| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 11 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 89.26% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1396 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1396 | | totalAiIsms | 37 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | | | 18 | | | 19 | | | 20 | | | 21 | | | 22 | | | 23 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "familiar" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "scanned" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "whisper" | | 7 | "uncanny" | | 8 | "weight" | | 9 | "traced" | | 10 | "pulsed" | | 11 | "silence" | | 12 | "vibrated" | | 13 | "throbbed" | | 14 | "echo" | | 15 | "symphony" | | 16 | "echoes" | | 17 | "velvet" | | 18 | "beacon" | | 19 | "stark" | | 20 | "shimmered" | | 21 | "chill" | | 22 | "resolve" | | 23 | "wavering" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 2 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | matches | | 0 | "felt a prickle" | | 1 | "was desperate" |
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| 0.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 10 | | narrationSentences | 96 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 2 | | totalWords | 1397 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 49 | | wordCount | 1254 | | uniqueNames | 11 | | maxNameDensity | 0.96 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Isolde" | | discoveredNames | | Carter | 1 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 1 | | Nyx | 10 | | Isolde | 8 | | Varga | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Fae-Forged | 3 | | Blade | 3 | | Fae | 6 | | Grove | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Carter" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Isolde" | | 4 | "Rory" | | 5 | "Blade" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 2.94% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 85 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like a secret the world had kept f" | | 1 | "felt like it was trying to escape her," | | 2 | "felt like a piece of her own resolve, c" | | 3 | "as if recoiling from the distortion, their vibrant colours muted, their blossoms hanging heavy" | | 4 | "growl that seemed to vibrate through the very ground, even as the ground itself offered no resistance" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 3.579 | | wordCount | 1397 | | matches | | 0 | "neither left nor" | | 1 | "not immediate, but like a slow bloom of colour" | | 2 | "not in her ears, but in the very marrow of her bones" | | 3 | "not a question but a fact" | | 4 | "not walking but gliding, their eyes unblinking" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 53.73 | | std | 31.51 | | cv | 0.586 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 114 | | 1 | 70 | | 2 | 10 | | 3 | 83 | | 4 | 19 | | 5 | 69 | | 6 | 28 | | 7 | 92 | | 8 | 49 | | 9 | 103 | | 10 | 11 | | 11 | 38 | | 12 | 50 | | 13 | 53 | | 14 | 57 | | 15 | 67 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 35 | | 18 | 67 | | 19 | 27 | | 20 | 51 | | 21 | 24 | | 22 | 109 | | 23 | 32 | | 24 | 22 | | 25 | 104 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 96 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 99.50% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 3 | | totalVerbs | 199 | | matches | | 0 | "was like watching" | | 1 | "was reacting" | | 2 | "was trying" |
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| 6.80% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 1 | | semicolonCount | 4 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.048 | | matches | | 0 | "The air around the trees felt different, too – thinner, yet carrying a strange perfume, a heady mix of damp earth and a sweetness she couldn't identify, beyond any flower she knew." | | 1 | "The light here wasn't sunlight; it seemed to originate from *everywhere* at once, a soft, diffuse luminescence that painted the world in colours too vibrant to be real." | | 2 | "It wasn't just warmth anymore; it felt like it was trying to escape her, eager to reach whatever lay beyond that distortion." | | 3 | "This wasn't just a pocket between realms; it was a crossroads." | | 4 | "The ground still yielded; the air still sang its impossible song." |
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| 86.86% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1259 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "far off, delicate chimes" | | 1 | "ethereal, blue-green light." |
| | adverbCount | 52 | | adverbRatio | 0.04130262112787927 | | lyAdverbCount | 18 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.014297061159650517 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 13.3 | | std | 7.05 | | cv | 0.53 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 12 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 32 | | 5 | 19 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 25 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 16 | | 14 | 18 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 5 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 12 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 15 | | 22 | 15 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 7 | | 25 | 12 | | 26 | 9 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 26 | | 29 | 28 | | 30 | 24 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 24 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 1 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 11 | | 39 | 17 | | 40 | 22 | | 41 | 9 | | 42 | 21 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 13 | | 46 | 13 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 10 | | 49 | 36 |
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| 52.70% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3619047619047619 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 36.63% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "Somewhere, far off, delicate chimes" |
| | ratio | 0.011 | |
| 83.74% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 31 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "It was a gentle thrum," | | 1 | "Her black hair, usually straight" | | 2 | "Their faintly violet eyes scanned" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes, ancient" | | 4 | "She turned neither left nor" | | 5 | "Its moonsilver hilt felt as" | | 6 | "She trusted Isolde's guidance, but" | | 7 | "It felt like a secret" | | 8 | "It was overwhelmingly sweet, a" | | 9 | "She looked down at her" | | 10 | "It wasn't empty silence, but" | | 11 | "She raised a hand, her" | | 12 | "It was like watching a" | | 13 | "Her crescent-shaped scar throbbed faintly," | | 14 | "They stopped, their head tilted," | | 15 | "Their violet eyes glowed brighter" | | 16 | "They gestured with a smoky" | | 17 | "It felt unnaturally cool, like" | | 18 | "It pulsed with a faint," | | 19 | "She turned, her gaze sweeping" |
| | ratio | 0.341 | |
| 31.43% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 78 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "The gnarled branches of the" | | 1 | "Aurora Carter felt a familiar" | | 2 | "The Heartstone Pendant, nestled beneath" | | 3 | "It was a gentle thrum," | | 4 | "The air around the trees" | | 5 | "Her black hair, usually straight" | | 6 | "Their faintly violet eyes scanned" | | 7 | "The shadows here clung to" | | 8 | "Nyx’s usual whisper of a" | | 9 | "Nyx murmured, their form rippling" | | 10 | "Isolde Varga, her impossibly long" | | 11 | "Her pale lavender eyes, ancient" | | 12 | "She turned neither left nor" | | 13 | "The grove seemed to part" | | 14 | "Isolde’s voice was like the" | | 15 | "Rory tightened her grip on" | | 16 | "Its moonsilver hilt felt as" | | 17 | "She trusted Isolde's guidance, but" | | 18 | "This place felt older than" | | 19 | "It felt like a secret" |
| | ratio | 0.857 | |
| 100.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | 0 | "If time moved so erratically," | | 1 | "Even in the strange, pervasive" |
| | ratio | 0.022 | |
| 14.05% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 61 | | technicalSentenceCount | 11 | | matches | | 0 | "Her black hair, usually straight and falling to her shoulders, seemed to stir in a breeze that didn't exist." | | 1 | "Their faintly violet eyes scanned the boundary, not so much seeing as *feeling* the energy signatures that flickered like faulty neon signs to their senses." | | 2 | "The air hit Rory first, thick with a perfume that made her head spin." | | 3 | "The light here wasn't sunlight; it seemed to originate from *everywhere* at once, a soft, diffuse luminescence that painted the world in colours too vibrant to …" | | 4 | "Somewhere, far off, delicate chimes like spun glass sang a melody that shifted and reformed with every pulse of her own heartbeat." | | 5 | "Isolde smiled, a subtle parting of her lips that didn't reach her eyes." | | 6 | "Among them, the air seemed to waver, a subtle distortion that flickered like heat haze, yet it imparted a chill that had nothing to do with temperature." | | 7 | "Nyx’s shadowy form flowed towards the distortion, not walking but gliding, their eyes unblinking." | | 8 | "The flowers here seemed to wilt and twist as if recoiling from the distortion, their vibrant colours muted, their blossoms hanging heavy." | | 9 | "The hum that permeated the grove deepened, shifting into a low growl that seemed to vibrate through the very ground, even as the ground itself offered no resist…" | | 10 | "The pendant throbbed with a ferocity that was almost painful, a frantic, desperate rhythm against her chest." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 11 | | uselessAdditionCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx murmured, their form rippling" | | 1 | "Rory whispered, though the word felt wrong" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed, their voice a dry rustle" | | 3 | "She turned, her gaze sweeping over the impossible landscape" | | 4 | "Isolde said, her voice a low murmur" | | 5 | "Rory asked, her voice tight" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 6 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx breathed (breathe)" | | 3 | "she marvelled (marvel)" | | 4 | "they stated (state)" | | 5 | "Nyx observed (observe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.429 | | leniency | 0.857 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.571 | |