Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95MC1A0BVJRJ3SAASXSEYG

Run Details

Duration:
25.4s
Cost:
$0.002596
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The gnarled branches of the ancient oaks formed a skeletal archway above, their bark like petrified skin. Aurora Carter felt a familiar warmth bloom against her skin. The Heartstone Pendant, nestled beneath her shirt, began a slow, insistent pulse. It was a gentle thrum, like a tiny bird fluttering against her ribs, but it was more pronounced than it had been moments ago. The air around the trees felt different, too – thinner, yet carrying a strange perfume, a heady mix of damp earth and a sweetness she couldn't identify, beyond any flower she knew. Her black hair, usually straight and falling to her shoulders, seemed to stir in a breeze that didn't exist. Beside her, Nyx stood, a shifting silhouette of gloom. Their faintly violet eyes scanned the boundary, not so much seeing as *feeling* the energy signatures that flickered like faulty neon signs to their senses. The shadows here clung to them, then recoiled, as if unsure if they belonged to this world or another entirely. Nyx’s usual whisper of a voice gained an almost imperceptible texture, like frost on a windowpane. "The Veil thins," Nyx murmured, their form rippling. "Edges fray." Isolde Varga, her impossibly long silver hair a cascade against the muted greens and browns of the woods, moved with an uncanny grace. Her pale lavender eyes, ancient pools of knowing, fixed on the space between the gnarled oaks. She turned neither left nor right, her feet finding purchase on fallen leaves and moss without disturbing them. No fallen twig snapped under her weight. No blade of grass bent. The grove seemed to part for her, acknowledging her passage with a silent deference. "Here," Isolde’s voice was like the rustle of dried leaves, "where time forgets its tick and memory finds root." Rory tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into her belt. Its moonsilver hilt felt as cold as ever, a sharp contrast to the pendant’s growing warmth. She trusted Isolde's guidance, but a prickle of unease traced its way up her spine. This place felt older than the standing stones, older than the earth they grew from. It felt like a secret the world had kept for millennia. Isolde stepped through the archway of oak. The change was not immediate, but like a slow bloom of colour. Rory followed, Nyx a fluid shadow trailing behind her. The air hit Rory first, thick with a perfume that made her head spin. It was overwhelmingly sweet, a thousand blossoms condensed into a single breath, laced with the scent of rain on hot stone and something metallic, like ozone. The light here wasn't sunlight; it seemed to originate from *everywhere* at once, a soft, diffuse luminescence that painted the world in colours too vibrant to be real. Emeralds pulsed on leaves, sapphires dripped from dew, and flowers riotous in shades of amethyst, rose, and gold unfurled themselves in impossibly rapid succession. She looked down at her own feet. The ground beneath her boots was a carpet of moss, impossibly soft and yielding, yet it sprang back, leaving no impression of her weight. But where Isolde stood, there was nothing. No indentation, no flattened moss, no shadow cast. Just… air occupied. "It’s… quiet," Rory whispered, though the word felt wrong. It wasn't empty silence, but a silence pregnant with unheard sounds. A low, resonant hum vibrated not in her ears, but in the very marrow of her bones. Somewhere, far off, delicate chimes like spun glass sang a melody that shifted and reformed with every pulse of her own heartbeat. She raised a hand, her clear blue eyes wide. Around them, wildflowers, sapphire and crimson and gold, seemed to bud, blossom, and fade in the span of a single breath. It was like watching a sped-up film, yet impossibly slow at the same time. Her crescent-shaped scar throbbed faintly, a ghostly echo against her skin. Nyx moved past her, their shadowy form seeming to drink the ambient light. They stopped, their head tilted, absorbing the symphony of impossible colours and fragrances. Their violet eyes glowed brighter now, reflecting the riot of impossible flora. "The echoes linger," Nyx breathed, their voice a dry rustle. "Threads of what was. And what could be." They gestured with a smoky limb, and a wisp of darkness detached itself, coalescing into a shape that vaguely resembled a leaping stag before dissolving back into Nyx. "Life here breathes... differently." Rory reached out, her fingers trembling slightly, and brushed the petal of a bloom the colour of twilight. It felt unnaturally cool, like polished stone, yet yielded with the texture of velvet. It pulsed with a faint, inner light. "They grow before your eyes," she marvelled. "I saw that one bloom in seconds." Isolde smiled, a subtle parting of her lips that didn't reach her eyes. "When the world stops counting, what is a second? A whisper? A lifetime?" She turned, her gaze sweeping over the impossible landscape. "The Fae Grove forgets the haste of mortals. Here, a moment ripens into an age, or an age wilts into a moment." Rory felt a prickle of disorientation. She looked at her hands, then back at the blooming flowers. If time moved so erratically, how long had they been here? Minutes? Hours? She checked the pendant beneath her shirt. It pulsed with a steady strength now, warmer than before, a tiny beacon radiating heat against her chest. It was reacting to something. Something potentially not of the Fae realm. "The pendant," she said, touching it through her shirt. "It's warmer. Much warmer." Nyx drifted closer, their obsidian form a stark contrast to the vibrant hues surrounding them. "A portal stirs," they stated, not a question but a fact. "The Veil rends where this light does not touch." Rory’s gaze swept the immediate vicinity. Everything shimmered with an unearthly beauty. Where could a portal be? The air itself seemed too clean, too pure, too alien. She drew the Fae-Forged Blade. Even in the strange, pervasive light, the moonsilver seemed to catch and hold a faint, internal luminescence. It remained icily cold, a familiar anchor in this sea of strangeness. Its power felt amplified here, eager. "The Fae blade calls to the old songs," Nyx observed, their violet gaze fixed on Rory's weapon. "But the warmth answers a different call. A deeper hunger." Isolde pointed a slender finger towards a clearing deeper within the grove. Twisted, ancient trees dripped with bioluminescent moss, casting an ethereal, blue-green light. Among them, the air seemed to waver, a subtle distortion that flickered like heat haze, yet it imparted a chill that had nothing to do with temperature. "Where roots drink from the unfathomed," Isolde said, her voice a low murmur. "The song of the earth meets the lament of the deep." Rory swallowed, her eyes fixed on the shimmering air at the edge of the clearing. The pendant pulsed violently now, a frantic beat against her heart. It wasn't just warmth anymore; it felt like it was trying to escape her, eager to reach whatever lay beyond that distortion. The beauty of the Grove warred with a burgeoning dread. This wasn't just a pocket between realms; it was a crossroads. And one of the paths led somewhere cold and hungry, somewhere the Heartstone was desperate to find. She took a step towards the clearing, the Fae blade held ready. The ground still yielded; the air still sang its impossible song. "What's through there?" Rory asked, her voice tight. The Fae-Forged Blade felt like a piece of her own resolve, cold and steady, as she faced the wavering air and the pulsing pendant. Nyx’s shadowy form flowed towards the distortion, not walking but gliding, their eyes unblinking. "A wound. Where shadows bleed into the light." The scent of overripe fruit and something metallic filled Rory’s senses as she moved closer. The flowers here seemed to wilt and twist as if recoiling from the distortion, their vibrant colours muted, their blossoms hanging heavy. The hum that permeated the grove deepened, shifting into a low growl that seemed to vibrate through the very ground, even as the ground itself offered no resistance. The sweet, cloying perfume of the Fae Grove began to curdle, replaced by a foul, coppery tang that clawed at Rory’s throat. The pendant throbbed with a ferocity that was almost painful, a frantic, desperate rhythm against her chest.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags11
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.524
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.26% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"very"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1396
totalAiIsms37
found
0
word"familiar"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count2
6
word"whisper"
count2
7
word"uncanny"
count1
8
word"weight"
count2
9
word"traced"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count4
11
word"silence"
count2
12
word"vibrated"
count1
13
word"throbbed"
count2
14
word"echo"
count1
15
word"symphony"
count1
16
word"echoes"
count1
17
word"velvet"
count1
18
word"beacon"
count1
19
word"stark"
count1
20
word"shimmered"
count1
21
word"chill"
count1
22
word"resolve"
count1
23
word"wavering"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"warmth"
2"pulse"
3"gloom"
4"scanned"
5"flickered"
6"whisper"
7"uncanny"
8"weight"
9"traced"
10"pulsed"
11"silence"
12"vibrated"
13"throbbed"
14"echo"
15"symphony"
16"echoes"
17"velvet"
18"beacon"
19"stark"
20"shimmered"
21"chill"
22"resolve"
23"wavering"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences96
matches
0"felt a prickle"
1"was desperate"
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount10
narrationSentences96
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1397
ratio0.001
matches
0"feeling"
1"everywhere"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1254
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.96
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Isolde"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Heartstone2
Pendant1
Nyx10
Isolde8
Varga1
Rory12
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Fae6
Grove2
persons
0"Carter"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Rory"
5"Blade"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
2.94% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences85
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"felt like a secret the world had kept f"
1"felt like it was trying to escape her,"
2"felt like a piece of her own resolve, c"
3"as if recoiling from the distortion, their vibrant colours muted, their blossoms hanging heavy"
4"growl that seemed to vibrate through the very ground, even as the ground itself offered no resistance"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords3.579
wordCount1397
matches
0"neither left nor"
1"not immediate, but like a slow bloom of colour"
2"not in her ears, but in the very marrow of her bones"
3"not a question but a fact"
4"not walking but gliding, their eyes unblinking"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean53.73
std31.51
cv0.586
sampleLengths
0114
170
210
383
419
569
628
792
849
9103
1011
1138
1250
1353
1457
1567
1613
1735
1867
1927
2051
2124
22109
2332
2422
25104
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences96
matches(empty)
99.50% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs199
matches
0"was like watching"
1"was reacting"
2"was trying"
6.80% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences105
ratio0.048
matches
0"The air around the trees felt different, too – thinner, yet carrying a strange perfume, a heady mix of damp earth and a sweetness she couldn't identify, beyond any flower she knew."
1"The light here wasn't sunlight; it seemed to originate from *everywhere* at once, a soft, diffuse luminescence that painted the world in colours too vibrant to be real."
2"It wasn't just warmth anymore; it felt like it was trying to escape her, eager to reach whatever lay beyond that distortion."
3"This wasn't just a pocket between realms; it was a crossroads."
4"The ground still yielded; the air still sang its impossible song."
86.86% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1259
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"far off, delicate chimes"
1"ethereal, blue-green light."
adverbCount52
adverbRatio0.04130262112787927
lyAdverbCount18
lyAdverbRatio0.014297061159650517
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean13.3
std7.05
cv0.53
sampleLengths
017
110
212
324
432
519
69
725
820
916
108
112
1223
1316
1418
157
165
1714
1819
1912
2016
2115
2215
2311
247
2512
269
2714
2826
2928
3024
317
3224
337
348
351
362
379
3811
3917
4022
419
4221
4314
4411
4513
4613
4712
4810
4936
52.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3619047619047619
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners38
36.63% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"Somewhere, far off, delicate chimes"
ratio0.011
83.74% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences91
matches
0"It was a gentle thrum,"
1"Her black hair, usually straight"
2"Their faintly violet eyes scanned"
3"Her pale lavender eyes, ancient"
4"She turned neither left nor"
5"Its moonsilver hilt felt as"
6"She trusted Isolde's guidance, but"
7"It felt like a secret"
8"It was overwhelmingly sweet, a"
9"She looked down at her"
10"It wasn't empty silence, but"
11"She raised a hand, her"
12"It was like watching a"
13"Her crescent-shaped scar throbbed faintly,"
14"They stopped, their head tilted,"
15"Their violet eyes glowed brighter"
16"They gestured with a smoky"
17"It felt unnaturally cool, like"
18"It pulsed with a faint,"
19"She turned, her gaze sweeping"
ratio0.341
31.43% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount78
totalSentences91
matches
0"The gnarled branches of the"
1"Aurora Carter felt a familiar"
2"The Heartstone Pendant, nestled beneath"
3"It was a gentle thrum,"
4"The air around the trees"
5"Her black hair, usually straight"
6"Their faintly violet eyes scanned"
7"The shadows here clung to"
8"Nyx’s usual whisper of a"
9"Nyx murmured, their form rippling"
10"Isolde Varga, her impossibly long"
11"Her pale lavender eyes, ancient"
12"She turned neither left nor"
13"The grove seemed to part"
14"Isolde’s voice was like the"
15"Rory tightened her grip on"
16"Its moonsilver hilt felt as"
17"She trusted Isolde's guidance, but"
18"This place felt older than"
19"It felt like a secret"
ratio0.857
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount2
totalSentences91
matches
0"If time moved so erratically,"
1"Even in the strange, pervasive"
ratio0.022
14.05% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences61
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Her black hair, usually straight and falling to her shoulders, seemed to stir in a breeze that didn't exist."
1"Their faintly violet eyes scanned the boundary, not so much seeing as *feeling* the energy signatures that flickered like faulty neon signs to their senses."
2"The air hit Rory first, thick with a perfume that made her head spin."
3"The light here wasn't sunlight; it seemed to originate from *everywhere* at once, a soft, diffuse luminescence that painted the world in colours too vibrant to …"
4"Somewhere, far off, delicate chimes like spun glass sang a melody that shifted and reformed with every pulse of her own heartbeat."
5"Isolde smiled, a subtle parting of her lips that didn't reach her eyes."
6"Among them, the air seemed to waver, a subtle distortion that flickered like heat haze, yet it imparted a chill that had nothing to do with temperature."
7"Nyx’s shadowy form flowed towards the distortion, not walking but gliding, their eyes unblinking."
8"The flowers here seemed to wilt and twist as if recoiling from the distortion, their vibrant colours muted, their blossoms hanging heavy."
9"The hum that permeated the grove deepened, shifting into a low growl that seemed to vibrate through the very ground, even as the ground itself offered no resist…"
10"The pendant throbbed with a ferocity that was almost painful, a frantic, desperate rhythm against her chest."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags11
uselessAdditionCount6
matches
0"Nyx murmured, their form rippling"
1"Rory whispered, though the word felt wrong"
2"Nyx breathed, their voice a dry rustle"
3"She turned, her gaze sweeping over the impossible landscape"
4"Isolde said, her voice a low murmur"
5"Rory asked, her voice tight"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags9
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
1"Rory whispered (whisper)"
2"Nyx breathed (breathe)"
3"she marvelled (marvel)"
4"they stated (state)"
5"Nyx observed (observe)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.429
leniency0.857
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.571
66.7967%