Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95PXTHMHTM9V246QBXKX5V

Run Details

Duration:
32.8s
Cost:
$0.003781
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The air in Richmond Park was crisp, carrying the scent of damp earth and decaying leaves, the familiar promise of autumn. Rory pulled her worn jacket tighter, the thin fabric doing little against the London chill. Beside her, Nyx moved with a liquid grace, a silhouette that seemed to absorb the fading sunlight, their faint violet eyes fixed ahead on paths only they could divine. Isolde, a vision of ethereal silver, floated a pace in front, her pale lavender gaze scanning the ancient oaks that ringed the lesser-trodden paths. They'd been walking for what felt like an hour, the city's din a distant hum that had long since faded. Rory’s internal compass, usually reliable, felt warped. The trees grew denser, their branches interlocking to form a canopy so thick it blotted out the sky. The light shifted, becoming an underwater green, then a strange, bruised purple. "Are we nearly there?" Rory’s voice was softer than usual, swallowed by the unnerving quiet. Isolde offered no direct answer, her silver hair catching nonexistent light. "The boundary thins where the roots run deep." Rory glanced at Nyx. They offered a slight incline of their head, a gesture that might have been agreement or simply acknowledgment. Their voice, when it came, was like dry leaves skittering across stone. "The air remembers." Remembering what? Rory couldn't guess. Her hand instinctively went to the crescent scar on her left wrist, a nervous tic she’d never quite shaken. Her fingers brushed against the cool silver chain of the Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt. It remained inert now, offering no clue to the direction they were headed, a silent promise of its own otherworldly provenance. Then, they saw them. Massive, ancient oak trunks, impossibly thick, stood in a rough circle. Not just trees, but the bones of the world, their bark cragged like old maps, their branches reaching skyward with a silent, timeless strength. At the base of each, smooth, grey standing stones, etched with patterns that seemed to shift and writhe in Rory’s peripheral vision. They weren't carved; they looked grown, part of the stone itself, impossibly old, impossibly *present*. "The stones," Rory breathed, feeling a prickle travel up her spine. This wasn't just old forest. This was something else. The air here was different. Thicker, charged, smelling not of damp earth but of ozone and something sweet, like a hundred different, impossibly potent wildflowers. Isolde paused at the edge of the circle, her bare feet disappearing into the mossy ground without leaving a print. She turned, her ethereal form seeming to sharpen in the strange light. "The Gates of Whispers," she said, her voice carrying a note of ancient reverence. "Here, the world folds." Nyx stepped forward, their humanoid shadow stretching and reforming as they moved. They paused between two of the largest standing stones, their wispy form flickering as if caught in a phantom breeze. "The Veil is thin here," they whispered, their voice a chilling caress. "A place of echo." Rory tightened her grip on the rough wool of her jacket. She could see through the gap between the stones, but it wasn’t the same world. The distance seemed wrong, the colors too vibrant, too saturated. A soft, golden light pulsed, not from any discernible source, but from the very air. The wildflowers bloomed in profusion, a chaotic tapestry of impossible hues – violets deeper than twilight, blues like crushed sapphires, golds that shimmered with an inner fire. They were unlike any flowers she'd ever seen, some with petals like spun glass, others with stamen that glowed faintly. And they bloomed everywhere, pushing up through moss, clinging to the roots of the ancient oaks, even clinging to the standing stones themselves. "Welcome," Isolde said, her voice a soft murmur, "to the Fae Grove." Rory took a hesitant step forward, then another. The air thickened, pressing against her skin like velvet. It felt warm, impossibly so for an English autumn. As her boot nudged the mossy ground between the standing stones, a low hum vibrated through her soles. The world snapped into sharper focus, colors becoming almost painful in their intensity. The light was diffuse, soft, like perpetual dawn or dusk, yet it seemed to emanate from everything. She could *feel* it on her skin, a gentle, almost caressing warmth. Her pendant. She could feel a faint thrum against her chest, steadier than before. It wasn't the familiar pulse she'd felt near Hel portals, but something else, a slower, deeper rhythm, like a heartbeat from the earth itself. "What is this place?" she whispered again, her voice barely audible. "A place that is and is not," Isolde replied, her lips curving into a hint of a smile that didn't quite reach her pale lavender eyes. "Where roots entwine with starlight, and moments stretch like spun silk." Nyx moved deeper into the verdant expanse, their shadow flowing over the impossibly bright flowers and mossy ground. They seemed to shimmer, their form solidifying slightly in the peculiar Fae light. "Here," Nyx’s voice drifted back, "the weight of other worlds is less." Rory watched them, a knot of unease tightening in her stomach. Other worlds. She carried the weight of one world, her own mundane existence of deliveries and bills, and the lingering shadow of Evan. Now she was stepping into another, a Fae-touched pocket where time did strange things and the air itself hummed with ancient magic. They ventured further. The trees didn't just stand; they *watched*. Their gnarled branches seemed to twist into knowing faces, their leaves rustled with whispers that weren't carried by any wind, but seemed to emanate from the wood itself, a language of rustles and creaks that hinted at sentience. A stream, its water unnaturally clear, flowed from a grotto draped with moss that didn't simply grow, but *drank* ambient light and *bled* it back in soft, pulsing waves of emerald and gold. The sound it made wasn't merely water over stones; it was like liquid bells, a melody that both soothed and unnerved, a constant, ethereal music weaving through the clearing. Rory knelt by its edge, peering into the depths. She saw not the familiar silt and pebbles of an earthly stream, but swirling patterns of pure, distilled light that coalesced and dissolved like incandescent smoke. It wasn't merely clear water; it was water that contained the very essence of luminescence, vibrant and alive. "The water remembers birth and endings," Isolde said, appearing beside her as silently as thought, her silver hair a cascade of moonlight. Rory startled, though she’d long since ceased expecting to hear Isolde arrive. "Each drop a universe of moments, strung like pearls of pure essence." "Pearls of what?" Rory asked, her hand instinctively going to the Heartstone Pendant, feeling its muted, steady thrum against her skin. Isolde’s pale lavender eyes, impossibly ancient and wise, seemed to gaze past Rory, into the shimmering continuum of the stream. "Of seeing and unseeing. Of what *is*, and what might be. It flows from the heart of this crossing, a reflection of the worlds it separates and connects." She gestured to the stream with a slender hand that left no impression on the soft ground. "Drink, if you seek clarity. Or caution." Rory hesitated. She was parched, but the shimmering light within the water felt suspect—like gazing into an inverted sun. She could feel the pendant pulsing, a steady, insistent warmth. Was it a warning against drinking, a caution for her mortal tongue? Or an encouragement, a sign that this water, imbued with the strange energies of this place, was meant for her, connected to the pendant's own obscure origins from Dymas? Nyx had stopped a little ahead, their form partially obscured by a stand of colossal ferns, their fronds impossibly large, feathered, and veined with threads of pure, incandescent gold. They reached out a shadowy hand, not quite touching, but their fingers seemed to dissolve into the air itself, as if absorbing the very essence of the Fae light. "The hour is long, and short," Nyx reported, their voice a chilling whisper that seemed to coil around the strange, sweet air. "The sun, unbound, paints eternity." Rory frowned. "The sun? It’s gone the moment we stepped in. The light… it’s different." She glanced at her wrist, at her ordinary digital watch. The seconds ticked by with a leaden slowness, each one feeling like an eternity, yet the overall quality of the diffuse, ethereal light remained utterly consistent, as if fixed in a single, eternal moment. "The light," Isolde corrected gently, her voice like wind chimes touched by a breeze only they could feel, "is *eternal* here. A distillation of pure being, a constant bloom of radiance. It does not rise and set, you see, but simply *is*. A reflection, perhaps, of the source of all light beyond the outer Veil. Or what lies within its deepest memory." The statement hung in the air, heavy and inexplicable, a paradox woven into the fabric of the grove. Rory’s mind, sharp and analytical from her aborted legal studies, struggled to reconcile it. Eternal light? A place outside of accepted time? She felt a subtle disorientation creep in, a sense of her own footing becoming less secure, as if the very ground beneath her was shifting and reconfiguring. Her watch, her perfectly ordinary, ticking watch, felt like a crude, clumsy relic from another dimension. The very passage of time itself felt fluid, unreliable, stretching and compressing like a breath held too long, or a moment drawn out into an aeon. This was The Fae Grove. A sanctuary, a pocket, a place of profound wonder and creeping disquiet. Rory felt an undeniable pull, a reluctant fascination that warred with her ingrained caution. It was alien, overwhelming, yet parts of it, the deep, inherent magic of it, resonated with the newly awakened powers stirring within her—the subtle, steady hum of the pendant, the cold, sharp promise of Isolde's blade. She clutched the pendant, its warmth no longer a mere curiosity but a potential guide, a silent compass in this bewildering labyrinth. The Fae Grove wasn't just a location; it was a threshold, a visceral crossing into a deeper, stranger reality. She could feel it now, a subtle warping of her senses, a new awareness blooming in the core of her being, like a seed cracking open. The scent of a thousand impossibly fragrant flowers was intoxicating, but it masked a deeper, wilder fragrance—the unmistakable, primal scent of worlds colliding, of magic untamed and unbound. She took a deep breath, filling her lungs with the strangely sweet, thick air, preparing herself for whatever secrets the Grove, and indeed the very Veil it bordered, might reveal. She tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade, its constant, chilling cold a welcome, tangible solidity against the dizzying marvels surrounding her, a silent promise of defense in a realm where her accustomed defenses seemed to matter less and less.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:13:13.817Z" 2/25/2026, 1:13:13 AM
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num_input_audio_prompt(null)
num_media_completion0
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"she whispered again [again]"
1"Nyx’s voice drifted back [back]"
2"Isolde corrected gently [gently]"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.591
leniency1
rawRatio0.231
effectiveRatio0.231
72.53% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1820
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"very"
count6
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"utterly"
count1
3
adverb"gently"
count1
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"slightly"
2"utterly"
3"gently"
4"perfectly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1820
totalAiIsms39
found
0
word"familiar"
count3
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"otherworldly"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"charged"
count1
6
word"chilling"
count3
7
word"echo"
count1
8
word"pulsed"
count1
9
word"chaotic"
count1
10
word"tapestry"
count1
11
word"shimmered"
count1
12
word"velvet"
count1
13
word"vibrated"
count1
14
word"intensity"
count1
15
word"warmth"
count3
16
word"could feel"
count4
17
word"pulse"
count1
18
word"silk"
count1
19
word"weight"
count1
20
word"stomach"
count1
21
word"carried the weight"
count1
22
word"depths"
count1
23
word"whisper"
count1
24
word"sense of"
count1
25
word"sanctuary"
count1
26
word"profound"
count1
27
word"resonated"
count1
28
word"potential"
count1
29
word"tangible"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"chill"
2"scanning"
3"otherworldly"
4"etched"
5"charged"
6"chilling"
7"echo"
8"pulsed"
9"chaotic"
10"tapestry"
11"shimmered"
12"velvet"
13"vibrated"
14"intensity"
15"warmth"
16"could feel"
17"pulse"
18"silk"
19"weight"
20"stomach"
21"carried the weight"
22"depths"
23"whisper"
24"sense of"
25"sanctuary"
26"profound"
27"resonated"
28"potential"
29"tangible"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences103
matches(empty)
0.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount9
narrationSentences103
filterMatches
0"watch, watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences111
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen62
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans8
markdownWords8
totalWords1819
ratio0.004
matches
0"present"
1"feel"
2"watched"
3"drank"
4"bled"
5"is"
6"eternal"
7"is"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions59
wordCount1624
uniqueNames18
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Nyx7
Isolde10
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Rory18
English1
Hel1
Fae6
Evan1
Fae-touched1
Dymas1
Grove3
Veil1
Fae-Forged1
Blade1
persons
0"Nyx"
1"Isolde"
2"Pendant"
3"Rory"
4"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Heartstone"
4"Hel"
5"Fae"
6"Dymas"
7"Grove"
globalScore0.946
windowScore0.833
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences88
glossingSentenceCount7
matches
0"silhouette that seemed to absorb the fading sunlight, their faint violet eyes fixed ahead on paths only they could divine"
1"felt like an hour, the city's din a dis"
2"patterns that seemed to shift and writhe in Rory’s peripheral vision"
3"quite reach her pale lavender eyes"
4"as if absorbing the very essence of the Fae light"
5"not quite touching, but their fingers seemed to dissolve into the air itself, as if absorbing the very essence of the Fae light"
6"whisper that seemed to coil around the strange, sweet air"
7"felt like a crude, clumsy relic from an"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches7
per1kWords3.848
wordCount1819
matches
0"Not just trees, but the bones of the world, their bark cragged like old maps, th"
1"not of damp earth but of ozone"
2"not from any discernible source, but from the very air"
3"not the familiar silt and pebbles of an earthly stream, but swirling patterns of pure, distilled light"
4"not quite touching, but their fingers seemed to dissolve into the air itself, as if"
5"not rise and set, you see, but simply *is*"
6"no longer a mere curiosity but"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences111
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean62.72
std46.11
cv0.735
sampleLengths
089
157
215
319
437
560
676
745
850
948
10121
1112
1286
1338
1411
1537
1643
1756
18163
1946
2021
2172
2270
2358
2427
2559
2662
27109
28232
95.04% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences103
matches
0"were headed"
1"was parched"
2"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs246
matches
0"was stepping"
1"was shifting"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount5
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences111
ratio0.081
matches
0"They weren't carved; they looked grown, part of the stone itself, impossibly old, impossibly *present*."
1"The wildflowers bloomed in profusion, a chaotic tapestry of impossible hues – violets deeper than twilight, blues like crushed sapphires, golds that shimmered with an inner fire."
2"The trees didn't just stand; they *watched*."
3"The sound it made wasn't merely water over stones; it was like liquid bells, a melody that both soothed and unnerved, a constant, ethereal music weaving through the clearing."
4"It wasn't merely clear water; it was water that contained the very essence of luminescence, vibrant and alive."
5"She was parched, but the shimmering light within the water felt suspect—like gazing into an inverted sun."
6"It was alien, overwhelming, yet parts of it, the deep, inherent magic of it, resonated with the newly awakened powers stirring within her—the subtle, steady hum of the pendant, the cold, sharp promise of Isolde's blade."
7"The Fae Grove wasn't just a location; it was a threshold, a visceral crossing into a deeper, stranger reality."
8"The scent of a thousand impossibly fragrant flowers was intoxicating, but it masked a deeper, wilder fragrance—the unmistakable, primal scent of worlds colliding, of magic untamed and unbound."
95.76% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1628
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount73
adverbRatio0.04484029484029484
lyAdverbCount31
lyAdverbRatio0.019041769041769043
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences111
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences111
mean16.39
std10.2
cv0.622
sampleLengths
021
115
229
324
420
57
618
712
815
911
108
114
1218
1312
143
152
163
1719
1815
1921
204
2111
2224
2322
2415
2511
265
274
285
2920
3020
3112
3214
334
3412
3520
3612
374
3811
3915
4010
4115
4227
4320
4423
4512
468
479
489
4918
42.04% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.3063063063063063
totalSentences111
uniqueOpeners34
34.36% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Then, they saw them."
ratio0.01
71.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences97
matches
0"They'd been walking for what"
1"They offered a slight incline"
2"Their voice, when it came,"
3"Her hand instinctively went to"
4"Her fingers brushed against the"
5"It remained inert now, offering"
6"They weren't carved; they looked"
7"She turned, her ethereal form"
8"she said, her voice carrying"
9"They paused between two of"
10"they whispered, their voice a"
11"She could see through the"
12"They were unlike any flowers"
13"It felt warm, impossibly so"
14"She could *feel* it on"
15"She could feel a faint"
16"It wasn't the familiar pulse"
17"she whispered again, her voice"
18"They seemed to shimmer, their"
19"She carried the weight of"
ratio0.371
16.70% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount86
totalSentences97
matches
0"The air in Richmond Park"
1"Rory pulled her worn jacket"
2"Isolde, a vision of ethereal"
3"They'd been walking for what"
4"Rory’s internal compass, usually reliable,"
5"The trees grew denser, their"
6"The light shifted, becoming an"
7"Rory’s voice was softer than"
8"Isolde offered no direct answer,"
9"Rory glanced at Nyx."
10"They offered a slight incline"
11"Their voice, when it came,"
12"Rory couldn't guess."
13"Her hand instinctively went to"
14"Her fingers brushed against the"
15"It remained inert now, offering"
16"They weren't carved; they looked"
17"Rory breathed, feeling a prickle"
18"This wasn't just old forest."
19"This was something else."
ratio0.887
51.55% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences97
matches
0"Now she was stepping into"
ratio0.01
27.31% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences68
technicalSentenceCount11
matches
0"Beside her, Nyx moved with a liquid grace, a silhouette that seemed to absorb the fading sunlight, their faint violet eyes fixed ahead on paths only they could …"
1"Isolde, a vision of ethereal silver, floated a pace in front, her pale lavender gaze scanning the ancient oaks that ringed the lesser-trodden paths."
2"At the base of each, smooth, grey standing stones, etched with patterns that seemed to shift and writhe in Rory’s peripheral vision."
3"They paused between two of the largest standing stones, their wispy form flickering as if caught in a phantom breeze."
4"The wildflowers bloomed in profusion, a chaotic tapestry of impossible hues – violets deeper than twilight, blues like crushed sapphires, golds that shimmered w…"
5"A stream, its water unnaturally clear, flowed from a grotto draped with moss that didn't simply grow, but *drank* ambient light and *bled* it back in soft, puls…"
6"She saw not the familiar silt and pebbles of an earthly stream, but swirling patterns of pure, distilled light that coalesced and dissolved like incandescent sm…"
7"It wasn't merely clear water; it was water that contained the very essence of luminescence, vibrant and alive."
8"The seconds ticked by with a leaden slowness, each one feeling like an eternity, yet the overall quality of the diffuse, ethereal light remained utterly consist…"
9"She felt a subtle disorientation creep in, a sense of her own footing becoming less secure, as if the very ground beneath her was shifting and reconfiguring."
10"Rory felt an undeniable pull, a reluctant fascination that warred with her ingrained caution."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"she said, her voice carrying a note of ancient reverence"
1"they whispered, their voice a chilling caress"
2"Isolde said, her voice a soft murmur,"
3"she whispered again, her voice barely audible"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags10
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"she whispered again (whisper)"
3"Nyx reported (report)"
4"Isolde corrected gently (correct)"
dialogueSentences22
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.455
59.6727%