
24
11
25
29
26
7
27
9
28
15
29
19
30
5
31
18
32
8
33
16
34
20
35
18
36
11
37
5
38
3
39
6
40
29
41
17
42
3
43
5
44
10
45
11
46
21
47
4
48
10
49
19
45.21%
Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats
8
diversityRatio
0.18562874251497005
totalSentences
167
uniqueOpeners
31
0.00%
Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount
0
totalSentences
137
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
79.85%
Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount
48
totalSentences
137
matches
0
"His gaze, hazel and keen,"
1
"Her hair, a vibrant blonde,"
2
"She turned her head slowly,"
3
"She felt a familiar tightening"
4
"She reached out, her hand"
5
"Her touch felt foreign against"
6
"She glanced at Silas, who"
7
"Her straight, shoulder-length black hair"
8
"Her own appearance radiated an"
9
"She looked meticulously curated, a"
10
"She peered around the dimly"
11
"Her voice dropped, a playful"
12
"She stepped back, putting a"
13
"She knew the crescent-shaped scar"
14
"Her voice held a thin"
15
"She kept her gaze steady,"
16
"Her eyes flicked to Silas"
17
"His mere presence was a"
18
"She folded her arms, her"
19
"Her eyes narrowed slightly"
ratio
0.35
0.00%
Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount
135
totalSentences
137
matches
0
"The green neon sign of"
1
"A low murmur of conversation"
2
"Rory, perched on a stool"
3
"The day’s final delivery run"
4
"Silas wiped down the rich"
5
"Rory said, her voice a"
6
"Silas grunted, a soft sound."
7
"A faint clink of ice"
8
"His gaze, hazel and keen,"
9
"The bell above the entrance"
10
"Rory barely registered it, turning"
11
"The smell of ozone and"
12
"A woman stepped inside, shaking"
13
"Her hair, a vibrant blonde,"
14
"Rory heard the crisp click"
15
"She turned her head slowly,"
16
"The woman paused, her coat"
17
"Recognition hit Rory like a"
18
"Chloe’s hand dropped from her"
19
"Rory pushed off the stool,"
ratio
0.985
0.00%
Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount
0
totalSentences
137
matches
(empty)
ratio
0
100.00%
Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
69
technicalSentenceCount
2
matches
0
"The music from the speakers, a slow, melancholic jazz tune, seemed to underscore the vast chasm that had opened between them."
1
"The music from the speakers, a slow, melancholic jazz tune, seemed to underscore the vast chasm that had opened between them."
41.67%
Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags
48
uselessAdditionCount
8
matches
0
"Rory said, her voice a low murmur against the bar’s backdrop"
1
"Chloe’s gaze swept, the practical trainers, then returned to her face"
2
"She caught, her features sharper"
3
"She looked around, as if the answers lay in the dusty bottles or the peeling wallpaper"
4
"Rory said, her voice a low murmur against the bar’s backdrop"
5
"Chloe’s gaze swept, the practical trainers, then returned to her face"
6
"She caught, her features sharper"
7
"She looked around, as if the answers lay in the dusty bottles or the peeling wallpaper"
66.67%
Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags
16
fancyCount
6
fancyTags
0
"Chloe’s smile faltered (falter)"
1
"Rory conceded (concede)"
2
"Rory corrected softly (correct)"
3
"Rory conceded (concede)"
4
"Chloe repeated (repeat)"
5
"Rory corrected softly (correct)"
dialogueSentences
72
tagDensity
0.222
leniency
0.444
rawRatio
0.375
effectiveRatio
0.167
69.6539%