Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95NX4K6KQZ68P9S9XWB54X

Run Details

Duration:
29.7s
Cost:
$0.012793
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The frost-crisp grass of Richmond Park crunched under Aurora’s boots, a rhythmic sound that felt too loud in the unnatural stillness of the evening. To her left, Nyx moved like a smear of ink dropped into clear water, their form expanding and contracting against the gnarled trunks of the ancient oaks. The air here tasted of damp earth and car exhaust, the familiar tang of London at dusk, but as they approached the circle of bone-white stones, the scent curdled into something sharper. Aurora stopped, the crescent scar on her wrist itching beneath her sleeve. The space between the two tallest standing stones didn't look like empty air. It rippled, a heat haze on a road that didn't exist, twisting the view of the trees beyond into a kaleidoscope of impossible greens. “The boundary is thin tonight.” Nyx’s voice barely carried, a sound like dry leaves skittering across a stone floor. Their violet eyes flickered with a faint, steady luminescence, reflecting in the dark glass of the distortion. Aurora reached for the Heartstone Pendant beneath her coat. The crimson gem burned through the fabric, pulsing against her skin with the frantic beat of a trapped bird’s heart. “It’s reacting. Is there a portal to Hel inside?” Nyx’s silhouette elongated, a shadow reaching toward the shimmering Veil. “Distinctions between the realms blur in this place. The Grove belongs to the Half-Fae, but the roots of this world go deep enough to touch the veins of others. Step through, Aurora Carter. Do not hesitate, or the Veil will catch you like a fly in amber.” Aurora took a breath, stepped forward, and pushed into the ripple. The sensation felt like submerged ice. The world didn't just change; it inverted. The pressure slammed against her eardrums, popping them with a sharp crack. For a heartbeat, she wasn't standing on grass or earth, but suspended in a viscous, glowing jelly that tasted of ozone and copper. Then, the resistance snapped. She stumbled forward, landing on her hands and knees. The ground beneath her palms wasn't dirt. It felt like velvet-covered iron, warm and vibrating with a low-frequency hum. Aurora looked down at her hands. Small, translucent blue flowers sprouted between her fingers, blooming from the impact of her weight. They unfurled in seconds, their petals shaped like tiny, reaching hands, before dissolving into shimmering dust that smelled of orange peel. “Get up.” Nyx stood several feet away, their form more solid here, the jagged edges of their shadow sharpening into something resembling a high-collared coat. Aurora stood, brushing the glowing dust from her trousers. She looked up and forgot to breathe. Above, the sky wasn't the bruised purple of a London twilight. It was a swirling vortex of deep indigo and shimmering gold, devoid of stars but filled with drifting, bioluminescent spores that moved like schools of fish through the air. The trees didn't grow upward; they twisted in corkscrews of silver bark, their leaves wide, flat fans of iridescent glass that chimed softly as the wind moved through them. “This isn't Richmond anymore.” Aurora’s voice sounded hollow, the acoustics of the Grove dampening the sound as if they were standing in a room lined with heavy drapes. “Time is a suggestion here, not a rule.” Nyx pointed toward a path lined with glowing toadstools the size of dinner plates. “Do not wander. The flora here has an appetite for the unwary.” They moved deeper into the woods. Every step revealed a new impossibility. A stream ran uphill to their right, the water glowing with a soft, milky light and carrying the sound of distant, echoing laughter. Aurora watched a dragonfly with four sets of gossamer wings land on a branch; it didn't fly away when they passed, but instead turned its head—a miniature, porcelain-white human face—to watch them with curiosity. The unease crawled up Aurora's spine. The beauty of the place felt predatory, like the bright colors of a poisonous snake. The Heartstone continued its frantic pulsing, the heat now intense enough to make her sweat despite the cool, honey-scented breeze. “Why is it so quiet?” Aurora’s hand drifted to her waist, searching for a weapon she didn't yet possess. “The Grove listens.” Nyx didn't turn around, but their shadow stretched toward her, a dark tether between them. “Every word spoken here is a debt. Every breath is a gift. The Seer does not tolerate noise that lacks purpose.” The path opened into a wide clearing where the silver trees stood in a perfect, silent circle. In the center, the ground dipped into a shallow bowl filled with white sand that shimmered like crushed diamonds. A woman stood there, her silver hair cascading down her back like a frozen waterfall. She wore a gown of woven mist that seemed to drift away from her body even though there was no wind in the clearing. Isolde Varga didn't turn as they approached. She stood perfectly still, her feet resting on the white sand. Aurora noticed immediately that the woman left no indentations, no footprints to mark her presence. “The daughter of the barrister brings the shadow of a dead man to my hearth.” Isolde’s voice wasn't a whisper. It was a melody played on a cracked cello, resonant and haunting. She turned, her pale lavender eyes locking onto Aurora’s blue ones. There was no warmth in her gaze, only the terrifying span of three centuries of observation. “We seek the path to Dymas.” Aurora kept her voice steady, though the shimmer of the Seer’s skin made her vision swim. “The Prince of Gluttony has something that belongs to the mortal world.” Isolde moved, her motion so fluid it looked like a series of still images stitched together. She was suddenly inches away from Aurora, the scent of lavender and ancient parchment following her. She reached out, her fingers hovering just over the Heartstone Pendant. “A gift from a devil.” Isolde’s lips curved into a smile that didn't reach her eyes. “It burns for its home. It wants to return to the amber skies and the endless feasts. You carry a beacon, little bird. The Wardens will find you if the demons do not.” “Then give me something to fight them with.” Aurora didn't flinch. She met the lavender stare with the stubbornness she’d inherited from her father. Isolde’s laughter sounded like breaking glass. She reached into the air, her hand disappearing into a fold of space that shouldn't have been there. When she pulled it back, she held a dagger. The metal was moonsilver, a slender, leaf-shaped blade that seemed to drink the bioluminescence of the grove and spit it back out as a cold, white glow. “Moonsilver for the girl who walks in the dark.” Isolde held the hilt toward Aurora. The pommel was set with a single, unblinking eye of clear quartz. “This was forged in the heart of the Winter Court. It does not know the warmth of blood, only the chill of the void. It will cut through the wards of Hel as easily as a hot wire through wax.” Aurora reached out. The moment her fingers closed around the hilt, a jolt of pure ice shot up her arm, freezing the marrow in her bones. The cold was absolute, a biting, hollow sensation that made her breath hitch in a cloud of silver vapor. “It is a burden, not just a tool.” Isolde leaned in, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial hiss. “The blade demands a price of focus. Lose your will, and it will drink the heat from your heart until you are as hollow as your shadow friend.” Nyx shifted, their violet eyes narrowing. “She has the strength for it.” “Does she?” Isolde stepped back, her form beginning to blur at the edges, dissolving into the swirling spores of the Grove. “The Prince of Gluttony is not a creature of hunger, Aurora Carter. He is a creature of excess. He will give you everything you want until you drown in it. Remember the weight of the silver in your hand. It is the only thing that is real in the realms of gold and amber.” The silver trees began to vibrate, their glass leaves chiming in a deafening crescendo. The white sand beneath Aurora’s feet swirled into the air, stinging her cheeks. The indigo sky descended, a heavy blanket of violet mist that swallowed the clearing and the Seer in a single, suffocating sweep. “Aurora!” Nyx’s voice sounded far away, as if they were shouting from the bottom of a well. Aurora gripped the hilt of the moonsilver blade, the cold reaching her chest, meeting the frantic warmth of the Heartstone. The two sensations battled for dominance, a pulse of fire and a surge of ice that made her knees buckle. She slammed the blade into the ground, using it as a literal anchor as the world around her began to spin. The shimmering flowers around her shriveled and died in the wake of the dagger’s frost. The light of the Grove flickered, the gold and indigo replaced by a sudden, jarring vision of a sky the color of a setting sun—a thick, sickly amber that smelled of roasting meat and rotting fruit. A heavy, humid heat pressed against her skin, tasting of grease. The sound of a thousand clinking forks and knives echoed in the distance, a cacophony of indulgence that threatened to drown out her own thoughts. “Don't look at the sky!” Nyx’s hand—solid and cold—clamped onto her shoulder. Aurora forced her gaze down. The white sand was gone. Beneath her was a carpet of overripe grapes, their skins bursting under her weight, the juice dark and thick like clotted blood. The trees weren't silver anymore; they were gnarled vines heavy with fruit that wept syrup.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.2
leniency0.4
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"perfectly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"perfectly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1636
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"familiar"
count1
2
word"kaleidoscope"
count1
3
word"flickered"
count2
4
word"velvet"
count1
5
word"weight"
count3
6
word"echoing"
count1
7
word"porcelain"
count1
8
word"perfect"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
10
word"cascading"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count1
12
word"warmth"
count3
13
word"beacon"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"pulse"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"cacophony"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"familiar"
2"kaleidoscope"
3"flickered"
4"velvet"
5"weight"
6"echoing"
7"porcelain"
8"perfect"
9"shimmered"
10"cascading"
11"whisper"
12"warmth"
13"beacon"
14"chill"
15"pulse"
16"echoed"
17"cacophony"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences86
matches(empty)
76.41% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount4
narrationSentences86
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen54
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1631
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1283
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.56
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Aurora20
Nyx9
London2
Heartstone4
Pendant2
Veil1
Grove3
Varga1
Seer2
Isolde8
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Nyx"
2"Heartstone"
3"Grove"
4"Varga"
5"Seer"
6"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.721
windowScore0.667
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount6
matches
0"felt like submerged ice"
1"felt like velvet-covered iron, warm and"
2"mist that seemed to drift away from her body even though there was no wind in the clearing"
3"looked like a series of still images stit"
4"sounded like breaking glass"
5"blade that seemed to drink the bioluminescence of the grove and spit it back out as a cold, white glow"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1631
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean32.62
std21.87
cv0.67
sampleLengths
083
149
25
331
429
59
610
747
811
952
1070
112
1223
1316
1469
154
1624
1734
1869
1941
205
2114
2239
2375
2433
2515
2644
2734
2843
2949
308
3116
3260
339
3418
3540
3645
3746
3812
392
4019
4154
4249
431
4416
4561
4651
4736
4812
4947
97.10% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences86
matches
0"was gone"
1"were gnarled"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs205
matches
0"wasn't standing"
1"were standing"
2"were shouting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount5
semicolonCount4
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences105
ratio0.057
matches
0"The world didn't just change; it inverted."
1"The trees didn't grow upward; they twisted in corkscrews of silver bark, their leaves wide, flat fans of iridescent glass that chimed softly as the wind moved through them."
2"Aurora watched a dragonfly with four sets of gossamer wings land on a branch; it didn't fly away when they passed, but instead turned its head—a miniature, porcelain-white human face—to watch them with curiosity."
3"The light of the Grove flickered, the gold and indigo replaced by a sudden, jarring vision of a sky the color of a setting sun—a thick, sickly amber that smelled of roasting meat and rotting fruit."
4"“Don't look at the sky!” Nyx’s hand—solid and cold—clamped onto her shoulder."
5"The trees weren't silver anymore; they were gnarled vines heavy with fruit that wept syrup."
76.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1296
adjectiveStacks4
stackExamples
0"Small, translucent blue flowers"
1"miniature, porcelain-white human"
2"cool, honey-scented breeze."
3"slender, leaf-shaped blade"
adverbCount33
adverbRatio0.02546296296296296
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.007716049382716049
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean15.53
std9.56
cv0.616
sampleLengths
024
127
232
312
413
524
65
714
817
99
1020
119
1210
1347
1411
156
167
1712
1823
194
209
217
2212
236
2415
2521
262
2723
289
297
3011
3129
3229
334
3424
3522
3612
376
386
3923
4034
416
4215
4320
445
4514
4618
4721
4817
4919
40.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.2761904761904762
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners29
38.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"Then, the resistance snapped."
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences86
matches
0"It rippled, a heat haze"
1"Their violet eyes flickered with"
2"She stumbled forward, landing on"
3"It felt like velvet-covered iron,"
4"They unfurled in seconds, their"
5"She looked up and forgot"
6"It was a swirling vortex"
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"She wore a gown of"
9"She stood perfectly still, her"
10"It was a melody played"
11"She turned, her pale lavender"
12"She was suddenly inches away"
13"She reached out, her fingers"
14"She met the lavender stare"
15"She reached into the air,"
16"She slammed the blade into"
ratio0.198
12.33% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount77
totalSentences86
matches
0"The frost-crisp grass of Richmond"
1"The air here tasted of"
2"Aurora stopped, the crescent scar"
3"The space between the two"
4"It rippled, a heat haze"
5"Nyx’s voice barely carried, a"
6"Their violet eyes flickered with"
7"Aurora reached for the Heartstone"
8"The crimson gem burned through"
9"Nyx’s silhouette elongated, a shadow"
10"Aurora took a breath, stepped"
11"The sensation felt like submerged"
12"The world didn't just change;"
13"The pressure slammed against her"
14"She stumbled forward, landing on"
15"The ground beneath her palms"
16"It felt like velvet-covered iron,"
17"Aurora looked down at her"
18"They unfurled in seconds, their"
19"Nyx stood several feet away,"
ratio0.895
58.14% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences86
matches
0"To her left, Nyx moved"
ratio0.012
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount16
matches
0"The frost-crisp grass of Richmond Park crunched under Aurora’s boots, a rhythmic sound that felt too loud in the unnatural stillness of the evening."
1"To her left, Nyx moved like a smear of ink dropped into clear water, their form expanding and contracting against the gnarled trunks of the ancient oaks."
2"It rippled, a heat haze on a road that didn't exist, twisting the view of the trees beyond into a kaleidoscope of impossible greens."
3"For a heartbeat, she wasn't standing on grass or earth, but suspended in a viscous, glowing jelly that tasted of ozone and copper."
4"They unfurled in seconds, their petals shaped like tiny, reaching hands, before dissolving into shimmering dust that smelled of orange peel."
5"Nyx stood several feet away, their form more solid here, the jagged edges of their shadow sharpening into something resembling a high-collared coat."
6"It was a swirling vortex of deep indigo and shimmering gold, devoid of stars but filled with drifting, bioluminescent spores that moved like schools of fish thr…"
7"The trees didn't grow upward; they twisted in corkscrews of silver bark, their leaves wide, flat fans of iridescent glass that chimed softly as the wind moved t…"
8"Aurora’s voice sounded hollow, the acoustics of the Grove dampening the sound as if they were standing in a room lined with heavy drapes."
9"In the center, the ground dipped into a shallow bowl filled with white sand that shimmered like crushed diamonds."
10"The metal was moonsilver, a slender, leaf-shaped blade that seemed to drink the bioluminescence of the grove and spit it back out as a cold, white glow."
11"The cold was absolute, a biting, hollow sensation that made her breath hitch in a cloud of silver vapor."
12"The indigo sky descended, a heavy blanket of violet mist that swallowed the clearing and the Seer in a single, suffocating sweep."
13"The two sensations battled for dominance, a pulse of fire and a surge of ice that made her knees buckle."
14"The light of the Grove flickered, the gold and indigo replaced by a sudden, jarring vision of a sky the color of a setting sun—a thick, sickly amber that smelle…"
15"The sound of a thousand clinking forks and knives echoed in the distance, a cacophony of indulgence that threatened to drown out her own thoughts."
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0"Nyx didn't, but their shadow stretched toward her, a dark tether between them"
1"Isolde leaned in, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial hiss"
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