| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 8 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.471 | | leniency | 0.941 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.09% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1692 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 34.99% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1692 | | totalAiIsms | 22 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | word | "the last thing" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "velvet" | | 1 | "silence" | | 2 | "throbbed" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "pulse" | | 5 | "searing" | | 6 | "echoed" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "perfect" | | 10 | "flickered" | | 11 | "vibrated" | | 12 | "lilt" | | 13 | "depths" | | 14 | "the last thing" | | 15 | "lurched" | | 16 | "weight" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 156 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 3 | | narrationSentences | 156 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 165 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 6 | | totalWords | 1692 | | ratio | 0.004 | | matches | | 0 | "One Missed Call: Evan." | | 1 | "Clip-clop. Clip-clop." |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 7 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 66.67% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 64 | | wordCount | 1608 | | uniqueNames | 19 | | maxNameDensity | 1.55 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3 | | worstWindowName | "Eva" | | discoveredNames | | Heartstone | 3 | | Aurora | 2 | | Grove | 4 | | London | 4 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Richmond | 2 | | Eva | 9 | | Rory | 25 | | October | 1 | | Heatstone | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Missed | 1 | | Call | 1 | | Ice | 1 | | Cardiff | 2 | | Welsh | 1 | | Faceless | 2 | | Italian | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Aurora" | | 1 | "Eva" | | 2 | "Rory" | | 3 | "Yu-Fei" | | 4 | "Ice" | | 5 | "Faceless" |
| | places | | 0 | "Grove" | | 1 | "London" | | 2 | "Richmond" | | 3 | "October" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.723 | | windowScore | 0.667 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 113 | | glossingSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "tasted like copper and crushed violets" | | 1 | "felt like a pull she couldn't resist" | | 2 | "sounded like Eva, but the pitch was slight" | | 3 | "sounded like fingernails tapping on a hard" | | 4 | "sounded like Eva this time, right down to" | | 5 | "sounded like a distorted teakettle" | | 6 | "looked like the streetlights of London, b" | | 7 | "looked like charred lightning bolts" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1692 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 165 | | matches | | 0 | "recognised that fabric" |
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| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 63 | | mean | 26.86 | | std | 17.98 | | cv | 0.669 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 62 | | 1 | 4 | | 2 | 63 | | 3 | 1 | | 4 | 49 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 50 | | 7 | 61 | | 8 | 37 | | 9 | 7 | | 10 | 49 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 53 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 19 | | 15 | 48 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 44 | | 18 | 18 | | 19 | 21 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 3 | | 23 | 31 | | 24 | 21 | | 25 | 9 | | 26 | 33 | | 27 | 3 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 42 | | 30 | 44 | | 31 | 28 | | 32 | 8 | | 33 | 59 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 39 | | 37 | 40 | | 38 | 38 | | 39 | 22 | | 40 | 3 | | 41 | 34 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 24 | | 44 | 10 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 12 | | 47 | 50 | | 48 | 24 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 156 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 4 | | totalVerbs | 267 | | matches | | 0 | "was screaming" | | 1 | "was coming" | | 2 | "was vibrating" | | 3 | "was lying" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 0 | | totalSentences | 165 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 70.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1620 | | adjectiveStacks | 5 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "terrifying large old twisted branch." | | 1 | "small sharp white stones" | | 2 | "tall thin pale figure" | | 3 | "lovely slender young hand," | | 4 | "thick coarse black hair." |
| | adverbCount | 55 | | adverbRatio | 0.033950617283950615 | | lyAdverbCount | 15 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009259259259259259 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 165 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 165 | | mean | 10.25 | | std | 6.49 | | cv | 0.633 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 25 | | 1 | 16 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 8 | | 5 | 16 | | 6 | 39 | | 7 | 1 | | 8 | 10 | | 9 | 18 | | 10 | 2 | | 11 | 13 | | 12 | 3 | | 13 | 3 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 11 | | 20 | 6 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 23 | | 23 | 9 | | 24 | 6 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 4 | | 27 | 22 | | 28 | 6 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 6 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 14 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 12 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 18 | | 42 | 7 | | 43 | 18 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 4 | | 47 | 8 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 19 |
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| 33.03% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 28 | | diversityRatio | 0.26666666666666666 | | totalSentences | 165 | | uniqueOpeners | 44 | |
| 100.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 6 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the pitter-patter of something" | | 1 | "Pale blue petals shivered even" | | 2 | "Instead, a repetitive rhythmic clicking" | | 3 | "Only a smooth expanse of" | | 4 | "Then the world inverted." | | 5 | "Instead, something grey and faceless" |
| | ratio | 0.04 | |
| 71.66% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "It throbbed against her palm," | | 1 | "She hadn’t meant to cross" | | 2 | "It sounded like Eva, but" | | 3 | "Her black shoulder-length hair caught" | | 4 | "She didn't move." | | 5 | "She didn't breathe." | | 6 | "She didn't turn it on" | | 7 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 8 | "They shouldn't be blooming in" | | 9 | "It wasn't just near a" | | 10 | "It was screaming a warning." | | 11 | "She recognised that fabric." | | 12 | "It belonged to the high-visibility" | | 13 | "She moved toward the tree," | | 14 | "It was tied." | | 15 | "She reached for the phone," | | 16 | "It ducked behind the trunk" | | 17 | "It sounded like fingernails tapping" | | 18 | "She turned and bolted back" | | 19 | "It wasn't behind her anymore." |
| | ratio | 0.371 | |
| 32.85% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 129 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | | 0 | "The silver chain of the" | | 1 | "The air inside the Grove" | | 2 | "Silence swallowed the park." | | 3 | "Aurora gripped the crimson gemstone" | | 4 | "It throbbed against her palm," | | 5 | "She hadn’t meant to cross" | | 6 | "The voice drifted through the" | | 7 | "It sounded like Eva, but" | | 8 | "Her black shoulder-length hair caught" | | 9 | "She didn't move." | | 10 | "She didn't breathe." | | 11 | "Rory reached down and unlatched" | | 12 | "She didn't turn it on" | | 13 | "Light was an invitation in" | | 14 | "She stepped deeper into the" | | 15 | "The Grove stretched unnaturally far." | | 16 | "The wildflowers here glowed with" | | 17 | "They shouldn't be blooming in" | | 18 | "The Heatstone pendant flared." | | 19 | "The deep crimson gem burned" |
| | ratio | 0.854 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 151 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "Behind her, the mundane hum of London's evening traffic vanished as if a heavy velvet curtain had dropped over the world." | | 1 | "It throbbed against her palm, a rhythmic pulse that matched the frantic kick-tock of her heart." | | 2 | "Only a smooth expanse of pale grey skin, stretched tight over a skull that had too many teeth and no eyes." | | 3 | "It dropped to all fours, its limbs elongating with the sickening crunch-crack of breaking bone." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 8 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory shouted, though her throat felt tight" | | 1 | "he said, his eyes glowing like embers in the rain" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 6 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory shouted (shout)" | | 1 | "Rory yelled (yell)" | | 2 | "the thing whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "thing hissed (hiss)" | | 4 | "she screamed (scream)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.353 | | leniency | 0.706 | | rawRatio | 0.833 | | effectiveRatio | 0.588 | |