Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95P0QQ0V19TG0VV1AGV2KP

Run Details

Duration:
29.1s
Cost:
$0.012071
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rainwater sluiced off the distinctive green neon sign of the Raven's Nest, casting shivering emerald ripples across the Soho pavement. Detective Harlow Quinn stood deep in the shadows of a recessed doorway across the street, her salt-and-pepper hair cropped so close it felt the bite of the October wind. She adjusted the worn leather strap of her watch. 23:14. The military precision of her posture hadn't wavered in three hours. The heavy oak door of the bar groaned open. A sliver of warm, amber light cut through the gloom, followed by Tomás Herrera. He hunched his shoulders, pulling a dark pea coat tight against his olive skin. He clutched a reinforced medical bag to his chest as if it contained his own heart. Quinn didn't call out. She didn't move until he reached the corner and glanced back, his warm brown eyes flickering with a frantic energy that didn't match the quiet Soho night. Tomás broke into a jog. Quinn stepped out of the shadows, her stride long and rhythmic. The chase began. "Herrera! Police! Stop right there!" The shout didn't slow him. If anything, the former paramedic found a higher gear, his boots splashing through deep puddles as he sprinted toward the labyrinth of Charing Cross. Quinn kept her breathing even, counting the beats. She didn't let the rain-slicked stones dictate her pace. Tomás swerved between a pair of late-night revelers, nearly knocking a gin-and-tonic from a woman’s hand. He dived down a narrow alleyway choked with overflowing rubbish bins and the scent of rotting citrus. Quinn followed, her sharp jaw set. She vaulted a sodden cardboard box, her eyes locked on the Saint Christopher medallion swinging wildly outside Tomás’s coat. They tore through the city, a pair of ghosts in the downpour. Quinn felt the familiar ache in her knees, a reminder of eighteen years on the force, but the memory of DS Morris fueled her. The way his desk had stayed empty. The way the atmospheric pressure seemed to drop whenever the clique was mentioned. Tomás reached a rusted chain-link fence at the edge of a construction site near Camden. He scrambled over it with a desperation that left a scrap of his coat snagged on the wire. Quinn arrived seconds later, scaling the metal mesh and dropping onto the mud on the other side. "You're making this worse, Tomás! Just talk to me!" Tomás didn't look back. He sprinted toward the gaping maw of a derelict Tube station entrance. The signs for the Northern Line were faded, obscured by decades of soot and graffiti. Plywood boards that should have sealed the entrance hung limp on broken hinges. He disappeared into the black. Quinn slowed as she reached the threshold. The air emanating from the tunnel didn't smell like the London Underground. It didn't carry the scent of ozone or electricity. It smelled of old parchment, copper, and something sharp—like vinegar and burnt sugar. She drew her torch, the beam cutting a circle of white light through the subterranean gloom. The stairs were cracked, draped in thick, grey cobwebs that didn't move despite the wind howling above. "Herrera, there’s nowhere to go down here." Her voice echoed, flat and deadened by the heavy air. She descended. Each step took her further from the rhythmic pulse of the city and deeper into a silence so thick it pressed against her eardrums. At the bottom of the second flight of stairs, the concrete walls gave way to something older. Victorian brickwork, blackened by time, lined a corridor that shouldn't have existed on the official blueprints. A figure stepped from the shadows twenty yards ahead. It wasn't Tomás. The man was skeletal, wearing a coat made of moth-eaten velvet. He stood before a heavy iron gate that barred the path deeper into the tunnels. He didn't speak. He simply held out a hand, palm up. "Metropolitan Police. Out of the way." Quinn held her badge aloft, but the torchlight died as it hit the man’s skin, as if he absorbed the light. "The price is a bone, seeker. Small or large. Old or new." The man’s voice sounded like dry leaves skittering across a grave. Quinn felt a cold sweat that had nothing to do with the rain. Her hand moved toward her belt, but Tomás appeared on the other side of the iron bars, his face pale in the unnatural light. "Give him something, Detective! Or turn back! You don't know what's behind this gate!" Tomás held up a small, polished white cylinder—a finger bone, perhaps—and dropped it into the gatekeeper’s hand. The iron bars shivered and melted upward into the ceiling like smoke. "I’m not letting you go, Tomás. Not after what happened to Morris." Quinn lunged forward. She scanned the ground, her eyes catching a discard near a pile of rubble—a bleached, jagged fragment of something calcium-white. She didn't think about what animal it had belonged to. She snatched it up and thrust it into the gatekeeper’s cold, clammy palm. The gatekeeper’s fingers closed over the offering. He stepped aside with a mocking bow. Quinn crossed the threshold. The temperature plummeted. The tunnel opened into a vast, vaulted chamber that had once been a platform, but the tracks were gone. In their place sat rows of stalls lit by flickering braziers that burned with purple and green flames. The Veil Market. The air hummed with a low-frequency vibration that made Quinn’s teeth ache. To her left, a woman with eyes the color of oil slicks was stirring a vat of iridescent liquid. To her right, a man with three arms carefully arranged glass jars containing shimmering, translucent moths. "Keep your hands to yourself, Quinn! Don't touch the merchandise!" Tomás was retreating down an aisle lined with hanging bundles of dried roots and what looked like raven wings. The market was a cacophony of hushed whispers in languages that sounded like clicking stones and rushing water. Quinn pushed past a stall selling "Bottled Regret," her military bearing the only thing keeping her upright. The sheer impossibility of the space threatened to overwhelm her. The ceiling was lost in a swirling mist, and the far end of the station seemed to stretch for miles. "Stop!" She reached for Tomás’s shoulder, her fingers catching the strap of his medical bag. He spun around, his face a mask of terror. "You shouldn't have followed me here! This place... it doesn't care about your laws or your badge!" He pointed toward a group of tall, hooded figures standing near a fountain that flowed with white sand. They turned in unison, their movements synchronized and fluid. Quinn felt the weight of her service weapon at her hip, but it felt like a toy in this place. "Tell me what happened three years ago. Tell me how Morris ended up in a coma with no physical injuries." Quinn's voice didn't shake. She planted her feet, ignoring the hooded figures as they began to drift toward them, their feet making no sound on the stone floor. Tomás gripped his Saint Christopher medallion so hard his knuckles turned white. The scar on his forearm seemed to glow faintly under the market’s strange light. "He saw something he wasn't supposed to see. Just like you're doing right now. The clique... they don't just deal in information, Quinn. They deal in things that haven't been named yet." A merchant with skin like cracked porcelain leaned over her counter, offering Quinn a small lead casket. "A memory for a memory, Detective? I have the one you lost. The night the lights went out in the morgue." Quinn ignored the woman, her eyes locked on Tomás. The hooded figures were closing the circle. The air grew heavy with the smell of wet earth and ancient dust. "I’m taking you in, Tomás. We’re walking out of here, back up those stairs, and you’re going to give me a statement." Tomás backed away, his heels hitting the edge of a stall stacked with jars of preserved organs. "Look around you! You think you can just cuff me and walk out? They’ll keep you here as a curiosity. An exhibit." The tallest of the hooded figures raised a hand. The white sand in the fountain began to swirl upward, forming a shimmering curtain between Quinn and the exit. The detective glanced back at the tunnel she’d emerged from. It was narrowing, the brickwork beginning to knit together like a closing wound. She looked at the leather watch on her wrist. The hands were spinning backward, the ticking sound replaced by a wet, rhythmic thumping. She had a second to decide. She could lung for Tomás and try to fight their way through a crowd of things that defied logic, or she could sprint for the vanishing tunnel and leave the only lead she’d had in three years behind. Quinn tightened her grip on her torch, the plastic casing slick with her cold sweat. She stepped toward Tomás, her jaw locked. "I’ve spent three years in the dark. I’m not leaving until someone turns on the lights." Tomás shook his head, a single tear tracking through the grime on his cheek. "God help you, Harlow. There are no lights down here." The sand curtain solidified into a wall of white glass. The market fell deathly silent, every eye—human and otherwise—fixing on the woman who dared to bring the heat of the surface world into the cold heart of the Veil. Quinn didn't flinch. She reached into her pocket, pulled out her handcuffs, and let the steel ratchets click, the sound echoing like a gunshot through the vaulted chamber.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences18
tagDensity0.056
leniency0.111
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
96.89% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1609
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
34.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1609
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"wavered"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count2
2
word"rhythmic"
count3
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"reminder"
count1
5
word"maw"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"silence"
count1
9
word"velvet"
count1
10
word"grave"
count1
11
word"scanned"
count1
12
word"cacophony"
count1
13
word"synchronized"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"porcelain"
count1
16
word"single tear"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
highlights
0"wavered"
1"gloom"
2"rhythmic"
3"familiar"
4"reminder"
5"maw"
6"echoed"
7"pulse"
8"silence"
9"velvet"
10"grave"
11"scanned"
12"cacophony"
13"synchronized"
14"weight"
15"porcelain"
16"single tear"
17"echoing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences105
matches(empty)
34.01% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount6
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"began to"
2"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences122
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1604
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
73.13% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions61
wordCount1366
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.54
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho2
Harlow1
Quinn21
October1
Tomás17
Herrera1
Charing1
Cross1
Saint2
Christopher2
Morris1
Camden1
Tube1
Northern1
Line1
London1
Underground1
Veil2
Market1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Tomás"
4"Herrera"
5"Saint"
6"Christopher"
7"Morris"
8"Market"
places
0"Soho"
1"Camden"
2"London"
globalScore0.731
windowScore0.833
37.64% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences89
glossingSentenceCount4
matches
0"sounded like dry leaves skittering across"
1"looked like raven wings"
2"sounded like clicking stones and rushing w"
3"felt like a toy in this place"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1604
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences122
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean28.14
std17.3
cv0.615
sampleLengths
070
153
231
319
45
546
658
756
850
99
1044
115
1241
1333
147
1536
1633
1712
1837
196
2021
2112
2248
2314
2429
2512
2646
2714
284
2940
303
3147
3210
3337
3447
351
3623
3717
3847
3920
4028
4126
4232
4317
4421
4529
4622
4717
4822
4951
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences105
matches
0"was mentioned"
1"were gone"
2"was lost"
50.52% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount5
totalVerbs223
matches
0"was stirring"
1"was retreating"
2"were closing"
3"was narrowing"
4"were spinning"
49.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences122
ratio0.033
matches
0"It smelled of old parchment, copper, and something sharp—like vinegar and burnt sugar."
1"Tomás held up a small, polished white cylinder—a finger bone, perhaps—and dropped it into the gatekeeper’s hand."
2"She scanned the ground, her eyes catching a discard near a pile of rubble—a bleached, jagged fragment of something calcium-white."
3"The market fell deathly silent, every eye—human and otherwise—fixing on the woman who dared to bring the heat of the surface world into the cold heart of the Veil."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1381
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small, polished white cylinder—"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.01955104996379435
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.005792903692976104
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences122
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences122
mean13.15
std6.94
cv0.528
sampleLengths
020
129
29
31
411
59
614
714
816
94
1027
115
1211
133
145
155
1624
178
189
1916
2017
216
2219
2312
2424
257
2613
2715
2818
2917
309
314
3212
3315
3413
355
367
3712
389
3913
4016
4117
427
4310
442
4524
4617
4716
489
493
34.30% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats19
diversityRatio0.23140495867768596
totalSentences121
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences103
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.08% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences103
matches
0"She adjusted the worn leather"
1"He hunched his shoulders, pulling"
2"He clutched a reinforced medical"
3"She didn't move until he"
4"She didn't let the rain-slicked"
5"He dived down a narrow"
6"She vaulted a sodden cardboard"
7"They tore through the city,"
8"He scrambled over it with"
9"He sprinted toward the gaping"
10"He disappeared into the black."
11"It didn't carry the scent"
12"It smelled of old parchment,"
13"She drew her torch, the"
14"Her voice echoed, flat and"
15"It wasn't Tomás."
16"He stood before a heavy"
17"He didn't speak."
18"He simply held out a"
19"Her hand moved toward her"
ratio0.34
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount98
totalSentences103
matches
0"Rainwater sluiced off the distinctive"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood deep"
2"She adjusted the worn leather"
3"The military precision of her"
4"The heavy oak door of"
5"A sliver of warm, amber"
6"He hunched his shoulders, pulling"
7"He clutched a reinforced medical"
8"Quinn didn't call out."
9"She didn't move until he"
10"Tomás broke into a jog."
11"Quinn stepped out of the"
12"The chase began."
13"The shout didn't slow him."
14"Quinn kept her breathing even,"
15"She didn't let the rain-slicked"
16"Tomás swerved between a pair"
17"He dived down a narrow"
18"Quinn followed, her sharp jaw"
19"She vaulted a sodden cardboard"
ratio0.951
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"If anything, the former paramedic"
1"To her left, a woman"
2"To her right, a man"
ratio0.029
39.34% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences69
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"He clutched a reinforced medical bag to his chest as if it contained his own heart."
1"She didn't move until he reached the corner and glanced back, his warm brown eyes flickering with a frantic energy that didn't match the quiet Soho night."
2"The stairs were cracked, draped in thick, grey cobwebs that didn't move despite the wind howling above."
3"Victorian brickwork, blackened by time, lined a corridor that shouldn't have existed on the official blueprints."
4"Quinn held her badge aloft, but the torchlight died as it hit the man’s skin, as if he absorbed the light."
5"In their place sat rows of stalls lit by flickering braziers that burned with purple and green flames."
6"The air hummed with a low-frequency vibration that made Quinn’s teeth ache."
7"He pointed toward a group of tall, hooded figures standing near a fountain that flowed with white sand."
8"She planted her feet, ignoring the hooded figures as they began to drift toward them, their feet making no sound on the stone floor."
9"The market fell deathly silent, every eye—human and otherwise—fixing on the woman who dared to bring the heat of the surface world into the cold heart of the Ve…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
77.4359%