Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95HTTEMXP6ZPH4PMZKW1NA

Run Details

Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.002594
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The low hum of the refrigeration unit in the back of The Raven's Nest vibrated through the polished dark wood of the bar. Rory traced the condensation gathering on her pint glass, the cool moisture a familiar sensation against her fingertips. Outside, Soho pulsed with the indifferent rhythm of a Tuesday night, a muffled roar beyond the thick glass. Silas polished a row of tumblers behind the counter, his movements economical, his grey-streaked auburn hair catching the faint glow of a vintage map tacked to the wall. He moved with a quiet gravity, the kind that settled deep into bones, never quite erased by time or retirement. Rory lived upstairs, a practical arrangement of convenience and trust, but tonight she just felt… adrift in the dim, amber light. The heavy oak door creaked open, spilling a momentary draft of cooler air and the distant shouts of revellers into the bar. Rory glanced up, her attention snagged by the silhouette framed against the streetlights. Not Silas’s usual clientele. Not tonight’s quiet regulars. A woman stood there, hesitating, scanning the room. Something about her posture, a rigid, almost frantic energy she radiated even from a distance, pricked at Rory’s awareness. Then, the woman stepped further in, and the low lights caught her face, highlighting sharp cheekbones and a carefully constructed smile that seemed brittle, like glass about to shatter. Rory’s breath hitched. The glass slipped a fraction in her grip, hitting the wood with a soft thud. "Eva?" The name, a ghost from a different life, a different city, escaped her in a hushed exhale. The woman’s scanning gaze locked onto Rory. Her smile faltered before snapping back into place, wider this time, though it didn't reach the bright, anxious pools of her eyes. She took a few quick steps forward, her heels clicking a sharp rhythm on the worn floorboards. "Rory? Bloody hell, Rory. Is that really you?" Eva’s voice was higher than Rory remembered, a touch strained, like a violin string pulled too taut. She stopped a few feet away, eyes doing a swift, almost aggressive sweep over Rory’s simple jeans and the restaurant’s discreet branding on her t-shirt. Silas, sensing the shift, paused his polishing and gave a curt nod towards the back storeroom, a silent signal. He didn’t intrude, but his presence was a steady anchor in the sudden swell of the unexpected. "It's me," Rory managed, pushing her pint glass slightly to the side. Her own voice felt thick, unused to this particular tremor of shock. "Eva. Wow." She stood, feeling a sudden awkwardness, as if their shared past was a coat she’d shed long ago and found herself suddenly expected to wear again. Eva’s gaze finally settled, a flicker of something unreadable crossing her face – shock, perhaps, or a complicated appraisal. The years had etched fine lines around her eyes like tiny, intricate cracks in porcelain. Her dark hair, once a tumbling contrast to Rory’s own straight black, was now severely styled, pulled back so tightly it seemed to lift her brows perpetually in surprise. She wore a sharply tailored suit, expensive, perhaps, but the cut was all sharp angles, mirroring the tension in her jaw. "Years," Eva said, the word hanging heavily between them. "Must be… what? Five? Six?" "Six, nearly seven," Rory confirmed softly. She remembered the biting wind of Cardiff that last winter, the frantic packing, Eva’s tearful face at the train station. "Since I left…" She trailed off. Eva laughed, a short, sharp bark that made a couple of solitary drinkers at the far end of the bar glance over. "Since you bolted. Never looked back, then?" Her eyes darted around the bar, lingering on the faded maps, the framed photographs of forgotten faces on the walls. "This place hasn't changed a bit. Still feels like stepping into a time capsule. You still working for Silas? Delivering those noodles?" Rory felt a prickle of defensiveness, quickly suppressed. Silas’s quiet efficiency behind the bar had an unspoken grace to it. He’d offered her a stable roof and a semblance of anonymity when she’d arrived in London, broken and adrift. The delivery job was… a job. It kept her head above water. "I manage," Rory said, her voice even. "Silas runs a good place. And yes, the deliveries are part of it." Eva leaned against the bar a few feet away, pulling a slim cigarette case from a small, structured handbag. She tapped a cigarette against the polished wood; her fingers were long, adorned with several gaudy rings that flashed under the light. "Manage," she repeated, the word dripping with an implied pity that grated more than any direct insult. "God, Rory. I thought you’d be… I don’t know. Running boardrooms by now. That spark you had. Remember how we planned it all? Cardiff University chapel steps? World domination before thirty." Rory’s own memories of those plans, fuelled by cheap wine and boundless, naive ambition, felt distant, like faded photographs. The reality now was rain-slicked streets, the rumble of the delivery scooter, and the quiet conversations with Silas in the early hours. "Plans change," she murmured, picking up her pint again. She took a slow sip, letting the cool ale slide down her throat, an anchor. "Oh, they change alright," Eva said, lighting her cigarette with a flourish of a silver lighter. She drew deeply, the tip glowing orange, then exhaled a plume of smoke that curled towards the ceiling. "Mine certainly did. But I wouldn’t say I’m just 'managing'." She gestured with the cigarette towards the street. "I just closed a deal this afternoon that’ll set me up for the next year. High-profile. The kind of people who matter. The people who *make* things happen." Her eyes, however, still held that restless, unfocused gleam. There was a frantic edge to her words, a need to prove something that felt like a raw, open wound. It was a stark contrast to the quiet confidence Silas projected even in his silence. Rory watched Eva, seeing not the girl who’d shared secrets and dreams under the Welsh stars, but a stranger, polished to a high sheen that seemed to mask something worn thin. "That sounds… busy." "Busy is an understatement," Eva said, leaning closer, her voice dropping conspiratorially, though there was no one close enough to overhear. She smelled faintly of expensive perfume and something sharper, something anxious. "It's a constant grind. You have to be sharp, Rory. Ruthless, even. People will walk all over you otherwise. They tried it with me, even after Evan…" She stopped abruptly, her gaze flicking towards Rory, then away again, as if she’d stepped on a landmine. Rory’s own hand, without conscious thought, drifted towards her left wrist, fingers brushing against the faint, crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. The childhood fall near the old quarry. A small, almost invisible mark that felt enormous in its history. "I don't think about Evan," she said, her voice surprisingly steady, devoid of the tremor that had underscored Eva’s mention of his name. Eva exhaled another cloud of smoke, her expression hardening almost imperceptibly. "Don't you? He certainly hasn't forgotten you. Ask about you a lot, actually. Wonders where the 'sweet, naive Rory' of Cardiff went." She smirked, but it was a humourless thing. "Wouldn't believe the circles I'm in now. Saw Brendan and Jennifer a few months back. Still rattling on about your law degree. Probably couldn't believe you ended up here, would they?" The jab landed, not with the force Eva might have intended, but with a dull, familiar ache. Her parents’ disappointment was a distant, but constant hum beneath her life choices. "They wanted what they thought was best," Rory replied, turning her pint glass slowly. She avoided looking directly at Eva, her gaze fixed on the rim where condensation had made the wood darker. The regret wasn't for the path not taken, but for the distance that had grown, for the friend she had found, then lost, in the passage of years. Eva had always been the one pushing, the one looking for an escape route. Now, it seemed, she was trapped by the very ambition she’d so fiercely pursued, chained to a life that demanded a ruthlessness Rory had wisely, or perhaps fearfully, sidestepped. Silas appeared at Eva’s elbow, holding out a napkin and a fresh glass. "Whisky neat, was it?" His voice was a low murmur, calm and devoid of judgment. Eva blinked, a moment of surprise, then smoothly accepted the offering. "Silas. Still the knight in tarnished armour, I see." She winked, a flash of the old Eva, before turning back to Rory, the brief warmth vanishing as quickly as it came. "See? This is what I mean. You get by, Rory. You get by with quiet charm and a ready smile and… convenient friends. I had to claw my way here. Every inch of it." She took a long swallow of the whisky, the amber liquid disappearing quickly. Her eyes, when they met Rory's again, seemed to hold a weariness that no amount of expensive tailoring or sharp talk could entirely disguise. It was the look of someone who had chased the horizon for so long, only to find it remained perpetually out of reach, a mirage shimmering in the heat of her own relentless pursuit. The shared dreams of Cardiff felt like a different language now, spoken by strangers who had tragically misunderstood their own vows.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:10:26.907Z" 2/25/2026, 1:10:26 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
50.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags20
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Rory confirmed softly [softly]"
1"Her eyes darted around [around]"
2"She stopped abruptly [abruptly]"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0.15
effectiveRatio0.15
61.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsmAdverbs12
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
1
adverb"really"
count1
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
4
adverb"tightly"
count1
5
adverb"sharply"
count1
6
adverb"softly"
count1
7
adverb"quickly"
count3
8
adverb"slowly"
count1
9
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
1"really"
2"slightly"
3"suddenly"
4"tightly"
5"sharply"
6"softly"
7"quickly"
8"slowly"
9"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
36.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1572
totalAiIsms20
found
0
word"vibrated"
count1
1
word"traced"
count1
2
word"familiar"
count2
3
word"pulsed"
count1
4
word"scanning"
count2
5
word"constructed"
count1
6
word"flicker"
count1
7
word"unreadable"
count1
8
word"etched"
count1
9
word"intricate"
count1
10
word"porcelain"
count1
11
word"tension"
count1
12
word"solitary"
count1
13
word"unspoken"
count1
14
word"stark"
count1
15
word"silence"
count1
16
word"warmth"
count1
17
word"charm"
count1
highlights
0"vibrated"
1"traced"
2"familiar"
3"pulsed"
4"scanning"
5"constructed"
6"flicker"
7"unreadable"
8"etched"
9"intricate"
10"porcelain"
11"tension"
12"solitary"
13"unspoken"
14"stark"
15"silence"
16"warmth"
17"charm"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences82
matches
0"y in surprise"
1"felt a prickle"
90.59% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences82
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen47
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1573
ratio0.001
matches
0"make"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
33.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions53
wordCount1270
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.65
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Tuesday1
Silas7
Rory21
Eva17
Cardiff2
London1
Welsh1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Eva"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.673
windowScore0.333
47.26% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a raw, open wound"
1"sheen that seemed to mask something worn thin"
2"felt like a different language now, spo"
9.28% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.907
wordCount1573
matches
0"not the girl who’d shared secrets and dreams under the Welsh stars, but a stranger, polished to a high sheen"
1"not with the force Eva might have intended, but with a dull, familiar ache"
2"not taken, but for the distance"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs23
mean68.39
std40.08
cv0.586
sampleLengths
0128
199
218
318
446
550
636
752
884
914
1032
1171
1271
1389
1465
15124
1634
1777
1863
1972
20134
2128
22168
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences82
matches
0"was trapped"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs202
matches(empty)
77.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences88
ratio0.023
matches
0"Eva’s gaze finally settled, a flicker of something unreadable crossing her face – shock, perhaps, or a complicated appraisal."
1"She tapped a cigarette against the polished wood; her fingers were long, adorned with several gaudy rings that flashed under the light."
89.82% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1072
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"faint, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount48
adverbRatio0.04477611940298507
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.016791044776119403
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean17.88
std9.14
cv0.511
sampleLengths
023
118
218
328
420
515
66
722
813
94
104
118
1219
1329
143
1515
1618
177
1822
1917
2025
2125
2219
2317
2412
2512
2628
2719
2815
2929
3021
319
325
336
3420
356
3622
3727
3822
398
4012
4119
424
432
446
457
4613
4719
4822
4917
62.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.38636363636363635
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners34
41.67% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Then, the woman stepped further"
ratio0.013
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount32
totalSentences80
matches
0"He moved with a quiet"
1"Her smile faltered before snapping"
2"She took a few quick"
3"She stopped a few feet"
4"He didn’t intrude, but his"
5"Her own voice felt thick,"
6"She stood, feeling a sudden"
7"Her dark hair, once a"
8"She wore a sharply tailored"
9"She remembered the biting wind"
10"She trailed off"
11"Her eyes darted around the"
12"He’d offered her a stable"
13"It kept her head above"
14"She tapped a cigarette against"
15"she repeated, the word dripping"
16"she murmured, picking up her"
17"She took a slow sip,"
18"She drew deeply, the tip"
19"She gestured with the cigarette"
ratio0.4
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences80
matches
0"The low hum of the"
1"Rory traced the condensation gathering"
2"Silas polished a row of"
3"He moved with a quiet"
4"Rory lived upstairs, a practical"
5"adrift in the dim, amber"
6"The heavy oak door creaked"
7"Rory glanced up, her attention"
8"A woman stood there, hesitating,"
9"Something about her posture, a"
10"Rory’s breath hitched."
11"The glass slipped a fraction"
12"The name, a ghost from"
13"The woman’s scanning gaze locked"
14"Her smile faltered before snapping"
15"She took a few quick"
16"Eva’s voice was higher than"
17"She stopped a few feet"
18"Silas, sensing the shift, paused"
19"He didn’t intrude, but his"
ratio0.925
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"Now, it seemed, she was"
ratio0.013
23.81% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences48
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"Then, the woman stepped further in, and the low lights caught her face, highlighting sharp cheekbones and a carefully constructed smile that seemed brittle, lik…"
1"Eva laughed, a short, sharp bark that made a couple of solitary drinkers at the far end of the bar glance over."
2"She tapped a cigarette against the polished wood; her fingers were long, adorned with several gaudy rings that flashed under the light."
3"There was a frantic edge to her words, a need to prove something that felt like a raw, open wound."
4"Rory watched Eva, seeing not the girl who’d shared secrets and dreams under the Welsh stars, but a stranger, polished to a high sheen that seemed to mask someth…"
5"A small, almost invisible mark that felt enormous in its history."
6"It was the look of someone who had chased the horizon for so long, only to find it remained perpetually out of reach, a mirage shimmering in the heat of her own…"
7"The shared dreams of Cardiff felt like a different language now, spoken by strangers who had tragically misunderstood their own vows."
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory remembered, a touch strained, like a violin string pulled too taut"
1"Eva said, the word hanging heavily between them"
2"She took, the amber liquid disappearing quickly"
42.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"Rory confirmed softly (confirm)"
1"she repeated (repeat)"
2"she murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences28
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.643
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.214
71.3128%