Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95KRBZ12MX085E0B0A9K2Z

Run Details

Duration:
26.0s
Cost:
$0.010807
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The orange smudge of London's light pollution died at the edge of Richmond Park, swallowed by an unnatural, ink-thick gloom. Aurora Carter pulled her jacket tighter, the nylon rustling like dry leaves. Frost crunched under her boots, a sharp, rhythmic sound that felt too loud for the stillness of the midnight trees. She checked her phone. The screen flickered, the clock digits spinning in a frantic, nonsensical blur before the display went black. "Great. Fantastic start, Rory." She shoved the dead device into her pocket and gripped the Heartstone Pendant through the fabric of her coat. The crimson gem burned against her palm, a steady, rhythmic heat that matched the quickening thump of her own blood. She didn't want to be here. The flat above Silas’ bar was warm, smelling of stale hops and old wood, a sanctuary compared to the skeletal reach of the winter oaks. But the message left on the Golden Empress’s delivery app hadn't been a food order. It had been a coordinate and a name she couldn't ignore. The ancient oak standing stones loomed out of the fog like the ribs of a buried giant. This was the boundary. Rory stepped between the two tallest pillars. The air didn't just change; it transformed. The biting London chill vanished, replaced by a humid, heavy warmth that tasted of damp earth and nectar. The frost on the ground dissolved into a carpet of lush, impossible wildflowers. Petals of violet and gold stared up at the moon, thriving in the dead of a British winter. She stood still, her breath hitching. The silence here wasn't the absence of sound. It was a physical weight, a velvet curtain draped over her ears. "Isolde? You here?" Her voice didn't echo. It fell flat, absorbed by the blooming moss. She took a step forward, then another, moving deeper into the pocket of the Grove. The trees inside were different—gnarled, twisted into impossible knots, their bark smooth and grey like sun-bleached bone. A twig snapped. The sound came from behind a dense thicket of fern to her left. Rory spun, her hand flying to her left wrist, thumb brushing the small crescent scar there—a nervous tic she’d never quite shed. "I have the Heartstone. If this is some kind of test, I'm over it." Nothing answered. Not even the wind. The leaves on the trees remained perfectly motionless, yet she felt a draft against the back of her neck, a thin needle of cold air that smelled of copper and ozone. She turned back toward the center of the clearing. The Heartstone began to pulse. Through her layers of clothing, the crimson light bled through, casting long, rhythmic shadows across the flowers. It wasn't a gentle warmth anymore. It was a Warning. Rory walked faster. The Grove felt larger than it had from the outside. The standing stones she’d just passed were gone, replaced by an endless corridor of those bone-grey trees. She checked her wrist. Her watch hummed, the second hand ticking backward in a steady, mocking cadence. Something moved in the corner of her eye. A flash of something pale, low to the ground. She whipped her head around. Only the ferns remained, their fronds heavy and still. "I see you." The lie tasted like ash. She saw nothing but shadows that seemed to stretch toward her, elongating as if the moon were moving at triple speed across the sky. Then came the sound. It wasn't a snap or a rustle. It was a wet, sliding noise, like a heavy coil of rope being dragged over silk. It started behind her, then circled, the sound dampening and rising as it moved through the undergrowth. Rory didn't run. Running invited the hunt. Instead, she reached into her collar and pulled the pendant out, letting the silver chain swing. The crimson gem was glowing fiercely now, a strobe light of blood-red intensity that revealed the world in jagged bursts. Red. White trees. Black. Red. Moving shadows. Black. Red. There. Ten feet away, between two split trunks, a face stared back. It wasn't a human face. It was a mask of pale, stretched skin with no eyes, only deep indentations where the sockets should be. It stood as tall as a man but lacked the rigidity of a skeleton. It swayed, its movements fluid and boneless, mimicking the rhythm of the Heartstone’s pulse. Rory’s heart hammered against her ribs like a trapped bird. "I’m just here for the delivery. Whatever Silas promised, I don’t have it." The creature didn’t speak. It tilted its head, the motion slow and deliberate. It mimicked her voice, the sound coming not from its mouth—which remained a sealed slit—but from the air around her. "Just here for the delivery," her own voice whispered back, stripped of its Welsh lilt, sounding hollow and wrong. Rory backed away, her boots treading on the soft, fleshy heads of the wildflowers. The sliding sound returned, louder now, coming from multiple directions. More of them. The periphery of the Grove was thick with those pale, swaying shapes. They didn't approach; they just watched, their eyeless heads tracking her every movement. The Heartstone grew hot, nearly scalding her skin. The silver chain felt like a branding iron. "Stop it." She stumbled over a root that hadn't been there a second ago. The ground felt different—less like earth, more like something living. Pliant. She looked down. The flowers weren't blooming; they were feeding. Their roots were wrapped around something white and porous beneath the soil. Bone. A field of it. The sliding noise accelerated. One of the shapes stepped out into the pulsing red light. It was closer now, only five feet away. It had long, spindly fingers that ended in blunt, skin-covered tips. It reached out, not to strike, but as if it wanted to touch the glowing pendant. "Don't touch me." Rory’s voice cracked. She dug into her pocket and pulled out her heavy brass keys, the only weapon she had. The creature froze. It opened its mouth—a vertical tear in the skin—and emitted a high-pitched hum that vibrated in Rory’s teeth. The other shapes joined in. The sound rose in a dissonant harmony that made the crimson light of the stone flicker and dim. The air in the Grove thickened. The smell of nectar turned into the stench of rotting peaches. Rory’s vision swam. The trees seemed to lean inward, their boughs interlacing to form a cage of white bone against the dark sky. She turned to run, but the path she’d taken was gone. There was only the clearing, the flowers, and the circle of pale, swaying things. The Heartstone gave a violent, final throb, the heat so intense she dropped it. The pendant fell into the bed of violets, burying itself in the petals. Immediately, the flowers began to wilt, turning black and shriveled where the crimson light touched them. The creatures shrieked—a sound like metal tearing. They recoiled from the dying flowers, their boneless bodies contorting in the dark. Rory dived for the pendant, her fingers screaming as they brushed the hot silver. She scrambled to her feet, the chain wrapped around her knuckles. "Out. I need to get out." She chose a direction and bolted. The sliding noises followed, faster now, desperate. The pale shapes lashed out, their long fingers brushing the sleeves of her jacket, leaving behind streaks of translucent slime that glowed with a faint, sickly phosphorescence. She didn't look back. The bone-grey trees blurred into a wall of monochromatic terror. The Heartstone was a lead weight in her hand, pulling her toward something. Not an exit, but a rift. The air grew cold again. The smell of London—exhaust fumes, damp pavement, and grease—pierced through the cloying floral scent. Rory saw the oak stones ahead. They were dark, silent, and solid. She threw herself toward the gap between them. Behind her, the humming grew into a roar. The ground heaved. A pale hand, larger than the others, gripped the heel of her boot. "No!" She kicked back, her heel connecting with something that felt like wet clay. The grip loosened just enough. She lunged forward, falling onto the hard, frozen grass of Richmond Park. The transition was a physical blow. The humidity vanished, replaced by the biting December wind. Rory lay on the ground, gasping, her lungs burning with the sudden intake of cold air. She turned her head. The standing stones stood behind her, silent and indifferent. There was no Grove. No white trees. No pale, eyeless things. Just the dark silhouettes of regular oaks and the distant, comforting hum of a car engine on the A3. She looked at her hand. The Heartstone was cool now, its crimson depths dark and dormant. A soft rustle came from the grass a few feet away. Rory froze. She didn't move her head, only her eyes. A single violet wildflower, vibrant and pulsating with a faint, inner gold light, sat in the middle of the frost-covered lawn. It shouldn't have been there. It couldn't survive the cold. As she watched, the flower tilted its head toward her, as if listening. From the darkness of the trees beyond the stones, her own voice whispered, so low it was almost a thought. "Delivery."
created_at"2026-02-25T01:11:29.926Z" 2/25/2026, 1:11:29 AM
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native_tokens_reasoning1342
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"own voice whispered back [back]"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.182
96.78% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
19.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1553
totalAiIsms25
found
0
word"gloom"
count1
1
word"rhythmic"
count3
2
word"flickered"
count1
3
word"sanctuary"
count1
4
word"loomed"
count1
5
word"chill"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"echo"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count2
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"intensity"
count1
14
word"lilt"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"flicker"
count1
17
word"throb"
count1
18
word"comforting"
count1
19
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"gloom"
1"rhythmic"
2"flickered"
3"sanctuary"
4"loomed"
5"chill"
6"warmth"
7"silence"
8"weight"
9"velvet"
10"echo"
11"pulse"
12"silk"
13"intensity"
14"lilt"
15"vibrated"
16"flicker"
17"throb"
18"comforting"
19"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences149
matches(empty)
94.92% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences149
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences159
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1544
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions2
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions43
wordCount1467
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
London3
Richmond2
Park2
Carter1
Heartstone7
Pendant1
Golden1
Empress1
British1
Grove5
Warning1
Welsh1
Rory13
December1
Red3
persons
0"Carter"
1"Heartstone"
2"Pendant"
3"Empress"
4"Grove"
5"Rory"
places
0"London"
1"Richmond"
2"Park"
globalScore1
windowScore1
50.99% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences101
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"shadows that seemed to stretch toward her, elongating as if the moon were moving at triple speed across the sky"
1"felt like a branding iron"
2"felt like wet clay"
3"as if listening"
70.47% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.295
wordCount1544
matches
0"not to strike, but as if it wanted to touch the glowing pendant"
1"Not an exit, but a rift"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences159
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean27.57
std20.66
cv0.749
sampleLengths
073
14
296
321
463
526
63
744
83
935
1014
1137
1241
1347
1417
1514
163
1756
1860
199
201
2163
2210
2313
2433
2519
2652
2716
282
2950
3050
313
3220
3344
3440
3525
3643
3720
3825
396
4040
4133
4219
4320
4424
451
4630
4731
4843
4916
95.84% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences149
matches
0"were gone"
1"being dragged"
2"were wrapped"
3"was gone"
88.42% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs239
matches
0"were moving"
1"was glowing"
2"were feeding"
3"weren't blooming"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences159
ratio0.063
matches
0"The air didn't just change; it transformed."
1"The trees inside were different—gnarled, twisted into impossible knots, their bark smooth and grey like sun-bleached bone."
2"Rory spun, her hand flying to her left wrist, thumb brushing the small crescent scar there—a nervous tic she’d never quite shed."
3"It mimicked her voice, the sound coming not from its mouth—which remained a sealed slit—but from the air around her."
4"They didn't approach; they just watched, their eyeless heads tracking her every movement."
5"The ground felt different—less like earth, more like something living."
6"The flowers weren't blooming; they were feeding."
7"It opened its mouth—a vertical tear in the skin—and emitted a high-pitched hum that vibrated in Rory’s teeth."
8"The creatures shrieked—a sound like metal tearing."
9"The smell of London—exhaust fumes, damp pavement, and grease—pierced through the cloying floral scent."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount155
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount4
adverbRatio0.025806451612903226
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences159
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences159
mean9.71
std6.33
cv0.652
sampleLengths
020
112
220
34
417
54
619
720
86
925
1015
1111
1217
134
147
157
1618
1713
1818
196
208
2112
223
234
248
2515
2617
273
2813
2922
3014
312
324
3331
349
355
3617
376
384
393
4010
4117
424
4313
448
459
465
479
483
495
35.53% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats23
diversityRatio0.27672955974842767
totalSentences159
uniqueOpeners44
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount6
totalSentences137
matches
0"Only the ferns remained, their"
1"Then came the sound."
2"Instead, she reached into her"
3"More of them."
4"Immediately, the flowers began to"
5"Just the dark silhouettes of"
ratio0.044
76.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount49
totalSentences137
matches
0"She checked her phone."
1"She shoved the dead device"
2"She didn't want to be"
3"It had been a coordinate"
4"She stood still, her breath"
5"It was a physical weight,"
6"Her voice didn't echo."
7"It fell flat, absorbed by"
8"She took a step forward,"
9"She turned back toward the"
10"It wasn't a gentle warmth"
11"It was a Warning."
12"She checked her wrist."
13"Her watch hummed, the second"
14"She whipped her head around."
15"She saw nothing but shadows"
16"It wasn't a snap or"
17"It was a wet, sliding"
18"It started behind her, then"
19"It wasn't a human face."
ratio0.358
32.99% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount117
totalSentences137
matches
0"The orange smudge of London's"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her jacket"
2"Frost crunched under her boots,"
3"She checked her phone."
4"The screen flickered, the clock"
5"She shoved the dead device"
6"The crimson gem burned against"
7"She didn't want to be"
8"The flat above"
9"It had been a coordinate"
10"The ancient oak standing stones"
11"This was the boundary."
12"Rory stepped between the two"
13"The air didn't just change;"
14"The biting London chill vanished,"
15"The frost on the ground"
16"Petals of violet and gold"
17"She stood still, her breath"
18"The silence here wasn't the"
19"It was a physical weight,"
ratio0.854
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences137
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.82% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences70
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"Frost crunched under her boots, a sharp, rhythmic sound that felt too loud for the stillness of the midnight trees."
1"The crimson gem burned against her palm, a steady, rhythmic heat that matched the quickening thump of her own blood."
2"Rory spun, her hand flying to her left wrist, thumb brushing the small crescent scar there—a nervous tic she’d never quite shed."
3"The leaves on the trees remained perfectly motionless, yet she felt a draft against the back of her neck, a thin needle of cold air that smelled of copper and o…"
4"The crimson gem was glowing fiercely now, a strobe light of blood-red intensity that revealed the world in jagged bursts."
5"It opened its mouth—a vertical tear in the skin—and emitted a high-pitched hum that vibrated in Rory’s teeth."
6"The sound rose in a dissonant harmony that made the crimson light of the stone flicker and dim."
7"The pale shapes lashed out, their long fingers brushing the sleeves of her jacket, leaving behind streaks of translucent slime that glowed with a faint, sickly …"
8"She kicked back, her heel connecting with something that felt like wet clay."
9"Rory lay on the ground, gasping, her lungs burning with the sudden intake of cold air."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"own voice whispered back (whisper)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.091
leniency0.182
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.182
76.0161%