Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95Q6B0Y9HTWWHTKSKF5RBR

Run Details

Duration:
19.5s
Cost:
$0.009052
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The ground under Rory’s boots shifted, not with earth, but with a sudden, lurching emptiness. One moment, the damp, cool air of the Fae Grove clung to her skin, the next, a dry, oppressive heat smothered her. A gasp caught in her throat. The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her sternum, a deep crimson warmth spreading through her tunic, mirroring the sharp pulse in her own veins. Her fingers instinctively wrapped around the hilt of the Fae-Forged Blade. The moonsilver felt like a shard of ice against her palm, a frigid anchor in the sudden, cloying warmth. A low, resonant hum pulsed through the air, vibrating against her teeth, a sound like a thousand distant, contented sighs. Rory’s eyes, bright blue and wide, swept across the alien vista. Above, the sky poured a thick, warm amber light over everything, not a uniform wash, but like honey slowly bleeding down across a canvas. Clouds, swollen and indistinct, drifted through the syrupy expanse, staining patches of the horizon with bruised violet and deep plum. “This is Dymas,” Rory murmured, the name feeling foreign on her tongue. Her breath caught on the heavy fragrance saturating the air—a dizzying perfume of overripe fruit, dark spices, and something vaguely metallic. The mixture tickled her nose, dense and almost intoxicating. Nyx materialized beside her, a wavering column of shadow deepening to solid form. Their violet eyes, faintly glowing, took in the scene. “The air tastes of indulgences,” Nyx’s voice whispered, a current of wind through dry leaves, barely audible above the pervasive hum. “Sweetness clings to it like a shroud.” The ground beneath them felt soft, spongy. It was not grass, but a luxuriant moss, the colour of aged Bordeaux, yielding underfoot. Sparkling threads of what looked like spun sugar or crystallized nectar crisscrossed the moss, catching the amber light and scattering it in blinding, sugary glints. Isolde stood a few feet away, entirely still. Her silver hair, long as a waterfall, brushed the sparkling moss. Her pale lavender eyes seemed to see beyond the immediate, fixed on a point in the dizzying distance. No footprints marked her presence on the yielding ground. “Here, hunger’s gnawing maw finds false solace,” Isolde’s voice chimed, delicate as bells, yet resonating with an undercurrent of something vast and ancient. “Beauty here is but a gilded cage, built of yearning fulfilled.” Rory pushed forward, the Fae-Forged Blade a steady weight. Towering structures of vegetation rose before them, impossibly green and vibrant. Vines, thicker than old tree trunks, coiled upward, their smooth skin iridescent, shifting from emerald to jade with every subtle pulse of the amber light. Their leaves, flat and wide as serving platters, shimmered with a dewy sheen. From these vines hung clusters of fruit, grotesque in their perfection. Some were spheres the size of small pumpkins, their skins a rich, mottled purple, glowing with an internal luminescence. Others dangled like swollen teardrops, striped crimson and gold, exuding a persistent, sweet aroma that made Rory’s stomach clench with an unfamiliar longing. She reached out, hesitant, to touch one of the enormous purple orbs. The skin felt cool, smooth, surprisingly firm. A faint vibration hummed beneath her fingertips, a quiet, sustained *thrum*. “Do not partake, mortal,” Nyx’s voice warned from behind her. “The fruits of Dymas entrap as much as they nourish.” Rory pulled her hand back, a prickle of unease surfacing. The beauty here felt predatory, a lure. She noticed that the moss beneath her foot was not just red; in places, it pulsed with a fainter, deeper crimson, as if it had absorbed something rich and dark. Tiny, iridescent insects, their wings like stained glass, hovered around the fruit, drunk on the heady scents. Some lay unmoving, tiny husks on the moss, spent. They moved deeper into this living, edible landscape. The air grew thicker, hotter still. The distant hum resolved into a cacophony of sound: faint, syrupy music, the chime of bells, the distant clatter of what might have been cutlery, and laughter, full and throaty, carried on waves of cloying sweetness. A river, wide and sluggish, appeared through a parting in the gigantic vines. It flowed with a liquid that was not water, but a viscous, ruby-red current, swirling with a rich, fermented fragrance. Dark, glossy petals, large as dinner plates, drifted languidly on its surface, stirring faint ripples of shimmering crimson. On the opposite bank, colossal structures, carved from polished obsidian and something that gleamed like crystallized sugar, glittered under the amber sky. They were not human-built, their angles strange, their proportions overwhelming. “Feasts unending, yet no true satisfaction,” Isolde observed, her gaze following the river’s lazy flow. “The soul hungers here, but grows only fatter with empty fare.” Rory paused at the river’s edge, leaning closer. The ruby liquid felt warm, almost hot, even from a few feet away. A faint steam rose from its surface, carrying the scent of plums and dark wine. She felt a strange pull, a desire to touch it, to taste it, despite Nyx’s warning. The sheer *abundance* of Dymas pressed in on her, a physical weight. Every sense screamed with overstimulation. Beyond the river, through a vast, arching entryway in one of the sugar-crystal structures, Rory glimpsed a procession. Figures moved, indistinct in the distance, draped in flowing garments that shimmered. They carried aloft platters piled high with glistening delicacies, moving with a ponderous, almost dreamlike slowness. “Those are the Dymasian acolytes,” Nyx explained, their form rippling, becoming more ethereal in the deeper gloom cast by the colossal buildings. “Bound in service, their existence a perpetual indulgence.” The path ahead opened into a vast garden, more ordered than the wild tangle of vines they had navigated. Here, trees with silver bark bore fruits like enormous, ripe peaches, their fuzz catching the light like soft down. Bushes dripped with berries that resembled clusters of polished emeralds and sapphires. Statues, carved from what looked like pure chocolate, stood amid the foliage, their forms voluptuous and serene, melting ever so slightly in the pervasive warmth. A sound, a low guttural moan, echoed from deeper within the garden. It was not one of pain, but of profound, unadulterated pleasure. Rory instinctively tightened her grip on the Fae-Forged Blade. Its cold presence offered a small, reassuring counterpoint to the oppressive heat and sweetness. She felt a shiver, not of cold, but of a deep disquiet. This place, for all its beauty, vibrated with an unsettling excess, a profound, consuming appetite. Each step deeper plunged them into a more profound wonderland. The very air changed, taking on a heavier floral note, mixed with an undertone of something richer, almost musky. Bees, impossibly large, their bodies fuzzy and striped in crimson and gold, buzzed lethargic, their legs heavy with brilliant orange pollen, as thick as flour. They moved slowly from blossom to blossom, on flowers the size of cartwheels, their petals unfurling in brilliant displays of fuchsia, indigo, and chartreuse. Rory felt a dull ache in her temples, a dizzying effect from the overwhelming sensory input. She focused on the cold weight of the blade in her hand, the thin scar on her left wrist a small, sharp reminder of Earth. “Is this… all there is?” Rory asked, the question escaping her lips almost without conscious thought. “Just… food?” Isolde turned her head, her lavender eyes distant, yet piercing. “The hunter deems the prey ‘all there is’ until the trap is sprung,” Isolde spoke, her voice light, like glass chimes. “A sweet banquet hides a sharper hunger, child. Here, souls become ingredients, and the feast, unending.” A sudden gust of warm, spiced air buffeted them, carrying a wave of music now clearer – a deep, resonating organ, accompanied by ethereal, sustained singing. A colossal archway, formed entirely of what appeared to be interlinked, glowing white bone, stood ahead. Through it, a great golden light pulsed, beckoning.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"languidly"
count1
2
adverb"ever so slightly"
count1
3
adverb"very"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"languidly"
2"ever so slightly"
3"very"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsms38
found
0
word"lurching"
count1
1
word"oppressive"
count2
2
word"throbbed"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count3
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count3
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"crystallized"
count2
8
word"maw"
count1
9
word"solace"
count1
10
word"yearning"
count1
11
word"weight"
count3
12
word"shimmered"
count2
13
word"stomach"
count1
14
word"resolved"
count1
15
word"cacophony"
count1
16
word"desire"
count1
17
word"crystal"
count1
18
word"glistening"
count1
19
word"gloom"
count1
20
word"navigated"
count1
21
word"echoed"
count1
22
word"profound"
count3
23
word"vibrated"
count1
24
word"input"
count1
25
word"reminder"
count1
highlights
0"lurching"
1"oppressive"
2"throbbed"
3"warmth"
4"pulse"
5"pulsed"
6"wavering"
7"crystallized"
8"maw"
9"solace"
10"yearning"
11"weight"
12"shimmered"
13"stomach"
14"resolved"
15"cacophony"
16"desire"
17"crystal"
18"glistening"
19"gloom"
20"navigated"
21"echoed"
22"profound"
23"vibrated"
24"input"
25"reminder"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences81
matches
0"felt a shiver"
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences81
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"appeared to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences88
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords2
totalWords1310
ratio0.002
matches
0"thrum"
1"abundance"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount1197
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity0.92
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory11
Fae4
Grove1
Heartstone1
Pendant1
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Bordeaux1
Nyx5
Dymas1
Earth1
Isolde5
persons
0"Rory"
1"Pendant"
2"Nyx"
3"Dymas"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Fae"
1"Grove"
globalScore1
windowScore1
56.25% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like a shard of ice against her pa"
1"looked like spun sugar or crystallized ne"
2"looked like pure chocolate, stood amid th"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords4.58
wordCount1310
matches
0"not with earth, but with a sudden, lurching emptiness"
1"not a uniform wash, but like honey slowly bleeding down across a canvas"
2"not grass, but a luxuriant moss, the colour of aged Bordeaux, yielding unde"
3"not water, but a viscous, ruby-red current, swirling with a rich, fermented"
4"not one of pain, but of profound, unadulterated pleasure"
5"not of cold, but of a deep disquiet"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"noticed that the"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean50.38
std25.69
cv0.51
sampleLengths
096
175
242
322
428
547
646
734
8111
930
1020
1173
1250
1383
1426
1569
1646
1730
1875
1973
2078
2141
2218
2310
2437
2550
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs167
matches(empty)
45.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences88
ratio0.034
matches
0"Her breath caught on the heavy fragrance saturating the air—a dizzying perfume of overripe fruit, dark spices, and something vaguely metallic."
1"She noticed that the moss beneath her foot was not just red; in places, it pulsed with a fainter, deeper crimson, as if it had absorbed something rich and dark."
2"A sudden gust of warm, spiced air buffeted them, carrying a wave of music now clearer – a deep, resonating organ, accompanied by ethereal, sustained singing."
82.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1203
adjectiveStacks3
stackExamples
0"lay unmoving, tiny husks"
1"viscous, ruby-red current, swirling"
2"great golden light pulsed,"
adverbCount40
adverbRatio0.03325020781379884
lyAdverbCount14
lyAdverbRatio0.011637572734829594
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences88
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences88
mean14.89
std6.4
cv0.43
sampleLengths
015
122
26
323
411
519
620
711
824
920
1012
1121
129
1313
149
1521
167
177
1815
1925
208
2111
2218
239
2423
2511
269
2711
2825
2913
3011
3119
3223
3312
347
3511
3610
3710
3810
397
4030
4117
429
438
446
4536
4613
4720
4818
4922
75.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4772727272727273
totalSentences88
uniqueOpeners42
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Dark, glossy petals, large as"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences81
matches
0"Her fingers instinctively wrapped around"
1"Her breath caught on the"
2"Their violet eyes, faintly glowing,"
3"It was not grass, but"
4"Her silver hair, long as"
5"Her pale lavender eyes seemed"
6"Their leaves, flat and wide"
7"She reached out, hesitant, to"
8"She noticed that the moss"
9"They moved deeper into this"
10"It flowed with a liquid"
11"They were not human-built, their"
12"She felt a strange pull,"
13"They carried aloft platters piled"
14"It was not one of"
15"Its cold presence offered a"
16"She felt a shiver, not"
17"They moved slowly from blossom"
18"She focused on the cold"
ratio0.235
34.07% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount69
totalSentences81
matches
0"The ground under Rory’s boots"
1"A gasp caught in her"
2"The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against"
3"Her fingers instinctively wrapped around"
4"The moonsilver felt like a"
5"A low, resonant hum pulsed"
6"Rory’s eyes, bright blue and"
7"Rory murmured, the name feeling"
8"Her breath caught on the"
9"The mixture tickled her nose,"
10"Nyx materialized beside her, a"
11"Their violet eyes, faintly glowing,"
12"Nyx’s voice whispered, a current"
13"The ground beneath them felt"
14"It was not grass, but"
15"Isolde stood a few feet"
16"Her silver hair, long as"
17"Her pale lavender eyes seemed"
18"Isolde’s voice chimed, delicate as"
19"Rory pushed forward, the Fae-Forged"
ratio0.852
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
82.32% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences59
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The Heartstone Pendant throbbed against her sternum, a deep crimson warmth spreading through her tunic, mirroring the sharp pulse in her own veins."
1"Others dangled like swollen teardrops, striped crimson and gold, exuding a persistent, sweet aroma that made Rory’s stomach clench with an unfamiliar longing."
2"She noticed that the moss beneath her foot was not just red; in places, it pulsed with a fainter, deeper crimson, as if it had absorbed something rich and dark."
3"It flowed with a liquid that was not water, but a viscous, ruby-red current, swirling with a rich, fermented fragrance."
4"On the opposite bank, colossal structures, carved from polished obsidian and something that gleamed like crystallized sugar, glittered under the amber sky."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Rory murmured, the name feeling foreign on her tongue"
1"Isolde observed, her gaze following the river’s lazy flow"
2"Rory asked, the question escaping her lips almost without conscious thought"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"Rory murmured (murmur)"
1"Nyx’s voice whispered (whisper)"
2"Isolde’s voice chimed (chime)"
3"Nyx’s voice warned (warn)"
4"Isolde observed (observe)"
5"Nyx explained (explain)"
6"Isolde spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences15
tagDensity0.533
leniency1
rawRatio0.875
effectiveRatio0.875
73.2390%