Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95G49TB6SX3HQ8S2G499WN

Run Details

Duration:
16.8s
Cost:
$0.001509
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The rain came down in sheets, thick and relentless, turning London’s cobbled streets into slick rivers. Each drop felt like a tiny, cold fist against Harlow Quinn’s face as she ran, her breath misting in the frigid air. The steady thrum of her heart was a counterpoint to the downpour, a drumbeat of pursuit. Eighteen years on the force hadn't dulled the primal hunt, nor had it prepared her for this. Her quarry, a blur of dark fabric and impossible speed, darted through a narrow alleyway. Harlow’s worn leather watch, strapped tight against her left wrist, felt like an anchor as her own pace faltered for a mere second. The suspect wasn't just quick; they moved with a fluidity that defied the slick cobblestones and unseen puddles. Like a phantom glimpsed in the strobe of streetlights. She’d lost sight of their face hours ago, catching only glimpses of a hooded figure, efficient, deliberate, and utterly elusive. Now, the chase had narrowed, threading through the tangled arteries of Soho’s backstreets. Harlow ignored the ache in her calves, the chill seeping into her bones. Her military precision kicked in, a hardwired response to broken pursuit protocols. Assess. Adapt. Overcome. The alley mouth yawned, darker than the night sky. She plunged into it, the brick walls closing in, muffling the city’s roar to a hollow echo. The smell of damp refuse and forgotten things clung to the air, mingling with the sharp metallic tang of the rain. A dead end. Or so it appeared. The brick wall loomed, solid and uncompromising, a canvas for cheap spray paint – tags and crude drawings that bled under the deluge. But the suspect… the suspect was no longer there. Harlow skidded to a halt, her boots splashing in a puddle. Her eyes, sharp and assessing, swept the grimy wall. There. A section of graffiti, a snarling wolf depicted in lurid purples and greens, looked newer than the rest. The paint seemed to curve unnaturally at the edges, following a subtle seam in the brickwork. It wasn’t a wall at all. She reached out, her gloved fingers tracing the unpainted brick beneath a smear of blue. It shifted. Not a door, exactly, but a panel, cunningly disguised. A faint hiss escaped as it nudged inward, a breath of air cooler and laden with a different kind of dampness than the street found its way out. From the narrow gap, a sound drifted up: a low murmur, a distant clatter, like a thousand tiny bells and the rustle of unseen things. And a scent, distinct and unsettling. Earthy, yes, but laced with ozone, something acrid and sweet, like burnt sugar and wet pennies. Harlow squinted into the opening. It was a chute, a steep, rough-hewn passage descending into absolute blackness. Her instinct, honed by years of chasing flesh-and-blood criminals, screamed *trap*. An ambush. The kind of place where evidence went to disappear, where victims were never found. But something else, a colder, more insistent voice, whispered of the unexplained. It was the same voice that had gnawed at her since DS Morris’s body was found three years ago, the official cause of death failing to account for the whispers of shadow, the impossible cold, and the chilling silence of the scene. She took a hesitant step back, listening. The sounds from below were too varied, too strange, to be sewer rats or a run-down basement. This was no ordinary hideout. The suspect had led her here, deliberately. Not to escape, but to plunge her into something else entirely. And Harlow Quinn had spent too long chasing shadows to turn away when a shadow offered her a doorway to deeper darkness. Her gaze flicked to her watch. 23:17. The rain showed no sign of relenting. She drew her service weapon, the familiar weight a small comfort. The police would dispatch a unit, but they’d find nothing here but a derelict alley. By the time they arrived, the trail would be ice-cold, colder than the rain. And the thought of Morris, his bewildered eyes the last thing she’d seen, her own confusion a suffocating shroud, pushed her forward. She couldn't let another anomaly slip through her fingers. Not when the answers might lie in the dark. She gripped the edge of the opening, testing its solidity. It felt ancient, worn by more than just water. With a deep, bracing breath that did little to clear the metallic tang from her mouth, Harlow lowered herself through the gap. Her boots found purchase on a slick, uneven surface. The hidden panel swung shut behind her with a soft click, plunging her into a suffocating darkness that swallowed the faint light from the street above. Down she went, sliding more than climbing, her hands scraping against rough stone. The passage widened, the descent becoming less a chute and more a tunnel, sloping steeply downwards. The strange symphony from below grew louder, clearer. A rhythmic thrumming, like a heartbeat, pulsed through the earth. She heard whispers, not in English, not in any language she recognized, but a rapid, sibilant flow that scraped at her ears. The air thickened, becoming heavy, charged, reminiscent of the air before a lightning strike, but prolonged, oppressive. Her flashlight beam cut through the blackness, a defiant spear. It illuminated walls that were not brick, but packed earth and rough-hewn stone, slick with a persistent, unnatural condensation. Roots, thick as a man’s arm, snaked along the ceiling and walls, pulsing with a faint, internal light, like bioluminescent veins. It was like descending into the gullet of some ancient, subterranean beast. The tunnel opened abruptly into a vast, echoing space. Harlow’s flashlight beam, even at its widest setting, struggled to encompass its extent. She stood on a raised platform overlooking an expanse that was clearly not a natural cave. It was a place of commerce, a clandestine gathering, a market. But like no market she had ever seen, or could have imagined. Abandoned Tube station. The description from the intel file, dismissed as likely urban myth, flashed through her mind. Beneath Camden. Moving location every full moon. *Bone token*. She hadn’t seen any tokens. The suspect had clearly known the way, had bypassed whatever barrier existed. The space below was a chaotic tapestry of stalls and shadow. Lanterns, some casting a sickly green glow, others burning with spectral blue flames, illuminated wares laid out on trestle tables and draped cloths. Figures moved through the dimness, cloaked, hooded, their faces obscured. They were unnervingly silent in their movements, a disturbing contrast to the cacophony of the place. Strange artifacts, glinting metals, unnervingly smooth stones, vials filled with viscous, luminous liquids – all were on display, bathed in the eerie light. The air buzzed with a palpable energy, an undercurrent of power that made the fine hairs on Harlow’s arms stand on end. She saw the suspect again, a fleeting glimpse, moving through the crowd towards a dense cluster of stalls further into the market. They were a ghost even here, melting into the throng as if they belonged. This was beyond anything she’d ever dealt with. This wasn't a drug deal, not an arms smuggling ring. This was… other. The unexplainable circumstances of Morris’s death, the cold dread that had clung to her ever since, the questions that no amount of police work could answer – they converged here, in this hidden abyss. She thought of the look on Morris’s face, not fear, but a profound, shattering confusion. He’d seen something that broke him, something he couldn’t process. Was this where such things were found? Sold? Discussed? Harlow lowered her weapon slightly, her trained mind racing with a dozen conflicting imperatives. Follow the suspect and risk being swallowed whole by this unknown, potentially lethal environment? Or retreat, report it, and let some other, perhaps better-equipped, team handle the inevitable fallout? The latter felt like a dereliction far worse than any physical danger. This was the other side of the coin, the darkness she’d glimpsed and recoiled from, the darkness that had stolen her partner. She had to see. She had to *know*. The scent of ozone intensified. A stall nearby displayed what looked like dried herbs, but they pulsed with a faint luminescence. Another vendor held up a glass orb containing a swirling, miniature nebula. This was no den of petty criminals. This was the heart of something… else. She’d lost the suspect’s trail once already. Down here, in this labyrinthine bazaar teeming with beings that moved like shadows, they could vanish in an instant. To follow meant abandoning her precinct, her backup, her known world. It meant stepping irrevocably into the realm of the unexplained, the realm that had claimed Morris. But the hope, faint and fragile, of understanding, of finding *why*, propelled her. Harlow Quinn, Metropolitan Police Detective, took a deep, steadying breath. The rain was a world away. The city above, her familiar battleground, felt like a distant dream. She checked her flashlight again, then the magazine of her weapon. The unknown waited. She would follow.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
90.03% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"deliberately"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"deliberately"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
3.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1504
totalAiIsms29
found
0
word"efficient"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"echo"
count1
3
word"loomed"
count1
4
word"tracing"
count1
5
word"chilling"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count2
9
word"weight"
count1
10
word"the last thing"
count1
11
word"symphony"
count1
12
word"rhythmic"
count1
13
word"pulsed"
count2
14
word"charged"
count1
15
word"oppressive"
count1
16
word"echoing"
count1
17
word"clandestine"
count1
18
word"chaotic"
count1
19
word"tapestry"
count1
20
word"spectral"
count1
21
word"cacophony"
count1
22
word"glinting"
count1
23
word"palpable"
count1
24
word"fleeting"
count1
25
word"profound"
count1
26
word"racing"
count1
highlights
0"efficient"
1"chill"
2"echo"
3"loomed"
4"tracing"
5"chilling"
6"silence"
7"flicked"
8"familiar"
9"weight"
10"the last thing"
11"symphony"
12"rhythmic"
13"pulsed"
14"charged"
15"oppressive"
16"echoing"
17"clandestine"
18"chaotic"
19"tapestry"
20"spectral"
21"cacophony"
22"glinting"
23"palpable"
24"fleeting"
25"profound"
26"racing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences127
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences127
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences127
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans4
markdownWords5
totalWords1507
ratio0.003
matches
0"trap"
1"Bone token"
2"know"
3"why"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount1507
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.73
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
London1
Harlow11
Quinn3
Soho1
Morris5
English1
Tube1
Camden1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Detective1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Morris"
3"Police"
4"Detective"
places
0"London"
1"Soho"
2"English"
globalScore1
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences100
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a tiny, cold fist against Har"
1"felt like an anchor as her own pace fal"
2"felt like a dereliction far worse than"
3"looked like dried herbs, but they pulsed"
4"felt like a distant dream"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.981
wordCount1507
matches
0"Not a door, exactly, but a panel, cunningly disguised"
1"Not to escape, but to plunge her into something else entirely"
2"not in English, not in any language she recognized, but a rapid, sibilant flow"
3"not in any language she recognized, but a rapid, sibilant flow"
4"not brick, but packed earth"
5"not fear, but a profound, shattering confusion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences127
matches(empty)
36.50% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs20
mean75.35
std20.93
cv0.278
sampleLengths
071
198
275
3100
4101
598
669
794
876
986
1062
1161
1244
13105
1436
1589
1685
1747
1866
1944
96.97% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences127
matches
0"was found"
1"were found"
2"being swallowed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs218
matches
0"was like descending"
52.87% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences127
ratio0.031
matches
0"The suspect wasn't just quick; they moved with a fluidity that defied the slick cobblestones and unseen puddles."
1"The brick wall loomed, solid and uncompromising, a canvas for cheap spray paint – tags and crude drawings that bled under the deluge."
2"Strange artifacts, glinting metals, unnervingly smooth stones, vials filled with viscous, luminous liquids – all were on display, bathed in the eerie light."
3"The unexplainable circumstances of Morris’s death, the cold dread that had clung to her ever since, the questions that no amount of police work could answer – they converged here, in this hidden abyss."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1511
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"becoming heavy, charged, reminiscent"
adverbCount49
adverbRatio0.03242885506287227
lyAdverbCount19
lyAdverbRatio0.01257445400397088
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences127
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences127
mean11.87
std7.4
cv0.624
sampleLengths
016
122
216
317
415
523
618
79
820
913
1013
1112
121
131
141
159
1617
1721
183
194
2023
213
226
2311
249
251
2618
2716
286
2915
302
319
3228
3325
346
3516
365
3712
3811
392
4014
4112
4242
437
4417
455
467
4711
4822
496
51.32% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3412698412698413
totalSentences126
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
ratio0
96.11% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences113
matches
0"Her quarry, a blur of"
1"She’d lost sight of their"
2"Her military precision kicked in,"
3"She plunged into it, the"
4"Her eyes, sharp and assessing,"
5"It wasn’t a wall at"
6"She reached out, her gloved"
7"It was a chute, a"
8"Her instinct, honed by years"
9"It was the same voice"
10"She took a hesitant step"
11"Her gaze flicked to her"
12"She drew her service weapon,"
13"She couldn't let another anomaly"
14"She gripped the edge of"
15"It felt ancient, worn by"
16"Her boots found purchase on"
17"She heard whispers, not in"
18"Her flashlight beam cut through"
19"It illuminated walls that were"
ratio0.31
79.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences113
matches
0"The rain came down in"
1"Each drop felt like a"
2"The steady thrum of her"
3"Her quarry, a blur of"
4"Harlow’s worn leather watch, strapped"
5"The suspect wasn't just quick;"
6"She’d lost sight of their"
7"Harlow ignored the ache in"
8"Her military precision kicked in,"
9"The alley mouth yawned, darker"
10"She plunged into it, the"
11"The smell of damp refuse"
12"A dead end."
13"The brick wall loomed, solid"
14"the suspect was no longer"
15"Harlow skidded to a halt,"
16"Her eyes, sharp and assessing,"
17"A section of graffiti, a"
18"The paint seemed to curve"
19"It wasn’t a wall at"
ratio0.761
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences113
matches
0"Now, the chase had narrowed,"
1"By the time they arrived,"
2"To follow meant abandoning her"
ratio0.027
59.37% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences77
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The suspect wasn't just quick; they moved with a fluidity that defied the slick cobblestones and unseen puddles."
1"The brick wall loomed, solid and uncompromising, a canvas for cheap spray paint – tags and crude drawings that bled under the deluge."
2"It was the same voice that had gnawed at her since DS Morris’s body was found three years ago, the official cause of death failing to account for the whispers o…"
3"The hidden panel swung shut behind her with a soft click, plunging her into a suffocating darkness that swallowed the faint light from the street above."
4"Down she went, sliding more than climbing, her hands scraping against rough stone."
5"It illuminated walls that were not brick, but packed earth and rough-hewn stone, slick with a persistent, unnatural condensation."
6"The air buzzed with a palpable energy, an undercurrent of power that made the fine hairs on Harlow’s arms stand on end."
7"The unexplainable circumstances of Morris’s death, the cold dread that had clung to her ever since, the questions that no amount of police work could answer – t…"
8"He’d seen something that broke him, something he couldn’t process."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.5077%