Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95NVT3WCAH03EYB9PX69DN

Run Details

Duration:
56.0s
Cost:
$0.003155
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory Carter dried the rim of a pint glass, tracing the faint condensation with her thumb. The Raven’s Nest, Silas’s place, hummed with the lower thrum of a Tuesday night. Outside, Soho’s perpetual neon bled into the damp pavement, but inside, shadows clung to the walls, punctuated by the amber glow of the beer taps and the distant, melancholic blues drifting from a hidden speaker. Old maps, creased and faded, papered one wall, charting territories long since swallowed by time. Black-and-white photographs of stern-faced men and a few daring women stared out from another, their lives frozen in monochrome. Rory lived upstairs, above all this quiet history, a life stacked vertically, from the ghost-laced air of the bar to her own small flat, a world away from the pre-law lectures she’d fled years ago. Her delivery bag, grease-stained and familiar, sat propped against the bar. A man pushed through the heavy oak door, shaking rain from a collar that looked a size too large. He paused, letting his eyes adjust to the gloom, a frown creasing his brow as he scanned the room with a soft, uncertain gaze. He wore a suit that had once been fashionable, the kind that spoke of offices and meetings scheduled weeks in advance, now slightly rumpled, its shoulders drooping a touch. His light brown hair, thinning at the crown, was plastered to his forehead by the rain. He took a few hesitant steps deeper into the bar, his gaze sweeping over the occupied tables until it landed on Rory. His frown melted, replaced by a widening disbelief. He straightened, a hesitant smile beginning to etch itself onto his face, and started towards her, weaving a slightly awkward path around a couple engrossed in hushed conversation. "Rory?" the voice, tentative, a little higher than she remembered, broke the quiet current of the bar. "Aurora Carter? Is that really you?" Rory’s hand stilled on the glass. The sound of her full name, rarely used now, brought a prickle to her skin. She turned fully, her own gaze meeting his. Recognition flickered like a faulty bulb, a ghost from years past, a face she hadn’t consciously thought about in ages. Liam. From Cardiff. From before. "Liam." Her voice was steady, betraying none of the sudden jolt he’d caused. She set the damp glass down, leaning her forearms on the polished wood. "Wow. What are you doing here? Come for one of Silas’s 'special' ales?" A small, dry smile touched her lips. He stopped a few feet away, his eyes roving over her face, then down to the faded Yu-Fei Cheung’s logo on her uniform shirt before snapping back up. The uncertain smile faltered, replaced by a look that was hard to decipher – part shock, part confusion, and something else, something tinged with pity. "I… I just flew in for a conference across town," he stammered, gesturing vaguely with one hand. "Hadn't expected… I mean, you. Not here. Not like this." Rory’s eyebrow lifted a fraction of an inch. "Like what, Liam? Like a person who works in a bar in Soho?" He flushed, running a hand over his thinning hair. "No, no, that's not what I meant. It's just… you were always so… driven. Back in university. Professor Davies said you had the sharpest mind in the entire cohort, destined for the bench, not… not this." He trailed off, his gaze dropping again towards her stained delivery shirt beneath the bar apron. "Professor Davies," Rory repeated, the name tasting like chalk dust. "He wanted me in a courtroom, yes. Filled with stale arguments and even stalier ambitions. This," she gestured around the bar, the faint scent of wood polish and aged spirits, "is a lot livelier than his lecture hall. And considerably less predictable." "Predictable?" Liam scoffed, though it lacked conviction. "Rory, a bit of predictability is a good thing. Stability. I’m a senior partner at Davies & Finch now. Made partner last year. Hannah and I, we’ve got two kids. Little Freddie is starting school in September, and Sophie, she’s just turned five. Solid. Sensible. Building something." He puffed out his chest slightly, a man displaying the tangible proof of a life well-navigated. Rory just watched him, the slight crescent scar on her left wrist a faint silver line beneath the bar lights. She remembered Liam. He’d been decent, not part of the crowd that had made her life a misery, but always a bit too eager to please, too quick to nod at the professor’s pronouncements. He’d never really challenged anything. He’d taken the safe route, the one her parents had approved of from the moment she’d been accepted into the law program. And now he stood here, a living monument to that path, offering it up like a trophy. "That’s… good. For you," Rory said, her voice carefully neutral. She picked up another pint glass, the familiar weight grounding her. "Stable. And is Hannah… is she happy? With the dentistry?" Liam blinked, taken aback by the question, then nodded enthusiastically. "Oh, immensely! Loves it. Loves the predictability, she says. Knowing what tomorrow holds. Unlike all that… drama you left behind." He lowered his voice, leaning in conspiratorially, though his eyes still held that distant, confused look. "We heard some things, you know. Back in Cardiff. Evan. That he... well, the stories were not good. I always hoped you got away clean." Rory felt a cold knot tighten in her stomach that had nothing to do with Evan and everything to do with Liam’s interpretation of her escape. ‘Drama’ was such a sterile word for the jagged edges of her past. She’d fled because she’d had to. Fled a life that was suffocating her, a relationship that had threatened to break her. And she hadn’t gotten away ‘clean’; she’d gotten away battered, but she had gotten away. That was the victory. "One never truly leaves drama behind, Liam," she said softly, her gaze drifting towards the back of the bar where Silas, a figure of quiet, unshakeable calm, meticulously polished a long-necked bottle. His grey-streaked auburn hair was neatly trimmed, his hazel eyes sharp even at this distance. He’d seen and heard more than anyone in this city, a quiet sentinel in his own domain. Silas was stability of a different sort. "You just learn to carry it differently. Or sometimes, you learn to use it. What do you do at Davies & Finch, Liam? Besides making partner." His shoulders slumped a little at the implied challenge. "Conveyancing. Property law. Mergers and acquisitions for bigger firms. It's… detailed. Important work, ensuring smooth transitions." He looked up, meeting her eyes, a flicker of something like longing in their faded blue. "You know, Rory, I still have that copy of 'Great Expectations' you lent me. Remember? We were studying Dickens that year. Always thought you'd be the one to prosecute the Pip and Estellas of the world. Instead…" He gestured around again, his gaze lingering on the worn bar top, the faded maps. "This feels so… adrift." "Adrift?" Rory gave a short, bark-like laugh, devoid of humour. "Or anchored? Depends on what you’re trying to keep from sinking, doesn't it? Some people build ships. Others build lighthouses. You've built a very comfortable harbour, Liam. I'm still learning to navigate the tides. But at least I'm moving." She twisted the pint glass between her hands, its coolness a familiar sensation against her skin. "You look tired, Liam. All that stability must take a toll." He offered a weak smile. "Long hours. Demanding clients. But it’s rewarding. Knowing you’re providing… security. What about you? Delivering for that Chinese place? Is that… is that what you want to be doing?" Rory met his earnest, concerned gaze. The ease with which he assumed her life was a failure gnawed at her. He saw the delivery uniform, he saw the bar, and his mind filled in the blanks with disappointment. He couldn't fathom that the "drama" she left behind had forced her to build a new foundation, brick by careful brick, aided by a man who understood shadows. He couldn't see the intelligence Silas nurtured, the quick thinking he honed. "What I *want* to be doing," Rory began, selecting her words with precision, "is getting paid enough to not worry about rent. And learning things. Silas here," she nodded towards the barman, whose silver signet ring glinted as he reached for a bottle behind the counter, "he's a font of… of interesting information. And skills." She saw Liam’s eyes flick towards Silas, a flicker of unease disturbing his features at the mention of the bar owner. Silas, with his quiet authority and the faint limp that betrayed a past far more complex than conveyancing. "I deliver their food, yes. And sometimes, I help Mr. Blackwood behind the bar. Learn the trade. Keep my wits sharp. It’s a good life." Liam traced the rim of an imaginary glass on the bar. "A 'good life'. Right. I suppose the rent isn't too bad then? Living above the bar?" "It's a roof over my head," Rory replied curtly, the conversation circling back to practicalities that felt like accusations. "Cheaper than anything else in this city. And Silas makes sure I don't get… I don't get into trouble." She met Liam’s gaze, a challenge in her bright blue eyes. "You know, Liam, that crescent scar on my wrist?" She glanced down at it. "Got that when I was seven, trying to impress my dad by climbing his favourite apple tree. He wanted me to be careful. I wanted to be brave. I ended up with a scar and a stern lecture. Seems some lessons take a very long time to sink in." Liam’s eyes followed hers. He remained silent for a long moment, his gaze fixed somewhere beyond her wrist, on the past they no longer shared. The weight of unspoken years settled between them, heavy as the London fog outside. He’d expected to reconnect, perhaps find the old sparks in a familiar face. Instead, he found a stranger cloaked in familiarity, a life built on choices he couldn't comprehend, her eyes holding a depth he’d never seen before, a depth that spoke of battles fought and a precarious peace won. He looked at his hands, then back at her, the carefully constructed confidence of Davies & Finch seeming to chip away under the quiet hum of The Raven's Nest. The conversation had certainly gone somewhere, but not anywhere he'd anticipated. It had moved from a chance encounter to an examination of two vastly different lives; a quiet, almost imperceptible interrogation of success and survival. His mouth opened, then closed. He seemed to search for words adequate to bridge the chasm that had opened between them. He looked around the bar again, as if seeking an anchor, something familiar to grasp onto. Silas, the man with the silver ring and the quiet authority, remained impassive, a silent figure in his dimly lit kingdom. Liam’s gaze drifted back to Rory, his faded blue eyes now clouded with a regret that was both his and, perhaps, hers. "You were always brave, Rory," he finally managed, the words a fragile echo of their shared past. "More than anyone realised." The silence that followed was thick, filled with the clinking of glasses from the other end of the bar and the distant wail A siren. Rory Carter merely inclined her head, a gesture that could have meant anything.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:12:39.011Z" 2/25/2026, 1:12:39 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
18.18% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount4
adverbTags
0"she gestured around [around]"
1"she said softly [softly]"
2"He gestured around [around]"
3"Rory replied curtly [curtly]"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.629
leniency1
rawRatio0.182
effectiveRatio0.182
71.17% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1908
totalAiIsmAdverbs11
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count3
1
adverb"really"
count2
2
adverb"carefully"
count2
3
adverb"truly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"very"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"really"
2"carefully"
3"truly"
4"softly"
5"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
16.14% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1908
totalAiIsms32
found
0
word"tracing"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count5
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etch"
count1
5
word"flickered"
count1
6
word"tinged"
count1
7
word"eyebrow"
count1
8
word"predictable"
count2
9
word"tangible"
count1
10
word"navigated"
count1
11
word"weight"
count2
12
word"stomach"
count1
13
word"sentinel"
count1
14
word"ensuring"
count1
15
word"flicker"
count2
16
word"comfortable"
count1
17
word"navigate"
count1
18
word"complex"
count1
19
word"traced"
count1
20
word"unspoken"
count1
21
word"constructed"
count1
22
word"encounter"
count1
23
word"echo"
count1
24
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"tracing"
1"familiar"
2"gloom"
3"scanned"
4"etch"
5"flickered"
6"tinged"
7"eyebrow"
8"predictable"
9"tangible"
10"navigated"
11"weight"
12"stomach"
13"sentinel"
14"ensuring"
15"flicker"
16"comfortable"
17"navigate"
18"complex"
19"traced"
20"unspoken"
21"constructed"
22"encounter"
23"echo"
24"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences87
matches
0"d with pity"
1"a flicker of unease"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"started to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences101
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen76
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1909
ratio0.001
matches
0"want"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions47
wordCount1326
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Raven2
Nest2
Silas7
Tuesday1
Soho1
Rory15
Cardiff1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Liam10
Evan1
London1
Davies1
Finch1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Raven"
2"Silas"
3"Rory"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Liam"
7"Evan"
8"Finch"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
2"London"
globalScore0.934
windowScore1
51.32% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"something like longing in their faded blue"
1"felt like accusations"
2"as if seeking an anchor, something familiar to grasp onto"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.524
wordCount1909
matches
0"not part of the crowd that had made her life a misery, but always a bit too eager to please, too quick to nod at the pr"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean68.18
std36.81
cv0.54
sampleLengths
0145
1110
236
323
454
546
653
727
821
961
1052
1170
1298
1331
1471
1579
1697
1797
1876
1934
2078
21119
2227
23112
24153
2580
2621
2738
97.20% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences87
matches
0"was plastered"
1"been accepted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs211
matches
0"was suffocating"
57.99% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences101
ratio0.03
matches
0"The uncertain smile faltered, replaced by a look that was hard to decipher – part shock, part confusion, and something else, something tinged with pity."
1"And she hadn’t gotten away ‘clean’; she’d gotten away battered, but she had gotten away."
2"It had moved from a chance encounter to an examination of two vastly different lives; a quiet, almost imperceptible interrogation of success and survival."
86.08% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1264
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"past far more complex"
adverbCount62
adverbRatio0.0490506329113924
lyAdverbCount21
lyAdverbRatio0.01661392405063291
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences101
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences101
mean18.9
std13.42
cv0.71
sampleLengths
016
114
235
315
419
535
611
719
824
929
1016
1122
128
1328
1417
156
166
1715
188
1920
201
212
222
2313
2413
2520
2628
2725
2817
2910
308
3113
329
3352
3410
3542
367
3763
3820
393
4031
415
4222
4317
4410
4511
4610
4710
4836
4925
61.39% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.4158415841584158
totalSentences101
uniqueOpeners42
39.68% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"Instead, he found a stranger"
ratio0.012
10.48% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount44
totalSentences84
matches
0"Her delivery bag, grease-stained and"
1"He paused, letting his eyes"
2"He wore a suit that"
3"His light brown hair, thinning"
4"He took a few hesitant"
5"His frown melted, replaced by"
6"He straightened, a hesitant smile"
7"She turned fully, her own"
8"Her voice was steady, betraying"
9"She set the damp glass"
10"He stopped a few feet"
11"he stammered, gesturing vaguely with"
12"He flushed, running a hand"
13"He trailed off, his gaze"
14"she gestured around the bar,"
15"He puffed out his chest"
16"She remembered Liam."
17"He’d been decent, not part"
18"He’d never really challenged anything."
19"He’d taken the safe route,"
ratio0.524
1.67% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences84
matches
0"Rory Carter dried the rim"
1"The Raven’s Nest, Silas’s place,"
2"Rory lived upstairs, above all"
3"Her delivery bag, grease-stained and"
4"A man pushed through the"
5"He paused, letting his eyes"
6"He wore a suit that"
7"His light brown hair, thinning"
8"He took a few hesitant"
9"His frown melted, replaced by"
10"He straightened, a hesitant smile"
11"the voice, tentative, a little"
12"Rory’s hand stilled on the"
13"The sound of her full"
14"She turned fully, her own"
15"Recognition flickered like a faulty"
16"Her voice was steady, betraying"
17"She set the damp glass"
18"A small, dry smile touched"
19"He stopped a few feet"
ratio0.917
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
ratio0
18.63% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences46
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"He wore a suit that had once been fashionable, the kind that spoke of offices and meetings scheduled weeks in advance, now slightly rumpled, its shoulders droop…"
1"He stopped a few feet away, his eyes roving over her face, then down to the faded Yu-Fei Cheung’s logo on her uniform shirt before snapping back up."
2"The uncertain smile faltered, replaced by a look that was hard to decipher – part shock, part confusion, and something else, something tinged with pity."
3"He’d been decent, not part of the crowd that had made her life a misery, but always a bit too eager to please, too quick to nod at the professor’s pronouncement…"
4"Rory felt a cold knot tighten in her stomach that had nothing to do with Evan and everything to do with Liam’s interpretation of her escape."
5"Fled a life that was suffocating her, a relationship that had threatened to break her."
6"Instead, he found a stranger cloaked in familiarity, a life built on choices he couldn't comprehend, her eyes holding a depth he’d never seen before, a depth th…"
7"Rory Carter merely inclined her head, a gesture that could have meant anything."
56.82% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags22
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory said, her voice carefully neutral"
1"She twisted, its coolness a familiar sensation against her skin"
2"Rory replied curtly, the conversation circling back to practicalities that felt like accusations"
92.86% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"he stammered (stammer)"
1"Rory repeated (repeat)"
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.114
72.4348%