Run: 2026-02-25-01KJ95Q6X3FD2SV408EXDEBS6M

Run Details

Duration:
27.4s
Cost:
$0.002555
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The air grew thick, tasting of ozone and damp earth. Aurora Carter pulled her worn jacket tighter, though the chill wasn't in the air temperature. It was a deeper cold, one that settled in the bones. The path they had followed through Richmond Park dissolved behind them, or perhaps it never was a path at all. Isolde Varga, her silver hair a waterfall down her back and her pale lavender eyes fixed on something ahead, led the way. She moved without a sound, her bare feet leaving no impression on the moss-covered ground that began to carpet the earth. Beside Aurora, Nyx flowed more than walked. Their form, a shifting silhouette of living shadow, seemed to drink in the muted light that filtered through the impossibly tall, gnarled trees. Faint violet eyes glowed, scanning the periphery. Nyx’s voice, when it came, was a dry rustle. "The world strains here. Like old cloth pulled too taut." Aurora glanced at Nyx, then back at Isolde. "What is this place?" Her own voice sounded too loud, too solid in the encroaching quiet. The Heartstone Pendant beneath her shirt gave a faint, intermittent pulse, a tiny, internal thrum against her ribs that she was starting to recognize. It felt like a distant drumbeat, a slow, steady recognition of something not quite Earth. Isolde paused, her hand reaching out to brush a petal from a bloom that defied any colour Aurora recognized. The flower shimmered, its edges blurring as if painted with light. "A garden unwatered by sun," Isolde murmured, her gaze distant. "Where roots drink from memory." Aurora followed the direction of Isolde’s gaze. The trees weren't just tall; they twisted. Their bark coiled like sleeping serpents, etched with patterns that looked like forgotten script. Luminescent moss dripped from their branches, casting an eerie, soft green glow. Strange, phosphorescent fungi sprouted from the decaying wood, pulsing with their own inner light. The air hummed, a low frequency vibration that tickled Aurora's teeth. "Memory?" Aurora pushed. "What does that even mean?" She tried to get a grip on the ground with her boots. It felt like walking on a resilient sponge, yielding slightly with each step, yet firm enough to hold her weight. Nyx melted deeper into the shadow of a particularly colossal tree, their form rippling. "It means the soil remembers," they whispered, their voice like wind through dry reeds. "And the trees remember how to bleed light." Aurora saw it then. A thin, almost imperceptible mist that clung to the ground. It wasn't water vapour, but something denser, shimmering with captured colours. As she watched, a strand of it detached and drifted towards a patch of glowing fungi. The fungi brightened, then dimmed, as if sharing some essence. "It's… alive," Aurora breathed, a sense of awe warring with a prickle of unease. This wasn't just a remote part of the woods. This was something else entirely. The Fae Grove, Isolde had called it. A pocket between realms. She reached down, her fingers brushing against a fern whose leaves were intricate filigree, crafted from what looked like spun moonlight. It felt cool, smooth, and impossibly delicate. When she pulled her hand away, a faint silver dust clung to her fingertips. Isolde smiled, a slow, knowing expression that didn't quite reach her eyes. "The boundaries blur here, child. What is seen is but a whisper of what is." They moved deeper. The hum intensified, resolving into a chorus of subtle chime-like sounds, high-pitched and sweet, like tiny bells struck by the breeze. There was no breeze. Aurora held her breath, listening. The chimes seemed to emanate from the very air, from the luminous flora, from the ancient stones that now began to appear, half-swallowed by the encroaching vegetation. Massive, greyed monoliths, carved with swirling, incomprehensible symbols that seemed to shift and reconfigure as she looked at them. "Standing stones," Aurora identified, her pre-law mind trying to find a frame of reference. "Like ancient ritual sites." Nyx emerged from behind one of the stones, their form coalescing slightly. For a moment, Aurora glimpsed the faintest hint of Aldric, the sorcerer trapped between worlds, in the posture. "Ancient is a word for moments that stretch," Nyx said. "These stones remember when the mountains were young and the sky was a different colour." Aurora touched a stone. It was cold, radiating a deep, ancient stillness that seemed to absorb all sound from its immediate vicinity. She felt a faint vibration through the tips of her fingers, more resonant than the ambient hum. It was like touching the heart of something impossibly old. A sudden wave of dizziness washed over her. The ground beneath her feet felt like it was tilting. She staggered, catching herself on the stone. Nyx was instantly there, a solid shadow beside her, though Aurora hadn't heard them move. "The earth sighs," Nyx commented, their violet eyes reflecting the shifting patterns on the stone. "It is unaccustomed to such solid footing." "I feel… drunk," Aurora admitted, shaking her head. The pendant against her skin pulsed harder now, a rapid, insistent beat. Isolde knelt by a carpet of wildflowers that seemed to bloom directly from the surface of one of the standing stones. The blossoms were a riot of colours that Aurora couldn't name, shifting from vibrant indigo to ethereal gold as the light played over them. Some curled like tiny, sleeping dragons, others unfurled like miniature spectral sails. "The sap of ages runs here," Isolde said softly. "It can intoxicate the unwary." She plucked a single blossom, its petals impossibly delicate. It hummed faintly in her palm. "But it also offers clarity, if one knows how to imbibe." Aurora watched Isolde, her mind racing. This was beyond anything she'd ever conceived. Delivery jobs, evading an ex, studying law – her old life felt like a dream from a forgotten age, not just a few months ago. She unconsciously touched the Fae-Forged Blade tucked into the reinforced waistband of her trousers. The moonsilver felt a familiar, reassuring cold against her skin. "Isolde," Aurora began, her voice regaining some of its steadiness. "You said this place was a 'pocket'. Between realms. What realm is this *truly* part of?" Isolde offered the glowing blossom to Aurora. "A place that dreams of being unbound. Where the light forgets its source and the shadows gather to listen." Aurora hesitated, then accepted the flower. It felt weightless, yet vibrated with a subtle energy. As her fingers closed around it, a rush of images flooded her mind: swirling nebulae, cities built on clouds, vast, empty expanses where stars were born and died in moments. She gasped, pulling her hand back, and the images vanished, leaving only the faint scent of honey and starlight. "Whoa." Nyx tilted their head. "The Seer offers you a taste of its own making. This grove is not strictly Fae, nor is it truly Earth. It is a place where the Veil thins, and echoes from other places bleed through." "The Veil?" Aurora asked, her brow furrowed. She'd heard the word before, in hushed tones from Silas. A barrier. But she never imagined seeing its effects so acutely. "A curtain," Isolde explained, her gaze distant again. "Between what is seen and what *might be* seen. It thins when the world turns, waxes and wanes like the moon. Here, it is thin enough to whisper through." Aurora looked around. The faint shimmer was indeed sometimes visible at the edge of her vision, a distortion in the air, most apparent near the standing stones and where the phosphorescent fungi clustered. Only visible because Nyx had drawn her attention to it, and because her own senses felt heightened, raw. The Fae-Forged Blade seemed to hum in response to her heightened awareness, a faint thrum echoing the Heartstone Pendant's pulse. They walked further, the path no longer discernible. It didn't matter. The entire grove ahead was an unfolding wonder. Vast, crystalline structures resembling enormous geodes jutted from the mossy ground, their facets catching the ambient light and refracting it into fleeting rainbows. Strange, six-legged creatures, no larger than Aurora's thumb, skittered across the moss, trailing threads of phosphorescence. Their chirps were like tiny, melodious glass shards. "This is… unreal," Aurora murmured, her earlier apprehension replaced by a profound sense of wonder. She felt small, insignificant, yet connected to something ancient and vast. Nyx’s voice was soft, almost reverent. "It is as real as any dream. Perhaps more so, for it has substance." Isolde stopped before a pool of water that lay perfectly still, its surface like polished obsidian. No ripples disturbed it, though the air around it seemed to shimmer more intensely. "The glass of forgotten pools," she said, her voice barely audible. "Look, and see not what is, but what was, and what might yet be." Aurora cautiously approached the pool. She leaned over, expecting to see her reflection. What stared back was not her own face, but a vast, dark expanse, punctured by a single, bright, crimson light. The light pulsed, with the same rhythm as the Heartstone Pendant against her chest. It felt familiar, ancient, and powerful. A primal tug resonated from the pendant, a silent call. The crimson light in the pool seemed to beckom, and for a dizzying moment, Aurora felt an overwhelming urge to step into the water, into that dark expanse. Then, a deep, guttural growl echoed from the shadows beyond the pool. Not animal, but something ancient and hungry. It scraped against Aurora’s nerves like jagged stone. The air grew heavy, predatory. The faint chimes fell silent. The luminous flora seemed to dim, as if in fear. Aurora straightened abruptly, her hand instinctively going to the Fae-Forged Blade. The crimson light in the pool vanished, replaced by the inky blackness of the water. Her own anxious reflection now stared back, wide-eyed. "We are not alone," Nyx stated, their form now a tighter, more solid silhouette, shadows clinging to them like armour. The violet glow of their eyes sharpened. Isolde turned, her silver hair rustling. Her serene expression was gone, replaced by a look of grim recognition. "The garden's shadows stir. Some things do not sleep when the Veil grows thin." The guttural growl came again, closer this time, accompanied by the heavy, wet thud of something large moving through the undergrowth. The ground vibrated faintly. Aurora listened intently, her senses screaming danger. The wonder of the Fae Grove had just leavened with a potent, chilling dread.
created_at"2026-02-25T01:13:23.115Z" 2/25/2026, 1:13:23 AM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
88.89% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"own voice sounded too [too]"
1"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.529
leniency1
rawRatio0.111
effectiveRatio0.111
74.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count2
1
adverb"very"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"truly"
count2
4
adverb"perfectly"
count1
5
adverb"intensely"
count1
6
adverb"cautiously"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"very"
2"softly"
3"truly"
4"perfectly"
5"intensely"
6"cautiously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
10.97% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1741
totalAiIsms31
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"scanning"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count2
3
word"shimmered"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
6
word"sense of"
count2
7
word"intricate"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count2
9
word"resolving"
count1
10
word"pulsed"
count2
11
word"spectral"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"familiar"
count2
14
word"vibrated"
count2
15
word"echoes"
count1
16
word"furrowed"
count1
17
word"echoing"
count1
18
word"crystalline"
count1
19
word"fleeting"
count1
20
word"apprehension"
count1
21
word"profound"
count1
22
word"resonated"
count1
23
word"echoed"
count1
24
word"chilling"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"scanning"
2"pulse"
3"shimmered"
4"etched"
5"weight"
6"sense of"
7"intricate"
8"whisper"
9"resolving"
10"pulsed"
11"spectral"
12"racing"
13"familiar"
14"vibrated"
15"echoes"
16"furrowed"
17"echoing"
18"crystalline"
19"fleeting"
20"apprehension"
21"profound"
22"resonated"
23"echoed"
24"chilling"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences126
matches
0"a sense of awe"
1"f in fear"
6.80% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount12
narrationSentences126
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
2"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords3
totalWords1742
ratio0.002
matches
0"truly"
1"might be"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions81
wordCount1458
uniqueNames16
maxNameDensity1.99
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Carter1
Richmond1
Park1
Varga1
Aurora29
Nyx12
Isolde14
Heartstone3
Pendant3
Earth1
Fae5
Grove2
Aldric1
Fae-Forged3
Blade3
Silas1
persons
0"Carter"
1"Aurora"
2"Nyx"
3"Isolde"
4"Blade"
5"Silas"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Pendant"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"Fae-Forged"
globalScore0.505
windowScore0.5
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences105
glossingSentenceCount11
matches
0"not quite Earth"
1"felt like a distant drumbeat, a slow, s"
2"looked like forgotten script"
3"felt like walking on a resilient sponge"
4"as if sharing some essence"
5"looked like spun moonlight"
6"quite reach her eyes"
7"symbols that seemed to shift and reconfigure as she looked at them"
8"stillness that seemed to absorb all sound from its immediate vicinity"
9"felt like it was tilting"
10"wildflowers that seemed to bloom directly from the surface of one of the standing stones"
11"felt like a dream from a forgotten age"
27.78% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords1.722
wordCount1742
matches
0"not what is, but what was"
1"not her own face, but a vast, dark expanse, punctured by a single, bright, crimson"
2"Not animal, but something ancient"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
91.86% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean48.39
std22.82
cv0.472
sampleLengths
099
146
210
363
445
565
640
736
851
981
1027
1179
1218
1355
1467
1544
1620
1797
1862
1926
2026
2165
2240
2328
2437
2571
2666
2726
2820
2955
3091
3147
3234
3327
3432
3546
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences126
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount3
totalVerbs240
matches
0"was starting"
1"was like touching"
2"was tilting"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences142
ratio0.014
matches
0"The trees weren't just tall; they twisted."
1"Delivery jobs, evading an ex, studying law – her old life felt like a dream from a forgotten age, not just a few months ago."
78.80% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1465
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"familiar, reassuring cold against her"
1"Strange, six-legged creatures,"
adverbCount74
adverbRatio0.050511945392491465
lyAdverbCount24
lyAdverbRatio0.016382252559726963
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean12.27
std6.61
cv0.539
sampleLengths
010
115
211
320
422
521
67
723
87
99
1010
118
1216
1324
1415
1519
1611
1710
185
197
207
2114
2212
2314
2411
253
2617
2720
2814
2914
308
314
3210
3311
3416
3510
3614
379
385
397
404
4121
427
4314
4412
4515
463
4721
484
495
45.07% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.29577464788732394
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners42
54.20% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"Only visible because Nyx had"
1"Then, a deep, guttural growl"
ratio0.016
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount33
totalSentences123
matches
0"It was a deeper cold,"
1"She moved without a sound,"
2"Their form, a shifting silhouette"
3"Her own voice sounded too"
4"It felt like a distant"
5"Their bark coiled like sleeping"
6"She tried to get a"
7"It felt like walking on"
8"they whispered, their voice like"
9"It wasn't water vapour, but"
10"She reached down, her fingers"
11"It felt cool, smooth, and"
12"They moved deeper."
13"It was cold, radiating a"
14"She felt a faint vibration"
15"It was like touching the"
16"She staggered, catching herself on"
17"She plucked a single blossom,"
18"It hummed faintly in her"
19"She unconsciously touched the Fae-Forged"
ratio0.268
29.11% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount106
totalSentences123
matches
0"The air grew thick, tasting"
1"Aurora Carter pulled her worn"
2"It was a deeper cold,"
3"The path they had followed"
4"Isolde Varga, her silver hair"
5"She moved without a sound,"
6"Their form, a shifting silhouette"
7"Nyx’s voice, when it came,"
8"Aurora glanced at Nyx, then"
9"Her own voice sounded too"
10"The Heartstone Pendant beneath her"
11"It felt like a distant"
12"Isolde paused, her hand reaching"
13"The flower shimmered, its edges"
14"Isolde murmured, her gaze distant"
15"Aurora followed the direction of"
16"The trees weren't just tall;"
17"Their bark coiled like sleeping"
18"Luminescent moss dripped from their"
19"The air hummed, a low"
ratio0.862
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences123
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences63
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"She moved without a sound, her bare feet leaving no impression on the moss-covered ground that began to carpet the earth."
1"Their form, a shifting silhouette of living shadow, seemed to drink in the muted light that filtered through the impossibly tall, gnarled trees."
2"The air hummed, a low frequency vibration that tickled Aurora's teeth."
3"Massive, greyed monoliths, carved with swirling, incomprehensible symbols that seemed to shift and reconfigure as she looked at them."
4"It was cold, radiating a deep, ancient stillness that seemed to absorb all sound from its immediate vicinity."
5"Vast, crystalline structures resembling enormous geodes jutted from the mossy ground, their facets catching the ambient light and refracting it into fleeting ra…"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount9
matches
0"Isolde murmured, her gaze distant"
1"Aurora breathed, a sense of awe warring with a prickle of unease"
2"Aurora identified, her pre-law mind trying to find a frame of reference"
3"Nyx commented, their violet eyes reflecting the shifting patterns on the stone"
4"She plucked, its petals impossibly delicate"
5"Aurora began, her voice regaining some of its steadiness"
6"Aurora asked, her brow furrowed"
7"Isolde explained, her gaze distant again"
8"she said, her voice barely audible"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Isolde murmured (murmur)"
1"they whispered (whisper)"
2"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
3"Nyx commented (comment)"
4"Aurora admitted (admit)"
5"Isolde explained (explain)"
6"Aurora murmured (murmur)"
7"Nyx stated (state)"
dialogueSentences34
tagDensity0.353
leniency0.706
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.471
67.7490%