Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95HHF23R7Z4B31MX81WB3T

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Duration:
27.5s
Cost:
$0.011510
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt resisted, catching against the warped wooden frame before finally yielding with a sharp, metallic snap. I pulled the door open, ready to tell the delivery driver that the curry house downstairs had already botched my order once tonight. Instead, the heavy scent of expensive sandalwood and cold rain hit me first. Lucien Moreau stood in the dim hallway, his charcoal wool overcoat shimmering with beads of moisture. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic eyes, one a piercing amber and the other a void-like black, tracking the movement of my throat as I swallowed. "You missed a lock, Aurora." His voice still possessed 그 subtle, velvet rasp of a cello played in a stone cellar. I didn't step back, though every instinct I had honed since leaving Cardiff screamed at me to bolt for the fire escape. "I have three. Most people take the hint after two." "I have never been most people." He stepped over the threshold without an invitation, his polished leather shoes clicking against the uneven floorboards of Eva’s flat. He didn't look like he belonged in a cramped one-bedroom residence above a Brick Lane curry house. He looked like he owned the entire street and was merely deciding whether to burn it down for the insurance or keep it as a trophy. "This is a private residence, Lucien. Or did they stop teaching the concept of boundaries in Marseille?" He ignored me, his gaze sweeping over the chaos of Eva’s research. Every surface groaned under the weight of heavy, leather-bound chronicles and crumbling scrolls that smelled of cedar and rot. Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat, hissed from atop a pile of Sanskrit translations, his back arching into a jagged ridge. "It took me six months to find you," Lucien said. He stopped by the small kitchen table, his gloved fingers trailing over the wood. "You’ve gained a scar on your wrist. A crescent. Recent?" I pulled my sleeve down, hiding the mark. "Childhood accident. You're losing your touch if you're only noticing it now." "I notice everything about you, Laila." The use of the name hit like a physical blow. Laila. The girl who had spent three weeks in a gilded cage in Paris, drinking vintage wine and learning the weight of a demon-blood’s obsession. "Don't call me that. I'm Aurora. Or Rory. Take your pick and then take your leave." He turned, the thin blade concealed within his cane clicking against the floor. He moved with a predatory grace that defied his use of the walking stick. He was thirty-two, but in the half-light, he looked timeless, a creature of shadows dressed by a Savile Row tailor. "You shouldn't have gone back to the Golden Empress," he said, his voice dropping an octave. "Yu-Fei is many things, but a discreet employer is not one of them. She sold your location for the price of a rare jade snuff box." "I needed the work. Not everyone has a vault full of Avaros gold to fall back on." I moved toward the sink, my hand hovering near a heavy cast-iron skillet. It was a pathetic weapon against a half-demon who could snap my Gothic arched windows with a thought, but it felt better than empty hands. The flat felt smaller with him in it. The air grew thick, charged with the static of his proximity. I could smell the spice from the restaurant downstairs, the turmeric and cumin clashing with the sterile, sharp scent of his power. Outside, the muffled shouts of East London's nightlife drifted through the glass, but the room felt insulated, a bubble of simmering tension. "You left a mess in Paris," he remarked, stepping closer. "The Council still asks about the girl who stole a key to the lower realms and vanished into the night." "The key was mine by right. My father—" "Your father was a barrister who meddled in things he didn't understand. The key was a death sentence. I saved you from that." "You locked me in a room with silk sheets and a guard at the door. That isn't saving, Lucien. That's collecting." He laughed, a dry, humorless sound. He reached out, his hand stopping just short of my face. I could feel the heat radiating from his skin. The amber eye glowed with a faint, inner light. "I collected you because you are the only interesting thing in a city full of ghosts. And now, you're living above a spice shop, delivering lemon chicken to accountants." "It's an honest living. Something you wouldn't recognize." I moved to push past him, but his cane shot out, barring my path. The ivory handle pressed firmly against my midsection. He wasn't hurting me, but the message was clear. I wasn't going anywhere. "Why are you here, Lucien? Truly." "The Council found Evan." The name made my blood turn to slush. I felt the old, cold familiar dread creeping up my spine. Evan. The reason I had fled Cardiff. The human monster who had proven far more terrifying than any supernatural creature I had met since. "He's dead?" I asked, though I knew the answer by the look in Lucien's eyes. "He's looking for you. And he isn't human anymore, Aurora. He made a deal with a Duke from the third circle. He traded his soul for the ability to track your scent." "That’s impossible." "Nothing is impossible for a man with enough spite and a lack of moral fibre." Lucien finally closed the distance. He didn't touch me with his hands, but his presence was an embrace. He was tall, his fifty-eleven frame looming over me, casting a long, jagged shadow against the wall of books. "I can offer you protection. Again. But the price has gone up." "I'm not going back to Paris." "I'm not asking you to go to Paris. I'm asking you to come to the under-market. Silas’ bar isn't safe enough anymore. The wards are thinning." "I've handled myself for months." "You've survived by luck. Luck is a fickle mistress, and she’s already packing her bags." He reached out then, his thumb grazing the small crescent-shaped scar on my wrist. I shivered, the touch sending a jolt of unwanted electricity through my arm. He looked at the scar with a disturbing, quiet intensity. "You lie so poorly, Aurora. This wasn't a childhood accident. This is a binding mark. Who did this?" I tried to pull my arm away, but his grip was like a steel vice. For all his elegant suits and polished manners, the demon in him was always just beneath the surface, strong and ancient and hungry. "It doesn't matter." "It matters to me. If someone else has placed a claim on you—" A violent crash from the hallway interrupted him. The door, which I had so carefully locked with three deadbolts, didn't just open. It exploded inward. Splinters of heavy oak flew across the room like shrapnel. One sliced through a stack of Eva’s scrolls, sending yellowed parchment fluttering into the air like dying birds. Ptolemy bolted under the bed, a streak of ginger fur. Standing in the shattered remains of the doorframe was a figure that looked like Evan, but his skin was the colour of wet ash, and his eyes were nothing but weeping, black holes. He didn't speak. He didn't breathe. He simply raised a hand, and the air in the flat began to scream. Lucien didn't hesitate. He twisted the handle of his cane, and the thin, silver blade sang as it left its sheath. "Get behind me," Lucien commanded, his French accent thick and jagged. The creature that used to be my ex-boyfriend lunged, his movements jerky and unnatural. He hit the invisible barrier of Lucien's power with a sound like grinding stones. The floorboards beneath us began to smoke, the smell of burning wood and old meat filling the small flat. "Aurora!" Lucien shouted, parrying a blow from a clawed hand that left deep gouges in the kitchen table. "The back window. Run!" I didn't move. I couldn't. Because behind the creature in the doorway, more shadows were gathering, their eyes glowing with the same hungry, black light. They weren't just here for me. They were here for both of us. The creatures began to pour through the gap, their fingers elongated into hooks. Lucien spun his blade, a blur of silver in the dying light of the flat, but for every one he struck back, two more appeared. "They brought a legion," Lucien hissed, his amber eye flashing red. He grabbed my waist, pulling me hard against his chest as the first of the shadows lunged for my throat. The ivory cane shattered against the creature's skull, revealing a hilt carved from human bone. "Change of plans," he growled. "We're going down." He didn't mean the stairs. He kicked the floorboards, and the wood disintegrated into a swirling, black vortex that smelled of sulfur and the end of the world. "Lucien, wait—" The floor vanished. We fell into the dark, the screams of the creatures above us silenced by the sudden, crushing pressure of the void. Just before the light vanished entirely, I saw a hand, huge and grey, reach into the hole after us.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1543
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"truly"
count1
2
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"truly"
2"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1543
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"velvet"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"charged"
count1
3
word"simmering"
count1
4
word"tension"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"could feel"
count1
7
word"firmly"
count1
8
word"familiar"
count1
9
word"looming"
count1
10
word"intensity"
count1
11
word"shattered"
count2
highlights
0"velvet"
1"weight"
2"charged"
3"simmering"
4"tension"
5"silk"
6"could feel"
7"firmly"
8"familiar"
9"looming"
10"intensity"
11"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
75.63% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences85
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
1"began to"
97.55% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences117
gibberishSentences1
adjustedGibberishSentences1
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0.009
matches
0"His voice still possessed 그 subtle, velvet rasp of a cello played in a stone cellar."
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1543
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions16
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1107
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.9
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Cardiff2
Eva4
Brick1
Lane1
Sanskrit1
Paris1
Savile1
Row1
Gothic1
East1
London1
Lucien10
Evan2
French1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Eva"
2"Row"
3"Gothic"
4"Lucien"
5"Evan"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"Paris"
4"East"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore0.667
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"looked like he owned the entire street an"
1"looked like Evan, but his skin was the co"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1543
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences117
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs60
mean25.72
std16.33
cv0.635
sampleLengths
054
145
25
338
410
56
663
717
851
934
1020
116
1235
1316
1447
1542
1617
1738
1863
1930
208
2123
2221
2335
2429
258
2635
276
284
2943
3015
3132
322
3315
3437
3512
366
3726
385
3915
4037
4118
4238
433
4413
4525
4638
4753
4821
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
50.19% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs178
matches
0"was merely deciding"
1"wasn't hurting"
2"wasn't going"
3"were gathering"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences117
ratio0
matches(empty)
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1117
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"heavy, leather-bound chronicles"
1"old, cold familiar dread"
2"small crescent-shaped scar"
3"same hungry, black light."
adverbCount31
adverbRatio0.02775290957923008
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007162041181736795
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences117
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences117
mean13.19
std7.37
cv0.559
sampleLengths
018
123
213
316
429
55
616
722
810
96
1020
1117
1226
1317
1412
1519
1620
1710
1814
1910
208
2112
226
2310
241
2524
2616
2713
2814
2920
3016
3126
3217
3313
3425
358
3611
3722
3822
3910
4020
418
4223
4321
446
4511
469
479
4829
498
30.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.28205128205128205
totalSentences117
uniqueOpeners33
83.33% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"Instead, the heavy scent of"
1"Just before the light vanished"
ratio0.025
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount45
totalSentences80
matches
0"I pulled the door open,"
1"He leaned slightly on his"
2"His voice still possessed 그"
3"I didn't step back, though"
4"He stepped over the threshold"
5"He didn't look like he"
6"He looked like he owned"
7"He ignored me, his gaze"
8"He stopped by the small"
9"I pulled my sleeve down,"
10"He turned, the thin blade"
11"He moved with a predatory"
12"He was thirty-two, but in"
13"he said, his voice dropping"
14"I moved toward the sink,"
15"It was a pathetic weapon"
16"I could smell the spice"
17"he remarked, stepping closer"
18"He laughed, a dry, humorless"
19"He reached out, his hand"
ratio0.563
3.75% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount73
totalSentences80
matches
0"The third deadbolt resisted, catching"
1"I pulled the door open,"
2"Lucien Moreau stood in the"
3"He leaned slightly on his"
4"His voice still possessed 그"
5"I didn't step back, though"
6"He stepped over the threshold"
7"He didn't look like he"
8"He looked like he owned"
9"He ignored me, his gaze"
10"Every surface groaned under the"
11"Ptolemy, Eva’s fat tabby cat,"
12"He stopped by the small"
13"I pulled my sleeve down,"
14"The use of the name"
15"The girl who had spent"
16"He turned, the thin blade"
17"He moved with a predatory"
18"He was thirty-two, but in"
19"he said, his voice dropping"
ratio0.913
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Because behind the creature in"
ratio0.013
21.56% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences53
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"Every surface groaned under the weight of heavy, leather-bound chronicles and crumbling scrolls that smelled of cedar and rot."
1"The girl who had spent three weeks in a gilded cage in Paris, drinking vintage wine and learning the weight of a demon-blood’s obsession."
2"It was a pathetic weapon against a half-demon who could snap my Gothic arched windows with a thought, but it felt better than empty hands."
3"The human monster who had proven far more terrifying than any supernatural creature I had met since."
4"One sliced through a stack of Eva’s scrolls, sending yellowed parchment fluttering into the air like dying birds."
5"Standing in the shattered remains of the doorframe was a figure that looked like Evan, but his skin was the colour of wet ash, and his eyes were nothing but wee…"
6"The creature that used to be my ex-boyfriend lunged, his movements jerky and unnatural."
7"Because behind the creature in the doorway, more shadows were gathering, their eyes glowing with the same hungry, black light."
8"He kicked the floorboards, and the wood disintegrated into a swirling, black vortex that smelled of sulfur and the end of the world."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he said, his voice dropping an octave"
1"Lucien commanded, his French accent thick and jagged"
2"Lucien hissed, his amber eye flashing red"
75.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Lucien shouted (shout)"
1"Lucien hissed (hiss)"
2"he growled (growl)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.15
leniency0.3
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.15
75.5337%